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Posted: 19 years ago

Hey guys thanks for the wondeful comments and thank you to all my silent readers too. i have one request to all of you who are reading this, if you would post your comments on today's update i would be grateful, since i am not good with romantic parts i would really appreciate all the comments, negative comments are also welcome. i k now i didn't do a great job so would just like to know. Thank you guys. i won't bore you anymore.

Part 13:

As they reached the Airport, Jai took Bani to their private jet. From the outside it looked like a normal jet, but when they stepped inside, Bani was just mesmerized by its beauty. Inside it was just like a palace with everything in it. She wondered if they really made these(haha yeah they do, now-a-days the private jets are so amazing that I want one of those, no more crappy plane seats). The jet was just like a beautiful apartment. As soon as they entered they saw a nice kitchen with the cabinets made of rare wood. The kitchen had everything in it, everything seemed handpicked and were unique pieces. As they proceeded they entered the living room space, it had a couch and a loveseat, handpicked and were very unique with the center table made of glass but supported by the best wood. And then what Bani saw next first she was surprised and then later on started blushing like mad.

She saw a nice queen bed, with antique designs rendered in pine veneers and solids, displayed with antiqued brass hardware and features a rich umber finish. The Bed was decorated with pink drapery all around, and there were flower petals on the bed in a heart shaped.

Jai was too shocked with this he moved towards the bed and found a note on it, he showed it to bani and both read it. It was from Ranveer.

Dear Mamaji and Mamiji,

I wanted to make your honeymoon really special, I know I have caused a lot of problems in your relationship and this is just my way of making up for it. And this is just the beginning of what awaits you. ;)

Ranveer

P.S. Mamiji I know you have been dying for this, hope you liked the bed. And I am sure you are going to enjoy it!!!!!

Reading the note made Bani's cheeks turn deep red, and Jai was grinning like crazy. In an instant he reached his phone to thank Ranveer for this amazing gesture.

Jai

: Hello, Ranveer thank you so much for decorating the jet.

Ranveer

: No problem Mamaji, I was just trying to make your honeymoon special.

Jai

: Ranveer you didn't have to do anything special, because of you we are together, we couldn't ask for anything more.

Ranveer

: Thanks mamaji, can I talk to Bani mami?

Jai

: haan ek minute, then turning to Bani, bani ranveer wants to talk to you.

Bani

: Hello Ranveer (btw she is on speaker so jai can hear the convo too, I didn't want him to be out of the loop lol)

Ranveer

: so mamiji, how did you like my arrangements?

Bani(blushing)

: They are good, thanks.

Ranveer

: okay mamiji, I know you are dying to try the bed so I am going to let you go, and just have fun!!!!!! And I am sure mamaji will agree with me here.

Both Jai and Ranveer start laughing and bani is stunned!!!!

Jai

: Thank you Ranveer, we will talk to you later.

Ranveer

: Have fun, and mamiji please take care of yourself and the child if you know what I mean. Bye mamaji!!!!

With that said he hangs up the phone.

Jai

: so Bani, do you want to try the bed??? Gives her a devilish grin.

Bani blushes and then hits him playfully. And changing the topic(sorry guys nothing happening yet after all they are on the plane, they need privacy na, what if someone walks in on them, that would be so not good lol so basically I am just delaying it because I have no idea what to write)

Bani

: Mr.Walia, I am hungry!!!

Jai

: Bani even I am hungry but you know for what. And then winks at her.

Bani

: Mr.Walia please I am really hungry can we have some food, then we will think about you.

Jai

: ok teekh hai, I'll take you up on that.

He buzzes to call the air hostess and asks her to get some food and some juice for both of them. She comes back with lots of healthy but tasty food for them and tells them to just buzz her whenever needed and leaves. Jai and Bani finish eating and just spend the rest of the plane ride talking with a little kiss here and there but nothing major.

They finally arrive to the private island. The scenery there was just so beautiful that no one could ever think of. Agree some of the things were created artificially but it was just too beautiful to notice. You could experience all the four seasons in that one place any time any day. One side of the island was filled with snow covered mountains(which were man made but looked so real), when they looked straight ahead there was greenery all over, made everything around look so beautiful since there was a garden filled with different flowers. Since it was an island there was a beautiful beach just around the corner. There was also a small area where it was raining incase anyone wanted to enjoy a little rain. The island was just so perfect that no one would ever want to leave it. (Okay so guys I just made up this place, I don't know if that's even possible, but I just couldn't decide where to take them so created the place from my imagination)

Jai had been there a couple of times so he was used to it, but Bani was just overwhelmed, she never thought that she would visit such a wonderful place with the most handsome guy. She just couldn't believe her luck.

Bani

: Mr.Walia this is such a beautiful place, thanks for bringing me here.

Jai

: I am glad you liked it, aur waise bhi tumhare yahan aane se iski khoobsurati dughni hogayi hai. (anyways since you are here, this place looks twice as much beautiful as it was before).

Bani didn't say anything but was just overwhelmed. They made their way to the house which was out of this world. No one in the world could have had a better place than this (Bani thought). Even though it was a mansion, it was just so simple and so beautiful, and when looked at from the frontal view you could see the snowy mountains on one side, the rain on the other, you could also look a the beach, and not to mention the rose garden. It was just so gorgeous. (once again guys I am making this up as I go along). The inside was just as beautiful as the outside, filled with antique furniture yet so simple. Everything was just so exquisite that it was too good to be true. She thought that the Walia mansion was something but after looking at this house there couldn't have been a better place.

They made their way to the bedroom and once again were just taken aback with the decorations. The room had a glass ceiling where you could see the stars at night, it had a big huge window overlooking the ocean, and some furniture(which looked like they were one of a kind pieces since they were just so good), but what had taken aback both Jai and bani was the way the room was decorated. It was filled with candles, and the floor was completely draped with rose petals and there was a way made out straight to the bed. The bed was decorated with white and pink curtains with pink roses around the curtains, and the bed was also filled with roses in the shape of a heart. Bani spots a note saying….

"To the most breathtaking woman I have ever known, Bani you make me complete in every way, and I want to spend the rest of my life with you, and in the hope that I could fill your life with nothing but happiness"

Jai Walia

(hahah yeah jai made all these plans before leaving, and made sure everything was ready before they arrived I am telling you he is so smart)

Bani didn't have any words to describe her feelings so she just ran up to him and hugged him. Jai couldn't take it any longer so he gave her a deep passionate kiss, she returned the kiss with the same passion. After a long time they broke away and then he started kissing her shoulders, and then the back while undoing her dori, he started kissing her all over making her shiver but then she started matching his passion, kissed his chest while undoing his buttons. Both of them were just letting their emotions flow. Jai again started kissing her all over this time undressing her piece by piece while giving a kiss, his hands were all over bani creating some passionate emotions inside her. She started caressing his hair and then holding him by the neck gave him a deep passionate kiss. Finally Jai carried her to the bed and gave her some love bites in between his kisses. And then the scene slowly faded away. (I really hope this was romantic enough, I know its not that great but couldn't do anything better sorry if I had disappointed you guys).

Meanwhile at the Walia house they receive the news that the plane Jai and Bani were supposed to be in crashed. (remember no one besides ranveer knows where they are). Everyone is at a loss of words, they can not believe the news. Masi and Dadi started crying, the rest of them were shocked, rano started sobbing like crazy while sahil comforted her(guys ranveer is not home he is supposed to be back today from his Sydney trip). When Ranveer came in he saw that the whole Walia Mansion was gloomy. He asked Rashi what was going on and she narrated the entire story. Ranveer then told the entire family what has really been going on and how Jigyasa and Roshini did all this, and how he had to come up with this plan. All of them were just shell shocked and couldn't believe what Jai and Bani had been through all this time. But at the end they were happy that finally both of them were together. (I know this part seems out of place but there had to be a reason for them to know the truth, because ranveer was not just going to tell them, neither would Jai and Bani so had to come up with this sorry if I bored you).

When will Bani find out the real truth about PR Raaz? And what is the deal with Anjali? Who is her brother? And will there be something between Anjali and Tarun? How would all the happenings affect Ranveer and Rashi's relationship? And what happened to Pia and Pushkar?

To find out keep reading my fanfic!!!!!! And hopefully there will be no more torture only 4 more parts you guys. Then all of you are saved from the torture of reading my fanfic!!!!!!

I really tried to make it as romantic as possible but sorry if I disappointed you.

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Posted: 19 years ago
awww..thtt was soo cutee..and trstt me it wasnta troture it was agrr88 part...!! 😉 😉 😉 u knw wht i mean...!!! loollzz.. 😳 😳
well all deze quetionss at the end...jst make me feel more anticpated to read more and more....
but do continuee soonn...
thnksxxxxxxxx..
wonderful..!! part...
👏
salmansgirl thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
shina shina shina....kya kahoon? just amazing. awesome awesome job!

i absolutely loved it. i can't wait to read the next part.

now what's up with ending it afer 5 parts yaar? u can't do that. that would the end of an era for me lol!

yeah, who is anjali? is jai her brother? yeah...maybe she's his lost long sister that jigs kicked out when she realized she wouldn't be the only one to get all of jai's money and property lol!

u did an awesome job with the romance, far better than what i could/would've done.

update soon. i'm gonna wait for ur update as usual!

love.
anam
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Posted: 19 years ago
Haila jaanu!!!!

Dude that was soooooooo awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


U know what... forget my belan!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Its gone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: salmansgirl

shina shina shina....kya kahoon? just amazing. awesome awesome job!

i absolutely loved it. i can't wait to read the next part.

now what's up with ending it afer 5 parts yaar? u can't do that. that would the end of an era for me lol!

yeah, who is anjali? is jai her brother? yeah...maybe she's his lost long sister that jigs kicked out when she realized she wouldn't be the only one to get all of jai's money and property lol!

u did an awesome job with the romance, far better than what i could/would've done.

update soon. i'm gonna wait for ur update as usual!

love.
anam

aww anam thanks. i love reading your comments. they mean a lot.

hahaha anjali is still a very mysterious character. keeping guessing on who her bro is.

yaar the next update will take some time. i have homework and classes start tomorrow.

yaar i am sure when you write about romance itz going to be off the hook. can't wait to read yours.

thanks,

lonely14

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

Haila jaanu!!!!

Dude that was soooooooo awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


U know what... forget my belan!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Its gone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

YAY!!!!! the belan is gone!!!!!!!!

i am glad you liked it. i was just going crazy thinking that i would disappoint you guys. especially by creating crazy places. hahah i dont' even know if itz possible to create such a place like that. i just wanted the surroundings to be beautiful but it turned out crazy!!!.

but i am glad the belan is gone.

i can end the fanfic in peace now. lol.

thanks hun

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Posted: 19 years ago
WOW lonely14 that was sooooo wonderful sooo romantic really love reading it 👏 absolutly fabulous 👏 thanks so much...plzzzzzz continue soon i will be waiting for ut next part...
thanks once agen 👏 👏 👏

lots of love

cutelady 🤗
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Posted: 19 years ago
I simply loved this part of the fanfic 😃 btw,i couldn't stop laughing,when i read the part where jai n bani,made out 😆 very nicely put 👏 👏 👏 Plz continue soon!Once again a marvelous job 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!👏

wow!! hun👏.....sry but u got 2 give me couple of min....2 gather my self up!!!!😳....so i cud actually speak........i m drooling hun......yes....drooling over ur fanfic😳.....tht was....MIND-BLOWING!!!!👏.......way beyond words😃...i just have to give u a big cuddley hug..ryt now hun 4 such an awesome part🤗 ..superb, fantastic, fabulous, excellent👏....(n all word amazing words out there)😉.....hun this time u have really left me speechless...😳😳

both parts were smashing hun👍🏼......first ranveer...our sexy sanyasiji😉.....solves the case....yipeeeee😆........roshni n jigz in jail👏.......now can this get ne better......really watz a better way 2 enjoy a romantic scene?😳....knowing tht the 2 whitches r in jail😉😆........lol😆

n then of course the romantic part😳..........WOW!!!! hun.....who ever said tht u r not good @ romantic scene......was way off.....cuz not only r u good😛....but u r outstanding👏...u left me grinning😃.....n blushing😳 through out the whole scene......i didn't even blink once....(well mayb once or twice....😉😆😆).....but really u got me so hooked😳😛😳.......n WOW!!! wat descriptions hun😲👏👏....too good👏.......so much detail😊....the plane, the bed,😉 the floor, the mantion, the place, the mountains...the ceiling, the furnitures, the garden.............WOW!! WOW!! WOW!!!👏 (c hun told u..... u left me speechless...can't seem 2 say ne thing but WOW!!😳)........itz as if i cud c the whole thing rite infront f my eyes👏👏👏.......n wat a place?.......forget mansion hun......it was a paradise/heaven... i tell you!!!😳😳😳.......a dream world......

watz a romantic scene..then the perfect mood n setting....ryt?😉😳😆.....btw which u have captured so well w/ ur brilliant use of words......once again hun.....i don't have enough words to describe it.........👏

n now 4 the most awaited scene b/w jb😉......hehe yup😛.........the romantic scene😳........awwwwwwww......it was so adorable......haila!!!!!.... **BLUSHES** **BLUSHES** **BLUSHES**😳......really hun....all i did was grin😃 n blush like nething until the scene faded away😳😳......LOL😆😆😆......once again beyond words....... 👏

n then the shocker😲!!!👏.....bout how the plane tht jb was in crashed!!.......n there too we got ur lil' touch of twist😉.... where our sexy sanyashi ji.....cums to the rescue😆..n tell them the truth😊........WOW!!! wat a way to tie the lose ends hun.......simply wicked!!👏

n last but not least.........who is this anjali hun?......the suspense is killing me😛......n w/ tht i m desperately waiting for the tarun-anjali chemistry😉.........hehe😳😆.

continue soon dear!!!😊........waiting patiently 4 ur next part.......(c hun....i m a good gurl😉....i cud wait!!!😳......NOT!!!😈😆😆.....hurry hurry hurry.....jaanu.........CAN'T WAIT 2 read the next part😆.........i just luv ur FF❤️)

over all i give ur FF.....a 110 out of 10......n ⭐️ stars....👏

luv u tonzzz n tonzzzz🤗🤗

- *LiSa* -

PS: sry😒 4 the delay in replying hun.....as i had to do my HW in b/w....cuz i have classes tomorrow.......trully sorry😭.....hope u rn't mad.......

Edited by KHJL - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: divya74

I simply loved this part of the fanfic 😃 btw,i couldn't stop laughing,when i read the part where jai n bani,made out 😆 very nicely put 👏 👏 👏 Plz continue soon!Once again a marvelous job 👏

aww hun!!! thanks for reading it!!!!! i really tried.

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