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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 32

'Pushkar โ€ฆ I'm counting on you!' Pushkar smiled to himself. 'Don't worry Zyad. You just make sure you keep the girls happy. Leave the guys to me. I will make sure that everything will go as planned!' He hung up and twirled around in his chair smiling to himself. He opened the draw of his desk and took the photograph of Pia he had stolen from her bedroom and kissed it. 'No matter how rude and self centred you are I still love you and no matter how hard you fight it, you will fall in love with me too Pia. Ill make sure of it. Pushkar Shukla has never been refused before and he shall certainly not be refused by you!' He put the frame back and walked out of his appartment in a dreamy mood. He stepped into his car and drove off to Rano's college. He had studied there himself so he could easily find his way around. He greeted old friends every now and then, while his eyes kept searching for Natwar. He found him sitting in the cafeteria having coffee. Pushar sat down at the table next to him, hoping that Natwar would recognize him, but the guy seemed totally lost in mind. After a while Pushkar decided to take action himself. 'hey dude, aren't you Natwar Rano's boyfriend?' Natwar looked up confused at Pushkar. He recognized him as Bani's friend who he had met a couple of times while visiting Rano. 'Pushkar right?' The guys shook hands and Natwar invited Pushkar to sit with him. Pushkar was smiling to himself that his plan was going smoothly. They kept chatting for some time

Jai closed his laptop and called out to his secretary. 'A black coffee please and no phone calls or visitors.' He got out of his chair and walked up and down his room. Today was the ball day and it was all he could think about. He could see everybody dressed according to the code and she looking the prettiest of them all. He saw her dancing and flirting with Zyad and stealing the show. He could see her taking a walk in the huge garden under the moonlight. She and Zyad coming closer and he quickly shook his head. He walked back to his desk and yelled at the secretary. She came rushing in with his coffee. 'How hard can it be to make a cup of coffee?!' The poor lady apologised, but Jai couldn't care less. He took a big gulp of his hot coffee burning his tongue. He sweared and threw the cup on the floor scarring the living daylight out of his poor secretary. She tried to clean the mess up, but he ordered her to get out of his office. Jai dropped himself in the chair and put his head on his desk. 'What the hell is wrong with me?!'

'Hey mate I have to go. It was cool seeing you again and I hope we can become friends.' Pushkar smiled and shook Natwar's hand while his eyes were fixed on his mobile. He quickly thought of a way to buy himself more time. 'Yeah, sure. You are a cool person. Can I have you number?' Natwar nodded and blushed a little. 'Ehh, excuse me. I just got a new number so I don't know it yet. Let me look it up for you.' Pushkar wished that the few seconds he had left were enough. Just when he and Natwar had finished exchanging numbers and Natwar was about to leave the long awaited call came and Pushkar had never felt so relieved before. 'Pushkar, it's me Zyad. Are you with Natwar?' Pushkar smile and looked up at Natwar. 'Oh hiii Pia darling. How are you doing and how is Dubai!' Natwar froze to his spot and looked down on Pushkar. 'Well I'll take that as a yes. Did you grab his attention?' Zyad was eagerly waiting for a positive response. 'Jai? No I haven't seen him today babe. Why? Is everything alright? What's the matter with you?' Pushkar paused and whispered to Natwar. 'Sorry Natwar. It's Pia, Rano's sister. She is looking for mr. Walia. I think something is wrong.' Natwars face turned all tense and he refrained from any comment. He seated himself again and waited for what was coming next. 'Pushkar?! Are you still with me?' 'Yes babe. I'm sorry. I was just speaking to Natwar. You know him right. Your sisters friend. Please Pia honey, trust me and tell me what happened. I will make sure to contact mr. Walia for you.' Pushkar dropped silent for a little while and just made weird faces and popped his eyes every now and then, making Natwars face and heart drop to the floor. 'Pushkar, don't forget that the dress code is white for the ladies and black for the men. So please don't turn up in blue. I've got Jai's suit ready, just make sure you sms me the size of Natwar. No need to call, because I won't pick up just like we planned. Once you arrive you won't have much time to go shopping you know. And please say something before Natwar really get's a heart attack.' Pushkar inspected Natwar's face and did his best not to laugh. 'Sure babe. You please be strong and have faith. Nothing will happen to them. I will go and fetch mr. Walia and fly over to Dubai immediately.' Pushkar cut the phone and got up. 'I'm sorry Natwar. I have to go immediately. I'm afraid I've just received some bad new. Bani, Rano and Anjali have met with a car accident and all three of them are in hospital. Their condition is unkown. Pia has tried to contact mr. Walia , but she wasn't succesfull. So I will go and search for him now and hopefully we will be able to catch this afternoon's flight. Natwar looked in shocked. 'I'm coming too!'.
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Posted: 18 years ago
haha...nice ploy Pushy...love this Zyad guy...I so cannot wait for the ball...continue soon...
Rivs
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Posted: 18 years ago

Sorry for not replying to all your posts guys before, but I will now. So here we go! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: rivya

this was a very funny part...ohhh...jealous Jai and embarrased bani...what a combination....and how come Pushkar knows everything...love the ff...please continue soon...

Thank you! Well Pushkar and Anjali and not only the best buddies, but also the best spies in town. ๐Ÿ˜›

Originally posted by: Angelskiss

caught up with the few parts.... great parts... jai kissed bani.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ lucky girl.... but why avoiding him ??? so bani has fallen in love with mr. walia finally ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ took her along time....๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† pushy and anjali are quite chalu ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† loved reading the parts... ๐Ÿ‘ pls do cont soon... dont make us wait for ages yaar ๐Ÿ˜†

Thx! Well she avoids him, because she is embaressed! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: SRKfever

๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ awesome part!
WOW Bani said I love you to Jai! Pushkar and Anju are so funny ๐Ÿ˜† I loved how they pulled a fast one on Bani and in a way on Jai too
I can't wait for the next part
please do continue soon
thanx ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thank you SRKfever!๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: sabye

Fab yaar u have a talent 4 riting. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Dat waz so funny when she said I love you on da fone to pushkar but turned out 2 be Jai ๐Ÿ˜†

Thank you sabye! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: momtajbegum1

omg she said 'i love you'
great part
plz cont soon

Thx! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: btkr

Finally u updated!! Anjali is becoming quite a handful.

๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

bt

Yep she is. ๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: amiee

hey what a funny part love the banter between push and bani poor jai all left out to feel jealous cant wait to read more pls cont soon...........

Thx yaar!

Originally posted by: rooj-i

so funny eman!!!
๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
i was in fits... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
ok you have to continue now...and soon too!!!
lol
Please continue soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Rooj

Im happy you liked it rooj! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: kubare

Grumpyy,

Just loved this part dear. It was hilarious with Pushkar and Anjali getting the better of Bani and Jai. I couldn't stop laughing at all. ๐Ÿ˜†Pushkar and Anjali are really such darlings.๐Ÿ˜ณ Love them both as awell as those two duffers Jai and Bani๐Ÿ˜† who love each other but are taking thier own sweet time accepting it to themselves and each other, though Bani has acceprted the fact that she loves him. ๐Ÿ˜†

Cant wait to read the next part from you soon and see how the dinner goes.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Love

Krishna

P.S. Humm...I will continue reading Battle of the Hearts in KAA forum and then will continue reading it here as well as son a s you continue her too.๐Ÿ˜‰

Love Shiv and Gauri too, and loved Iqbal Khan too much๐Ÿ˜ณ. Though Yash Tonk is not bad at all.๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Hey sweety!

It's been a long time. I hope you are doing fine. I'm very happy you liked it and I hope to wrap this story up as soon as possible so I can continue Battle of the Hearts, because according to the rules I cant have 2 ff's!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenal20

ohh gr8 part
plz cont soon

Thank you!

Originally posted by: anika22

grumpy grumpy grumpyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!
finally caught yup today....
read ur ff the whole day today after cumin back frm school....i nearly missed my evening class and then i missed kaa coz i ws so engrossed in ur ff.......

ur toooo gooddd...
you should seriously contemplate writin mills and boonsss....ur story's full of romance...

i feel sorry for nattu though...i really like him...

well done....
u're really good MashAllah...

Thank you anika! Thats really very sweety of you. I hope you do great in school. May Allah always stand by you!

Originally posted by: kali_7

continue soon!!! great part!!!

Thank you kali_7!

Originally posted by: btkr

Very nice...As usual, Anjali up to her matchmaking tricks...



bt

Thx!

Originally posted by: rooj-i

Awwww.....Great part!!!

Wow the song was beautiful
The jealousy is great...and Jai and Bani definitely share the chemistry...I love this...
Now please don't take long to update the next part...plz plz plz
Rooj

Thank you rooj. Im glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: amiee

what a beautiful meaning of the song ๐Ÿ˜ญ
wonderful part dono taraf hai aag barabar lagi hui ๐Ÿ˜‰
cont soon......... ๐Ÿ‘

Thx!๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: nema123

beautiful song.. please continue soon. !

Yes, indeed. I love it.

Originally posted by: momtajbegum1

Great part please continue

Thx! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: kubare

Grumpyy darling it was such a beautiful part and loved it alot, especially the song๐Ÿ˜ƒ. Such heart wrenching wordings and so poigent๐Ÿ˜›.

Zayed sounds like a superb human being and a person suffereing from heart ache of his own.๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Cant wait to see what happens next .๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Love

Krishna

Im very glad you liked it Krishna! Well Zyad is just a person who liked seeing other persons happy despite his own grief. Please tell me where I can find a man like that nowadays. ๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: hot girl

somethings bruning ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† jai ha ha cont soon great part

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: rivya

jealousy is in the air....well actually love is...
who does zyad look like? Iqbal?...
coz that should give Jai some good competition...lol

loved the update and cant wait for more...
Rivs

Thx. Yep, just imagin Iqbal looooool.

Originally posted by: rivya

awesome update...lord...so many people are jealous...I just hope everything gets solved soon..
Rivs

Thank you!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

oo. that jerk sahil ๐Ÿ˜ก

i hope nattu goes and beats him up and rano doesn't forgive him ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

hehe ๐Ÿ˜† i love that jw is all jealous and anjali is sooo adorable. her and puskhar planning. heheh

hope u continue soon.. gr8 part.

Well seems like you got your way! ๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Fab part.
loved it.
Anjali is one naughty girl....setting up her dad....now that is something.
JW is jealous ๐Ÿ˜†....it a sign that Anjali's plan is working.
Sahil is such a jerk....hope he didn't played by her....but Rano deserve it....now what will do to her and to that Sahil.
plz cont. soon

Thx! Well Anjali is one of a kind. ๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: nema123

Great part ! pl continue soon.

Thx!

Originally posted by: nibbles

Finally here!!

You update late and I read late!!๐Ÿ˜†

Okie, I love this Zyad character!!๐Ÿ‘....Him, along with Pushky and Anjali, are guaranteed to bring this budhu couple together!!๐Ÿ˜‰

Honestly, they'll only understand when someone spells it out to them!!๐Ÿ˜†

Hope Zyad finds someone deserving in his life to give him all the happiness!!๐Ÿ˜ณ

Anjali seems to be on a high๐Ÿ˜›......now if only she can get her Dad and Bani Aunty to confess!!๐Ÿ˜‰

I'm glad Nattu came to the rescue!๐Ÿ˜ƒ........he deserves her so much more than that Sahil!๐Ÿ˜ก

P.S. Whatever happened to Pia?๐Ÿ˜•

P.P.S. What ahppened to your other FF?......Will you be continuing it anytime soon?๐Ÿ˜›

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† yeah u r right.

Well Pia is back and the other ff ... according to the rules of KS forum I can have just 1 ff at the time, so once this one is over I will continue it. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: big fan

finally u contineud......
okie first of all thnx for the pm really appreciated dat
n now to the update
yaar why cant they realise that they r in LUV with each other ๐Ÿ˜•
uff seems like anjali has a big task on hand
pls cont soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thank you for your pm and for reading my ff. I really appreciate it! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

gr8! why did jai bail natwar and not shail...

serves him right! haha

continue soon

Thx. Well because Natwar is men enough to face his own problems, without hurting his families ego or honor while Saahil is just the opposite.

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: momtajbegum1

that was a great part no j&b part
i was waiting for u to update
thanx

Thank you!

Originally posted by: nibbles

๐Ÿ˜•

I left a whole load of comments on my previous posts, though they didn't appear for some reason!!

Anyways........Love Sahil for leaving Rano!!๐Ÿ˜†

The jerk, GFN, idiot deserves everything that he got and I hope our Nattu got a few good punches in!!๐Ÿ˜‰

As for Rano - I'm sure the girl will get over it soon!!๐Ÿ˜›

Jai rocks for not providing Sahil's Bail!!๐Ÿ‘

Anjali's dream has me worried - what're you planning?๐Ÿ˜•

๐Ÿ˜† You are too good. Im still trying to figure it out. So for now its still top secret! ๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: InTheZone123

Well i am not a silent reader any more and i just love ur fanfic
keep up the good work

Thx a million! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: sabye

Dis was a fantastic part. It had everything love, suspence and love. Update soon. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: anika22

awwwwwwwww!!!! love the romance ....love the way u made natwar the good guy....loved the zayed story.....love everything about your ff...

and love you tooo ๐Ÿ˜›
anaka

Thanks a million! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: kubare

Grumpyy dear,

Its been so long dear, whats happening in your life???๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Just read part 29 & 30 and have to say loved someone geting all jealous and Zayed's story made me ๐Ÿ˜ญ. He really is such a wonderful human being๐Ÿ˜ƒ and hope he finds love too soon.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Aww....Nattu slaped Rano๐Ÿ‘, I beleive she need one to bring her back to her senses๐Ÿ˜ก, and loved the slap she gives to Sahil๐Ÿ˜ก and then the fight between him and Nattu.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ƒ

So Jai bails out Nattu and not Sahil, but Zayed does the needful.๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Cant wiat to read what happens next. Update soon dear.

Love

Krishna

Hi Krishna,

Nothing exciting really. ๐Ÿ˜† Just work and study that leave me little time and energy. ๐Ÿคข But it feels good to come online and find all the wonderfull and encouraging posts to my ff. Hope you guys will be bear me. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: damilola

๐Ÿ‘
OMG OMG OMG I JST READ D WHOLE 30 PARTS OF D STORY AND ALL I HAVE 2 SAY IS ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ DAT WAS D BEST THING DAT I'VE EVER READ ๐Ÿ˜ณ IT WAS SO GOOD ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

im lovin d romance between jai and bani and i luv d way dat anju and pooch are tryin 2 make jai so jealouse cos its actually workin ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ awwwwwww por babe-rano gettin tricked by ๐Ÿ˜ก sahil (dis is wat i wuld like 2 do 2 him ๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ) again i never liked dat guy she deserves sm1 better like natwar he is her ideal guy hes always dere 4 her ๐Ÿ˜ณ

im repeatin my self but really ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ it was great

PLZ POST WATS GONNA HAPPEN NXT SOON WE ARE EAGERLY WAITIN ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thx a million damilola! I really appreciate it and Im very happy you liked my ff. Ive just updated by two parts and hopefully I will be able to update more regulary. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: rivya

grumpyy.....u updated...yay....

it was awesome....do bechare...pyar ke mare...tadap rahe hain...and the ladies are probably having fun...lol...

I wish they both land up there for the ball...that woould be fantastic...
Rivs

Well they will I guess. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: sxcdevil

u updated!yeah! that was a fantabulous update! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ awwww why cant sum1 bash those two idiot's heads togteher and make them communicate so that they can xpress their true feelings? but i guess anjali and zyad are there for that! i love their plan maybe this distance between jb can actually make them realise wot they mean 2 each other! pls update soon witha longer part!

Thank you! Im happy your liking the story. ๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Fab part.
loved it.
wonderful updates....after long time.
Bani and the gang went to dubai.....Jai is missing her...interesting. ๐Ÿ˜‰
on the other hand Nattu is also missing Rano ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
plz cont. soon.

Thank you ridhijai!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: amiee

awww poor guy missing bani so much why dont you go to dubai on pretext of missing anjali or some work and be with them
you deserve a vacation what better than this and take nattu with you too ๐Ÿ˜‰
short and sweet part
pls cont soon............

Well he will go to Dubai and he will take Nattu with him! ๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: sabye

Zyads plan is working. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Poor Jai is missing Bani so much. ๐Ÿ˜”

Yep big time! ๐Ÿ˜›

Originally posted by: rivya

haha...nice ploy Pushy...love this Zyad guy...I so cannot wait for the ball...continue soon...
Rivs

Thank you Rivs!

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Posted: 18 years ago
That was quick ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ wonderful update ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was really fast update thanks yaar
the poor secretary ๐Ÿ˜† apna frustration uspe kyu nikal rahe ho so finally jai and nattu will be joining the gang ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
are we invited for the ball too ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
pls cont soon.........

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