FF Jai jr updated pt14 pg19 14jan NB pg1 - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww hun that was good.

hahah i am gonna pm you know with a looooooooooong comment. lol.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 7

The time was 4:20 and Jai was tired, tired of staring at Mrs Hussien's wrinkled old face,tired from school and tired from all the mischief he and his friend Rohan had got up to today, he chuckled to himself, putting tanning lotion in Miss Shukla's moisturiser had been his genius idea, he had noticed one day that before class she alway's rubbed the cream on her face but today she was to get a nasty shock,as the day wore on her face had become darker and browner until diring lunchtime while his whole class was in the canteen they all heard a scream coming from the staff lounge room and then huge laughter from the other staff,Miss Shukla ran out of the staff room and locked her self in the ladie's.There was a huge round of applause in the canteen and Jai stood up on his chair and took a bow,blowing kisses with his hand's to his adoring fellow pupil's,Mrs Hussien watching from the door bellowed,

"Jai Dixit,in my office after school please."

These word's had no effect in dampening Jai's mood, he simply carried on his day as if nothing had happened at all,but as he sat in Mrs Hussein office waiting for his mum,he felt slightly dissapointed because his mum was late again.

"Sorry,sorry,i know i'm late but kaam bhut tha."

Bani slid ino the rickety old chair next to were Jai was sitting and tucked in her chair and crossed her hand's on the table as if at school herself.

Mrs Hussien smiled and said,

"Welcome Mr Rahul Malhotra,what can i do for you..."

Jai turned around,jumped off his chair ran up to Rahul and playfully pertened to punch Rahul in the rib's.

"How you doing partner",he said,

Rahul with pretend grief said,

"I was okay until you brutally punched me,"

"oww,"

"first maa aur ab beta,tum dono nai sirf mujhai maara hai aaj."

Mrs Hussien coughed to bring them back to attension and recited today's event's, Bani again embrassed for her son's behaviour,apologised and promised to give Jai another stren talking too,Rahul listened silently but couldn't control himself any longer,he burst out laughing,and soon had tear's running down his face.Jai put his hand up and Rahul high fived it,they both carried on chuckling away while Bani turned to Mrs Hussein and said,

"You see what i have to put up with,it's like this everytime,yeh dono bus meeri nai sun tai"

"What do you think i should do."

Mrs Hussien looked at all three of them and said,

"The only way to teach them two any idea of any responsibility is if Mr Malhotra became Jai's legal guardian,he would then have to become a some what decent role model and stop encouraging Jai."

"Miss Bani Dixit it's simple why don't you marry Mr Malhotra."

The room had become silent,Mrs Hussien loked at mother and son staring at each other,Mr Malhotra's face had turned white and he kept running his hand's through his hair.

"Well that seem's like an idea",said Rahul nervously laughing.

Bani her eye's full of concern for her son was about to say something when jai lept off his chair and bolted out the room.Bani's heart was coming out of her chest,she turned around and her face lined with anger.

"I only asked your proffesional opinion on his behaviour Mr Hussien, tumaara koy huq nai baanta meri neeche zindagi mein dakill ho na"

"Miss Dixit,your son needs a father figure,and you have a rather willing participantin Mr......."

"How dare you presume such thing's"

Rahul tired of being just a bystander walked up to Mrs Hussien's desk and spat the word's out,

"Me and Bani share a healthy working relationship and out side of work a good friendship".

Mrs Hussien took of her glasse's and cleaned with her hanky hoping to get a clearer view on this strange situation.

Bani scrambled out of her chair and was about to leave the room, she had just reached the door when she turned around and said.

"Jo dikta hai,sach mein nai hota,me and Rahul are good friend's,and he is the most wonderful role model for my son, i will see you at the ceremony tomorrow Mrs Hussein."

And with that Bani left, Rahul turned around and was about to leave when Miss Hussein gentle put her hand on his shoulder and said,

"The only reason i said anything was because Jai had written an essay called Rahul Malhotra my super hero, it won him the first prize in the competion."

Rahul turned around and sighed,

"I may be his super hero,his friend,role model,but Bani has alway's taught him to love and respect his own father, i can never compare to the great Jai Walia......

TO BE CONTINUED.......

Hey guy's just a preview to let you guy's know that our very dashing hero is gonna make his entrance in the next part so i've decide to have an extra long chapter bear with me all this typing is killing my hand's😆 ,so again as normal please send me your message's and encoragement and forgive my spelling specially in hindi.

THANK'S





Edited by shaz81 - 19 years ago
SRKfever thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
awesom update 👏
please do continue soon
thanx
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
so when will our papa bear jai walia coem into action i am waiting for him
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
yeh hunn,.. when does our sexii jai walia make his presence felt?? looking
extremely forward to it..!

plz do continue!!

👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
Hey guy's i fell asleep 😳 while updating part seven so please re read and tell me what you think!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
I was so excited to see the update, I can't wait Mr.walia's entarance..

Please post soon..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
very nice parts. so now jai is gonna enter that will be interesting whether he is going to be chief guest of function or something?
ninaatwal thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
Very nice.Cannot wait for Mr walia to make appearance.
Please write soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
great part
but poor rahul
i feel bad for him
pls cont soon
i can't wait for the great jai walia's entry

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