Passionate Lovers:Rocky25's:3FF:Pt.7:Pg16 - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

142

Views

25.2k

Users

44

Likes

2

Frequent Posters

vangirl thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 2 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 19 years ago
#71
Ok, I just found this and read all 3 prts, I luv the twist yaar,
definitely not what I wld have ever thought of. But
I lvd all 3 prts, I hope decides to tell her family
of her luv nd the sacrifice 😭 😭 she made for
all of them, LOVE CONQUERS ALL 😉 😉 😉
Forever_in_love thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#72
OMG!!...Ur FF is totally different..i really liked it ....plzzz continue soon!!!
rocky25 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 18 years ago
#73

Part 4:

After a hard day's work Bani was almost done for the day…... Jai had come in sometime back and was again positioned the balcony waiting for her to finish….Bani all done wanted to walk to the car on her own.. but Jai saw her struggling and simply picked her up and took her in his arms through the lift into the convertible red merc standing on the porch…

Throught Bani kept quiet noting that he was not too happy with the amount of time she had spent in the office today…but she knew that all his anger would soon evaporate….Jai couldn't stay angry with her for long….

Back at home after dinner Jai quietly helped Bani to the bed… and just as he was about to turn in…. she asked him for the pill….. Jai was exasperated….. "Ekl din nahin logi to kya hoga….. waise bhi do you think I am this desperate… that I will have no consideration for your state….I know very well that you don't want children….."

Tears well up in Bani's eyes….. she looks at him and can't help herself from exploding….

" Tumhe kya lagta hai Jai….mujhe tumhare bacche nahin chahiye…. do you realise agar mein tumhare bachhe ki ma nahin ban saki toh mein kissi ke bacche ki ma nahin banoongi…. Par kya tumhe lagta hai ki main es halat mein hun ki kissi aur ki zimmedari utha sako….

Tumhe pata hai mujhe kitna bura lagta hain jab mein kissi ma ko apne bache ke sath dekhti hun… jab mein kisi aurat ko apne pati aur baccho ke saath dekhti hun… mujhe lagta hi who kitni kushnaseeb hain ki who apne pati.. …apne baccho ke sath hain….."

By now Bani is really crying and her eyes have a far away look… immediately Jai is feeling like the biggest heel on this earth….. he immediately hugs Bani and lets her cry her heart out….. saying.. "Oh God! Bani I am sorry…..What have I done… Bani please stop crying…."

Slowly Bani quietens down… and rests in Jai's arms….sometime later Jai get her pill and they both sleep in each other's arms…... understanding each other's pain…they don't know where there relationship is going what talk about kids…

Bani spends the next few days with Jai….. Rony and Sandy…... they make all sorts of attempts to make her laugh and she also tries to be happy forgetting everything else…. 3-4 days later all of Bani's bandages come off…. And Bani decides to make it a memorable occasion for Jai….he has just come back from office but still she sends him to the market to buy a particular kind of ice cream that she knows is only available at one place….

And prepares herself for Jai….. wearing his favourite dress…Jai's white silk shirt…anklets… toes painted red….barefooted… wearing Old well fitted jeans….cut off at the knees…hair open as he likes it.. with his favourite perfume…... Playing his favourite music….

Jai comes upstairs… to their wing and surprisingly finds the door locked and presses the bell… Bani opens the door and Jai's heart misses a beat…. His eyes immediately darken with pure passion…. Bani invites him in invitingly… dragging him inside by pulling his tie….

So Jai…. Would you care for a drink….! And makes a drink for him stirring it with her finger… poor jai is looking at her mesmerised…. He takes the drink from her and says wouldn't she like to share and taking a big sip from the glass and keeps it down….drags her in a hug and makes sure she shares his drink with him… both of them are soon lost in each other… so tuned they are to each other by now….

All plans for a candle light dinner by Bani are forgotten…

And this is the pattern of the day till Bani finally has to leave….. no one wants to say anything…. Bani makes three letters and leaves one each for Jai….. Rony and Sandy…..they read it later on to realise this time Bani has left forever and is not thinking of returning again… all of them are hurt that she didn't have the guts to tell them on their face….and are deeply hurt….

But this hurt is what Bani wanted to achieve so that they can remain separated…..she cries all the way back ….her heart literally bleeds as does Jai's ….. who finds it really hard to accept her decision…... and even starts hating her……. for the misery he is going through…. Bani has told him in the letter that he should find some else…. Jai is deeply hurt and in order to erase this hurt he starts dating a new girl every other day….

Bani is back in Delhi….. Pia comes to the airport and gives her a dirty look….. an accusing look…... but Bani is hardened with the pain she is already going through….Bani tells Pia in a no nonsense tone that she doesn't want to talk about Goa ever.. just be happy that she is back and not going again….

Bani soon gets used to the dull lifestyle back in Delhi.. but this time her heart is broken… she is lifeless listless.. she hardly every jokes… smiles… and is always lost in her own thoughts….

She has never shared a close relationship with her sisters….. she doesn't understand how but she and her three sisters were poles apart….. she didn't how was it bond with sisterly love….eca one of them was either lost in themselves or out to trouble….

Pia's sole objective since Bani returned was to get her married…. One day Bani came back from office to finad all arrangements already made for some guy to visit her…. in the next 30 min…. her parents forced her to go through the intial stage as there was hardly any time and if she did not comply they would have to hang there head in shame….. they told her that this is just the first meeting if she didn't like the guy she can always say no later…..

But when the guy people came….. Pia plotted and told them Bani was ready and they should do the ceremony… Bani was shocked…… she didn't know what to do.. if she said no her parents would be embarrassed .. Bani finally did something smart… she fainted…..

And told Pia in a very harsh tone that she does not want to get engaged and she better get hercout of it or she will go downstairs and tell everyone that herself…

Finally when Pia and her parents see the steel resolve on Bani's face…… they break off the engagement….

Since that day there had been no further talks about getting Bani married….. meanwhile they tried to find a suitable match for Priya but again couldn't find the right match…. Pia kept getting useless matches for Priya.. finally Bani told her to stop.. Pia sauid tyaht it is very important to get married otherwise who will take care of them Priya and Rano and even her Bani….

Bani told her that from this day onwards she will take full responsibility of her parents, and her sisters and Pia does not need to do anything…. And don't worry you will never have to take care of them…... Pia leaves in a huff….and vows never to return….

Her parents hold Bani responsible for Pia's leaving telling her that she was getting too big for her shoes.. and that she had no business speaking like that about Pia….

They told her that she was the youngestr yet she was so rude towards her elder sisters not only Pia… but also Priya and Rano…. What they didn't understand that it was Bani's anger at herself that was coming out…..

Bani felt very sad and angry at herself that she had hurt her parents and vowed to improve her nature so to say….…Priya nad Rano after Pia were very demanding on her… requiring her to accompany to the doctor.. Shopping… parties everywhere….. Bani used to do it beforehand also but Pia was at times there for something….

Bani felt she had two children that she had to nurse…… sometimes she felt so disgusted and suffocated with them .. her parents expected her to treat her elder sister with a lot of respect that was due to them because of their age but at the same time they expected Bani to mother them…..

Bani often spent he evenings with her thoughts lost in Jai, Rony and Sandy…. And how she missed them…..since that day she had not spoken with them… she knew she had hurt them a lot by not trusting them with her emotions .. but she had know that this had to end… she was spoiling Jai's life.. preventing him from finding happiness with someone else…..also she did not like the way Ron and Sandy had to listen to so much because of her/… she also didn't want that… "ki uske bhaiyon ke daman pe Bani ke keechar ke daag ho…"

And therefore she had left…..

Many summers came and went many winters made her cry.. …….it had been almost 3 years since that fatal day when she left Goa…. of how she missed them… but she knew she couldn't return…and she had to live this barren lifeless life……alone … oh! so ALONE… surrounded supposedly with her family and yet so ALONE…. there is a dull pain in her heart which refuses to go and makes her cry every night to sleep….

******* TIME FOR A LONG BREAK******

Would love to know your ideas about whta happens next!

tata,
rocky25

TINK thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 18 years ago
#74
😭 oommmg rocky25 that was soooooooo emotional 😭 😭 😭 plz plz cont soon....i really hope a miracle happens...and she can be bck with jai 😭 😭 plzzzzzzzzz......as always yaar...luved reading it....luv the JB scenes 😆 .Awesome 👏

ideas for nxt part :now let me think.....chuck pia off a cliff 😆 ....sorry yaar i guess i can't help with ideas ...i am lost rite now 😕 😕 😆 ...but i am sure someone will help

luv
tink
Edited by TINK - 18 years ago
msrk thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 18 years ago
#75

Rocky By any chance is this a true story ?

I don't know when I read this part I just got the air of someone's feeling

If it is please do pm me.
mini11 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#76
👏 👏 👏
Excellent! Cant wait for the next part.

Mini
PUNJABI_HEERA thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#77
i hvnt red in a wile wut hapn 😕
-Yuks- thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 18 years ago
#78
I know, get Priya and Rano married to Ron and Sandy. That would solve a lot of problems.
Oh, and, Pia has a tragic fatal accident. Thats what she deserves.
Hope this helps.
Really like your ff, its so full of feeling and emotion.

Yuks
lil_desi_goddes thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 18 years ago
#79
wow!!!

didi.. fantastic.. absolutely loved it... it made me cry... but i loved it!!

plz do continue!!

👏
preet_2010 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#80
that was too good.you're work is superb.loved it.plz cont soon. 😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".