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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi Raania,

I am so happy to see you took my advise and started to continue this FF. It just brings a smile to my face.

Just like always part 7 is just fabulous. Even though you stopped writing for a while, you still have the same style in writing, keeping the same pace in the story and not rushing. Keep it up girl! 😉

Please don't let anyone talk you out of writing. Not only this FF of yours, all the other ones show you have talent to write.

So, stop tormenting the readers and write the next part! ( talking about not rushing ... LOL ).

What will be Jaanvi's reaction when she wakes up? 😡
What will be Raj's reaction, when he finds out about Jaanvi being a Walia? 😕
What will be Jai's reaction when he finds out Raj brought Jaanvi to his farmhouse without his or Masi's knowledge?? (Jai being protective about Jaanvi) 😡



Edited by Kiran1977 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
Thanks Kiran means a lot yaar...ur words 😳 and thanks to all my friends for the compliments.... 😉

Part 8


Jaanvi woke up to the smell of food…it flared thru her nostrils and smelled so good…….mmmm nice ..she was starving …opening her eyes she looked around..something is not right…this wasn't her room…..getting up she squeezed her eyes…..turning the lamp on the side on she saw a picuture of Raj …smiling looking gorgeous on a horse……oh no….Raj….everything came back to her….looking at her watch….what 7.45pm….oh no …I have to be home before 8pm…bhai worry karge…..

Running downstairs…tying her hair at the back…pulling it from her face…..she shouted…RAj??? Raj??

Raj: slept well i hope looking at her dishelved appearance

Jaan: slept well ke bache…tumne time dheka hai….again meh agle 15 minutes meh ghar nahi pouchi toh toh

Raj: looking lazly at her…he was in the kitchen cooking…toh kya??

Jaan: oh no…Bhaia worry karenge…dadi…..meh yaha…akele who bhi ek ladke ke satth…oh no…kya karu kya karu…mujhe ghar jana hai…abhi ke abhi…do u hear me…

Raj: relax girl kaun si century meh rheti ho….call home and tell them u are here in Panvel…with me…..

Jaan: Panvel..woh toh ghar se amost 2 hours door hai

Raj: tumhe kaise malum….

Jaan: kiu ki hamara farm house bhi Panvel meh hai stupid…oh no…mujhe ghar jana hai…abhi

Raj looked at her eyes raised…Panvell…all the richy rich have their vacation homes here than how come…maybe her father works for the Walia group coz they have a farm house close by aswell…..

Raj looked at her dishelved look and the way she was making her face…he wanted to laugh….

Jaan: and hello meh koi aisi waisi ladki nahi hu…samjhe tum….i have to go home…now

Raj: sorry but cannot do…the roads have closed…..it rained all afternoon here and the roads are blocked till further notice…relax dinner is almost ready

Jaan in hysteria…: mujhe dinner nahi chahiye…mujhe ghar jana hai…..almost about to cry…aur thumare saath nahi rhena yaha…akele…meh aur saab ladkiyon jaisi nahi hu…meh ghar se door rahugi toh bhai chinta karege…aur again unko pata chala meh ek ladke ke saath hu toh najane kya hoga

Raj: would u relax a bit mad now…even if I wanted I cannot take u home…raasta band hai….i have called at home and told them I cant make it today …I suggest u do to……giving the phone to her

Jaanvi not knowing what to do dialed Aanya's number….telling her everything….

Aanya: aayi ..hyii lover boy kaun hai…

Jaan: meh serious hu yaar agar bhaia ko pata chala toh tum janti ho na

Aanya: don't worry I will call and tell him u are with me and insist u are sleeping since u were up all night and that's why u didn't call him…and kaal tum sidha yaya aajana toh saath ghar jayege…..

Jaan: thanks yaar…..

Aanya: not to worry….waise yeh lover boy hai kaun

Jaan: looking at Raj who was busy listening to her conversation……giving him a look of mind ur own business…..: woh aakash ka bhai hai…..

Aanya: what?? Well have fun with lover boy and I want details…al the details when u come back….

Jaan: oh shut up..and she hung up…..

Obviously Raj heard everything …he was enjoying himself….

Jaan making way to the kitchen…opened the fridge and saw ice-cream…without saying anything…she took it out…looking for a bowl which Raj handed to her…amused at the way she was reacting ….neither saying anything to each other…..Jaan scooped icecream and left everything on the counter…..Raj just smiled putting everything back in place…and continued with cooking….he loved cooking…..

Jaan went ahead into the living room and started to look for the remote

Jaan: remote kaha hai?? shouting

Raj: more amused….tv ke upar…..

Jaan: oh…I knew that she shouted….

RAj laughing…:yeah sure ….

Jaan eating her icecream flipped the channel….until she came up with kuch kuch hota hai playing …..eating and watching the movie….

Half and hour later she was at the scene where anjali goes ma ma …Jaanvi crying like a baby….Raj came up to her with box of tissues and handed her some…looking at her….just thinking…kya ladki hai…..film pe rorahi hai…..this girl took his breath away….shayad she is only mean to me and nice to the rest of the world…he knew she was mad to be stuck with him…she hadn't talked to him last hour or so….but he was going to prove to her he was not some scum bag she thought he was…as long as she doesnt drive him to the edge....Raj had a temper and when he got mad there was no stopping him for anything....

Raj: dinner is ready??? I know u are hungry???

Jaan: wiping her tears and making her way to the dining where Raj had set the table…beautifully done with a single red rose in the middle and food spread out…he had made chicken stir fry….lamb briyani….fried rice and alu paratha…..yummm Jaan thought….hmm chalo kuch toh janta hai…..food look delicious…..

They ate silently …..not saying anything…Raj all the time looking and her waiting for her comment…..fishing the food and drinking the lemonade he made….

Jaan: that was delicious…where did u learn to cook like that….

Raj satisfied with the comment and happy: when u live alone u learn everything…

Jaan: alone..but u have a brother …and a dadi…

Raj surprised she noticed….: I was in harvard for 4 years and living alone in my apt…thts where I learned everything…..

Jaan: oh…..she was about to say bhaia went to Harvard when his cell rang…

Raj excused himself to go take the call while Jaan cleaned the kitchen….

Half an hour later irrated Raj came out to see the kitchen spik and span and Jaan infront with two cups of hot chocolate on the coffee table infront….so she cleans too….hmmmm…aaprently knows how to cook too….since she made hot chocolate…which tasted really good by the way….

Jaan: u are welcome..tumne cooking ki toh maine cleaning kardi….without Raj saying anything she thanked him and took his thank you too….

Kya ladki hai Raj thought….he saw she was watching kuch kuch again..they were at Kajol and salmans wedding

The phone call was from one of his ex she wanted to stop by his farmhouse as she was in Panvel…it took him half an hour to say no and not to come….

The door bell rang…Raj answered to find Sophia there….

Raj: I thought I told you I was busy and not to come….Jaan peeping in with her head from the sofa saw this pretty thing looking all gorgeous…some model she thought from the magazine….

Raj: leave at once

Taking her coat off Sophia walked in….to find Jaan sitting on the sofa…compared to her Jaan looked so plain and simple……

Sophia: oh…now I know why u didn't want me to come..u have company….looks like a child Raj didn't know ur choice was down to young girls now…unmeh hum jaisi baath kaha

Jaan was disgusted …chee Raj aisa bhi hai…ewww meh yaha kaise phas gai…

Jaan: hi im jaanvi…u must be Parvati…Raj ki bhen

Sohphia's face turned pale….: what Par what….im Sophia and im everything but his sister honey….

Jaan: oh im sorry….my mistake….since u mentioned I was so young I figured u were his older sister….take that woman…with that she put the volume loud for the tv and continued to watch her movie..before turning she gave Raj a disgusting show of face…

Raj: tum yaha kaise

Sohphia: car se aur kis se…

Jaan heard this…what car se par road toh block hai…or did RAj lie thinking he could get his way…oh no he just didn't do that

Raj after many talks made her leave…Sohphia on her way out: enjoy girl…his worth every minute…,.phew was Raj glad when she left…..

Jaan: tumne toh kaha tha raasta band hai

Raj; thi magar lagta hai khul gayi hai

Jaan: you lier cheat…how cheap….mujhe yaha rhakne ke liye aur koi waja nahi mili thi….i cant even go home now…its so late and bhaia would question me…u are the most cheap disgusting…

Before she could finish…raj came forward and kissed her…: after what seemed like hours…(it was merely 5minutes) would u just shut up….mujhe nahi

Slap ….Jaanvi gave him a big slap right across his left cheek…: how dare you thumari himat kaise hui….what do u think I am….meh un ladkiyon jaisi nahi hu who throw themselves at you …every chance they get…how dare you…..now I know why u got me here …but listen Mr Rajvir Khaana it aint happening……walking to the room she slept in

Raj following her grabbed her and turning her around…he kissed her…she tried to fight but no effect…Raj's kisses were wild and demanding…thrusting deeper and deeper…..he was so mad...he didnt have any intention like that .....he was so furious with her....and that slap...nobody slaps Rajvir Khanna around missy....Raj kissed the crap out of her…..His hands raking all over her body….Jaanvi tried to stop him but he continued not listening….Raj had dreamed of having her ever since he had laid his eyes on her…but he couldn't …and now that he was there he couldn't stop…..her buttons loose…His hands were all over her….Jaanvi couldn't explain what was happening …she tried very very hard to stop what was happening to her…the way she was feeling …the emotions he was creating in her ….making her whole body tremble ….each and every effort failing miserable….when Raj got her on the bed she didn't realise ….taken away by what he was doing……….he was the master of this art and he was wanting her..he had to have her…he was out of control..his touch his kiss his body language ne Jaanvi ko majboor kardi and she lost all the control she had within herself……she couldn't stop him or herself….
😳

hope u guys like that!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
😳 raania....thats it i am blushing nonstop.....ooooooommgggggggu u rite sooo guuuuud.......i really like this rajvir guy 😳 plz plz cont soooon

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just....awesome 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
i like him to. so please make him control himself and tell her if he wanted her he could have done it. something like that and leave the room.

i think that will make him best person.

pooja
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
bhai to pate chala to mar pite ge.....waiting for jais reaction when he finds out.....

No jai and sim scenes....i hope you some in the next one

awesome update
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46

Just caught up Raania.........and wow hun - absaloutely amazing parts!!👏

And Raj sounds so sweet, but Haila😳..........the bache are getting up to no good!😉😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
This is too good yaar! 👏
Please cont. soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
WOW! di..

fantastic!!

jaanvi ur 2 cute with eating ice cream and watching kkhh!

👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
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TOO good yaar!!! i luved ur fanfic!!! i have nothing to say except keep writing ur fanfic!! good luck!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
finally caught up with my rdng, gr8888 parts, some are 😳 keep writing babe

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