Updated_Kahi Pyar... Last Part pg 53

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got2go2go

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Posted: 18 years ago

#331

god girl this bani knows how to get mad. good luck jai and it was great.

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Mamta Singh

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Good Luck Jai 👍🏼 with the cold treatment
How about a poem, diamonds, romantic dinner, how about you go on your knees infront of the family and ask forgiveness, say sorry to her, sing a song "O Jane Jana Kitna Pyar Tum Se Karthe Yeh"
Roshini 😡 keep ur mouth shut
please write soon

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Vishakha_Sakhi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#333

Hailaaaa!!!!! part 34 was sooo hot!! 😳 😳 😳
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Pia got what she deserved!! 😡
Poor Jai I feel so sorry for him! 😆
plzz continue soon!

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stonex

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Posted: 18 years ago

#334

nice parts
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Maninder

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Posted: 18 years ago

#335

aww my poor baby is getting the cold sholder....LOL..anywayz...great parts hun...to good..keep it up and plz continue soon
Happy diwali!
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jellyjam

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Posted: 18 years ago

#336

thanks a lot dear for your update. i'm just loving it.

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Raania

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Posted: 18 years ago

#337

Thanks guys so much i really appreciate it 🤗 😳 .....this fanfic is almost coming to an end...hopefully u guys enjoy the ending aswell...few more parts left 😳

Part 36

Jai sat on the bed …his laptop on his lap trying to work but for the past hour he had the same page open and had refreshed it so many times so that he was updated but nope nothing was helping…..another half hour and he decided that he had enough….wearing his gown (black this time) he made his way to dadi's room to find Dadi and Rano on the bed and Anu and Bani curled up at the bottom on a comfy water bed and blankets…..

Anu looking at Jai: areh mamaji aap???
Jai: yeah mujhe bhi film dhekni hai…..i havnt watched one in ages….
Dadi: aare Jai putar yeh toh badi hi achi baath hai aao….Bani looking at Jai with a look….what are you doing here??? Dadi continued…anu tu upar aa hamare paas aur Jai tu Bani ke saath bait jaa…

Jai happily joined Bani on the floor……Bani wanting to get up but Jai held her hands in the blankets daring her to move!!!

Bani whispering: choro mujhe..yeh kya kar rahe ho
Jai: pyar???
Bani: what….whispering mad…sham ko toh bhouth pyar araha tha raste par
Jai: im sorry Bani maine kaha nah….
Bani: no leave me alone

Jai felt a top on his shoulders….turning around he found Rano and Anu leaning on the bed facing them…

Rano: u know jiju hume saab sunaideta hai…we can hear u guys
Anu: aur mama ji aapko toh manana bhi nai atah…..
Jai; shrugging his shoulders….: well im learning by trying nah……

BAni getting that chance got up and kissed the 3 girls goodnight and was heading to bed

Dadi: jaa Jai putar aaj toh teri kher nahi

As Jai entered the room he found Bani getting the bed ready to go in

Jai: bani…meri
Bani: mujhe nahi baath karni
Jai: Bani meri baath toh suno!!
BAni: nahi …jaab aap mere baath nahi sunte hai toh meh aapki kiu suno
Jai: baby its not that….going to the bed and sitting down looking up at Bani….i will listen to you honey….whatever u say
Bani: oh yeah …
Jai: yeah….willing to do anything to make her anger go away

Bani : okay than putting her hands on her hips making her upper body shave more out towards Jai making it hard for him to focus on her words than her physical appearance that was damn to appealing right now!!1

Bani: Jai ?????warning him

Jai : yeah what do u want to say

Bani: akhir yeh Roshni kaun hai????…kiu uske naam se thumari hosh urjate hai….usko dekto ho toh jaise ….jaise…u become a volcano ready to erupt…why??? Why is she so important to you that in the middle of the street u growled at me???……

Jai: BAni

Bani: im not done….yeh sirf thumari wedding anniversary nahi hai…meri bhi hai right…toh phir agar maine kehdi usko aneko toh kya hogeya…..aur kaun si baath tumhe lagi thi aah…..joh maine mistress kaha…yeh girlfriend….yah jab maine usko invite kiya???/ what tell me..

BAni was angry…..she didn't recal how and when she married Jai but she knew that she loved him and he loved her than why this stupid argument ….is there something his not telling her….is she not remembering something…what???? She tried hard to think…..the side of her head was throbbing and she wanted to just lie down…but getting this out of the way was important too…tomrw was their anniversary and she didn't want any misunderstandings in their way….

Jai: Bani sit….

Bani sat on his side and Jai taking her hands started off: Roshni is a woman who I dated on and off when I had not met you. She and I were business and family friends…..her family knew my family well…..whenever something huge would happen in the business world she would accompany me to the events……Bani sat there numb listening to him…….she is nothing to me Bani…because her and I were everywhere the media were expecting me to marry her …..when all of a sudden out of the blue I announced my marriage to you…the first day I had seen you I had fallen for you but it ws later on that I had realized it was love for you and I kept falling deeper and deeper in love with you…Roshni and I had a relationship once but baby that was nothing to what we have …looking sad he looked down …expecting a blow from Bani or angry comments but she was silent….a single tear ran down his left cheek and Bani didn't see it until it fell on her hands….

Bani: Jai and u don't have no feelings for her ???

jai: none what so ever

Bani: than we don't have anything to worry about??

Jai: looking up…shaking his head in a no

Bani: than stop over reacting as if I will find out some deadly secret and shoot u or something…mujhe nahi farq padta Jai…I love you and if u love me too that's all that matters…..meh thumare past meh thi nahi toh meh isme kya karsakti hu…..but this is our present and I am ur future …that's all that matters right..

Jai with a glowing hope…should I tell her about the accident but before he could Bani continued

Bani: but u need to understand jai that for a woman it is hard to think of her man with any other woman…and when me and her are in the same room I expect u to be with me everytime…I have to be priority for you…i will not stand her flirting with you or talking to you…..let alone doing anything with you…it sounds mean I know but that is just the way it is…..a womans jealousy sometimes can destroy a house….

Reality struck Jai…that is exactly what he did….oh why did he ever not tell Bani all this before her accident…maybe that would not have happened ever….and maybe just maybe…

Bani; Jai???

Jai still thinking…but it was her accident that brought me to reality …realization of how much I love her…..oh God what should I do

Bani: jai…kya hua>????

Jai: meh soch raha tha maine tumse phele hi kehdi hoti toh acha hota…

Bani smiling taking her clad hands in his and kissing the upper side of his hands…its okay….we have talked now…..for any relationship Jai trust is important..kiu ki woh ek rhista ka foundation hota hai…no trust no relationship no faith…smiling Bani hugged him

Jai hugged her back…Oh God jab Bani ko pata chalega accident ke baremeh kya hoga!!
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The nights of the Party

Jigyasa and the kids had done a fantastic job with the event…it was held at the Walia's Regency Hotel..one of the biggest in Mumbai and the most elegant…the huge ballroom was done up in glitter work with huge curtains draping the walls caressing it as if a precious jewel…beautiful….in the left corner was the cake huge in 5 layers and in the centre of the room towards the end the couples tables set with balloons at the back arched in a semi circle beautiful in maroon and gold……the tables carrying white roses and table in red cloth…..absolutely gorgeous….the tables of guests done in deep shades of cream and red ….chairs done in bows at the back….the media the people…were in awe of what an atmosphere….they were the talk of the entire country tonight…..

Jai in his black tuxedo hair sleek combed to the back…beaming with happiness………on his arms was his beautiful wife wearing a elegant gold dress ….thin clinging to the body sleevelees with straps…. with a flaired bottom sweeping the ground….bare back open…her sking tingling with Jai's touch remaining …ethernal…she looked a princess…hair pulled on the centre of the head with only a pair of diamonds hanging down the ears with a matching bracelet…both smiling as they made their way to the stage to be seated…..

The function on to be rememebered carried on into the beautiful night….soon time for dancing came….Jai led Bani to the main dancefloor …song in the background

The beautiful theme of Jiya Dharak Dharak going on …….it was just perfect….

Slowly al the couples joined and sahil asked Rano to dance who shyly accepted…..even Jigayasa made it with Aditya happy that jai bhaia loved the way the party turned out to be…..

Turn by turn songs were going on and slowly Jai and Bani drifted apart with the crowds…masi taking Bani around to meet people that she hadn't at their wedding and Jai greeting his business colleagues, associates and friends…both would steal glances at each other and Jai would wink at Bani making her blush and Bani would smile shyly and look down

Bani was with some ladies when Masi said she will come back and left Bani with them….Bani started to look for Jai…..her gaze following the crowd suddenly catching Jai on the dance floor with …what oh my god she couldn't believe it Roshni……she needed a glass of water….Sahil was standing with what looked like water …taking the glass from him she gulped the whole thing down…

BAni: thanks Sahil..and sorry…handing the empty glass to her
Sahil: oh no Mami that was vodka….not pani……
Bani: oh no…her head spinning…and sore….she watched them…..she could see Roshni's face and Jai's back…..what she didn't know what Roshni did drag Jai to the dance floor but Jai was going to clear this once and for all and this was the only way to do it…..

BAni looked at them and blinking her eyes tried to think…where have I seen that before……thinking hard…Rano coming up to her

Rano: Di..kya hua..Sahil…???
Sahil: pani samaj kar vodka pi li hai…shayad sir ghoom raha hai
Rano: Di chalo baitho…
Rano took her and sat her at the seats and watched to what Bani was starring at …jiju…with Roshni…oh no

Looking at Bani: di aap yaha baitho meh pani lekar ati hu…
Sahil: ha aur meh mama ko

As both left Bani got up making her way out……going outside…she needed to breathe….she saw the empty road and cars….walking a bit wobbly but she knew what she was doing….she made it to the streets with her huge sandal hills….bending to take them off…she heard horns…moving out of the way she fell on the side…and and…everything came back flashing to her….the night…roshni …jai…limo…her on the street…the accident…than Jai scared…him taking care of her….home…Rano…Pia…..anniversary…talk last night…Jai saying I love you…she just sat there…..Jai loves me…..smiling and crying…not mad at the Roshni fiasco anymore…just happy….very happy…..Jai loved her back

Sahil had told Jai who had tried leaving Roshni and when she wouldn't let go…he slapped her…infront of the entire crowd …photos were taken of the jealous and shocked Roshni her hands on her cheeks….starring at Jai….and Jai leaving her with Sahil later joined by Rano……going to the seats…"go to hell Roshni like I care"

Jai; kaha hai?? Where is Bani??
Rano: jiju yahi toh thi di…meh
Jai: oh no…usne mujhe Roshni ke saath dhekli hai….i have to find her before anything goes wrong

BAni had taken a cab and was at home…ti was past midnight and she was tired …Jai Sahil and Rano looking for her later joined in by Ranveer Adi and Jigs…..no one having any luck…hours later heading in the house…a devastated Jai entering the house……looking up..he found…Bani clad up on the sofa sleeping fast away….

Jai: shhhhhhhhhhhhhhshhhhhhhhhhh pointing to the sofa…u guys go sleep he whispered….i will take care of her

Jai going up to her …knelt on the floor and finally sat down …looking at Bani's face….caressing her hair and crying: thank God u are alright Bani…..agar tumhe kuch hota toh meh kya karta…..

Bani felt good with the hand on her forehead…opening her eyes…she smiled…smiled at Jai a bit drunk..t.he alcohol taking effect…..: gdmrng

Jai: laughing and crying….its still night….getting up and picking her in his arms…taking her up the stairs….

Bani: u love me no?????

Jai: yes I love you…calmly..she should be furious at her right now for putting him thru this but he wasn't

Bani: shouting now…u loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee me hanah???

Jai: yes baby I love you….shhshsssh…sabhi so rahe hai….

Bani: but I love u too….hehehehe…laughing like a little kid…

Jai placing her on the bed and taking her sandals out…..one was left on the feet ……smiling at her

Bani: tum mere bareh meh bhouth worried the right??

Jai: looking up at her…more than my life baby…taking her dress out to make her cormfortable….

Bani: pulling the sheets….handing her hands….; meri bracelet…

Jai taking the hands and taking the bracelet out!!! Smiling at her..: why did u leave the party without me….worried at what bani might say

Bani: showing her one ear…Jai taking it out: kiu ki tum us witch ke saath dance kar rahe the….

Jai: looking at her…taking the other earrings out …; I had to talk to her baby

Bani; I don't care …….as Jai took the pins from her hair out….you are mine and I don't want to see u with her…coz I lovee……..turning her head she was soon knocked out…...

Jai heaved a sigh putting her things on the dresser taking his shoes off: oh honey I love u too..i don't know how to tell u how much…and that im sorry about that night….i wish u had ur memory and I didn't have to tell u and u could just get mad at me …anything than to live with this guilt……..changing he too got in bed…it was 4am in the mrng…..

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TINK

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Posted: 18 years ago

#338

ITS ME 😆 😆 😆 AND I AM FIRST AGAIN 😆

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#339

awwwwwwwwww at least they're fine now.. phew..roshni toh 😡 bani and gettin drunk - 😆 its happened a couple of times now.. tha was gr88 👏

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TINK

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Posted: 18 years ago

#340

OOOOMMMMGGGG...for a moment i thought she would get really angry at him 😕 .....i luved the dialouges bani was saying whe she was drunk 😆 ....that was jokes....couldn't stop laughing 😃 😃 .....aur vah...i luved the slap roshini got 😛 😛 ...though i did imagine it being pia 😆 ....especially with wht she has been doing in the real thing 😆 jai was soooooo sweet....i luv it when he tries sooo hard to say sorry 😳 .......he is such a cutie 😳 😳 😃 ....hey raania....though once again ....the ff was just awesome...plz cont soon...keep it up 👏

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