Kya Yehi Pyaar Hain?-FF LAST PART PG 133 - Page 3

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wow!! i loved it!! plz do continue sweetie!!


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This one's a short one, guys...

Part 4:

A Week Later:

"Bani, my father is a horrible man and he will make your life miserable! You will never be happy with him. My mother killed herself because she couldn't stand all the pain that he gave to her. Please take my advice,…don't ruin your life by marrying Raj Patel," riya had said to bani on the first day she came to Mumbai. Her words scared bani. She very desperately wants to call the wedding off, but is afraid of the consequences if she does. Bani begins to feel suffocated more and more each day, as the engagement draws closer.

Bani hears a gentle knock coming from the door and says , "come in!". Riya enters the room. The past long week, riya and bani had become very close. Raj Patel enjoyed to see this, but took it the wrong way by seeing their closeness as a mother to daughter relationship, what they really shared was a kind of sister to sister relationship. Riya sits next to bani on the bed, holding clothing (wrapped), and jewelry sets on top if it.

Bani: What's this, Riya?
Riya: ….papa gave me these to give them to you. They're for you to wear at the engagement tomorrow.

Bani again becomes depressed on the mention of the engagement. Riya hands them over to bani, who sets them aside on the glass table. Riya senses bani's unhappiness and also starts to feel bad.

Riya: Will you be ok?

When she says this, she places her hand on bani's burning hot cheeks. Riya, touches bani's forehead with the back of her hand, worried.

Riya: Bani, you're very warm! Are you sick?

Bani takes riya's hand off of her forehead.

Bani: no, riya. I'm absolutely fine.
Riya: I should call the doctor.
Bani: no, riya. I'm serious, I'm perfectly fine! I just need some rest and I'll be as good as new.
Riya: (smiles) ok. But make sure you have your dinner and then rest. I have to go now, papa is waiting for me.

Bani smiles to her, assuring her that she'll be fine. Riya quickly hugs bani and then leaves her to sulk. Bani goes to the bathroom to splash cold water onto her warm face, too cool her down. She dries her face and looks over at the clock, that reads 10:05. In exactly 21 hours and 55 minutes, she is going to be engaged to the rich Mr. Raj Patel and become Mrs. Raj Patel. She shudders in disgust. Suddenly feeling very cold, bani lays down onto her comfy bed and covers herself with her blanket, waiting for herself to fall asleep.

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She wakes up from the bright sunrays shooting through the open windows, with the pulled back curtains. " Rise and shine, Mrs. Patel!," the maid nearly sings to her. She begins dusting the room, while bani slowly sits up in bed and rubs her tired eyes.

Mrs. Peterson (the maid): It is 8:00 in the morning, lovely! Today is Saturday, and let's not forget, also your ENGAGEMENT DAY! (she cheers joyfully)

Bani, ignoring Mrs. Peterson's happy morning chirpings, gets out of bed. She is wearing her nice black nightdress that stops above her knees and shows a bit of her cleavage. Right now the dress is creased and the straps are falling from her shoulders. Bani clips her hair messily up and covers herself with her robe.

Mrs. Peterson: I have breakfast all set out for you, Mrs. Patel, on the table. Quickly get fresh and eat it before it gets cold. And also, sir wants to see you at exactly 9:30, today.

She finishes dusting and heads towards the door, to leave. "We will be waiting for you downstairs, Mrs. Patel," she says. Before leaving, she is stopped by a grateful bani.

Bani: Thank you very much, Mrs. Peterson.
Mrs. P: you're very welcome.
Bani: Mrs. P, I have a favor to ask you.
Mrs. P: yes, what is it?
Bani: Please don't ever call me Mrs. Raj Patel.

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"come on di, do something exciting and risky for once in your life!", bani remembers pia telling her. "maybe pia is right? I should do something risky and exciting for once! My life is so dull and has no excitement in it at all!," bani thinks to herself and she puts in her silver hoop earrings into her ears. She gets up and examines herself through the mirror. Bani looks very nice in a black tang top, that fits her body perfectly, with shiny designs on it and wearing light faded jeans with her black high heals (making her feel tall and confident), and her hair neatly in a ponytail and a strand of her hair to the side.

Pia: (walks out of the bathroom) Ready to go?
Bani: yeah, let's go.
Pia: Riya and Rano are waiting outside in the car for us.

They exit the empty looking house and step into the black limousine, greeted by rano and riya.

Rano: nice of you two to finally join us!

Pia and bani ignore this rude remark from rano.

Riya: we should be done shopping by 3:00ish? And then we are expected to be back at home at 5:00. Pintu, drive! (she commands the driver)

Bani looks at her ticking watch, it is 9:45. She smirks to herself imagining how Raj Patel would be reacting at this very moment, still waiting for her even though she is 15 minutes late. She knew exactly how he'd react, he would be angry as hell. She knows because the past week, she had watched other people experience it with him and seen him get very angry.

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Raj patel is pacing back and forth in his room, waiting impatiently for bani, even though she is 15 minutes late. He is calming himself down, not want to get angry and ruin his mood on his special day. The telephone in his master bedroom, rings. He picks it up and it turns out to be Jai Walia.

Raj: Hello?
Jai: hello, Mr. Patel. This is Jai Walia.
Raj: oh yes, hello Jai. How are you?
Jai: just fine, thank you for asking.
Raj: you know, Jai. I have been trying to contact you for the past two weeks. I even left messages for you.
Jai: I know, and I'm really sorry about that. I'm actually in England for my friend's wedding and also on vacation, and won't be back until a month and a half. So, I won't be able to attend your Engagement.
Raj: oh, well I understand. It is ok, hopefully you will be able to attend my wedding, instead.
Jai: oh, most certainly. Can I know who the lucky lady is?

One of the servants come into his room, interrupting raj, waiting for him to get off the phone to speak to him.

Raj: can you hang on for a second, jai?

He looks at the servant and says rudely, "What do you want?!".

Servant: (scared) uh, sir. You were asking about where Ms. Dixit is. Sir, she left with her sisters and Riya.
Raj: (shocked) What?! (thinks for a moment) …ok you can go.

The servant happily leaves the room, to carry on with the rest of his duties.

Raj: I am sorry, jai. I will have to get back to you, I'm quite busy at this moment.
Jai: oh, that's alright. Oh, and Congratulations!
Raj: Thanks. (he mumbles)

He slams the phone onto the receiver and begins fuming in anger. He did not like it at all when people disobeyed him or stood him up, not at all.


next part- the engagement....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow...hun!! that was superb 👏 👏 👏 can't wait for the next part 😛
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon 😊

its really awesome....... 👏
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omg poor bani! 😭

i cant wait to read more 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice part didi!!

plz do continue!!

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superb part.loved it.plz cont soon. 😊
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awesome part yaar 👏 👏 👏
plzz continue soon!
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wow great! i not sure if i asked this already..but if u do put hindi in ur ff wud u mind including and english transaltion for the hindi bits?? that wud be great! all d best, love tiff.
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Part 5:

All four girls arrive back home, exactly at 5:00. Bani felt a little cheered up, she explored almost everything in Mumbai and did tons of shopping, but barely bought anything. As they enter the house, they are stunned by beautiful decorations everywhere. Raj Patel approaches them. He stares at bani, looking amused by her sudden change of clothes, but doesn't show it.

Raj Patel: Nice to have you all back home.

They all give him weak smiles.

Raj: You all should get ready.
Riya: (looks at the clock) papa, it's only 5:00.

Raj glares at his daughter, giving her the message to shut up and listen to him.

Raj: I said get ready.
Riya: (afraid) ji…

All four go separate ways, to their bedrooms. Raj stops bani when the three leave.

Raj: Bani, where were you? Didn't Mrs. Peterson tell you that I wanted to see you this morning?
Bani: (innocently) oh, really?…oh yes, I remember now. (shrugs her shoulders) must have slipped my mind.
Raj: (wickedly says) Bani, there are two things that I absolutely hate,…being stood up and not listened to. But I'll let you go this time. (he covers bani's left cheek with the palm of his hand) I forgive you.

Bani quickly pushes his hand off of her cheek, and glares at him. She turns around, her back facing Raj, and leaves him alone in the hall. He is shocked by this gesture, but then smiles to himself, pleased by seeing her sudden change of attitude.

Bani curses Raj Patel under her breath, while walking angrily to her bedroom. As she enters, she sees Pia on her bed, reading a magazine. Pia looks up from it, and smiles at bani.

Pia: Di, you have to see the guy on the front of this magazine cover! Isn't he so handsome?!

She picks up the magazine to show it to bani, but she (bani) doesn't pay attention.

Pia: His name is Jai Walia, extremely rich businessman, and he's only 29! And soooo handsome! (looks back at his picture)
Bani: I'm not interested.

Pia looks at bani, shrugs her shoulders, and then starts reading the magazine again. Bani decides to take a shower, to cool herself down. She grabs her pink towel and heads to the bathroom.

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All of the guests have arrived, and are enjoying themselves. Raj Patel is having conversations with some of his business partners, but keeps eyeing the staircase, waiting for bani to come down. Many people congratulate him and ask him where the lucky girl is, making him even more impatient for bani. Finally, after 30 minutes, the woman he is waiting for comes walking down the stairs with her two sisters, by her side.

Bani looks beautiful in the fancy blue salwar kameez that raj patel had gifted to her the other day, with the expensive jewelry to match with it. Pia and rano force her to walk down the stairs, because she is very close to running back up the stairs, nervous by all the staring from the guests.

Man: (to raj) Is that her, Mr. Patel?
Raj: (smiles) yes, that is her.
Man: She is beautiful,…you're one lucky man to have her.

Raj, happily, walks over to the marble staircase and takes bani's hand in his, leading her to meet the guests. Bani is annoyed by all of the happy guests, because they are happy and she isn't. Raj takes bani to the center of the hall, and gets everyone's attention. A bright spotlight shines on the two.

Raj: May I have everyone's attention!

Everyone immediately stop talking and look over to raj and bani.

Raj: (glad that everyone listened) I hope you are enjoying the party.

The guests smile with agreement.

Raj: (clears throat) I would like to introduce Bani Dixit, the woman who I want to spend the rest of my life with, the love of my life.

Bani looks at him, thinking , "The love of my life??? You've only known me two weeks and know absolutely nothing about me!!!".

A waiter comes with a red covered tray, with two rings on top. Raj takes one of the small boxes and opens it. He takes out a diamond ring and slips it onto bani's ring finger. Bani stares at the engagement ring on her hand, in shock. Nikishant grabs the other box, opens it, and hands over the gold ring to bani. She just stares at the ring, not reaching for it. Her father takes her hand and puts the gold ring in her palm. Bani stares at the eager looking, Raj Patel, and then back at the ring that is resting on her sweaty palm. Everyone waits eagerly for bani to slip the ring onto Raj's finger. Nikishant, being impatient, helps, but actually forces bani to put the ring on Raj. Everyone claps and smiles, except for pia, rano, and riya. Bani continues to look at her ring, in disbelief. She then starts to feel dizzy and sees that the room begins to get smaller and is spinning in circles. Bani touches her head, feeling very dizzy. Before fainting, she hears pia screaming, "Bani Di!!".
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She wakes up and sees a very unfamiliar face staring right back at her. The man looks about 35ish, and has an injection in his right hand. Bani sits up in bed and feels pain shooting in her head.

Doc: Good that she has woken up. Mrs. Patel, you need to eat and rest, which you haven't been doing for awhile now, from what I heard.

Bani looks around her room and finds her father, riya, rano, pia, and Mrs. Peterson staring at her, worriedly.

Doc: Mr. Dixit, give your daughter these medicines for the next couple of days and she will be absolutely fine. (hands over prescriptions) I will leave now.

Everyone watches the doctor leave the room, in a hurry.

Nikishant: Bani,…why aren't you eating and sleeping well? What's wrong?
Bani: (angrily) Like you don't know, papa.

He is confused at first, but then understands what she is talking about.

Nikishant: I am very sorry, bani that I am making you go through this. I will do anything to just see you smile again. Anything!

An idea pops into bani's head and she turns to her father, narrowing her eyebrows down.

Bani: Anything?….
Nikishant: yes, bani. Ask me for whatever you'd like.
Bani: papa,…you remember Aarti, don't you?
Nikishant: (thinks for awhile) oh yes! How can I ever forget that sweet girl! What about her?
Bani: Well, she is getting married soon and has invited me to her wedding.
Niksihant: oh ,that is great news! Of course you can go.
Bani: papa, the wedding is taking place in England. And I was thinking that if I go, then I'd go a month earlier to travel around Europe.

Niksihant gets off of the bed and looks away from her.

Nikishant: I'm sorry, bani. But this isn't possible. You are engaged, and I don't think Mr. Patel would want his fianc to go alone to Europe and for a month. (shakes his head) I'm sorry, you can't go.
Bani: papa, you said that I can ask you anything and you'd give it to me! I want to go to this wedding! And I wont go alone, Pia will come with me!
Pia: (buts in) hain, papa! I'll go with her.
Nikishant: (shakes his head again, disagreeing) this is up to, Mr. Patel. I doubt that he'll let you go though, bani.

Hearing this, bani gets out of her bed, angrily and exit's the bedroom, letting everyone call after her, not responding back. She sees him sitting down, comfortably on the sofa, with his eyes shut. Bani approaches him and stands in front of him. She coughs to get his attention. Raj opens his eyes and finds his beautiful ill fianc, standing in front of him.

Raj: (stands up) Bani? How are you? Shouldn't you be in-
Bani: (cuts him off) I arranged tickets to go to England on Monday to attend my best friend's wedding. Is that ok with you?
Raj: (thinking) uh,…yeah it's fine. I'll come with you. How long will you be staying there?
Bani: (snaps at him) For a month, and I don't think that it's a good idea for you to come along, I mean because you'll be busy with meeting, projects, and all that stuff.
Raj: (eyes wide) A month?! Why a month?!
Bani: because I have always wanted to travel around Europe, and this is the opportunity I have been waiting for.
Raj: I can't be without you for a month! And plus, I don't want you going anywhere, alone.
Bani: (pretending to be innocent) but-but, I've always been stuck in Mount Abu my whole life, and want to go someplace new. Please let me go. Pia is also going to come along with me.
Raj: (sighs and gives in) I guess I'll try to go through a month without you. Plus, how can I refuse my beautiful fianc.
Bani: (rolls her eyes and bitterly says) I'll take that as a yes. Thanks.

Raj, confused, watches bani walk back to her room. "What's happening to her these days?," he says to himself.

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Monday (airport):

Bani is clutching onto her boarding pass and holding her handbag in her other hand, waiting for her flight to be called. She is wearing her dark blue jeans with a very cute light purple shirt, her hair is clipped up nicely, and has silver dangling earrings on. Pia is wearing a cute red dress that stops above her knees, with a white belt that goes perfectly with the dress. She is biting her fingernails, nervously. This is the first time that both, bani and pia, are going somewhere other than Mount Abu.

Nikishant: now call when you two reach there, ok? I want a phone call at least twice a day, you hear me?
Bani: yes, papa.
Pia: (hiding her fear) Calm down, old man.
Nikishant: (narrows his wrinkled eyes at pia) I don't care if I don't hear from you, pia.
Rano: I'll miss you guys so much! (she hugs her two sisters)
Riya: Enjoy yourselves, but don't have too much fun! (jokes around)

Bani and pia chat with their family for the last time.

Bani: Pia, I need to use the bathroom, I'll be back in a minute.
Pia: ok, di.

Bani walks into the ladies bathroom and looks at herself through the mirror. "You look like a nervous wreck, bani," she says to herself. She quickly fixes her hair and then steps out of the bathroom, and bumps directly into someone. Not looking at the person, she immediately asks for forgiveness. "It's ok," says a familiar voice. Bani looks up and sees her husband-to-be holding her by her arms. She shrugs him off.

Bani: Aph? (english trans:You?)I thought that you were in a business meeting?
Raj: yes I was, but canceled it because I wanted to say goodbye to my wife personally.
Bani: (growls) I'm not your wife.
Raj: (sighs) I don't know how I'm going to live without you for a month,…but I'll try to find a way. (he says trying to show his love to her, but to bani, it sounds like he's desperate)
Bani: (bitterly) …yeah, you do that.

Raj takes bani's hands in his and kisses them and then her wrist. She tries to pull away, but he has a solid grip onto her hands. He looks deeply into her eyes, making bani suck in her breath.

Raj: I'm going to miss you, bani. (he whispers coldly in her ear)

He leans in closer to her nervous face, leaving only an inch of space between them. Raj takes bani's chin in his hand and pulls her closer, to give her a kiss, but stops by an interruption from the airport's intercom. "Flight 23 to England please board onto the plane, I repeat. Flight 23 to England, please board onto the plane. The plane is ready for take off," a voice says from the loud speakers.

Bani: That's me! Got to go!

She hurriedly runs away from Raj, scared of what would have happened if her flight wasn't called. Bani quickly runs over the other side of the airport, where her family and Riya are standing. Pia and bani grab their things, say quick farewells to everyone, and leave to board onto the plane.

As the plane takes lift off, bani watches out of the window and sees the land around her grow smaller and smaller. Pia is practically jumping up and down in excitement.

Pia: I am so happy, di! England…wow!

Bani smiles at her sister and then looks back out of the window. She grins and says , "England, ….here we come".


hope you guys like this part. 😊
Edited by indian_godess - 18 years ago

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