FF: Try To Remember Me..COMPLETED! - Page 24

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Posted: 18 years ago
its good to see tht u r updating
i just caught last 3 parts,very nice parts
the very first sign of love had come
lets see how do u continue this feeling of him to her
continue it soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thx for all your comments guys. Ill try to write the next part in a little while. Still trying to figure out what will happen next. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey grumpy
hav been an avid follower of this fic but dont think hav ended up posting a comment yet 😳
luvvvvv the fanfic 😃
pls cont givin us these regular doses 😉 really appreciate it
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Posted: 18 years ago
just catched up wd all da prts
awesum plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 24

Natwar is sitting at the kitchen table while Pia is totally doing his head in. He has been waiting for Rano since hours. She was suppossed to meet him so he could tutor her, but she wasn't there. The one who was, was Pia. He couldn't stand her and tried to let her know in every possible way, but the girl didn't seem able to take hints. On top of Pia was the constantly ringing phone. Pushkar was all hyper because Bani didn't show up for work and he kept calling every 2 minutes to check if she was back already. Nattu was really worried. He got up and left the kitchen. The still chatting Pia didnt even notice. Natwar walked out of the door and down the stairs. When he opened the out-door his mouth dropped open when he saw Sahil and Rano hugging and biding each other goodbye. After Sahil drove off Rano kept starring in the air for a while. A confused Natwar kept looking at her from a distant. When she finally turned around and saw him she came running his way. 'Hi Nattu! What are you doing here?' Natwar blinked his eyes a couple of times. 'We had an appointment remember?' He tried to control his anger, but his voice couldn't. Rano looked in shock at him. 'Oh I'm so sorry Nattu! I totay forgot. Sahil asked me for a cup of coffee to explain ...' Natwar exploded. 'You stood me up for Sahil!! I can't believe I've been waiting in anguis and all worried about you, while you were having fun with none other than Sahil!' Rano looked in shock and tried to explain, but Natwar wasn't ready to listen. 'Save it Rano!' Without saying anything else. He got in his car and drove off.

'After you', said Jai with a smile. He held the door open for the 4 girls. Pia's mouth dropped open when she entered the appartment and she screamed in excitement. 'Oh mr. Walia! I can't believe we will be living in this apartment!' She cluthed his arm and lay her head on his shoulder. Jai wasn't at all pleased with Pia. 'Well you better believe it and you better keep some space between us. The apartment is big enough to live with each other without touching.' He got rid of Pia, who didnt seem a little bit offended by his words. She happily went on discovering the apartment. Rano and Bani on the other hand were less comfortable. They kept standing in the livingroom with their suitcases next to them and Anjali sitting in her wheelchair between them. Lost and shy, not knowing what to do. 'Rano don't keep standing their like a statue? Your room is the last one on the right. Go unpack your stuff and go over your studies. Oh and you will be sharing your bedroom with Pia I hope you don't mind.' Rano did mind, but she just smiled thankfully to Jai and left with her suitcase. Jai picked up Bani's suitcase and walked towards her bedroom. She and Anjali followed him. 'This is our room. You will have to share it with me. Unfortunately we can't give everyone a seperate bedroom. I hope you don't mind!' Bani's face had gone deep crimson and when she was about to bash up Jai he started laughing. 'Just chill. I was just kidding. I'd be out of my mind to ever share a room with you, right Anjali?!', he said laughling while walking towards his daughter. Without paying a scandalized Bani any more attention he took Anjali and left the room. Bani dropped herself on the comfortable bed with a deep sigh of relief. She didn't have a clue where she had landed herself in.
Edited by Grumpyyy - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
A small update for today. Sorry guys, plz bear with me! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part cant wait for the spark to fly between jai and bani.
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Posted: 18 years ago
pia is after nattu nattu is looking out for rano rano feeling sorry for sahil here pushkar is worried about bani bani is worried about living with jai under same roof anjali is happy that bani will be living with them jai is happy that anjali is happy and that he will get to stay with bani too as a bonus but jelous about pushkar
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Posted: 18 years ago
jai walia is too smart
gr8
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
please continue. I want to see what happens between Naut, Sahil and Rano.


-Rimpy

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