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Posted: 18 years ago
Chap 42



Jai hugged Bani.. Bani held him closely…smiling. And relived. they left for home..

Bani with hopes of being wid Jai forever..

Pushkar went to his apartment..Rashi and Ranveer to their place and Bani and Pia at their flat..

jai went home…..it about 6pm..They had been driving slowly …

jai entered his house there Masi stood instructing Tony not to sing in the party just do his work ..

the house was all decorated for a party …he went to masi..

Jai-"masi..?yeh sub kya hai ?
Masi-"munna ..tu aa gaya...jao ja kar tayar ho jao.. maheman ate hode!"
Jai-"par yeh party?

Masi-"like walia mansion ever needs a reson to party?par surprise mai bad mai batao gi ..jao fesh ho kar niche aao."

Jai-"par masi-

Masi- no par var..

Jai. Goes to his room upstairs…..he lies ther for some minutes ..thinking about Bani..how he will t ell Masi…finaaly he gets up and takes a shower .. and gets dressed..he chose a sky blue shirt ..white suit and white trouser just like the colour of the sky and clouds..


Bani and Pia were ready ..they had dressed up in salwar ..Bani wore light blue with green cloured kammez and Pia wore a tight pink kameez…
Rashi ahd called them to wait for them at the carpark.Rashi had found out that there wass a party at Jai's for some special announcement ….but they didn't want to reveal for what?


He came down..and saw that the guests had started to come ..as he came down to the hall he greeted them..he was lokking for Masi..he had to tell her about Bani now. he didn't want to know what the surprise was ..Bani was important….

He found Masi chatting with few guests…she seemed very happy …even Dadi was with her and she also seemed very happy

He went to them..
Jai-"Masi//
Masi excused herself form the guests and dadi joined them .
Masi-"kya hua munna?'
Jai-"aap se kuch baat karni thi..
Masi-"mai hjanti hu tum kya kahena chahate ho..
Jai-"kya masi?

Masi-"mai janti hu tumhare dil ki baat ..'
Jai-"matlab aap janthi hai.."

Massi-"tumhari asi hu...munna im so excited ..ur choice is so beautiful and sanskari ..koi aur hoti to mai kabhi raazi nahi hoti..

Jai smiling and thinking that Masi knows bout Bani and this party was an engagement party? Did Bani know? She wouldn't have known coz she ddnt act that way this morning.. ?


He sees Bani ,Pia , Ranveer, Rashi..Pushkar far behind enter they join him..

Ranveer-"kuch pata chala..surprise kya hai?

Jai-" tumhe bhi parta chal jayega …Im very happy that's all I can tell u now."

Jai turns to abni-"tumhare liye bhi yeh surprise hai..

Bani-"kya/'
Jai-"it's a surprise ..tumhe khud pata chal jayega..i hope u accept it..i know u will."

Pia-"whats up wid all this surprise,..it's a gift na? y don't I get any gifts….Pushkar.."

Pushkar-"what..?

Jai-"I will get a gift for u Pia..its called sticky tape..u just have to place it on ur lips.. Easy.."

Pia-"uhh ..chup rahjo.."



There was a stage set up and aditya uncle went up on the stage and thanked everyone for being here 2nite.


Aditya-"thank u all for coming bhai aur unki behano…Aaj itne shubdin main..we have an announcement but for now enjoy the music and the drinks


It was all to be a surprise .jai was happy .Masi had actuallu had found out about him and Bani and even arranged this engagement . so quick…he just

knew Now that what PAT MAGNI PAT BYA meant..



Pia and Pushkar were talking to Rashi and Ranveer .

Roshni and Jig were whispering away..then Roshni glanced at Bani and Jai ..Bani felt uncomfortable. She come up to Bani..Bani thinking that if Roshni had found out that Jai was dating her ,..
The background music was .."AAJ KI RAAT Hona HAI KYA//"

Roshni-"hey Jai..Bani…

Jai(uncomfortably) –hey..
Roshni in a friendly way -"waiting for the surprise?
Jai-"ya..Actually..
Roshni-"really..Main bhi"
Roshni smiles nd goes away.

It was about time when Aditya came back on the stage .Jai,,Pushkar ,Pia and Bani were talking when and drinking cola and stuff

Aditya-"can we have the most charming , handsome,,,hottest guy apart form me..on stage ..=MR Jai Walia....

Jai joins him…looking to crowd with his cute smile..

Aditya-"thank u jai… ladies and gentleman …we are proud to announce the engagement of Mr. jai Walia and the most charming and beautiful lady ..Miss Roshni ."


The guest applauded… the colour on jai's face faded…did he hear right…did he hear Roshni?
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 ff....caught up with all the parts...real nice....awww....poor bani ....that roshini..ill kill her...anwyas update soon....... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh no this is not happening.
Roshni and Jigs 😡 😡 😡
poor Bani and Jai 😭 😭
plz cont. asap
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Posted: 18 years ago
Chap 43..

Roshni came on stage..with each step she took ..his heartbeat went faster..he ddnt no what to do…he looks at Masi //she seemed very happy…but he dnt love masi..hoe did Masi know about Roshni?

What should I do..what ? he looked around for Bani ..she was theer near Pia…"just starring blanklyto the stage….how could he tell her that this was not what he meant for a surprise…

Roshni stands beside him…Masi gives him the ring .. jai doesn't take it. But Masi urges him to.. he reluctantly exchanges rings with Roshni…

Masi-"Im proud of u ..Munna..
Jai-"masi.."

Aditya-"now let the new to be couple ..dance…

Roshni takes jai 's hand and led him to the middle of the room. She purposely led jai past Bani….Roshni gave Bani a wicked smile….jai tried to speak to Bnai
Jai-"bani .suno…
But Roshni pulled on his hand and they started to dance..

Bani was just staring to jai..Trying not to cry …the moment she heard Roshni's name her heart had stopped beating. She was just staring at jai and Roshni..she couldn't believe what she saw. What she heard. Was this the surprise he meant..was this…why?….jai had told her that he loved her n stuff but ..is this how the riches behave..? played with my feelings and …tears came out of her eyes..she had been a fool to fall for a rich guy..

Pia stand ing beside her had the same reaction …she was just giving …the murdrtous look to jai…how could he do that..play with Bani;'s feeling..
She turned to see Bani..
Bani had bkloodhot eyes,,, Bani looked at Pia and she turned around and ran out…
Pia tried to follow her but the guest had started to dance..andm she couldne see Bani around the room in the dm light… she searched the ghll,.the bedrooms ..Pushkar helped..

After the dance was over Jai came to pIa..
Jai-"Bani kaha hai?"
Pia-"Ab BANi ko q dund rahe ho?
Jai-"par..'
Pia-"par kya ..jai?was this ur surprise?huh?who bhi itna bada surprise ki vo she nahi payi"

Jai-"I ddnt know bout this guys..believe me?
Pia to Pushkar-"chalo Pushkar.. bani ko bahar dund te hai'
Jai-„pia..pushkar..

Pia-mujhe nahi Bnai ko samjaho „

Jai searches for Bani and finds her outside in the dark..near the swimming pool..

Jai went to her..she was c rying Jai could se that.. more like feel that..

Jai slowly walks towards her..--bani?"

Bani looks up at jai and she wipes her tears
Bani-"jai..tum…. uh I think contgrats are in order"

Jai-"bani suno… Roshni se yeh engegemnt..'

Bani cutt him off-"I know Roshni se tumhari shaadi hone wali hai"

Jai shaking her-"but I love u!!"


Bani puts her hand out to stop him

Bani-" jai..bus karo I shud have kjnown that you are just like all the other rich guys. Playing around with girls ..u ddnt get what u wanted form me so u just carried on getting eneged to some Rich girl..'

Jai-"calm down Bani… it nothing like that..u tell me..did I know about the surprise>? Did I?I thought Masi was talking about u so I told u that .. Roshni knew that we were together..she has planned this up..i jut know ..Ranveer and Rashi dint even know that his sister was getting engaged …she must have did that on purpose…"Look at me. Look at me Bani..dcant u see that I love u? I promise that this is a misunderstanding that I will clear up.. I want to be with you not her,.this all is a misunderstanding…



Bani -"u mean..this is not ur idea?…how can I believe u ?

Jai-" you know that. You know what im saying is the truth..Bani.."



Pia comes around finds bani and jai-


Pia-"tum yaha..ho..

Bani-"pliz Pia I wna go home.

Jai-"just listen o me ..Bani… I could do nothing coz Masi was happy ..i cudnt just walk of the stage ..Could I? I should have told u b4 that Roshni is after me ..i dnt..i will end this ..trust me Bani..'

Rashi and Ranveer enetr-

Rashi-"ha..Bani..jai thk keh raha hai..this was a setup.. Roshni meri dost hai..i know her..she was crazy about Jai..she can do anything to get Jai..i just found out from Masi that Roshni had come to her saying that Jai was shy to ask her about his wedding so she gave Masi this surprise idea.."


Ranveer-"my sis has always been possessive of Jai ,..and believe me I should have warned u if I had known this was happening."

Jai-"I know..Ranveer..Bani !! i will break this relationship as soon as i can..

Bani persuaded-" I ..im sorry Jai.."

Jai-"no im sorry.."
Bani and jai hug...

Above them .on the balcony..Roshni was staring at them..


Edited by sangeetarangdal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
how was da surprise....?
pliz comment 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part.
atleast all the misunderstanding are cleared btw JB...now they will fight togerther...that evil Roshni
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!

cobra wit jai!!! 😡

please get rid of roshni soooooooon!!

overall it was Amazingly written!!

please cont soon
thanks
sunju

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Posted: 18 years ago

Chap 44

They all went back inside…jai stayed far as much as possible form Roshni…but Masi kept on bringing them together..




After the party. Only Bani ,,Pia, Pushki,Rashi ,Ranveer and Roshni were left..

Masi-"tum sub thak gaye hoge..aj raat yahi reh jao

Rashi –"nahi Aunty ,Roshni ko bhi ghar jana hoga..vo jyada thaki haogi..

Masi-"u dnt worry,Munna will drop Roshni home..

Rashi-"nahi aunty ..she will come with us/.Roshni-"nahi bahabi.its ok I will come with jai

Ranveer-"par …Ma.."

Roshni-'ma wont mind"

Masi-"tum dono jao..who piche piche ayege.."

Ranveer & rshi say goodnite and leave,,


Bani-"acha ..Aunty hum bhi chalet hai..

Masi-"ok..bneta..goodniht..

Jai-Bani..Bani..Kuch kaam tha..

They excuse themselves..

Jai-"Bani ..i will break this off soon ok.."


Roshni besdide Masi gives a cold stare at Jai and Bani …


Tony passes by and sing-"BEEDI JALAILE JIGAR SE PIYA JIGAR MA BADI AAG HAI…

Masi-""tony … TONY …go…"

Tony goes away..

Jai and Bani come back beside others…and they say goodnight to Masi and come outside..


Pushkar-"acha! Jai ,.. goodnite catch u later..

Jai-"goodnite guys.

Pia giving jai a look to make sure he stays away form Roshni


Pia-"goodnite Mr Walia..

Jai smiled back-

Bani-"goodnite jai..

Roshni replied before Jai could-"goodnite Bani… jai..chalo na!!"

Jai-"bye guys"

He takes off with Roshni ..

The others also go back to their home..

Jai is parked outside Roshni;s house

Roshni-"ohh Jai finally m with u…im so happy.."

Jai-"how could u? Roshni..

Roshni-"what?"

Jai-"u knew bout me and Bani "
Roshni getting closer to jai ..her hands on Jai's cheek-"I knew u b4 Bani and I loved u b4 Bani .You are mine jai ..

Jai pushes away her hands-"no …im not urs…im Banis and get this straight..Im going to break off this engagement b4 u know it..


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Posted: 18 years ago
Chap 45

Roshni-"ohh really will u now?.,..tumhe pata nahi ke Masi ko dil ki Bimari hai..
Jai –"Tum….get out of my car..now!""
Roshni-"what no gooodnighte kiss?
Jai-"ohh hell with u .."

She goes out of the car-"u love me Jai but you don't realize it yet..

Jai just drives away



Few days just passed but..it was thurday night ..pUshky had dropped by with Pizza at the girls flat..

Pushkar-"sooooo /. Kal Friday hai…Friday..the 13th

Pia-"HEY RAM… Saturday ko! 14th Feb hai aur is bhoot ko black Friday ki padi hai…
Bani laughs- tumhe who ghost story to yaad hai na jo isne sunai thi.."
Pushkar-"ooo voh patar patar wali..

Bania nd Pushkar laugh

Pia mimicking their laughter-"he he he he ..Stupid…

Just then Bani's cell rings

Bani –"hello..

Jai-"hi sweetheart.. missing me?
.
Bani-"Jai. Isliye phone kiya tha kya?

Jai-"haa…actually kal ghar mein ..black Friday ki party hai.. toh tum sub invited ho..aur costume party hai..toh

Bani –"hey Ram ..Walia Mansion mai kabhi party rakne ki vajah nahi hoti na…

Jai-"anything to c u soon..aur us Drama Queen and Pushkar ko bhi le ana..
Bani-"acha ..hum ayege..aur Roshni?

Jai-"Roshni nahi ayegi…she is busy..

Bani-oh..so jarur hum ayege..time?

Jai-"7.30 til 8 ..up 2 u

Bani-"okk
Jai-"I gtg..bye babes..gudnite luv ya..

Bani-"bye jai...goodnite

They hang up ...


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Posted: 18 years ago
no comment!!!!no one like it 😕 😭

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