What a fab performance by Ram PART VI - Page 84

Originally posted by: Piscean

Yaar bholi hoon...colour blind nahi! 😛 Ab jab peeti nahi hoon toh kaise pata chalega ki glass ko kaise pakadte hai.......waise tujhko sab kuch maloom hai lagta hai! 😉 Kahi tu chupa rustam toh nahi niklegi! 😛

Lol hopefully this isn't way too off track...nahi yaar even if u watch JW on screen...aaj kaal Tarun bhi uske line mein aa gaya hain...u'll notice the color (ab that u can argue is colored paani). Btw I will just stop at Bailey's----yum.

Btw he looks great!!! And her face glowing...I envy her!!!

Originally posted by: soapaddict

WOah! So many posts.. hard to recap on all you guys have said.... but basically... i might be sadly agreeing with Mou in that, Fall season in US maybe a good time to switch to something else. Or at the very least, it'll temper my frustration with the Walias!!

I am just floored by the idiocy of the character. But more than that, the extent to which they will suffer. Pia has it right in some ways! Although shes a pea-brain! Least suffering is she...

After reading todays update, I had visions of the following: Bani and Pushky ensconsed in some hotel room and Bani vomitting. Jigs taking pics and makinn them out to be worse than they are, Jai losing it, family turning on her more, a divorce finalizing, divorce court, the horrid words back and forth -- calling Bani a 'D' again, showing pics, Jai saying he won't give her anything, Jigs smiling a colgate bright smile, Tarun being enlightened by Maaso -- FINALLY, and fighting for bani's rights, Bani getting the divorce and giving the money back!!! Its all so trite!! Whatever happened, as Mou said, to the lovely nuances of the characters and the romance??? Wastage, all of it!

How Dubai, Pia and romance fits in i don't know. Right now, I am most disturbed by Raashi & Ranveer. I just hope that Ekta deals with the topic of domestic abuse with the senstivity it deserves...

Soap

The only thing that stood out to me....Tarun being enlightened by Maasi....wah Soap I have to appreciate the faith you have in Maasi and Tarun for that matter! 😛 Kya yaar abhi tak nahi samjhi ki all of Bani's confidantes are sworn in by the Bahatma oath! 😛 Thou shall not spill the beans even if you are the brink of ending mankind! 🤢
But that set aside I agree I'm perturbed by Ranveer and Raashi...well more so with the attn these people are getting and would like to see a shift in focus coz expecting Kekta to put in some class in that is like picking a grain of salt from the ocean! 😛

Adi i loved this part its the best one uptill now in ur falshback series. also loved the extra long part and the banters between the two ....realization on jai's part about his relationship with bani...about thier future ....bani's insecurities... just loved it.
sorry won't be able to do line by line review...short of time...inlaws are here . 😊 .would be pretty much busy for couple of months.....i will leave the review to the pros.
adi u da best...superb loved this part.
roop

Great Part Aditee - you have incorporated everyone's wishes and suggestions in this extra long part. You have brought out the fact that their relationship is not one dimensional - it started off with their usual banter the gradually the softness came in and then ended on a volatile note keeping us on edge. She is scared to confront her feeling as she should be not knowing where this would lead to.

As always I leave the detailed analysis to the pros.

Aditee, sorry for this dumb question. I was just trying to geta time line for the story. So, they have been separated for 6 months. It is her first karwa chauth. Shouldn't their first wedding anniversary be coming up soon? how long were they married before they separated? thanks

Adi,
I have to agree.. that was phenomenol. Let me tell you one more time.. I just LOVE the spunky attitude Bani has .. her emotions are just right.. the way she assumes things, the way she does not hold back lashing at him. I have to read it a couple of more times.. to register the whole thing again...I loved the line about fighting demons is not easy.. so true. .Adi.. that is what everybody goes through at some point and you have brought out his confusion and then his rebuttal to the demon in a classy manner. I loved the way he pushes the demon away...
The 'Mmmm' answers just take my breath away.. I can imagine the electricity that passes through the characters everytime she utters that.
The minute things you describe are too good to be missed. Starting from his frustration when she does not want to be alone but does not say it... and him making her say it.. the actions of getting the DVD player operational... the ordering of cake for her ... holding her chai cup without being asked for... you have that talent in you for incorporating the surroundings, the vital emotions.. that make this FF so special.
I loved his idea of not washing dirty laundry in the car.. he waited until he entered her apartment.. that is too cool.. its speaks so much of his power, his frame of mind and his principles. After all he is "THE JW".
I loved the sleeping on the shoulder.. of course it made it even more special because it was raining outside and was so much more romantic watching a movie then... thanks Adi... Its these simple actions of romance that make my heart always miss a beat. And you did not not miss the pins and needles.. part.. that is the most natural part.. and it blended in soo beautifully...the quandry of wiping the sindoor was too good... the friendly banter in the washroom... I am sorry for jumping all over the place with my review.. but kya karoon.. I keep going back and forth what I have read..

It was looooong and beauuuuuutiful.. thanks adi.

Bhoot nagri Population: 1
Kahan gaye sab ke sab.... 😡
anyways ....main bhi jaa rahi hoon....
Adi...AWSOME PART....especially the shoulder nap...(I'm sooo jealous... 😉 ) 👏
will do a detailed review later... 😳

Guys aaj to aur bhi rona dhona hoga.... he will see the pictures...explode...accuse...yell...cry...pata nahi kya kya...
N She...well...she will cry and cry and cry...I doubt she will ever open her mouth... ...as I read that she might leave Walia /house...so is there a lil hope that she might speak up before leaving...naa for me there is nothing I can expect from her... I've totally given up...
So the moral of the story is...I won't watch today's episode... 😆

Poo

PS: Kabhi to koi hona chahiye na...when I come here... 😡 😕

Pooja said
So the moral of the story is...I won't watch today's episode...

well said pooja, couldnt agree more.

I just watch it for RK. Notice I didn't say JW. Just RK. Just for my eyes pleasure. ha ha ha. The show is totally BORING.. I rather imagine Adi's and Sangeeta's FF.

Quickly posting this while at work. Yaar what a treat. After all the drivel that we are being fed from the serial we get to read the next part.

My review as I go along and as usual reading bit by bit while at work. How unfair!!!

So here goes –

The books having dates and airports that he has used Wow I cannot imagine JW doing that.

It really matters to him that Banee is Ok and the cheekiness of him to be sorry for the kiss he could not give and you Adi; you really have a cheeky side to you!!!!

Bechari Banee I thick she is more scared about what she feels for him rather than him raping her.

The rain and the rugs and watching THAT movie is what I would like to be doing right now and if a JW was with me and saying what the FF wala is saying to Banneee – meri to life hi banjati. I am, jealous (very jealous) of your FF wali Bani.

Adi I love the way you lay out each scene so lovingly. You can actually picture it while reading.


The whole popcorn, soda and candy completes the setting. He thinks of everything doesn't he?? No but madam wants chocolate cake (not that I blame her) and the gentleman he is goes the extra mile orders it for her. How spoilt is she and she doesn't even realise that he has done that for her?? I am even more jealous now!!!!!

Hey how dare she call JW NOT handsome??

How delectable, she gets nervous when he stares at her and its even more adorable when he gets jealous of JC.

She IS REALLY comfortable with him if she can behave as she would with Pia and Anjali. How rare is that to fine and all that attraction and fire to go with it. How lucky.

So its in this part where they both realise what they are feeling for each other. His realisation is off the hook. I love the way you portray JW's realisation through self conversation. He just can't help what he is feeling despite the age difference and Bani being so different from what he would normally go for. How exhilarating. There is no dilly dallying for him. It's straight to the point, straight from his heart and straight to marriage and kids. Just loved it!!!

Oh my god I knew you were going to make Pi and Vazz happy by making her stay and watch the video and fall asleep on his shoulders but this exceeds what I thought you were going to give us!!!!!! Yaar why can't Kekta mayii take a few pages out of your book???

I have loved this part so much. Adi I feel spoilt by you. Thank you so much. The bit where he says WE ARE NOT OVER YET leaves me in much anticipation!!!!!!!!!!

Lots of love and thousands more thank yous,

Shilpa