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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
This is purely fiction and it is a sequeal from my original fanfic Determination.....if u search that u can read it...
And thanks i try and do my best in writing

Hope that answers ur question! šŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
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šŸ˜† raania u are not gonna believe this....but after my 3 hour business lecture.....i actually sped towards the lib....to find a computer....so i can see if u had updated šŸ˜† šŸ˜† i am really become soooooo addicted to ur fanfic 😳 i think is cos of the rajvir guy 😳 😳 😳 plz plz sort out his and jaan's problem....but hey take ur time....i really want u to keep writing loads more šŸ˜† luved this part.....as always plz cont sooon.....keep it up šŸ‘ i wonder what i will do tomarrow at...as i am at uni again šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

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Posted: 18 years ago
#73

Part 12


Raj's Dadi was happy as her and Bilo both wanted the samething…now she would talk to Rajvir's parents and see where that went….
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Simran with Aanya was able to calm Jaanvi down and brought her down for the cake cutting and the celebration parts…her heart really went out to her but somewhere something told her that that was not all…something more had happened that night….or after that night…did Jaanvi start to fall for this guy…was she emotionally attached or was it just pure hatred for him…she had to talk to Raj…..he knew Raj was a womanizer but she also knew he would never take advantage of anyone…..
Raj was taken away by Jaanvi and how beautiful she looked…she always had been simple to her and never really dressed up…hell he didn't even think she was from such a rich and famous family…she was so different…..oh God why couldn't he see it…and what was he going to say to Jai if he ever found this out……his gaze not leaving the sight of Jaanvi all night
Mr Khaana Rajvir's dad notiched this change in his son…he saw how he looked at jaanvi and how her appearace brought a certain type of feeling over his face….he made a mental note of that …Jaanvi was pretty and he had this thought which he will discuss at home with the family…maybe this trip to Mumbar would be worth it….
Jaanvi cut the cake …this was her brothers moment and she put her feelings aside and looked at the mand close to her who always was her mum and and…she fed the cake to him and Dadi and to Rano Masi who was there from London…..she than took blessings from all of them….
Jai hugging her made an annoucement….: ladies and gentleman I know most of u are shocked to see that I have a sister….kissng her forehead…all the while Jaanvi was looking down shy…..she didn't like this sort of attention….Jai continued…Jaanvi is my life….she is and I are all we have apart from my fav masi whose here from London and our Dadi…..meri bhen ko yeh saab pasand nahi hai….infact I remember her saying : bro meh toh koi simple se ladke se shadi karugi not a businessman like you…laughing Jai continued….aaj mere khatir she is going thru all this….i love you Jaanvi my sis and I wish u all the happiness in the world….
Jaanvi all emotional started crying and hugged her brother…and than Rano and masi….she was overwhelmed with feelings and felt really bad that she had done something that wont be acceptable in their family….
Raj just kept starring at her…his heart going out to her…why do I feel this….why do I want to be the one holding her….this is killing me ..i need a drink…making his way to the bar….
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Simran approached Raj…he was alone sitting at the bar looking at Jaanvi and drinking…..
The party was in full swing…everyone dancing and drinking and partying and eating..there was every kind of food in place….afteral it was the Walia's party…..and there were the young crowd also outside doing BBQ….near the pool …many were in the pool already……
Majority of the crowd were outside anyway…
Sim: right now we are friends right??
Raj: hey sim whts up
Sim: can we go somewhere I need to talk to you
Raj: yeah sure…whats up?? Both made their way to the back of the farm house…..
Sim: tumhari aur Jaanvi ke beech kya hai
Raj: his face loosing color…what do u mean..he was getting mad now…
SiM: i know u are my boss but today im speaking as in individual….tumhare…I mean…I know what happened between u and Jaanvi Raj…
Raj: what…who told you and when
Sim: so its true…yeah iknow and she herself told me just a few minutes ago…..now Simran was really mad…nobody knew how mad she can get…..i cant believe it …I just cant…I knew u were a womans man….she was furious…magar Jaanvi…common Raj she is such an innocent girl….what were u thinking…tumne kya socha nahi tum kya kar rahe ho???....do u know what she had been going thru the past what 7 or 8 months is it….she has been living like zombie…na theek se khati hai….baathe karti hai…na hasti hai aur nahi rothi hai….my God I thought u had some self respect…agar Mr Walia ko pata chala than what…do u realise that…..??
Raj: rubbing his hair…gulping his drink in one go demanding another and looked at Simran….i didn't no okay…I didn't now she was Jai's sister…hell I didn't even know she was a Walia…do u see the way she presents herself…..and
Sim; and what …it made it okay to take advantage of her because u thought she was some ordinary girl…..look at her…uski birthday party hai and she looks like she is attending a funeral…with her fake smile…do u know how hard it was for me and Aanya to make her come downstairs after she saw u and met u….and what made things was the fact that u and Mr Walia know each and Mr Walia is ur buddy…nah woh tumhe kuch keh sakti hai aur na usko…..
Raj: listen Simran what happened was beyond my control…it wasn't like I raped her dammit…..she had wiling surrendered herself to me….
Sim: yes that's what she said but she did that upon ur insistent…don't u think if u had some level of control this would have been prevented…she as nave young and innocent but u were matured…u have had woman before…u know whts it like….phir bhi kiu….
Raj: why are you so concerned
Sim: because she is my friend and my little sister and I love her and I care for her…I don't want to see her hurt…
Raj: oh pahleez grow up…she will be fine after a while….
Sim was beyond control..: after what Raj…after what….it has been almost 8 months tumhe lagta hai woh kuch bhuli…aur tum…tum kuch bhule….if it wasn't anything than why are you at the bar sulking and drinking and looking at only Jaanvi..dont u think I havnt noticed……all u do is drink and look at her….why???
Raj: I don't know okay….he said in a low angry voice…leave me alone….
Sim: no u have to do something about this…u are a good friend of mine and so is Jaanvi and I cant take it…..so dammit get ur act together and DO something….
Raj looked at Simran before she could hear him out she went upto jaan and started talking to her….Jaanvi was smiling and talking to some girls….she looked so beautiful and innocent….what have I done man???...5th drink down the throat…..
Jai: came upto Raj: hey buddy whats up…common I heard u dance good go join the dance floor….
RAj: nahi yaar mood nahi hai
Jai: kya hua…let me guess…woman problems..?? laughing and slapping his back….
RAj: looking at Jai..should I say something….and than he

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Edited by Raania - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
😳 just awesome......i guess i did not have to be at uni to read this part.......thanks for updating sooo soon...cos today i sped out of my business lecture....to read part 11 šŸ˜† i luuved it yaar it was great....i think he is finally realising that he is kinda falling for her 😳 keep it up yaar šŸ‘ plz cont soon

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omg.... i am first to read it today as welll šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜† just realised afta posting šŸ˜† šŸ˜† show how desperate i am becoming
Edited by TINK - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
You are absolutely wicked at writing a story i am really amazed. This is great you turned out to be better than ekta at this
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
raj is finally falling for Jhanvi... i guess he is already gone hook line and sinker......interesting point... waiting to see what happens next.........
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
Love this epsode.
Atleast Raj is falling in love with Jaanvi.
Yay.
Yuks
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78

Then he......then he what hun?!

Come one.......you can't stop their!šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
hmmm u would have to wait wont u..heheheh šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
that was soo good di..

fantastic!!

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