FF Jai jr updated pt14 pg19 14jan NB pg1

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INDEX

PART I - PAGE ONE, PART 2-PAGE ONE ,PART 3-PAGE 4, PART4-PAGE 5, PART5-PAGE6, PART6-PAGE7, PART7-PAGE8,PART8-PAGE11,PART9-PAGE12,PART10-PAGE13,PART11-P AGE14,PART13-PAGE17,PART14-PAGE19

Background information

Bani has divorced Mr Walia and left the country without his knowledge.

But seven year's later.......

A cool breeze is coming through the window,but their are sweatbead's falling down Bani's forehead,as she collapses onto the chair she barely manage's to hold on to the phone,she can still hear the other person's voice on the other end of the line,

"Hello Madam, are you still their,Madam tum sun rahee ho".

This was the last thing she needed another phone call from Jai her seven year old son's principal,she gathered herself up and wiped her forehead onto her crisp white sleeve.

"Yes, i can hear you,what is the matter principalji, Jai teek to hai"

The principal coughed when Bani mentioned Jai's name and Bani cringed as she prepared her self for what Jai's principal was about to say.......

PART 2

Bani closed he eye's and remembered the last time she had met Mrs Hussien in her office no less, she could still remember the cold look Mrs Hussian gave her and her voice still thundered in her ear's,

"Miss Dixit, aap ko apna beta ko samjana paarega,he simply cannot carry on like this,this kind of behaviour just won't be tolerated,is school mein yeh pehlibaar hua hai ke ek student ne ek aur student ko thaapaar maara hai"

Bani wanted the ground to swallow her up, she dug her finger nail's hard in to her chair to stop the tear's forming in her eye's.

After apologising to the principal and the other child's parent's,Bani was getting to leave when Mrs Hussien stressed that she knew how difficult it was to be a working single parent.

Bani felt a tear roll down her cheek as she left the office, she turned to look at Mrs Hussian now busy on her computer and tapping away on her keyboard,if only , thought Bani anyone really understood.

After leaving the principal's office Bani had immediatley taken her 7 year old son home and in a calm and rational manner asked what had really happened.

"Jai,sach,sach,ko mujshe,kya hua"

He'd thrown his bag and book's on to the coffe table and was now taking his tie off and throwing it on the sofa when he said.

"meri class mein sanjay ne kaha ke mere papa mujhse pyar nai kartai,isi liye mere paas nai rehtai,to mein nai usko thaapaar maara"

And if wanting his mother to justify what he did he said

"mein nai teek kiya, hai na mamma."

Bani could feel the blood draining from her body and felt a tightening in her throat, her feet glued to the spot were she was standing,she tried not to shout but the word's came tumbling out.

"Yeh Sanjay ne tumko ek jhooth bhol diya aur tum nai kaisa saach maan liya, you papa loved you more than me and proberly all way's will"



TO BE CONTINUED.......

Hello guy's i was unwell last night as well so spent till 2am writing this hope you like it and PLEASE, PLEASE,leave you comment's and again please don't mind my naff spelling!!!!!!!!!

shaz81

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goldie_ever thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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phir kya huwa????
did the little guy hit someone oh no
some1 madee fun of him or more so his dad????
just babbling 😳
lovely part
can't wait to read more
pls cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was great start.hope you feel better. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yea plx continue soon and why was she sweating and why did the pricipal jet shocked to hear Jai's name?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thank's guy's i have all ready writtern the next part will post tomorrow sometime between going to doctor's and visiting chemist 😆 😆, wish me luck at doctor's 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok... very interesting beginning.. looking forward to the next part!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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do continuee soonn ...sweeeti..!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank's 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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GREAT WORK!!! 👏
but the father and son share the same n ame??? 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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interisting FF continue soon and how r u feeling now ?? and pls make next part a biggger one ok good going keep it up
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