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cant wait for part 2...good job yaar! 👏 👏
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just loved ur fic. 👏
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon asap.
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AAP JAISA KOI...

Episode 2

Bani after a hectic day of searching jobs, ends up in front of the Walia group of industries office. she is in the lobby talking to the receptionists as to what floor to go to. n the receptonists asks her to go to the 7th floor.

Bani turns to look at the stairs, n bumps into someone tall in front of her. She slowly raises her eyes to find the masculine face staring down at her with a cold expression.

Bani pulls herself back n she notices exactly how tall he was. "No doubt i felt like i bumped into a wall.". She said to herself, without even realizing that there eyes were locked at each other n they were staring at each other ofcourse with the rest of the people around them.

Ranveer standed still not even helping Bani to move away when she was pulling herself back to gain the balance. He was quiet n was lost in her eyes for a long time to notice anyone around him. Well, not exacly until his colleagues started calling his name that he realized what a fool he made out of himself. In a very irritated manner, he gave Bani a cold look n without saying a word he walked his way out of the building.

Bani, still in thoughts was unable to recollect what had occurred here. She was only thinking of who that man could be n why was he so mad at her. It was not her fault that she bumped into her. "It was an accident, Dammit." She said in her mind n with a very upset mood she started walking towards the elevator.

Bani went up to the 7th floor and there she met with Aditya who was taking the interviews for the new position of the 'Asst to Managing Director'. Aditya was very impressed with Bani n her ideas n so he offered her the position, handing her the appointment letter.

Bani very happy with the news of getting appointed comes home to share the news with her family. She goes to Nishikant n gives him the appointment letter that she got the job at Walia Group of Industries. Nishikant was very happy n calls 4 all other people in the family n shares the news.

Rano hugs her n Kiran immediately goes to the puja house n bows in front of the god n then gives Bani aashirwad saying, "May god give u success in everyting u do my child." Right then Nishikant joins them n with tears in his eyes says that, "aaj tumne mera sar khushi se ooncha kar diya. Aaj mujhe apni betiyon per bahut guroor ho raha hai."

Bani with tears in her eyes hugs them n takes a relieved breath thinking that she had made her parents happy n nothing more is to her life then to give them happiness like this for the rest of their lives.

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Next Morning Bani ready to leave 4 her new job, makes sure that Rano do get up b4 she leaves n touches her parents feet n leaves the house.

She is in the auto with Rano that she remembers her incident with that man yesterday. She tries to remember his face, his touch, the cold look he gave her n wondering who he was, she smiles to herself n jerks back into reality when Rano says, "All the best didi.". Bani says thanks n leaves.

Little nervous she reaches her office n gets ready to face her new boss. She knocks at the door, n walks in n to her astonishment finds the Managing Director to be Rohit Khanna, his neighbor. She gets a lil surprised but Rohit with very sweet smile greets her n to relax her says, "Main pehle se jaanta tha ke tum hi meri Assistant ho."

Bani gets more surprised n asks, phir aapne pehle kyu nahi bataya.

Rohit smiles n says, Main tumhe yaha congratulate or welcome, dono ek saath karna chahta tha. Aur waise bhi mujhe dekhkar tumhara jo expression tha, who miss kar deta jo kal hi badhai deta.

Bani realizes that she might still be giving the same expression so she smiles n looks around n asks, "Waise Rohitji, aapne pehle nahi bataya ke aap yaha per kaam karte hai."

Rohit turns to her n observes as she was strolling into the room looking around, he slowly whispers, "aapne pehle kabhi poocha hi nahi."

Bani, as if she had heard something turns n says, "mmm???"

Rohit – kabhi batane ka mouqa hi nahi mila, warna bata deta.

Bani smiles n then gets real n asks, bataye boss, mujhe kya karna hai.

Rohit – first of all, boss voss nahi chalega, tum mujhe Rohitji hi keh sakti ho jaisa tum hamesha se kehti aa rahi ho. Aur doosri baat yeh ke hamara naya product jald hi launch hone wala hai. Aur uski zimmevaari mujh per hai. Toh main chah hoonga ke tum usko achcha study karlo aur jaan lo aur mujhe apne views do. Phir main tumhe aage ka kaam bataonga.

Bani nods n leaves. She is getting out of the door n bumps into someone who is trying to come inside the room. By accident she hits him on the head with the door. Bani very confused looks up n finds the same man standing in front of her. Only this time he is not staring her down with his cold looks. But is a lil in pain. Now she becomes a lil concerned herself, n starts saying I'm sorry continously.

Ranveer wipes his forehead n jerks off his pain in a very irritated manner, ignoring the voice asking 4 forgiveness. Now he thinks he is mad to have walked into that door at this time to only have experienced this pain. He looks at Bani in a flash while walking in n then suddenly stops to turn back again to look at her as though mesmerizing their meeting from yesterday. She was giving him the I-m-responsible kinda look n Ranveer smiled to himself as though he liked seeing her concerned 4 what she made him go through just a minute ago.

Ranveer jerks off all his thoughts n now starts giving Bani a cold look. But without evn realizing Bani was still staring back at him. Ranveer felt like as if they eyes were locked even though he didn't wanted it. N then they both jump on Rohits voice calling out "arre aapko koi cot toh nahi aayi Mr.Walia. Ohho Bani yeh tumne kya kiya. Achcha ab jaao aur kisiko kaho ke Medicaid le aaye." Rohit than turns to Ranveer n asks him to plz come in.

Bani runs out to ask someone to get the Medicaid n Ranveer here snaps at Rohit saying "Who the hell is she?"

Rohit says, yeh hamari company ki nai employee hai Mr.Walia. yeh aaj se mujhe assist karengi. I don't' think usne aapko aate dekha hoga toh main uski taraf se.."

Ranveer in his usual cold way shuts him saying, hum yaha kaam karne ke liye logo ko rakhte hai, kaam sikhane ke liye nahi toh ab aise kya hume in logon ko andar bahar door se kaise nikalte hai uske bhi etiquettes sikhane padenge kya?"

when returning back Bani hears Mr.Walia's voice coming from the room, she stops coz she was hurt to listen what he had just said. Her pride was hurt bad. With a very strong face she enters the room after knocking, n finds Rohit sitting there as though he felt he was guilty of something. She had set the Medicaid on the table n left. Ranveer was so furious that he didn't even look at her this time, as though it felt like knowing what she did here made him take a step back. Bani felt insulted n left the room.

Edited by *Piku* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzz cont soon
so here mr. walia is ranveer
then where is jai
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sooooooooooooo gd and diff from others. continues plase
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Posted: 19 years ago
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so does Ranveer own the Walia industarys? Since there is no Jai? is Adyita still his father?
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Originally posted by: jeenal20

plzzzzzzzzz cont soon
so here mr. walia is ranveer
then where is jai

Yeah, there is a twist in this story. Its different coz there is no Jai Walia in this story. This story is about Ranveer n Bani. Right now Aditya is the head of the walia house. so the walia family is of Aditya, Jigyasa, Ranveer, Sahil n ofcourse daadi n anu.

Edited by starz4me - 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: punjabi#1

so does Ranveer own the Walia industarys? Since there is no Jai? is Adyita still his father?

Yes to all ur questions.

this is the characters details link n the episode 1 link. if that helps.

To know more about the characters plz visit

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/353735

Episode 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/354868

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AAP JAISA KOI...

Episode 3

Bani is very frustrated with what Ranveer said n she comes back to her cube n thinks that, "main kyu upset ho rahi, mujhe kya padi hai ke voh mere bare mein kya sonchte hai, voh mujhe nahi jaante. Main unki assitant nahi aur aisa bhi nahi ke main unse roz roz takraongi. Mujhe koi farak nahi padta, isse achcha main apne kaam per concentrate karoo." She continues doing her work unaware that Rohit's office door opened n Ranveer was walking out of the door.

Ranveer walks out the door n sees Bani sitting in her cube doing work but she was also talking to herself. That made Ranveer smile. He just looked at the image of Bani in front of him in such a way as though he is admiring what he is seeing. Ranveer was conscious about his surroundings but even though he tried hard he couldn't just take his eyes off of Bani n was observing her posture very keenly. He jerked his thoughts n said to himself that, "What the hell r u doing Ranveer. Better get back to work even b4 she gets in ur mind. This is wrong."

Ranveer saw Bani get up n in the haste of turning quickly to avoid the awkwardness of her catching him staring at her, he dropped the files n said "shit!!!!!" Bani turned n came close to help him n then Ranveer became too concious of her presence so to avoid any interaction, he said, "Its okay, I got it." N very rudely got up n left. Bani cursed herself 4 offering her help to him.

Rano's college:

Rano is a senior in her college n she comes out of the room talking to her friend Pia, she says, "Pia ab bas haan. Tu bahut classes miss kar chuki, pehla quarter qatam hone aa gaya aur tu abhi tak masti maze mein lagi hui hai. C'mon yaar ab toh padhai per dhyaan de."

Pia – arre yaar just chill. Meri fikr na kar main dekhna tujh se bhi zyaada numbers laongi. Tu kyu pareshaan ho rahi hai.

Rano – main isliye pareshaan ho rahi hoon ke tune sirf maze masti ki hai padhai nahi, toh kaise numbers achche layegi.

Pia - arre yaar college mein maze nahi karegi toh phir kab karegi. Yeh college ke din phir kabhi nahi ayenge, hamesha yaad karti reh jaayegi inko.

Then Pia turns n finds the newcomer walking in. Pia tells Rano, Nai bakri aayi hai lagta hai, chalna jaakar ragging karte hai. Rano says 'no' but Pia just grabs her hand n brings her to the stairs n blocks the way of the newcomer.

The girl looks up n asks, "Hi, mera naam Anu hai. Aap log ???"

Pia smiles, hum yahan ke seniors aur tum shayad nai aayi ho?

Rano pinches Pia but she ignores n continues..

Anu – ji haan, maine aaj hi join kiya hai.

Pia – janti nahi thi ke already ek quarter qatam per hai jo abhi join kiya hai ???

Anu – jaanti hoon isliye pareshaan hoon ke bahut cover karna hai mujhe study wise.

Pia – waise hum seniors har newcomer ki ragging karte hai. Tumhaari bhi karenge.

Anu gets a lil scared, coz she was very reserved in nature n she didn't know what were they gonna ask her to do.

Pia – chalo yeh pen lo aur samjho ke yeh phool hai aur waha saamne se jo bhi ladka aayega tum uske qadmon mein yeh rakh dena.

Rano tells Pia that its getting too much so plz let her go. But Pia turns to Anu n says, chalo shuru ho jaao.

Anu turns to look at the other side n finds one guy coming towards their side, Pia pushes her n Anu starts walking towards him. Anu is very close in distance with this guy that she hears someone calling Pia, she turns n Pia looks at the other girls n says, "coming yaar!!" n then turns to Anu n gestures her to continue n then whispers in Rano's ears that "Keep an eye on her Rano." Rano holds her hand to stop her n says, "kaha jaa rahi ho Pia, tumne start kiya tumhi khadogi yaha." Pia just smiles n leaves.

Anu gets close to the guy n bends down to put the pen in his way, then suddenly she hears someone calling her name, "Anu!!!!!" She turns to find her brother Sahil there. He was looking furious. Sahil holds Anu's hand n starts walking towards Rano n Rano starts getting goosebumps on her hands with fear.

Sahil stands in front of Rano n yells at her saying, "How dare u??? tumhari himmat kaise hui meri bahen ki ragging karne ki?? ."

Rano tries to explain n Anu tries to interfere but Sahil waves his hand to stop both of them n continues, "Tum nahi jaanti main kaun hoon. Mera naam Sahil Walia hai aur main chahoo toh tumko yaha se bezzat karke nikalwa bhi sakta hoon."

Anu then shuts him by saying, yeh meri ragging nahi kar rah thi bhai koi aur kar raha tha. Yeh toh usse bhi rok rahi thi. "

Sahil – lekin, lekin Anu ??

Anu – ab bas kare bhai, main apna khayal rakh sakti hoon. Aap mere bare mein fikr na kare.

Sahil huffs n puffs n leaves. Anu turns to Rano n b4 Rano cud say anything she says that, "main apne bhai ki taraf se tumse maafi mangti hoon.

Rano – nahi, maafi mujhe aur Pia ko tumse maangni chahiye. Mazak thoda zyaada hi kar diya humne.

Anu – ok baba, maafi toh tumhe ek hi shart per milegi, agar tum mujhe apni dost banaogi toh.

Rano smiles n Anu says, dekho na main yaha nai hoon aur mera koi friend bhi nahi.

Rano holds her ands n says, tum aaj se meri dost ho. Fikr na karo.

Pia, who was talking to some other group of girls, turns to look at Rano n finds Rano handshaking with Anu, she gets furious as though she is jealous that her best friend is giving other people more interest than to her.

Edited by *Piku* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Guys, plz tell me if u don't like it. i can discontinue.
I know its totally different topic n a different approach using Ranveer n Bani as lead characters. But i figured it wud be nice 4 a change. But if u guys don't like it then i can stop.

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