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great part 👏 pls do cont soon


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amazing part dear
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Abseloutlly FANTASTIC...keep up the good work! 👏
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AAP JAISA KOI...

Episode 4

Pia gets furious looking Rano, her best friend, talking with someone else in such friendly way n walks towards them. N with a very poisonous smile says Hello to Anu, n then turns to Rano n asks, "what was all that abt???" Rano smiles n b4 she cud say something Anu jumps in n says, "nahi yaar kuch nahi. Actually main apne ghar mein sabse choti hoon isliye har koi mujhe lekar over possessive ho jata hai."

Pia says, "Whatever!!" n then turns to Rano n grabs her hand n says, "chal yaar class mein jaane ko der ho rahi hai." Rano, who's astonished to listen Pia talking abt class turns back n waves her hand at Anu saying Goodbye. Anu smiles n leaves 4 her classes as well.

Bani is abt to leave for home at the end of the day when she's joined by Rohit who seemed very happy for some reason. Bani notices the smile on his face but cudn't dared to ask him so instead she says, "OK Rohitji, main chalti hoon. Aur haan, voh maine abhi puri study nahi kiye hai project documents so main aapko kal savereapne views bata doongi.

Rohit – Koi baat nahi, kal bata dena.

He pauses for a moment as if he wanted to ask her something n then gathers courage to actually ask her n says, "Ghar jaa rahi ho toh, chalo ek saath hi chalet hai."

Bani didn't know how to ignore his offer as he is her Boss n that too he lives next door to her, so she now, for sure, cannot say 'no' to him. Bani nods n agrees.

Rohit gets a lil excited but with a very shy smile n face down, he says, "ok then, I'll c u in the lobby." Bani smiles n he leaves.

Ranveer n his father r sitting in the corner sofas of the lobby n discussing the deal that they r suppose to close with some other company. While talking to his father, Ranveer glances around to find Bani coming out of the elevators. She looked very graceful n fresh even at the end of the day. He tried to avoid her n concentrate on his discussion with his father but cudn't help glancing back at Bani.

In the background the music goes like

Dekh ke tumko hosh mein aana, bhool gaye,

Yaad rahe tum, aur zamaana, bhool gaye.

And then Ranveer hear someone calling his name, he jerks off his thoughts n turn towards his father.

Aditya – Kaha ho tum Ranveer, itna zaroori kaam abhi baakhi hai aur tum bhi na… achcha chalo zara mujhe batao ke voh company ke details kis ke paas….

Aditya is still completing his question when Ranveer turns to look at Bani, but only this time he finds her talking to Rohit n they both were walking together as though leaving 4 home together. A chill raced through his spine n he gets furious n without even letting his father complete the question he says, "I think Dad, aapko Rohit se poochna chahiye jo abhi yahi aa raha hai." N he rolls his eyes towards Rohit n Bani n was looking at them with a serious n cold expression. Aditya follows his sons glance n turns to find Rohit passing by, he calls out, "Arre Rohit, zara idhar aana."

Rohit looks at Aditya n says, "ji Sir, abhi aaya." N turns to look at Bani as though apologizing for not able to accompany her home.

Bani smiles n says, "aap jaaiye Rohitji, main ghar chali jaaongi."

N then she glances at Ranveer who looked furiously mad n who was litrally staring at her this time. Bani tried to avoid the tension so she smiles n nods as if saying 'Goodbye' n leaves. Ranveer's eyes follows her all the way until she's out of his view.

Bani come out of the door, her heart racing uncontrollably fast n a chill raced through her spine when she thought of Ranveer staring at her just few minutes ago. She takes deep breath n calls 4 an auto n leaves. On her way, the only thing that she cud think of was Ranveer's eyes n his cold expression, n how he just stared her to death. She felt like as though he knows that she was intimidated by him.

In the background the music goes like…

Jab saamne tum aa jaate ho,

Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai.

She shakes herself to come out of Ranveer's thoughts, "kyu itna na pasand hone ke bawajood voh shaqs mere zehen per chaya hua hai. Shayad mujhe sach mein unse darr lagta hoga. Per jab bhi unse milti hoon toh aisa lagta hai ke voh mujhse gusse mein hai aur hamesha mujh mein koi khaami doondhte rehte hai." Then she remembers his cold expression n says in her mind that, "hamesha dekho serious rehte hai. Apne office ke employees ko dekh kar smile kar lenge toh kya aasmaan gir padega. Ya phir ho sakta hai, yeh un logon mein se ho jo status ko zyaada mayine dete hai."

She comes out of her thoughts when the auto stops near the gate. She pays the man n comes inside the gate n is joined by Pushkar, Rohit's brother n her friend.

Pushkar – congratulations Bani. Mujhe toh kal hi pata chal gaya tha per bhai ne man kiya hua tha. Shayad voh tumko pehle congratulate karma chah rahe the honge.

Bani – haan mujhe bhi aaj pata chala ke Rohitji uss company mein kaam karte hai. Per achcha hi hua ke Rohitji waha the varna main mervous ho ho kar behosh hi ho jaati. Yeh sab chodo tum batao ke tumne kahi apply kiya kya job ke liye.

Pushkar was abt to answer when they r joined by Rano n Pia who were returning from college. Rano comes n hugs Bani n says 'Hello' to Pushkar. Pia also says, 'Hello' to Bani but turns to Pushkar n extends her to him to say, 'I'm Pia'. Pushkar raises his eyebrow n shakes his hand with her n say 'Hi, I'm Pushkar'. Then Pia says, "aap se milker bahut khushi hui Pushkar". N she doesn't leave his hand n stares at him to make him uneasy.

Edited by *Piku* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ur fanfic is very different from others which i think is interesting
well done 👏
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Awesome!!

keep rocking!!

plz do continue!

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wow great part........ nice fanfic... love reading it...... pls do cont soon


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AAP JAISA KOI...

Episode 5

In the Walia Groups of Industries, Aditya is talking to Rohit in the lobby abt the other company details n Ranveer who is sitting opposite to Rohit is busy staring at him with anger n jealousy (which he himself is unaware of). It seemed as though he was thinking of something to defeat Rohit.

Then suddenly he says, "Rohit, I'm sorry to say but humein tumhara demotion karma pad raha hai."

Rohit is shocked to hear this as it is but Aditya is also shocked to listen to this from his son. Both sit speechless staring at Ranveer, who then gives a glance at his father n turns to Rohit n continues, "Actually Roshni Chopra, hamari company se join ho rahi hai toh voh rahengi 'Managing Director', aur kyunki tum voh position per reh chuke ho toh tumhe pata hai ke kya karma chahiye aur kya nahi, isliye tum Miss Chopra ko Assist karoge."

Rohit is shocked n speechless but somehow 'Asst to Managing Director', ring the bell in his mind n he thinks of Bani as she is at that position right now. Rohit dares to ask Ranveer, "Mr.Walia, phir Bani Dixit ka kya hoga?"

Ranveer takes a long pause n then says, "She'll be my Assistant." Rohit is shocked to hear this coz he was confused as to y Mr.Walia can opt an inexperienced girl to be an 'Asst to CEO' n not himself, but b4 he could say anything, Ranveer continues, "Tumhari aur Miss dixit ki salary mein koi changes nahi honge, so don't worry. Khayal rae ke Miss Chopra parson se start karengi toh tum apna cabin kal hi saaf karlo." He pauses again n very slowly says, "Agar Miss Dixit kal aaye toh unhe mere paas bhej di jiyega."

Rohit nods n then asks 4 permission to leave n then leaves. Aditya turns to Ranveer n asks, "yeh sab achanak kyu, Ranveer."

Ranveer, who was so serious until now smiles at his father n says, "Dad, aap bhi na bhool hi gay eke aaj Roshni aa rahi hai aur voh hamare saath hi kaam karengi. Maine yeh sab isiliye kiya hai.

Aditya felt bad that Rohit had to be demoted but also felt happy that his son cared abt Roshni n he wanted to c them together. Aditya gets up n says, "Achcha chalo, Roshni ko airport se laana bhi toh hai."

Ranveer – aap hi chale jaiye na dad, mujhe kuch kaam hai. Aur waise bhi mujhe aane mein deir ho jaayegi.

Aditya nods n leaves.

Marwah Chawl:

Pia was literally staring at Pushkar very keenly without even realizing Rano n Bani r smiling looking at this cute scene. On the other hand, Pushkar gets a lil uncomfortable with all this n tries n snatches his hand from Pia's grip n starts walking with Bani to her house. He asks her 'how was her forst day at job.' Bani was bz explaining him but he was admiring her looks n was unable to listen to a word she said.

Following Bani n Pushkar were Rano n Pia. Pia pinched Rano to ask her more abt Pushkar n Rano turned to her n said, "kya haal hai Pia, sab theek hai na. kyu jan na hai Pushkar ke baarein mein."

Pia – achcha Rano ki bachchi, mouqa milte hi taang kheech rahi hai. Abhi batati hoon tujhe, ruk!!!"

Rano starts running towards the house n so does Pia trying to catch her, but Pushkar turns to c whats going on n Pia bumps into him n they both land on the ground. Bani n Rano laugh n runs into the house.

Pia looks Pushkar in the eyes n Pushkar feels uneasy with Pia staring at him n so does half the crowd. He tries to move her but Pia doesn't move but instead snaps back at him, "aap kyu mujhe ignore kar rahe hai. Main kya aapko achchi nahi lagti."

Pushkar feels bad 4 his behavior n says, "nahi aisi koi baat nahi, log hamein dekh rahe hai na isliye. Yaha log baatein bahut karte hai."

Pia then realizes n get up n smiles ar him, Pushkar gives back a very uneasy smile as though he's trying hard to be a good person. Instead of going inside Bani's house, he goes back to his house, firstly, to avoid any contact with Pia and, secondly, to avoid the laughing faces of Bani n Rano.

Pia comes inside the house n Bani doesn't say anything but Rano starts teasing her n Pia runs to Bani n hugs her as though she's very embarrassed to face them all.

Walia Mansion:

Jigyasa yelling at servants saying, "kaam barabar aor jaldi se ho jaana chahiye. Roshni madam aati hi hongi. Hamare ghar mein unhe koi takleef nahi honi chahiye. Samjhena !!! chalo ab jaao apne kaamon per."

Daadi shakes her head as though saying, 'yeh kabhi nahi sudhregi.' Jigyasa gives her a furious look n then turns to pick the phone to call Aditya n hears Daadi saying, "arre Aditya beta, aa gaye tum log."

Jigyasa turns to find Aditya walking in with tall, fair, beautiful but arrogant ROSHNI CHOPRA.

Edited by *Piku* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!!....fab part hun!👏👏

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I loved it!! part 6 will be awaited with eagerness!!


please do continue!!

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