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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
aaaaaaawwwwww....poor jaanvi she is sooooo upset...i am feeling sooo bad 😭 plz plz raania....cheer her up....she was sooo loud and energetic before.....and bless rajvir....he held her gently 😳 like she is delicate flower 😳 i think he is falling big time 😆 ...and yaar jaishiv and sim....man...hes thinking about settle down with her 😳 bless him....ooohhhh another thing...i luv it when u mention bani and jai...in the ff...it makes it sweeter.... 😳 😳 keep it up yaar 👏


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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
😉 thanks guys...u know me..and my romance..im in love with love 😉

Part 14

Rano: bilkul di jaisi ho tum…aur unki hi tarah dil bhi hai thumara….bhough hi achi beti ho is ghar ki…..Di aur jiju hote toh bhouth hi khush hote aaj….Jaanvi hugged her and just cried…nahi Masi woh log mujse nafrat karte….crying….
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Part 14

Mr Bhatiya: areh beta tum yaha…

Sim: papa aap yaha

Mr B: ha…I was one of the invited guests…me and Jaishivs dad go a long way…why??

Sim: oh God no…agar Mr Walia ko pata chala toh kya hoga…nahi kuch nahi…

Mr B: ma aur neha bhi hai…

Sim: kya??? Oh God please aaj koi scene na ho….she had cake on her plate and needed to breathe now…maybe she could go up to her room for the night and rest for a while…papa meh chalti hu aapse phir baat karugi…

Mr B: smiled aaj pheli baar naraaz nahi hu…and left

Sim turned and started walked when she collided with Jai yet again…but this time her cake smashed amongst his shirt infront…..

Sim: closing her eyes…oh God not again…looking at the shirt infront and than up to a pair of laughing eyes….tears in her eyes Sim: im so sorry Mr WAlia…woh meh…im so sorry…

Jai: its okay Miss B: im getting used to this…..laughing he went up to clean it…..

Sim ran all the way up to her room and the adjoing bathroom…washing her hands she came out to make her way downstairs again when she spotted Jai trying to clean the stain…..

Entering his room

Sim: layiye meh kardu….geting busy with the task…holing his shirt touching his chest…it was such a hard task…hw hard can removing a stain be she thought….

Jai looking at he amused…kya ladki hai…ek dum accident prone…smiling he just let her be…

Sim: im so sorry Mr Walia..meh

Jai: took his hands over the mouth…like I said..im getting used to it smiling…

Sim biting her lips just smiled and continued to do so….

Jai: u know u look very pretty tonight..kya kisine kaha tumhe…

Sim all shy and uncormfortable..: shaking her head in a no

Jai: giving her a sexy look with eyes all sleepy…well u do….and I …

Sim: the stain had gone but she was still at it…not wanting to look up

Jai putting his hands on her shoulders…: hogeya….
Sim looking up at him not understanding what his saying…
Jai: stain remove hogeya…
Sim: oh..yeah trying to move frm his hold…meh who…..
Jai: coming close to her right infront of him…and I
Sim: looking at him….eyes moving frm one direction to another…..
Jai: and I coming more close
Sim: hmmm..faintly
Jai: and I wanted to thank you for cleaning up the mess u made…chale
Sim: kya??? That came out loud
Jai amused: chale party me….log intezar kar rahe hai mera
Sim: feeling stupid…oh ha…chalo…ohhhh u bundar..meh tumhe dhek lugi..she thought…
Jai loved toying with her and they made it back to the party…
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Around 3am in the mrng Jaanvi woke up to sound of whispers…looking to her side she saw that Aanya was missing….putting her robe on …hair all messed up she went out to look for her….
Jaan whispering..: Ana???
Jaan; Ana??

She made it to the kitchen squeezing her eyes she found herself hungry…opeing the fridge she found her birthday cake…..taking a piece she sat on the kichen stool and started to eat……she didn't turn the lights on and the faint alarm light was enough for her to see….what she didn't see was Raj was seated at the table…unable to sleep he had come for a glass of water and had decided to seat there and finish it….he did have a lot to drink so a headache was developing too

Jaanvi busy eating didn't notice him starring…Raj noticed her body clad in the soft material making hey body visible from the light and he deshelved appearance took him back to the night many months back….eveything was fresh again in sight…..his need to get hold of her and make her his was too damn hard to control but somehow he was managing

Aanya from the entrance to the kichen: pist…pist? Jaanu
Jaanvi: Ana tum kaha thi and what are you doing so late at night

Ana: meh toh baas ..she was so happy after all she said yes to marriage to her dream boy….taking another fork and eating the cake with her…..
Jaanvi: laughed…tum bhi na….
Ana: acha lagta hai tumhe haste dekte…why are you sad these days yaar…u couldn't control what happened why cant u just forget it
Jaanvi: playing with her fork and the cake….i cant yaar..patani kiu…aisa lagta hai kaal hi ki baath hai…aur phir jaab bhaia ko dekti hu toh …u know me…
Aanya: u know what u should do…
Jaanvi: smiling and looking at her…what??? Knowing that ana will come up with something silly
Aanya: u should just marry the guy
Jaanvi: almost choking…kya?? Yeah right why would the great Rajvir Khanna marry me?? Are you out of ur mind…havnt u read his history of woman….im nothing compared to them….
Ana: so tumne socha toh hai…and yes u are right tum un ladkiyon se alag ho…much more beautiful and a great person..kitni acha hoga yaar…..tum aur Raj I can already picture u children..hehehehehe
Jaanvi: ana stop it…funny nai hai yar…
Raj just sat there listening….: what if..what if we marry?? Shaking his head he slowly got up not disturbing them and made his way out…
Ana: I have to tell u something
Jaanvi: what…
And slipped her hand and showed Jaanu the ring that Aakash just gave her
Jaanvi: oh my God wow…who
Ana: smiling common u know…Kash aur kaun
Jaanvi: hugging her..oh im so happy for you…
Ana: me too
Both laughed like crazy……
Sim made her way down to sounds of laugter..: kya hua
Ana showed her the ring…
Sim: the three girls shouted and started laughing
Jai made his way down to sounds of shouting…: woken from deep sleep…on the way he met Raj coming out of his room in his boxers…..Jai too was in his boxers and hands realized….both men walking down…found Kash walking up in his normal clothing…..
Raj: where are you coming frm???
Akash: relax dude I was out walking…
Raj: giving him a questioning look of …in a suit??
Akash: relax guys and went to his room…in a happy jovial mood
The three girls were jumping as Jai and Raj entered the huge kitchen…
Jai: whats happening here??

The three girls looked at them and burst out laughing……

Sim and Jaanvi getting red to the sight of Jai and Raj

Ana: areh wah Jai bhaia aap toh aise hi agaye??? Idicating with her eyes

Jaanvi: bhaia her eyes getting big and indicating to his pants….

Sim: umm Raj..ur umm ur

Both men looked at each other and than the girls…kya hua?? Why are you girls shouting….

The three girls got up…kuch nahi: walking to their rooms all smiling and ana just laughing her head off..: good night guys….

Ana: nice boxers…and winking checking out their backside….

Raj and Jai noticed their clothing and together: oh shit…making their way to the room…..

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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
just read it man......awesome just awesome....gud to see everyone all happy and laughing again..keep it up
👏 yaar....i was blushing like crazy.....it was a cute part when they both come down wearing boxers 😳 that was sooooooo sweet.......and man jai is soooo funny the way he bugs sim......i am gonna read it again....i think i am losing it 😆 i think its because of rajvir 😳

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Edited by TINK - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
this story is so sweet....i think it's going to turn out that jai and bani are just missing...since Jaishiv had mentioned that his parents bodies were never found...dum de dum dum dum! you know what that means...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
Jaishiv bhi na... poor Sim.
The boxer scene was too funny. I loved it.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
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the boxer part was so funny! 😆 😆 😆 once again good job! 👏
that part was so funny when ana checked out their backsides and said nice boxers! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
omg the boxer part was so funny...
I hope raj aapologizes...i noe it wouldnt help but still.. And he should propose to her.....to make her feeling less miserable....
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
😉 i know they were superman and batman boxers 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
hahah! raania di.

i loved the part! sorry for not reading it previosly!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
dont apologise girl
its okay its alright....hehehe im singing Nelly's song....

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