Short FF Concluding part pg.77 COMPLETE!! - Page 24

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

awww how sweet yaar!!! Anyways u know that I write my ff at skool and durin my spare sometimes the stupid computers get booked so I don't get to write otherwise last friday I was gonna write 2 extra parts so I could update this weekend too!!!😭😭 My stupid skool!!🤢

awwww itz all good. hahah i was writing on the train instead of reading!!!

you can give us a little preview till then.

omggggggg wat u mean.. ranveer's evil?? but he was JUST nice a while ago.. haila.. so much suspense.. plz cont soon 👏

cant wait till u contiuee...sweettii...dis is my secondd postt ...dat cann trulii tell u ...i am longingg soo mcuh to read urfanficc...!! plzz updatee soon..
thnksxxx babezz...
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cant wait till u contiuee...sweettii...dis is my secondd postt ...dat cann trulii tell u ...i am longingg soo mcuh to read urfanficc...!! plzz updatee soon..
thnksxxx babezz...
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Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

omggggggg wat u mean.. ranveer's evil?? but he was JUST nice a while ago.. haila.. so much suspense.. plz cont soon 👏

is he really evil??? hmmmmmmm

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

cant wait till u contiuee...sweettii...dis is my secondd postt ...dat cann trulii tell u ...i am longingg soo mcuh to read urfanficc...!! plzz updatee soon..
thnksxxx babezz...
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awww thatz so sweet!!!!!

yeah i'll update soon, but i am writing a special part for someone, so it will take up more time!!!

thanks for reading it hun

Originally posted by: lonely14

is he really evil??? hmmmmmmm

i still don't believe he is evil.....at least i hope not....

Thank you guys sooooooo much for reading my fanfic. I love your comments, they really encourage me to write!!! and thank you for all the silent readers too, i hope i am keeping you interested.

This part is especially for Anam(salmans girl) and Khattimetti(KNM) Thank you so much you guys for showing that much interest in my crappy writing.

Part 12

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The two men enter the room, and are shocked out of their wits!!!! They see Indian police with the Australian police waiting for them inside. They try to run away but the cops are surrounding them. They get arrested and the interrogation begins.

Cop

: Tell me who you are working for?

One of the men

: We didn't do anything, we were just….just….

Cop

: Stop lying, and tell me everything clearly otherwise I know many other ways to find out the truth!!!

The other one gets really scared and both look at each other and decide to confess everything.

The man

: We were hired to kill Jai Walia and Bani Walia.

Cop

: Who hired you?

The man hesitates to say anything so just keeps quiet.

Cop

(now almost shouting): WHO HIRED YOU?

The man

(gets really scared): ummm.. Roshini Chopra

Cop

: Where can I find her?

The man

: Actually she is here in Sydney, at the hotel waiting for us with her partner to give our money and hear the good news.

Actually Roshini and her partner decided to come to Sydney so that they can witness it happening. This time they did not want to take any chances and were going to go back to India the same day but fate has some other plans for them.

With that the cops go to the hotel with the two men to catch Roshini Chopra.

Roshini and Jigyasa are pacing in the lobby waiting for the men. They are getting highly impatient and suddenly Roshini spots one of them and goes towards him.

Roshini

: Where the hell have you been? So did you do the work? Did you kill them?

The man just stands there staring at her.

Roshini and Jigyasa sense something wrong and start running away and then they see the cops behind them.

While running they bump into someone who is holding on to both of them really tight and is not letting go. They look up and are relieved to see Ranveer.

Jigyasa

: thank god, Ranveer tum yahan aagaye (you came here)

Roshini

: Lekin Ranveer, tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? (what are you doing here Ranveer?)

Meanwhile the cops caught up to them and were just waiting for their talk to end. (hahah I know so unreal but hey have to have some dialogues before they get arrested)

Ranveer

(looking at the both them has a slight smile and starts speaking): Actually ma, Roshini this was my plan to get both of you arrested. I have had enough of you running after Mama and Mami. Now I am not going to let you or anyone harm them or any other family member.

Both Jigyasa and Roshini are standing like someone has sucked out all the oxygen from them. They are just so stunned and then finally jigyasa speaks.

Jigyasa

: Lekin Ranveer, why did you do this?

Ranveer

: because I found out the truth ma, I found out everything. About you, about arjun, about everything. I can't believe you could do such a thing. I always thought that you cared for your family but I was wrong and now I am not going to let you ruin mamaji's life.

Ranveer

: As soon as I found out your plan of killing them I immediately decided that this is it and you guys have to be stopped. (Flashback is shown)

While pacing in his room after hearing Jigyasa and Roshini's plan of killing his mama and mami Ranveer comes up with an idea to trap them in their own game.

Ranveer calls up Jai to inform him about the latest happenings but asks him not to overreact and just trust him. He tells Jai that instead of going to Sydney as planned they should go their private island which no one knows about and which is not even on the map.

Ranveer

: mamaji aap apne island chale jaye ek hafte ke liye, tab tak main Ma aur Roshini ka kaam khatam karta hoon, (Mamaji, you should go to our island for a week, till them I will deal with Ma and roshini).

Jai

: Lekin Ranveer, we can't leave you alone, I don't care we are coming back.

Ranveer

: Please mamaji, trust me and just take care of Bani mami I'll be fine here.

Jai

(just gives in): Okay, but if you need anything just call me.

Ranveer:

Mamaji and one more thing please don't tell Mami about this otherwise she will not go with you.

Jai

: okay I won't tell her for now.

Flashback ends!!!!

Ranveer

: So after talking to mamaji, I called up the police and made this plan to get you guys arrested.

Roshini

: Ranveer I am not going to spare you for this, and Jai and Bani have to die, they will die soon.

The cops come and arrest both Jigyasa and Roshini. They are sentenced to life time imprisonment for not only trying to kill two(three including the baby) people but also for the other things that they did!!!!

Sorry for the crappy part!!!!! I know Jai and Bani weren't there for the last two parts but had to clear up the other things. I promise the next part will be filled with romance and there is a shocking news waiting for everyone in the walia house. And yeah guys I am going to wrap up the fanfic in the next 5 parts. So things to look forward to.

Next part: Jai and Bani's romance, and the shocking news!!!

The part after: Anjali finds her brother, Tarun and anjali chemistry growing, and then slowly arjun's truth unveiled.

And then later on: the full PR Raaz will come out!!!! We find out who Arjun really was, and how he is related to everything!!!! All the misunderstanding cleared. Lots of confessions!!!

And then followed by a prologue!!!! Hope you guys enjoyed this fanfic as much as I enjoyed writing it. Will be waiting for your comments and suggestions as usual.

and KNM this is for you, i truly am extremely sorry.... i hope this can pacify you.

I know its hurting,

But you can't be hating,

I agree it was my bad,

For making you so sad,

Believe me it was unintentional,

Because it is beyond my potential,

To know that I hurt you,

It makes me feel blue.

I can understand your fury,

But please know that I am sorry.

Please trust me when I say this,

Without you everything seems amiss.

I know I have hurt you,

But it just hurts seeing you be blue.

I am sorry for all the Commotion,

It just happened in the jist of the motion.

I hope this decreases your fury,

And know that I truly am sorry.

omg...thank god!!! i was gonna kill ranveer had he betrayed bani and jai!

romance...yeahhhhh...lol! i feel like an idiot right now but really jai and bani rock! can't wait to see what happens with them next.

what's arjun hiding? maybe he's jigs lost long love...who left her on the mandap when he found out she was after his money lmao!

i can't wait to read more. maybe u should update tonight. 😉 😆

anam

i knew it!!!!!
i knew Ranveer wasn't evil!!!!!!!!!
well update soon!!

jigna