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Chapter 1 A looking girl ,wearing sky blue and shaded with baby pink churi dar with matching dupta…,she was as soft as the dress she was wearing.

She looked at her notebooks Bani was written on them in her neat handwriting.

She was walking slowly towards the gates of the college, nervous as she was because it was her first day in college adding to the fear was that she was all alone in the new place.

As she entered the college premises she felt that all eyes were staring at her... She was embarrassed and cursed her best friend Pia (who was supposed to meet up with her at college gates) called her up and said she would be a little late. .

Pia and Bani were from Pune and had got admission in a prestige's college in Mumbai.

Pia's dad was a businessman who had his business branches in lots of places around India. Pea and Bani had rented
an apartment in Mumbai.
They had not yet set all the mess in the apartment .

Pia as sophisticated as she was said she would spend
last nite in her cuz Rashi's house which was quite a bit
far away from the apartments
she asked Bani to cum but as she was used to mess being from a poor background replied that she would spend the night in the apartments so Pia had called rashi to pick her up.

Later calling to cancel their morning meet at the gates coz her dad had shown up and was going to drop her to college a little late.

Coming back to the present, Bani realized that her
ears were getting hot by the laughter of the other students .she felt that they were laughing at her.

Bani thinking to herself- "Pia!!!! Where are you!!! jaldi aana"
She had no idea about the canteen where she was supposed to meet Pia .
She asked someone and found her way to the canteen. She quietly sat herself to a table

.Trying to keep her cool, she ordered a cola and waited for Pia. 20 minutes passed away and no sign of Pia. Classes were about to start in half an hour and they
still needed to find the lecture room.

There were a bunch of guys on the nearby table and she could feel they were laughing and talking about her.

She had it.she took out the cellphone from her purse
and called Pia .

Just then Pia was dropped by her dad outside the college gate.her dad gave her some money (lots) to Pia and warned her to keep out of trouble.

They said goodbye and her dad drove away. As she soon as her dad drove away her cell phone started ringing 'My humps, my humps my humps my' She saw it was Bani's and quickly apologized before Bani would start to growl at her .

Pia-" Bani , im sorry sorry sorry,tum canteen mein ho na ,hila mat mein jaldi ati hu" And disconnects the phone . Bani-"heloo, Pia!!" Realizing she had disconnected the call she quietly waits for Pia .

Trying hard to Ignore the guys whistling. Pia walking fast had already asked for her way to the canteen is rushing .she had also got 2 notebooks just for the sake of it.

All of a sudden out of nowhere some one bumped her and her books fell down.

When she picked it up she realized that the guy who
just bumped into her was walking by like nothing happened.

Pia- oye!! Excuse me Mr!! koi manners hai ya nahi?dhaka maar ke sori bhi nahi bol sakte!! Stupid Guy turned to face Pia- Mu samabhal kar baat karo. Tum janti nahi hi mein kon hu.Pushkar hai mera naam .m the coolest in the college

Pia-"so Mr pushkar ! Ha! pliz , kabhi shakal dekhi hain aaine main.? I don't have time for this" Saying that she leaves. Pushkar-"tony! "

Tony-"ha! puhkar, bolo." Pushkar-"pata karo yeh ladki kon hai" , mujhse aise baat karne ki himat kaise ki isne?" tony-" pata karta hu"

On the other hand Pia had reached the canteen ,
she saw a familiar figure sitting on a chair with her back to Pia. Pia slowly creeps toward Bani and tickles her ( to cool Bani coz hshe was definitely in temper).

Bani- "Pia , kitni der kar di ,10 minute mein lecture shuru hone wala hain aur hume lecture hall kaha hain, vo bhi pata nahi." Pia-" chill yaar, nahi mili to bunk kar denge"
Bani-" nahi pai , tume pata hai na , mere parents ka sapna tha ki main pad lik kar phir se humara family business shuru karu."

Bani goes back to her thoughts when once they were rich and happy, the times she and her younger sister Rano used to play and fight.

the times her parents used to hold parties on every
little acheivments, then darkness fell.
They were poor, her dad could not accept the truth that they had got a business loss died of heart attack and her mum died soon after.

Then Bani was left to look after Rano
.Bani's dad had left some fortune to Bani's and Rano's education.
But with no place to live they had to live in a hostel.
Pia- "heloo!!!! Earth to Bani.. kaha khop gayi thi" Bani-: "nahi kuch nahi, Rano ki yaad aagai , she will be here next semesta na so …

" Pia- "I understand no worries. Abb chalee."

Bani –" chalo" okkkkk


that's ol I cud think of .i will continue if u ol like it. I know its just the start but . I don't know if u ol feel it or not. Once I start writing ,I cant stop writing. Pliz leave a comment. I have give Pushkar a negative role here but dnt wori his character will develop. And for the hero – jai , m thinking of sumthing speacia; Pliz comment on my first FF





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putturani thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice part. I feel sad for Bani though.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its a great start!!!
where's Jai?!!?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start hun 👏

poor bani...were they really laughing at her or was she just being insecure?!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank u ol.
i no u ol waitin 4 jai, shudi giv him a negative shade
wat u ol think
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww don't give him a negative shade.....he should be grey instead of all white or all black....He has good moments and bad...like that....i don't know
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow! hun.. nice start to the ff..

and re: jai.. make him gray not black and not pure white..

plz do continue!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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like ur fanfic ...its different.....its refreshing from the recent KS events....

update soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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quite good ...... nice ff....plz continue 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks 4 ur comments
i no u waaitin 4 jai
lets c wen he enters

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