Originally posted by: salmansgirl
just WOW! nothing more and nothing less! too good and you did an awesome job with romance. far better than what i could've written lol. i'm still trying to figure out how to write comedy that would look like comedy and not some piece of crap.
thanks hun!!!! i am sure your comedy would be excellent!!!! lol my romance is just crap according to me!!!!! hahah the only part i loved was the salman khan picture!!!!!
i loved this part especially because you incoperated all different characters.
well i tried to include everyone this time!!!!!! had to solve their problems too.
Raashi should def. give a chance to her marriage with Ranveer, cuz he's changed and she deserves some happiness even if it's with ranveer lol!
hey don't be saying stuff about Ranveer!!! lol ok jk. In my fanfic Ranveer will def. get every happiness. lol i am not too partial towards girls so it doesn't matter, it was for anju that i gave the girl some power, otherwise she would bite my head off. (lol anju hun i really hope you don't read this)
Chalo, at least this anjali doesn't seem like a threat to Jani (Jai and Bani). ok, i really hope i didn't just give u an idea to ruin jani's relationship lol! u better not do that.
hmm you sure about that???? thanks for the idea really itz helpful!!!!! (Anju don't worry your wishes would be incorporated too)
our pia can never grow up and be smart lol! i'm kinda waiting to see her reaction the most.
yaar pia is a very hard character to write about, so i am trying. i think her reaction would be the second best after ranveer's.
ok now the most important part, our jai cooking? with those clothes on? hun, i'd let the food burn, the last thing i would want to do is eat food. i'd rather have jai for breakfast, lunch, dinner and snacks in between lmao! ( 😳 😳 i soooooo sound like a pervert lol! belive me guys, i'm not. im just having weird thoughts. that's what happens when u only get 2 hours of sleep hehe). 😆
Come on a sexy/hot guy like jai in the kitchen what more could anyone ask for?
shina, you're doing such an amazing job, i hope you don't end this ff soon. i would be lost without this.
awww thanks!!!!! even if i end it i'll still be on KS, so we can just talk.
you're an awesome writer and my biggest inspiration, critic and i've come to consider you a great friend. finally i found someone who has so much in common with me. i love you and your doing a great job. so keep on writing, cuz i'm always waitin! did that just rymhe? lol!
you really know how to floor a girl dont' ya? lol yeah that just rhymed. lol. thanks for the wonderful words!!!!! i really appreciate it.
love,
anam
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