Chup Chup Ke 3!!....P. 36 - last update

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys!🤗.........

As most of you must have guessed already, I'm writing the third part od my Chup Chup Ke series..........I was meant to start this in half term holidays, (which is about 5 weeks away!😭)...........but I got so many requests to start this soon (thanks so much guys!!😛) and ideas were just buzzing around in my head so I had to type them up!

For those of you haven't read my first two.........here are the links:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=309016&P N=1&TPN=1

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=340599&T PN=1&

Warning: I would not advise Chup Chup Ke 2 for bache!😆.........no, seriously..........I don't want the mods chasing after me!

Those of you have nothing better to do.....and are therefore reading this.......pelase not that I won't be able to update this regularly.......maybe every few days!

Kya kare...blame school!

Ok.........won't bore you any longer, so here it goes........and remember, feedback is always welcomed - positive or negative!😛

Bani swept her hair to one side and carefully slid the white bangles on her wrist, smiling at the tinkling sound they made…the curtains blew behind her and she shivered slightly as the wind enclosed the room, tickling her back as the moonlight fell on her reflection…

J: Bani…

Startled, she turned round and smiled at Jai standing right behind her…she had not heard him come in and was taken completely by surprise at his proximity…

Watching her expressions intently, Jai caressed her cheeks softly, allowing his fingers to trail slowly down her neck as her breath became ragged, the flickering candles giving her face an ethereal glow…

R: Jai!

Bani's eyes snapped open and she watched as Jai turned round and beamed – at Roshni…turning her back on her as if she didn't exist, he walked towards Roshni and Bani watched helplessly as she flung her arms around his neck and slid her fingers through his hair…they both laughed as if sharing a private joke and then gazed into each others eyes with passion, oblivious to Bani's broken heart…

B: Jai…how could you do this to me…

Her voice was faint but caught their attention…grinning wickedly, Roshni and pulled Jai towards her protectively and smirked as he came willingly…

R: Why don't you get it…he loves me Bani…

"he loves me Bani…. he loves me Bani…. he loves me Bani…."

The words echoed around the room as if taunting her…she covered her ears not wanting to hear it, but they hung in the air as they mingled with laughter, Roshni and Jai's laughter…they were laughing at her….

Salty tears blurred her eyesight and she shook her head….not wanting to believe what was in front of her…

"he loves me Bani….B…B…Bani…Bani wake up…"

Bani groaned as she felt someone shaking her shoulder roughly…she groggily opened her eyes and blinked...once, twice, three times…once her eyes were accustomed to the bright lights, and her vision became clear she realised that Neha was leaning over her, concern written all over her face…

N: B…are you okay?!

Bani sat up straight and looked around her before running her fingers through her hair…she cast her eyes around her surroundings and realised that she had fallen asleep in the office…

Reaching for the cup of coffee she took a sip and pulled a face…it was cold…drowning it in one gulp she watched as Neha took a seat in front of her…

B: Do you want some coffee?!

Getting up she avoided her gaze and went to make some coffee…

N: B…it's two in the morning…what are you doing in the office at this time?!

B: Just finishing work…

Neha flipped through the file Bani had been working on and sighed…

N: The deadline for this isn't till a week Bani…

Bani shrugged as she poured the coffee in to two cups…

B: I like to keep on top of my work…

N: At the moment it looks as if you're keeping your work on top of you…Bani, you need to slow down…

Neha shook her head as she got a mute response from Bani…

N: Why don't you get married?!

Neha had threw that question at her so many times that Bani just dismissed it with a blink of an eye…turning round she handed a cup to Neha before taking her seat with her own…

N: What about Sameer?!…he loves you Bani…the whole office knows about it!!

Bani took a sip of her coffee and felt herself relaxing as the warm liquid filtered through her body…

B: He's….cute…

N: Cute?!

Neha stared at him in disbelief…

N: He's gorgeous B!…if I wasn't getting engaged next week, I would be on to him like a Bee to a pot of honey…

Bani couldn't help grinning at Neha…

B: Don't let Karan hear you say that…and besides, looks aren't everything…

N: But he doesn't just have looks…he's kind, intelligent, understanding, and he makes you laugh…you said it yourself B…

B: I know that Neha…he is understanding, kind, intelligent, funny…and we know each other well…but…but he's not…

She shifted in her seat as she tried to tell Neha what was on her mind…

N: But he's not him…right?!

Bani nodded as Neha watched her attentively…Neha knew everything about Banis past and in the past two years, it seemed as if the two friends had known each other forever…

N: Well B…I think you should go home now…don't forget we have to go for shopping tomorrow…

Neha grinned at her pensive friend and tried to lighten the tensed atmosphere…

B: You and your shopping Neha…God knows what'll happen at the wedding!

Neha shrugged and the two girls got up as Neha helped Bani gather her files…

N: Hey…it's my Dad's money…let me enjoy with it…

B: And after the wedding?!

N: well let's just say Karan will have to keep his credit card somewhere safe…

Shaking her head Bani grabbed the last of her stuff and pushed Neha gently out of her cabin…

Keep the dandas on hold guys...........Jai and Bani will be together soon!😉

Pages: 2...5...7...10...12...15...18...20...22...24...25...26...28. ..30...32...34 and 36😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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🤗 MY JAAN!
Thnak god you continued!
Ok here go my comments....
👏 AMAZING!!!
WOW!!
Bani and Jai not together....ouch😭...what happened between koi jagrha hogeiya kya??
Thank god it was only a dream....if Jai was with anyone other than Bani then just ufff!!
Please do continue soon!!
I really want to know the reaction of the two of them when they meet!😳😳
Chup chup ke was awesome and jaan you know that😳 I loved it!
Please do continue soon!
Luv ya
Mwah
Sweetu
P.S. Ahem what was it you said to me...a danda is too small to chase after me...you'll use a tractor eh?? well jaan...think this dost as going to chase after you with a motor bike...much mure macho and faster😆😆 that way you'll write the next part soon!!!!!😳 cause you'll be running back to your copmputer to write it!!
Sorry...jaan...i wont always be replying to your ff....due to the situation in KS forum....but this time the temptation was just too sweet.
Also tum koh bhi patha hai...kei meh monday-friday thak kahan hoon...c'est vraiment...a trip to death!

Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago
Tomiko thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey.........my jaan's the first one to reply!!.....But I'm waiting for a PM yaar!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey really nicely written.....hope this one turns out to be as great as first two parts
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nibbles

Hey.........my jaan's the first one to reply!!.....But I'm waiting for a PM yaar!


😭I am sorry jaanu...am pming you right now!
And look up...my comments are up just look up to where i first replied...😆😆😉
Danda nahi...tractor nahi...motor bike yesssssssss!!😆
Luv ya
Mwah
Sweetu.
P.S. Just noticed sweetu18....we share the same ID...except yours is 18 and mine is 144😆😆.
Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW! hun.

what a superb start!! lovely!!

looking forward to when jai and bani are together!

rock on hun!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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woooooooooooooooow! that was excellent!!!! i love u Nibbles for writing this FF! very good!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh yay.. part 3.. that was minblowing 👏 can't wait fo d nxt part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks, waiting for the next part 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wooww..
wondefyll partt sweeti..wickedd...
do continuee soon...!!
wawww..letss see wht happeness..nexttt!!
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