FF-IN THEIR OWN HEAVEN (Pt 8-pg18) - Page 11

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

arree yaar....grr88 partt ...luk at the amountssof tymess i havee opostedd....!!!!!
plzz contiuee soon..duntt end it ere..
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I don't end it here... but i was busy with the other short story for a while so i may update it this week

Rose

👏 👏 awesom parts
please do continue soon
thanx 😳

Originally posted by: SRKfever

👏 👏 awesom parts
please do continue soon
thanx 😳

thank you, by next week next part will be up

Rose

This FF I meant to conclude in next part... as the title says the heaven of their own will keep the characters in happiness or earthly lives... with its ups and downs...

next part, I wrote it many times, but cancelled... since the new turns and twists of the story affects me with some extra things...

I would rather have somthing in mind to bring out later in different titles..

I am sorry for the delays... and thanks for the support

next part is ready and will be up tonight...

love

Rose

this was so touching. first time ever i am feeling good about pia. sriously i hated this girl with bottom of my heart but now i feel better about her.

hey Rose waiting for the next part very anxiously...

Originally posted by: got2go2go

this was so touching. first time ever i am feeling good about pia. sriously i hated this girl with bottom of my heart but now i feel better about her.

thank you... i too wish to see pia a changed one

take care

Rose

Originally posted by: kripa0521

hey Rose waiting for the next part very anxiously...

thank you... next part is a concluding part as i am having something else in mind.. a new theme for FF...

love and take care

Rose

(I am changing the style of writing a bit, which is more handy for me to type fast)

Part 8

It was morning around 5 when Jai got a call from their Goa office… there is some emergency so that he has to reach Goa immediately… he called Aditya in his mobile and he came out.. they talked and arranged a chartered plain. Jai tried to call Bani but she is fast asleep, he didn't want to give her tension…. He got dressed and off to airport without disturbing her, but told Massi to tell her that he tried to wake her but she was sound sleep.

"It is danger you going there directly, Jai, let us send some of our boys there" said Aditya.

"No, it is a matter of lives, I don't want to take any chances… I will arrange the necessities and will be back in two days.." said Jai

"Two days? What we are going to tell Bani, you know her condition well Jai"

"I know, you people better not scare her by telling the whole truth, just tell her some official meetings " Jai, already upset thinking of Bani and there was that lost look in his eyes. He think it is not going to be easy for him to stay away from her. He touched his chest where she kept her hands throughout the night… he felt suddenly cold out of her warmth. He was thinking why , it is so strange… I am used to stay long away…

Aditya was thinking, he is going to be in hell there at home… if it is going to be two days…

Jai reached there office and came to know that more than 12 people are in severe condition from the attack of an unknown fever… doctors are struggling for medicines and staff… people are taking leave fearing of getting infected with the fever…

"Where are the patience now" he asked to his manager

"They are in the general hospital in an isolated ward, but sir you pls don't go there, no one goes there" manager with a clear fear in his voice

"If I didn't visit them then who will visit them, think if you are one of them what will be your mental condition.. is it easy for you to see their pain from a distant? For me not…" jai said

He called the doctor and told him he is coming… when jai reached there the patience inside were all left alone… none is around them… some of the relatives are grouped out of the ward… he discussed with the doctor and came to know that no special care has been taken… it is a government hospital… he arranged doctors from Mumbai to fly in his chartered plain with enough medicines and staff…

Doctors asked Jai to leave immediately, but he insisted on staying in Goa for a day and watch the things… all patients were supplied with food and medicines… he ushered their relatives to go and see the patients and told them it is the care they need to recover… and if you take some measure no one will get infected the disease as this fever not spread through air… it is the water which is the spreading media… the first day it was very few but when they saw Jai still not leaving the area more have come… Jai stood with the doctors and staff reviewing the whole situation… He thanked the manager to inform him in the correct time that they could save their lives…

Bani was all panicked … Though Massi told her it is official urgency she told her there is no such complicated situation in Goa that he had to leave so early so there must be something serious…. But it was all the news she saw in the TV.. she understood Jai went to save his employees… she was really scared, though she feel really proud of him… she wandered through web sites to study about the fever… he didn't even call her… he knows if he calls then she will really go upside down and he is not around her.. he send emails reassuring her that he will be there next day… for sure… just take care of her for the sake of their child and try to be calm…

But this is Bani, she didn't hear such words… she started praying like a blind believer, doing pooja somehow she didn't like to disturb him with her cries and tension… so he didn't k now how she passed the time… Massi was equally affected… but she tried to stay calm for Bani…

Jai returned to Mumbai, along with the senior consultant who went to direct the medical team there. Doctor asked jai to directly come to hospital to do the test before going home as a preventive step. He agreed. But there was a problem for them, that only the third day the test result will come… jai was in all dilemma … he called Aditya… and told him about it. He decided to stay in the hospital till the result come out…

Bani couldn't control her tears this time… so near he is but they don't allow her to see him.. none is going… she asked Aditya uncle just go and see him that he is ok… but he told it is Jai's strict instruction that no one should go and see him.. I dropped his dress there as he sent all his clothes to laundry from the hospital itself..

Bani didn't say anything, she silently went up to her room and lied down on the bed… she thought he could atleast let her hear his sound… why he doing this.. through phone what is going to spread… she just looked around… the window, the shelf… the dresser… then the side table near the bed… OMG… she thought his battery is over, the charger is here.. how it gone unnoticed… she got up and took the battery… now there is two days… she can't wait… she took it to Aditya and asked to give that to Jai… Aditya had a smile on his face… he just left

Jai was amused to see his mobile charger passed through the nurse to him… he thought she is conveying to him that he could at least call her… he took the phone from his bag, and put it on charging… then in a 10 minutes time he tried to call her… her phone is off… what the hell he was thinking… Bani knows he will call. She switched off the phone. Let him call home and talk to others… if I talk to him I will loose my control then he is alone there again he will be more upset.

Small small things she cared about him leaving Jai in such an ease at times.. he doesn't know the things are happening around him mostly… everything is coming to him…

The lab report came and he is cleared of all possibilities. He came out hoping to see Bani out to take him home. When they reached home also he thought she will be down in the door to receive him, no sign of her… he asked Massi where Bani is… Massi told him that she went to temple to do pooja and not returned. She will be back at any time. Jai was so angry that why she has to go alone… can't she take anyone with her..

"Does she ever take us with her pain..?" with wet look in her eyes…

Jai turned to go out that Massi stopped him…

"No beta, she doesn't know you are coming this morning, let it be a surprise for her. You go and get fresh… she will be here at any time now"

Jai walked to his room, had a bath.. and Tony brought tea for him… Bani came after half an hour.. she went to give Prasad to all and went to pooja room kept the things there.. she walked to kitchen and had a glass of juice.. Jai was watching everything from up… he had a smile on his face… he just went inside and lied down closing his eyes… when Bani reached room she saw he is sleeping… she hurried to him but then stopped seeing him sleeping (?)… she went to the window side and started looking out with tears in eyes.. she thought everyone know he is here but none told me… still they don't accept me as his wife… she was about to sat down there when she felt two arms wrapping her from behind. She closed her eyes.. she didn't want him to see her. But he forcibly turned her towards…

"can't give a peck on cheek to your sleeping hubby, it will not do any harm darling, he loves it" he said in her ears

"sorry, I thought not to disturb you".. she, not looking up. But he sensed it that she is crying… he raised her chin up.. she looked up into his eyes… she is so silent.. he pressed her to his chest..

"you know it was difficult for me to hear your sound, I won't be able to do what I have to do.. I know it hurts… but then it is all for our safety… our child…" he didn't complete

"it is ok, I didn't say anything… I spent 20 minutes down and no body bothered to tell me that the one I was looking for is up here … seems they don't feel it the way I am still not that important…" jai stopped her half way… he didn't think she will feel it that way…

"Banee, no they were so worried about you Banee… but I told them to give you surprise… that is why… please I am sorry" he pulled her to his chest again… she didn't tell anything… was silent again… she told him she is tired wants to lay down little time… and went back to the bed

this is going to be difficult this time, he thought… she obviously is hurt.. but not ready to show it… she removed her shawl and kept it on the dresser chair and lied down on her side back to his side. He went and locked the door, and helped himself into the bed… placed a hand over her waste… and slid to her stomach… he knows nothing other than placing his hand over to feel the baby will please her now. She didn't move. She kept her hands under her head… he could see her fingers are tightening… she is trying hard to control… he forced her to turn to his side… she still quiet… said nothing… he pressed her to his chest and closed his eyes knowing that she is not going to open up… she slept after a while… he too had a relaxed sleep after so many days… in sleep she automatically started putting her hands to his chest hair, as usual… he smiled… it struck him that she must have missed it… he too had a cold covered him when he felt her hands not there when he was away… God what kind of attachment is this…I am really getting scared… he really is sad thinking of she still in the hands of insecurity feelings about him… the words she said was enough of proof..

it was the knock on the door that Jai got up and went and opened the door. Tony is calling for lunch. He looked at Bani… left there I confusion, she is still sleeping. If I go down and eat she will feel again she is alone…

"Tony, I will call you later.. I am not hungry… and she is sleeping… let her get up .. we will have our lunch here"

"no need Tony, we are coming down" saw the sound from bed, she is sitting up and looking at the them. Tony went down. Jai came back and a confused look, was she really acting as if sleeping, just to avoid me. His face gone blank, somewhere he felt someone punched a nail down deep. She got up and silently walked to the bathroom. They went down after a while… had the lunch .. Bani talked very little… she was trying hard to be as normal as she can… Massi was closely watching both of them… Aditya told loudly all of a sudden

"Now our Jai is tasting a married man's dilemma… see how Bani put him in hold… if it was your own sister Jai, I promise you, she won't leave a single minute without that thunders and lightening all over you… you are lucky" he leaned towards Bani tell her

"Bani, isn't it enough of his punishment.. do you need my help… tell me, how can we punish him.. a dinner in farm house… isn't it the correct punishment?"

Bani smiled and looked at Jai. She said "it is ok, he tired of traveling and two days hectic job there, we will keep this punishment till the epidemic is down there in Goa"

"yeah, that is correct… then we will get time to decide what should be the punishment.. and it is we going to decide for putting Bani Mami in tension who going to punish you, Jai uncle" it was Sahil… Massi backed him… Jai looked at Bani… OMG she is little relieved… he now sure that she in no way going to say a word of complaint from her mouth… he knows no complaints or arguments will be out from her mouth… she is just swaying according to his tune…. As if she herself is not existed, only him the truth…. That leave Jai no option but felt always very free but he knows he has to be careful too…

almost two weeks are over now… the epidemics are almost under control in God… as promised they all spent 2 days in the farm house… barbeque , games, hide and seek treasures… it was really a refreshment for Bani… she walked alone around the farm… in her own world… while jai sat with his laptop to check the mails… then he has to do a long search for her… she was sitting down a banyan tree looking to the wide open landscape of fields … small hills in shadows and light… it was such a wonderful view…

Jai came and sat near her looking out there…. It was such sweet moment that they both didn't want to break the silence… but he helped her back to support on his chest…. Keeping his legs apart he helped her to sit leaning on his chest and his arms were around her… in small breeze her hair was falling on his face… he liked that smell of her hair that he hid face in that… she smiled … then he slid his hands inside her shawl to her stomach… they sat there the expecting small family… a while after… his phone ringing… Aditya is searching for them for tea… he smiled and told him they are coming… they got up.. this occasions they don't talk at all… the silence do the job… hearing to their own heart beats and checking the nature… it was always in good harmony…

It was a Friday around 11.00 in the morning… Bani was sitting in the sitting area reading the newspaper… the bell ring and Tony went and opened it. Bani looked up and the post man. Tony told there is a registered for her.. she wondered from where it will be.. who send her a post… she signed and got the packet… it seems like some hard paper… she opened it and took out… some pictures… she couldn't believe what it is in front of her eyes… Tony was walking past her when he saw she is fainting to the floor…

"Maammm…" he shouted

"Bani mam… what happened.. please open your eyes…"

hearing this Massi came out running and saw.. she told him to get water quick then the doctor…

Massi shook her face but there is no response.. she saw Bani clutching the cover and pictures… she took the things and looked at it… OMG… what am I seeing… Munna and PIa…. Hugging each other in the library… when it happened… OMG… Bani… she.. how she is going to react… hey Baghvan… she just started her life back… why you test her again… she springle some water on Bani's face and called her..

"beta"

"open your eyes, beta… it is me, Massi"

Bani opened her eyes slowly and looked around…Tony helped her to upstairs… she tried to remember things… it was that pictures… tears welled up in her eyes… how could he… how her own sister could this to her… she remember Pia's words that she will get what she wants… was she doing this when I left Walia House… was that her intentions? Mr.Walia… I can't still believe it…

She sat on the bed side… Massi too sat near her keeping a hand on her shoulder.. none spoke a word… Massi told Tony to bring a coffee for her…

"Bani beta, I think there is something wrong in this pictures, beta, don't be too upset.. look at this picture… "

Bani took the pictures… yes… jai was drunk… his eyes were closed… he is not holding her rather pia held him… kept her head on his shoulder… she thought a sharp pain passing cutting through her chest seeing that…. She closed her eyes… she took the other picture.. in that picture she held him tight on the upper arm… his head is on her shoulder…almost passed state… closed eyes… glass in hand… it seems she is supporting him who is going to fall… but the first picture …

"who took this picture..?" Massi asked

"why any one took this picture and send it to her.. is it Pia? " Massi asked again… " I think it is again Jigyasa or Ranveer's job… who else will do it..?"

Massi telephoned Jai and asked him to come home that Bani is not well… Bani lied down like a log in the mud… she didn't speak now… Massi scared the worst… again the baby… pleas God… nooooo please help her…

"Bani beta, mere liye usse maf kardo… mein haat chodti hun… yeah sub tum janne ke bad tha… wow bhee sharabhee thi… pls beta.. tum itna naraaz mat ho jao.. " Massi folds hands… but Bani didn't allow her to do that… she nodded though tears were flowing down her cheek.. they heard Jai's shouting from down… he came in hurry expecting the worse and stopped sudden seeing the situation there… he knew there is something serious…

"Massi, what happen? What is wrong? Why you both are crying..?"

Massi gave him the photographs… Jai looked into it and got two steps back as if someone hit him from front… seeing that Bani suddenly jerked from the bed… she slowly sit up and put her legs down…

"Massi, please believe me, nothing happened… I am sure.. I don't remember even she coming into my study.. Massi…please believe me.."

he stopped a minute… he was trying to remember

"It was the day I met Bani in the temple, I came and told you Massi that day, I couldn't stay without seeing her and I waited outside the temple in my friend's car, if she see my car she will recognize it, you know Tarun, then we came here after that…. I went directly to study that day without changing the dress and Tarun left after an hour… do you remember… I never gone to study in my suit Massi except that day… I always change the dress then only goes there…"

he shouted "Tony"

Massi and Bani both shocked hearing his voice… Tony came running…

"Tony, didn't I tell you not to allow any one to enter my study if I am drinking… why this girl came inside… he showed him the photo.." Tony had a shock on his face…

"Sir, that day after Tarun sir gone, she came for dinner… didn't see you… she asked for you, I told you will not have dinner and asked her to carry on… but she told me she will just check you and come… I tried to stop her but she didn't hear me… even shouted at me.. I thought you already slept sir,… but this… " he nodded his head unbelievably…

"that day who was here except Massi?"

"Ranveer sab was in his room" Tony remembered, "he asked me tea many times that day as he was doing some work in his room late night"

Jai nodded his head as if he got it… he told Tony to go and keep this to him…

"Munna, what ever it is… it is your fault… why do you want to drink that much.. didn't we live with pain? can we go to bars and drink to sleep as you do… then that girl… what was she doing with you? didn't you know you are married? Did…"

Bani stopped her… she folded her hands in front of Massi and told with tears…

"Massi, please Massi… don't you know him well… I trust him Massi, this is some kind of a cheap game … by Pia or Ranveer… I know she went out that day saying that she will get what she wanted at any cost… I only wished she will not hurt Mr.Walia any more… but she did it… I just can't believe it… she is my own sister, Massi." She broke down on Massi's shoulder… Massi looked at Jai

"suna, tumne… yeahi hai your wife… varna… " she stopped abruptly looking up.. as if God knows what will happen. Jai turned his face to hide his tears… he was on the edge with anger and shame…

He started to call Pia, but suddenly as if something she remembered stopped him…

"please don't call her now.. I think she did this long time back… now she is a changed person, we have seen it… I think it is someone else did.. I want to find it who send it here… I don't want to make it public … just leave it… "

she looked at jai. First time after he entered… "please send someone to this studio and get the CDs. SP is your friend know, without going it to the press please do something.. I know the truth.. I don't want to see you hurt.. so please do something"

Massi got up and told she will send tea for Jai… Jai told no need that it is time for lunch… she left the room leaving them two who was almost like birds wet in a rain…

He called SP and explained him the things… and told him anyway he want that CDs back before reaching it to the press… SP told him not to worry that he will take care of it…

Jai sat near Bani, her face was pale and wet with tears flowing for long time… she always keep a brave front in front of him.. he thought how can she be so positive in life… he remembered the old days in hatred and rejection… insulting her… calling her names… still she is not able to see him hurt… ..

"sweat heart, I am really sorry, please forgive me.. I never do such a thing to you.. please.."

"I know" she looked down to her hands.. still hesitate to hold on to him … but suddenly he held her tight to him and told thanks to her for supporting and believing him…

she suddenly broken out loudly loosing all hell out of her chest.. "why God is testing me like this… I didn't do anything… I am really scared … I won't be able to breathe without you… " she fell into his lap… hiding her face in her own hands… he patted her back.. tried to raise her up… he after few trials got her up.. he turned her to face him…

"Bani… this is our heaven… in this heaven you, me and our kids… no one will enter into our heaven… I promise you… never will be something there to take me away from you other than death… I promise you.. in the name of our child.." her lips were trembling… she kept her head on his chest and told him in low voice just enough to reach his ears.. as if she is talking to his heart "Jai… your Bani know you very well… I love you " he kissed her forehead and held tight to him… as if he never want to break away…

they were in their own heaven… nothing matter them as far as they knows each other… nothing bothered them until there last breathe … with all humanly pain and tensions they lived with the most satisfaction… any couple can ever achieved by their union in matrimony..

Walia Mansion is now a big Heaven… where love and understanding is the food and light in their lives… I wish it will remain as it is in my imagination with all pairs and others live in peace… I am leaving the rest of their lives into the imagination of the readers.

END.

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the last part was very touchy and so emotional😭
i am sad that you ended a wonderful fan fiction in such a short part
i hope in the future you write another fan fiction