Passionate Lovers:Rocky25's:3FF:Pt.7:Pg16 - Page 7

Guys,

Do you think youy could bear a logical ending..?

tata,
rocky25

Originally posted by: rocky25

Guys,

Do you think youy could bear a logical ending..?

tata,
rocky25

you are already planning to end it???

Originally posted by: lonely14

you are already planning to end it???

It is very emotionaly draining...... anyways....I had said before i plan to complete it in 4-5 parts......

BTW read some of your FF..liked it a lot....quite a roller coaster ride it seems to be....

tata,
rocky25

Originally posted by: rocky25

It is very emotionaly draining...... anyways....I had said before i plan to complete it in 4-5 parts......

BTW read some of your FF..liked it a lot....quite a roller coaster ride it seems to be....

tata,
rocky25

awww well if you end this one you gotta start another one!!!!!

i would be fine with a logical ending, i am sure you will be wonderful!!!!!!!

aww thanks hun!!!! now-a-days all i get are belans or crying emoticons from people.

Very well written and i love the twist. But what really intrigues me is how you planning to resolve this story line. the only thing i am a 100% sure of is that however you choose to resolve it, it should be awesome to read!

wow rocky i loved part II! it's an amazing plot! can't wait for the next part 😛

Part 3:

Bani regains consciousness sometime later… and wants to go home…. so to say….. the doctor agrees as it is her heart which needs to heal……

Jai takes Bani home and puts her to bed ……later he lovingly looks at her…. and notes that she is really pale….. and tired… & he wonders what could have happened to make give Bani a nervous breakdown….

This is what Ron and Sandy are also thinking ….

They all are sure it has something to do with the broken cell phone and maybe a call… perhaps from Delhi…

Jai helps Bani into her favourite night clothes….. a cute white and pink… pyjama suit with teddy bears all over it…..

Usually Bani and Jai share Jai's silken black night suit, Jai wearing the pyjamas and Bani with the top….. but Jai knows from previous experience that when she is sick Bani becomes almost like a child wanting to be simply hugged and cuddled…. The transformation from a strong sexy woman to a child-woman is most mesmerizing…..

He had been amazed the first time he had seen this side of Bani…. They had got wet in the rain and on coming back home, one minute she had been fine but the instant she felt the fever she became this child woman….

Jai had gone with her mood and had lovingly taken care of her… he had also got her a soft pink teddy bear to hug while she was sick…..he found it quite amusing…

But the moment Bani's fever went back to normal again she was his sexy, provocative soul mate…..

He loved her in all her shades…….

Today also Jai takes out her favourite teddy bear and gave it to her hug…. She is sleeping in a foetal position…..with him behind her….

Jai gets up early morning around 4:30 am to check up on Bani and finds that she is not in bed…. he looks around and finds her standing by the French windows…. Hugging her teddy bear…..

He goes and hugs her from behind and she immediately turns around and hugs him back….. he can feel the wetness on her face of her tears… she has been crying….

"Bani what is wrong?.... mujhe nahin bataogi…."

Bani composes herself…leaves Jai and walks over to the balcony………. it is a beautiful sky outside….. all dark blue…. red…….. with flashes of orange…... with the early morning breeze

She takes a deep breath….. "Jai tumhe nahin bataongi to kisse bataongi….. I just needed time to come to grip with it myself….."

Jail patiently waits for her to continue…..basically he knows that Bani avoids talking about Delhi….It is almost a taboo topic for all of them…. She wants to forget all hat for the time she is here… here she is just Bani… Jai's Bani….

She takes another deep breath and says in a rush….. "Jai ……Pia ka phone aaya tha use saab pata chal gaya hai… hamare bare mein… aur yeh bhi ki mein yahan tumse milne aati hun…."

Jai had thought so much….. "Bani yeh to hona hi tha….. kabhi na kabhi….."

"Tumne kya soch hai….. kaho to hum dono Delhi chalte hain aur tumhare parents se baat karte hain…...."

Bani immediately screams a "No!"……and turns around ………" Nahin Jai….. meine abhi kuch nahin soch hai…... mein jaanti hu ki mein tum logo ko bahut taang kar rahi hun…. Par agar Mummy –Papa ko hamare bare me pata chal gaya to woh bardasht nahin kar payenge…"……

"aur mein bhi is tarah unhe aur dukh nahin dena chahati…... tum to jaante hi ho ki woh already kitne pareshaan hain…."

"Pehle Rano ki mental state… phir Priya widow ho gayi aura ab main ….... kam se kam mein unhe dukh nahin dena chahti…."

"Bani.... lekin agar unhe na bhi pata chale to woh abhi bhi to dukhi hain kyon kit um shaadi nahin kar rahi ho….."

Jai there is a difference!.... Jis tarah ka match unhe mere liye chahiye….. who milna aasan nahin hai….

You know Dad!...... Every father wants the best for their daughter….. aur phir aadhe log to hamri pareshaniyan dekh kar hi bhaag jaante hain…. After all who wants to take on the responsibility of aged parents and two sisters along with the wife….."

They both left it unsaid that Jai was ready to take them on… anytime….. but both knew it was not possible with Jai being a Muslim and his wife hovering on the horizon…..

"Jai….. shadi karna ya na karma mera faisla nahin hai…. meri ha na ka to sawakl hi nahin aata…Aur jab ayega tab mein mana kar doongi…..Tab tak mein kyon mana kar ke unhe dukh dooon…."

They both stand their gazing into the horizon for a long time and finally hug each other and go back to sleep…. nobody has any answers… if answers were this easy to find they would have been together long time back…

Next time Jai woke up it was almost 9:00 clock he looked around but could not find Bani anywhere.. he went to pick up his mobile and call her and then noticed the note lying by it saying she is at work!....and Not to worry…she has taken the medicines.. and is feeling absolutely fine…!

Jai was exasperated… but he knew perhaps this was Bani's ways to fight the circumstances…... he knew she was not the one to sulk too long…. She needed action perhaps that's why she had gone to work....

Jai got ready and reached Bani's office at around 10:30 am....there was a frenzy of activity in the office….. Bani was holding an informal meeting in her office….. looking at her his heart went out to her..

Inspite of being so sick Bani was very much in charge…in a white and grey business suit…she had the bandage around her head… her left hand was in bandages and was still holding tightly on to the silver cane… he almost smiled when he looked at it……. it had been bought by him on a whim….. on her last trip….to spank her when she had been acting really naught….

With her right hand she was holding some papers and was very articulately giving her view point on particular situation….

Though he could not see but he knew that she had one of her toes also in bandages….. how she was standing he had no idea.. but he had to agree she was looking better with a steel resolve and determination on her face….

God knows how she had come to the office….. but he knew his Bani was not anything if not resourceful…..thinking that he light up a cigarette and very casually goes out on the terrace to smoke…to wait for Bani to get free…..

Bani had immediately noticed Jai….. and her heart missed a beat God!.. he looked good enough to eat…!

But nonetheless…... she continued to conduct her meeting….she had come in early…. to the office …... everybody had been really startled to see her in this early ….. would be an understatement….. she think she actually gave a few of them a heart attack…. none expected her to come in early if at all after the fiasco yesterday…. In fact she actually told them…. When they all collected for the impromptu meeting…. "Do you guys really think a little bit of mishap is going to keep me away from office……. Well ladies and gentle men you are highly mistaken..!"

She had told them to pull up their socks as she hoped to finish all of this weeks work with the day….. what she couldn't Ron or Sandy will handle…

Next she had asked her secretary to arrange a new mobile for her with the old number….. and the first call had been to Pia to tell her decision….

She finished her meeting and went outside to meet Jai… She also told him that she was fine and was trying to finish everything today so she could spend time with him and Ron – Sandy… Jai wanted her to rest but she said she is fine…… and grudgingly Jai had to give in to her … he promised to be back to pick her up in the evening…..

That was just amazing!!!!!!

hehe super bani again!!!!!!!

that was great.loved it.simply superb.plz do cont soon. 😊

haila... di.. what a part.. man.. i fainted at the part when bani's heart misses
a beat.. mera dil haar baar dhadkan miss karta hai.. when i see jai!!

lol!

plz do continue!!

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