Short FF Concluding part pg.77 COMPLETE!! - Page 27

Originally posted by: KHJL

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!👏

wow!! hun👏.....sry but u got 2 give me couple of min....2 gather my self up!!!!😳....so i cud actually speak........i m drooling hun......yes....drooling over ur fanfic😳.....tht was....MIND-BLOWING!!!!👏.......way beyond words😃...i just have to give u a big cuddley hug..ryt now hun 4 such an awesome part🤗 ..superb, fantastic, fabulous, excellent👏....(n all word amazing words out there)😉.....hun this time u have really left me speechless...😳😳

both parts were smashing hun👍🏼......first ranveer...our sexy sanyasiji😉.....solves the case....yipeeeee😆........roshni n jigz in jail👏.......now can this get ne better......really watz a better way 2 enjoy a romantic scene?😳....knowing tht the 2 whitches r in jail😉😆........lol😆

n then of course the romantic part😳..........WOW!!!! hun.....who ever said tht u r not good @ romantic scene......was way off.....cuz not only r u good😛....but u r outstanding👏...u left me grinning😃.....n blushing😳 through out the whole scene......i didn't even blink once....(well mayb once or twice....😉😆😆).....but really u got me so hooked😳😛😳.......n WOW!!! wat descriptions hun😲👏👏....too good👏.......so much detail😊....the plane, the bed,😉 the floor, the mantion, the place, the mountains...the ceiling, the furnitures, the garden.............WOW!! WOW!! WOW!!!👏 (c hun told u..... u left me speechless...can't seem 2 say ne thing but WOW!!😳)........itz as if i cud c the whole thing rite infront f my eyes👏👏👏.......n wat a place?.......forget mansion hun......it was a paradise/heaven... i tell you!!!😳😳😳.......a dream world......

watz a romantic scene..then the perfect mood n setting?😉😳😆.....btw which u have captured so well w/ ur brilliant use of words......once again hun.....i don't have enough words to describe it.........👏

n now 4 the most awaited scene b/w jb😉......hehe yup😛.........the romantic scene😳........awwwwwwww......it was so adorable......haila!!!!!.... **BLUSHES** **BLUSHES** **BLUSHES**😳......really hun....all i did was grin😃 n blush like nething until the scene faded away😳😳......LOL😆😆😆......once again beyond words....... 👏

n then the shocker😲!!!👏.....bout how the plane tht jb was in crashed!!.......n there too we got ur lil' touch of twist😉.... where our sexy sanyashi ji.....cums to the rescue😆..n tell them the truth😊........WOW!!! wat a way to tie the lose ends hun.......simply wicked!!👏

n last but not least.........who is this anjali hun?......the suspense is killing me😛......n w/ tht i m desperately waiting for the tarun-anjali chemistry😉.........hehe😳😆.

continue soon dear!!!😊........waiting patiently 4 ur next part.......(c hun....i m a good gurl😉....i cud wait!!!😳......NOT!!!😈😆😆.....hurry hurry hurry.....jaanu.........CAN'T WAIT 2 read the next part😆.........i just luv ur FF❤️)

over all i give ur FF.....a 110 out of 10......n ⭐️ stars....👏

luv u tonzzz n tonzzzz🤗🤗

- *LiSa* -

PS: sry😒 4 the delay in replying hun.....as had to do my HW in b/w....i have classes tomorrow.......trully sorry😭.....hope u rn't mad.......

You really know how to flatter someone. lol i can't believe you are actually drooling over it. thanks for the hug!!!!

Lol i couldn't make our sexy sanyasi evil again!!!!!! he had to come to the rescue. itz my way of making people like him. atleast people who read my fanfic. lol yeah first i thought i would kill both of them but you know decided against, i already had one death in my ff, didnt' want more.

Lol to tell you the truth the detail to the environment was just to make the setting romantic that way i atleast give some romance through the surroundings if not the actual thing. aww thatz so cute you could imagine it infront of your eyes. i didn't think i was that descriptive. hun you make me feel really good.

Well the scene b/w them had to happen.

hahah had to crash the plane otherwise how would the family know the truth??? knowing ranveer, jai, and bani they wouldn't wanna trouble them so there was no other way. and who better than our sexy sanyasi to clear the misunderstanding?

Lol anjali is still a mystery, which will be a very shocking revelation.

hahah you gotta wait patiently since this part took all my brain power. lol. yeah this was the part where i actually had to think. and it took me forever.

after such an amazing comment how can i be mad at you??? and plus i know hw is much more important. i would've been mad if you left your work to come read my fanfic.

Thank you sooooooo much hun!!!! your comments do make my day.

lonely14

sweetie that was superb, marvelous, great, and so on
i'm just speechless...awesome job
no matter how speechless i am i have to give my opinion 😉 ...hope thats okay (sorry in advance)
starting with ranveer... awwwwwwwwww so sweet
and what a guy double teamed with jai 😆 😉
and the note ranveer left u had me 😳 😳
how i wish a island such as that existed... *sigh*
and the scenes between jai and bani...omgosh out of this world 😳
hun can't wait for more
pls cont soon
take care

Originally posted by: lonely14

You really know how to flatter someone. lol i can't believe you are actually drooling over it. thanks for the hug!!!!

Lol i couldn't make our sexy sanyasi evil again!!!!!! he had to come to the rescue. itz my way of making people like him. atleast people who read my fanfic. lol yeah first i thought i would kill both of them but you know decided against, i already had one death in my ff, didnt' want more.

Lol to tell you the truth the detail to the environment was just to make the setting romantic that way i atleast give some romance through the surroundings if not the actual thing. aww thatz so cute you could imagine it infront of your eyes. i didn't think i was that descriptive. hun you make me feel really good.

Well the scene b/w them had to happen.

hahah had to crash the plane otherwise how would the family know the truth??? knowing ranveer, jai, and bani they wouldn't wanna trouble them so there was no other way. and who better than our sexy sanyasi to clear the misunderstanding?

Lol anjali is still a mystery, which will be a very shocking revelation.

hahah you gotta wait patiently since this part took all my brain power. lol. yeah this was the part where i actually had to think. and it took me forever.

after such an amazing comment how can i be mad at you??? and plus i know hw is much more important. i would've been mad if you left your work to come read my fanfic.

Thank you sooooooo much hun!!!! your comments do make my day.

lonely14

hun....u r no where less in the flattering business urself😳....believe me.......i mean first u make me BLUSH w/ ur FF....n now w/ ur wonderful n sweet words😳....u r such a sweetheart.....🤗

yes hun....i was actually drooling.....😆.....i mean afterall tht whole part was brilliant....👏

awwww....all ur hard work n brain power😉.....has really paid off hun.....👏...so proud of ya😃😳

oh! no the mystery behind the anjali n PR raaz.....is going to kill me....but yes hun!.....i will take ur advice n wait patiently 4 the next part....hehe😳😛

yipeeeeee....u aren't mad at me....i m so so so happy...Thank you!! thank you!! thank you!!......🤗🤗🤗

luv,

LiSa

Originally posted by: goldie_ever

sweetie that was superb, marvelous, great, and so on
i'm just speechless...awesome job
no matter how speechless i am i have to give my opinion 😉 ...hope thats okay (sorry in advance)
starting with ranveer... awwwwwwwwww so sweet
and what a guy double teamed with jai 😆 😉
and the note ranveer left u had me 😳 😳
how i wish a island such as that existed... *sigh*
and the scenes between jai and bani...omgosh out of this world 😳
hun can't wait for more
pls cont soon
take care

aww thanks hun!!!!

i am glad you liked ranveer's new avatar.

hahah well see i wanted to include ranveer somehow in this part hence the note.

lol okay so i think i made it obvious that i was really apprehensive about the JB part. but i am so glad to read your comments.

thanks,

lonely14

wonderful part
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Part 14:

This part is dedicated to Lisa aka KHJL for her awesome comments and a keen interested in this fanfic. Lisa hun thank you soooo much for the wonderful comments, even though when my parts are crappy you still make my day leaving amazing comments.

On special request from some of my readers here is another sad attempt of making it romantic.

Sunlight dawns in their room and makes it look so ravishing that it is hard to digest that it is so messy. Slowly Jai opens eyes feeling some burning on his neck and then when he looks at it, he has a cute smile playing on his lips. He looks at Bani who is sleeping so peacefully, even though he wanted to repeat what they did last night, he couldn't he had to have self control thinking about Bani's condition. He didn't want to exhaust bani, which could create problems for her during her pregnancy, so he just kissed her forehead and made his way to the bathroom. After about 20 minutes he comes out looking ready to kill people with just one look. He is wearing something similar to this (Special request from salmansgirl aka anam) Blue denim jeans, with a half sleeved blue buttoned shirt with his chest showing(okay guys my Jai walia has the body similar to the one displayed above!!!! Even though in my opinion no one could ever beat sallu but still my imagination. lol) He sees Bani still sleeping so peacefully so doesn't want to wake her up so just goes out to see if breakfast is ready.

In the meanwhile Bani wakes up, remembering last night events has a cute smile on her lips. She doesn't see Jai next to her so she just gets up and goes and gets ready

Wearing a sexy yellowish golden gown with a plunging neck line, dressed to impress.

She goes downstairs looking around for Jai, and is just stunned by the way he looks. He could not hold her breath just wanted to hug him, but then she saw what he was dying and a cute smiled played on her lips. Jai was inside the kitchen making breakfast for Bani since all the servants were supposed to come after 10 and it was only 8 and he didn't want Bani to be hungry. Jai was almost done with his breakfast and just had to wait for a minute for the eggs to be cooked perfectly. He waited patiently and then put the breakfast in a tray and made his way out of the kitchen towards the dining area. Since Bani was already seated Jai didn't notice her dress and he just gave her a smile and proceeded towards the table with the tray in his hand. Bani was impressed with seeing all her favorite food scrambled eggs, chocolate chip pancakes, vegetarian black bean and chili cheese omelette, and some French toast. She was so overwhelmed with all this that tears started flowing, Jai put down the breakfast and went to quite her but he was just mesmerized with her beauty that he just couldn't help but stare at her forgetting the tears in her eyes. Bani seeing this her cheeks turned deep red and all the tears were vanished.

Jai

: Bani you are looking absolutely stunning, after looking at you I don't feel like eating, but I want to….(trails off and goes and hugs her).

Bani

: Suniye ab aap apni harkatein band kijiye aur khana khaiye, main bhi toh dekhon meri pati ko kitna acha khana banana ata hai. (listen, please stop your acts, and lets eat, I want to see how good of a cook my husband is).

With that said they both eat their food. While eating they are stealing glances at each other, since bani was so hungry she didn't comment on the food yet, and Jai was just waiting patiently till she was done intending to ask her. But what bani did just shocked him. After she was done eating the food, instead of saying any words, she just went up to him and straight out hugged him, followed by a long passionate kiss. After what seemed like ages they both broke apart. They spent the entire day roaming around the Island and just admiring its beauty.

Back in Mumbai. Ranveer was in his room thinking.

Ranveer

: I have troubled Rashi a lot ever since we got married, even though I didn't want to get married to her, I am helpless, she must've had so many expectations from her marriage but she got stuck with me, may be I could talk to her and see if I could give this a chance.

Just then Rashi walks in the room.

Ranveer

: Rashi I want to talk to you.

Rashi

: ji kahiye (yeah tell me)

Ranveer

: Whatever I am going to ask you I need an honest answer okay? Don't worry about anything just give me an honest answer.

Rashi(a little confused

): okay I will

Ranveer

: Do you want this marriage to work out? Or do you want a divorce from me?

Rashi is quite taken aback by this question, she is contemplating her thoughts, she has never been happy with this man till now. But something in her just doesn't want to let him go. When she thinks logically she wants a divorce, but her heart says otherwise. She is just so lost between her heart and mind that she doesn't know what to do.

Meanwhile in Tarun's office, Tarun is so lost and confused. He is lost in Anjali's thoughts.

Tarun

(thinking): that day when she came to my office, even though my mind kept on telling me that she is Arjun's sister and she can't be that good, but my heart wasn't in agreement with me. Usually this never happens when it comes to a girl, I have seen so many beautiful girls in my life and fooled around with many but Anjali had some kind of a charm, she was modern and yet seemed like an innocent little child. Why is it that my heart goes out to her? When she was here I felt a strange feeling inside me. They say that love could happen at anytime, is this called love at first sight? I am just going crazy thinking about her.

How can I take her to her brother? I mean after all that happened in our lives, would he be willing to meet her? But something inside me wants to reach out to her, help her give her whatever she wants, but would that be betraying my friend?

Meanwhile Pia and Pushkar are in a restaurant talking about their relationship.

Pia

: Pushkar, you know that I had many dreams in my life, and for those dreams to be fulfilled I need money. Its not like I don't love you, you are the only person in my life that I have loved this much, but I can't give up my dreams for that.

Pushkar

: I know Pia that you have a lot of dreams in life, but don't you think we can earn that money while we are still together in a relationship?

Pia

: how are we going to do that?

Pushkar:

Pia if you are willing to work out our relationship we can find a solution together. I have never loved anyone this much as much as I love you. I know we have had some differences but I really want to give us a second chance. I tried hating you, but I just couldn't do it, I love you a lot.

Pia

: Pushkar I need time to think about it.

Pushkar

: okay pia, I will give a week's time after that if you still think that its not going to work out I'll never come in front you again, neither will you see me. With that said he just gets up and leaves.

Pia is pondering over her thoughts, may be I should give this relation another chance. But what about my dreams? How am I going to fulfill them? Ah its so frustrating, koi baat nahin I'll think about this later. (lol thatz our Pia, okay I didn't want to make her sound smart. Lol)

Is anything going to happen between Ranveer and Rashi? Is Rashi going to ask for a divorce? Or will they be able to save their relationship? Who would Tarun chose, his friend or Anjali? And what will Pia's decision be?

Please leave your feedback.

and to all my silent readers i would request you to post some comments as i am going to end it soon, and i would really like to hear your views. and for all those who always comment i love and appreciate all of the comments. and please if you guys want to see something in the fanfic do let me know i'll try to incorporate that into the story.

thank you,

lonely14

YESSSSSS!!!!!!!
i am first!!!!!!!!
now i have to go and read the fanfic!!! 😆
had to secure the spot!

Originally posted by: jigna_07

YESSSSSS!!!!!!!
i am first!!!!!!!!
now i have to go and read the fanfic!!! 😆
had to secure the spot!

lol your spot is secured 😆,

can't wait to read your comments

That was awesome!!!!!
You are right NO ONE has a better body then Salman Khan!!!!
Oh man he's hot but our Jai Walia/Ram Kapoor isn't that bad either! 😉
Please continue soon!!!!

heyz di..

loved the part.. wow! if only jai was actually like that.. i would probably have
suffered a million and one heart attacks. though even now he is pretty sexii..

plz do continue!

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