Chup Chup Ke 3!!....P. 36 - last update - Page 11

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey Nibbles!! That part was sooo good!!! I was blushng like crazy when I read it!!! Please please please continue soon, I wonder who nisha is??? 😕 😕 😕
Luv ya,
Meera
P.S. Please please continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Wow...........I seriously can't believe these are the comments to my FF..........You guys actually make me feel like a good writer😆...

Thank you so much🤗

I'm sorry for the delay.........I got a little caught up in work........and everytime I sat down to complete this.......I always amde alterations!😕

Anyways........here it is...

N: B…You just need to relax and enjoy yourself!

B: How am I meant to relax in this?!

Bani looked irritated as she juggled the phone between her ear and shoulder while trying to set her sari straight…she knew Neha would be rolling her eyes on the end…

N: look B…you'll have a great time…believe me…oh, I gotta go now...Bye!

B: No, wait…Neha don't……hang up…

Bani sighed as she heard Neha put the phone down and went back to inspecting her sari – a simple, black sari with light silver workings on the border and a low cut blouse…Bani would have had no problem wearing it, if it hadn't been for the fact that it was literally see through!

She had stopped at Nehas to get ready for the business party after another round of shopping…unfortunately, she had forgot to bring clothes with her and the black sari (picked up by Neha at the mall) was the only thing available as Neha's clothes were far to small for her…

Cursing Neha under her breath, Bani stepped in to the hall and was hit with a blast of music, lights and the chatter of business personals scattered around the room…Mr. Oberios parties were always very informal, and this one was no exception…

S: Bani puthhar!

Bani turned around and smiled as she saw a short, 50 year old weaving his way through the crowds towards her…there was a grin on his face and Bani knew that the glass clutched in his hand was definitely not coke…

B: Uncle…you know you're not meant to drink!

Giving him a stern look, she took the glass away from him…

S: But…that's not mine Bani…I was…uh…just holding it for a friend…

Bani raised her eyebrow as she turned to place the drink on a waiter's empty tray, and handed him a glass of plain water…he made a face but didn't say anything…

Mr. Singh was Bani's immediate boss, but treated Bani more like a favourite niece…his cute and bubbly nature never failed to bring a smile to her face, and his uproarious jokes had gained him many supporters in the office…

B: So how is aunty…still jetlagged from the flight?!

His face immediately lit up as he excitedly informed Bani of his wife's health, before recounting to Bani all the places they had visited in Dubai, while on their 7th honeymoon of 26 years!

Bani listened quietly as her mind wandered to Dadi, who resembled Mr. Singh in many ways…she felt a rush of sorrow as she remembered her family, something which she had pushed till the back of her mind till now…suddenly she snapped out as she heard her name…

S: Let me introduce someone to you puthar…I'm sure you'll like her!…you just stay here for a minute…

Mr. Singh turned round to look for his guest, leaving Bani to glance around the party on her own…she spotted a group of men near the bar watching her intently, and she immediately felt uncomfortable…turning an interesting shade of crimson, Bani pulled the pallu of her sari closer around her body and self consciously eased through the people, looking for Mr. Singh…

Suddenly her eyes fell on Jai, deep in conversation with two other men, not to far from where she was standing…

The temperature had suddenly become to hot and Bani closed her eyes as her mind wandered to their last encounter at the office…the way his fingers had gently touched her back, the way his voice had softly caressed her ears…Bani shivered as she remembered every second of that meeting…

She had been to embarrassed to face him the next day, and had been relieved when she'd been told that Jai had rushed to a meeting in Delhi, and wouldn't be back anytime soon…

Trying to control her breathing while hiding her flushed face behind the curtain of her, Bani was just considering rushing out of the party when she heard a female voice, not to far from where she was standing...

R: Bani?!!…OMG!!

She looked up and the entire colour drained from her face as her eyes fell on Roshni, who looked every bit as stunned as she did…the party atmosphere slipped away until Bani was left with a loud drumming in her ears as she came face to face with the woman who had ruined her life…

In one quick movement, Roshni embraced Bani who felt as if she would collapse any minute…

R: I really can't believe this…after so long…oh God…

Roshni's hands flew from her mouth, to her hair, and to her chest in a quick succession as her eyes held an unfamiliar twinkle…

Roshni's voice seemed to attract a lot of attention and Bani wished for nothing more than the ground to open up and swallow her as she saw Jai join them…he seemed to suck all the air, leaving Bani breathless…while the heat from his body, combined with the shock of meeting Roshni left a queasy feeling in her stomach…

J: Roshni…what are you doing here?!

R: You knew!…Jai, you knew about Bani so why didn't you tell me?!

Bani pulled the sari around her like a shield and donned a stony expression as Jai glanced at her nervously, knowing exactly what would be going on in her head…

J: I…uh…didn't get a chance…

R: See!…if I hadn't flown over to meet you, I would never have known…Bani, where were you?!........do you have any idea how much we looked for you?!...........and the wedding!!...........Jai, she didn't even come to our wedding!

Bani's head snapped up at the word 'wedding'…sure enough, a beautiful mangulsutra hung around Roshni's neck, the elegant beads twinkling under the party lights…Bani glanced at Jai, but his face betrayed no emotions…

R: God…wait Bani, let me just introduce you to him…

Not really paying attention to Roshni, Bani glanced at Jai again, and shivered as he held her with his eyes…suddenly she looked away…how could he look so – normal?!...

Anger rising up once again, Bani turned round to leave when she felt Jai clasp her wrist…

J: Bani…

*Bamn*

Bani stood glaring at him; chest heaving as if she had run a mile…Jai was standing still, his cheeks smarting from the slap Bani had placed on his cheek…

B: How dare you?!...I should have known it was just an act…everything!!...you're married to Roshni and you…I hate you Jai…I hate every moment, every second you touched me…every time I kissed you back, I hate myself for that…you're the most disgusting, cheap man I've ever met…

Feeling as if on the verge of a breakdown, Bani turned on her heels and was about to leave when she found her exit blocked by Roshni and a smart looking man by her side…

R: Bani…I want you to meet Neel…

Bani was about to tell her where she could shove Neel when the next two words made all the colour drain from her face…

R: …my husband!

The man smiled and shook Bani's hand while placing a loving arm around Roshni…Bani stared at them for a few seconds before she finally managed to choke out the words…

B: You're…her husband?!

N: Yeah…we've been married for about two years now…

Bani opened her mouth to say something, but closed it again and gulped…..everything was just to hard to take in…she stared at the floor, not once glancing at Jai – she felt to guilty to even look at him…

B: Umm….I really should go!

Mumbling a quick excuse, Bani hurried out of the party feeling worse than she'd ever felt in her life…

*******

B: Damn!

Bani kicked her flat tyre in frustration and rummaged through her bag for her mobile, only to find the battery dead…

B: God…what do I do now?!

While she had been panicking, she had failed to notice a sleek black car coming to a halt at her side…the tinted windows rolled down and Bani froze as she heard his voice…

J: Bani…I'll drop you home…

She closed her eyes and exhaled deeply, trying to get a hold of the frenzy of emotions rushing through her…

B: It's…ok…I'll…

But no sooner had she choked the words out of her mouth, than the sky opened up to allow a downpour of rain…it seemed like even the Gods wished for Jai and Bani to go together, and in a matter of seconds, Bani was drenched…

J: Bani…get in the car…

B: But…

J: Get in…

There was finality in his voice that Bani walked over to the car and sat down without arguing…

*************

Bani looked out of the window and watched the Mumbai traffic fly past as the silence hung in the air, like it had done for the past 20 minutes…

B: I'm sorry…

Jai glanced at Bani and saw that she was looking down at her lap, a morose expression on her face…

J: For what?!

B: For everything…for misunderstanding you, for walking out on you…for everything I said to you at the party…I'm, I'm so sorry Jai…

She closed her eyes and wept softly, cursing herself and her destiny for playing such a big game with her…Jai felt the silence and as he turned to look at Bani, he was surprised to see her tears…concerned, he immediately placed a hand on her cheek, forcing her to look up…

J: Bani…I've never held you responsible…maybe we had to separate to come back together, like this!

His soft voice, his warm touch and her skin…shivering slightly, Bani looked in to his eyes and saw all the love, all the passion that his body radiated…she knew why she had fallen for him, and why she was still falling…

Noting her gaze, Jai carefully placed a stray strand of hair behind her ear and gave a soft smile…

J: Though I wouldn't mind a small kiss – as an apology…

Bani blushed furiously and turned her face, moving his hand away…her eyes fell on the road in front of her, and she went pale…

B: Jai…

She clasped his arm and Jai looked up in time to see a large van drunkenly making it's way towards them…

Trying to hide his fear as he felt Bani panicking beside him, Jai made a sudden steer to the right, only for the car to fall of the road and follow a muddy track in to the trees nearby…

Bani screamed as they were plunged in to the darkness of the trees, the branches scratching against the car as if to stop them from going any further…

Finally the car came to a halt as it collided with a tree trunk…there was silence, and then…

Bamn…

The car exploded and fire crackled against the leaves, leaving a trail of smoke amongst the small jungle…

A love story very rarely has a happy ending…

Sorry for the increased use of "Bamn"...........I don't know any other sound effects!😕

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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwww soo cute.

im glad there aren't any more misunderstandings with them!

very very good!

anam
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww they made up but why this accident now!!!!!
anyways nibbles that was awesome!!!! 👏
please continue soon!!!!
i hope j-b are okay!
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Posted: 18 years ago
My Jannu...this was amazing...and if i can remember clearely...exactly how long did it take you write this??...ahem if i revelaed it here i am sure you'd bash me up 😆 😆 😉 !
Amazing part...loved the indirect passion...loved it!
Your an amazing writer my sweety...haan patha hai..you have alot of work to do...but so do i, probably more ( yaar...)...like i told you...meh toh gayei...keseh bachoongei?? patha nahi! !
Do hope that you will write the next part soon...nice ff!
Nice to see Roshni acting so...sweet 😉
Continue soon my jaanu...your sweetu is waiting 😆 😆 !
Luv ya
MWAH
Sweetu
P.S. A long pm is on its way...yaar...have to tell you something 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago


That was amazing.. I love Jai and Bani when you write them, they come alive
with so much passion for each other. Too bad ekta can't portray that
emotion anymore...

Are they dead... gulp.. 😭 But they got back together..

Khushboo (nibbles never stop writing .. your too amazing to stop)
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Posted: 18 years ago


That was amazing.. I love Jai and Bani when you write them, they come alive
with so much passion for each other. Too bad ekta can't portray that
emotion anymore...

Are they dead... gulp.. 😭 But they got back together..

Khushboo (nibbles never stop writing .. your too amazing to stop)
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Posted: 18 years ago
"a love story very rarely has happy endings" ??! i'm not falling for that 😉 😆 jai and bani are alive and are going to fall in love...thank you very much 😃 😆

awesome part nibbles!! can't wait for the next one
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Posted: 18 years ago
woowww.!! hunii tht was a grr88 part !!
all the emotionss u writee r so cooll....!!! u jst make them feel soo alivee..that i can actuallyy imagineethem...!!
hunii do contiueee sssssooonn..
will be waitingg eagerlii...!!
thnksxxx !!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: inavars

"a love story very rarely has happy endings" ??! i'm not
falling for that 😉 😆 jai and bani are alive and are going to fall in
love...thank you very much 😃 😆

awesome part nibbles!! can't wait for the next one



yup yup. i am agreeing wif u!!

nibbles hunn.. 2 good!

😆

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