Short FF Concluding part pg.77 COMPLETE!! - Page 9

Originally posted by: ziddi

Nice preview hun
I wonder what did bani see that shocked her, a room for a baby 😕 that jai made

Lol i don't know. i am sure you can guess it if you read the last part of Bani. Her surroundings and everything, i left clues in that part. may be you can find them!!!!!

WOW Shina!!!

tht was an amazing hun.......👏👏👏

n just to answer ur question...........i trully luv ur FF😛.....so i definitely don't want u 2 finish it.......😳😳

n i like the way ur hading this story.......n watz kool bout it is😃.....the fact u sticked 2 only 1 prob/misunderstanding b/w jb.........n ur actually solving it👏👏......itz just sumthing i needed to get my mind out of KS today😳😛......where in KS there is not 1 but so many misunderstanding b/w jb😭.......

so Thanks 4 dis FF hun🤗

once again u really luved ur FF.......👏

hmmmmmmm🤔.....i wonder who it was tht called bani😉....i have a feeling mayb it was jai or tarun who called bani......2 c if she really cared bout jai😳......n then mayb they will make her confess😉😃.........oh!! i HOPE...i HOPE!!😳😳

wow!!! i m excited already😛😆.......can't wait to read wat will happen next?........or who actually called?......oh! yea n wat jigz n ranveer's plan is? n y ranveer left in a hurry?.........lol😆😆.....so many questions.......continue soon hun!!😳

lotz of luv,❤️

Lisa

Originally posted by: KHJL

WOW Shina!!!

tht was an amazing hun.......👏👏👏

n just to answer ur question...........i trully luv ur FF😛.....so i definitely don't want u 2 finish it.......😳😳

n i like the way ur hading this story.......n watz kool bout it is😃.....the fact u sticked 2 only 1 prob/misunderstanding b/w jb.........n ur actually solving it👏👏......itz just sumthing i needed to get my mind out of KS today😳😛......where in KS there is not 1 but so many misunderstanding b/w jb😭.......

so Thanks 4 dis FF hun🤗

once again u really luved ur FF.......👏

hmmmmmmm🤔.....i wonder who it was tht called bani😉....i have a feeling mayb it was jai or tarun who called bani......2 c if she really cared bout jai😳......n then mayb they will make her confess😉😃.........oh!! i HOPE...i HOPE!!😳😳

wow!!! i m excited already😛😆.......can't wait to read wat will happen next?........or who actually called?......oh! yea n wat jigz n ranveer's plan is? n y ranveer left in a hurry?.........lol😆😆.....so many questions.......continue soon hun!!😳

lotz of luv,❤️

Lisa

Thanks lisa.

Wow thatz a lot of questions there.

and you know whatz interesting, your questions will answered in that order. Yep i have already written the next parts but just have to make slight changes since you guyz want me to continue.

Unlike KS, my Jai won't take anything from anyone.

Thanks again for leaving a wonderful comment.

btw.....nice preview hun👏.....n very protective....😉

honestly it left me guessing n now u got me more curious😳😛.........can't wait!!......can't wait........hurry hun........the suspense is killin' me😳😳😆

later,

LiSa

Oh man i finally caught up!

This is getting really good!!!!

Nice thing with the previews!!!! 😉 ..........

Keep that up!!!!...

BUt dont do them suspense like me.. or else people will attack you w/ a belan!!! 😆




Please cont soon!!!

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

Oh man i finally caught up!

This is getting really good!!!!

Nice thing with the previews!!!! 😉 ..........

Keep that up!!!!...

BUt dont do them suspense like me.. or else people will attack you w/ a belan!!! 😆




Please cont soon!!!

thanks Guli!!!!

Well my ff, is nothing compared to yours but i am trying.

Lol belans!!!!! haven't gotten any yet, will see what happens.

wooww...grr88 previeww..!!
wonderfull
thnksxxx
😊 😊

Sorry for the delay you guys. My Classes started today, so updates would be late. i hope you enjoy this part and as usual any suggestions are welcome.

Part 6

What she sees in front of her is someone holding Mr.Walia at gun point. The person's face is not shown, since Bani is behind she can't see anything, all she sees is Jai.

Right when she is about to walk towards them, Jai sees her and gestures her to stop in her track without the person noticing it. Unable to think properly she just stands there, obeying his command.

Meanwhile at the walia mansion, Aditya, sahil, and rano are planning to reunite Jai-Bani.

Sahil: How about we send them to our farmhouse?
Rano: actually thatz not a bad idea but how are we going to do it?
Aditya: they are never going to go there on their own, and if they know that they have to be alone they will refuse.

Rano: How about all of us decide to go there?
Sahil: but how is that going to help mamaji and mamiji getting closer?
Rano: Sahil tum bhi na, We will tell them all of us are going and send them in one car, and then call them later to tell them that we are stuck, and we can't make it.
Sahil: But when they find out we are not coming won't they come back?
Aditya: ya, thatz a good point.

Just then Masi walks in and asks them what is going on. They decide to tell masi everything.


Aditya: Masi we were thinking that we should send Jai and Bani together to the farmhouse so that they can solve their differences. Since we know that both love each other but for some reason can't confess it.

Masi: That's a good idea. But what is the problem?

First both sahil and rano are confused since they thought that masi is mad at Bani, but for now they just ignore it and tell her their plan, and ask her to convince Bani to somehow go with Jai.

Masi: Arre, no problem, I will make sure Bani goes with Jai okay and stay there?

All of them are happy, and are just waiting for them to come home. So that they could put the plan in action.

Okay this part is a little clichd, making it sound like an Indian movie, where the shooter instead of just coming to point keeps on blabbing about stupid things.

Ranveer is shown driving like a maniac and is very tensed. It seems like his plan is backfiring. He just wants to ensure everything is going as planned otherwise he will lose everything!!!!

Shooter: Mr.walia I have waited a long time for this moment. I thought I had killed you that night when you went looking for your wife, I don't know how were saved but today I promise you that won't be the case.

Jai: But, why do you want to shoot me?

Shooter: You don't know why? Let me tell you why, because of what you did 7 years ago, my life changed completely, and thanks to you I can't even live freely, I don't have what I used to have then, you ruined my life. And now after killing you I'll be at peace.

Please leave your comments, and let me know if you want me to improvise.

awww...hunni plzz..continuee soon..
you chuuse all these endingss which leave us longing for more and more !!!
babezz...do continuee soon..t
hnksx mwah
👏 👏 👏

oooooohh. plz do continue.. very good!

👏