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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi Maam

Please dont ever stop wriing... You do write very welll... I felt I was reading a page from my favourite MB.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 4
WARNING...VERY INTENSE...READ AT YOUR OWN RISK
OMG.....i hope i am not banned 😳
Shhhhh….who is this new character….read on to find out….: D OMG i didi it again...omg...lol...this one is intense again too...i just got carried away!!
OMG i am so srry if no1 likes this part....pls do leave comments!

Gentle sunlight shone down revealing all clutter that the darkness had hidden with its blanket of night, as if acknowledging all that had occurred. The room was a mess; scattered clothing lay about, thrown as if not cared where landing.

In the centre of it all lay two souls entwined in each others arms, bed sheet barely covering them, yet both completely oblivious to their chaotic surrounding… being only in deep complete content.

And then….someone moved…

A sudden movement across the room, showed him to be awake, his eyes immediately cast down to the precious jewel he held in his arms. He caressed her face with his eyes; until he himself could no longer contain the urge to touch her….to feel her shiver.
His eyes danced around her body…her bare back facing him…. and then to her face that was slightly turned towards him, his arms held her protectively under the weight of her petite body. Gently...careful not to wake her, he removed his arm from her stomach which lay entwined with hers…scared of her reaction yet to full of desire to resist his own wish ….he slowly trailed his fingers down her back for seconds, feeling her shiver… sending thrills down his own. Now completely caught in the moment…he continued caressing her back till he heard her whimper and groan…such cruel torture…;)

She felt his fingers caress her body…she still ached for him all over even in this state. Half asleep yet still conscious of what was going on she felt she could not contain herself any longer and therefore let out soft moans of annoyance yet pleasure. Her eyes opened softly and she whimpered as she felt his lips on her body…slowly moving towards hers…such cruel torture, did he enjoy killing her softly...yet all thoughts left her as his descended upon hers mumbling "good morning mrs.walia" into her mouth with a groan….

All was lost…he was killing her softly with his strong lips that every women wished to be loved from. She did not know of it…she was oblivious to all, cast under the spell which he wove just by his one touch…one kiss…not even the darkness that threatened to steal all from her... could erase such torment….such bliss;)

Not even…what seeked to create disaster for her….could. Such a mysterious shadow loomed over her presence…with a gentle S hanging on her neck…. as if softly kissing it.
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She stood in gentle wait…letting the sunlight kiss her body….waiting for news…waiting for him…needing him, her eyes shone in pure determination…as what she had set out to achieve and obtain, she would not stop till all was done.

And then someone called….."Sanjana"…broken by the voice she turned around to face the caller of her name…
"He is here…jai is here madam…"

The wind blew around her caressing her body and whispering in her ear making her tingle. "Sanjana….sanjana……"…..
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His lips roved her body…not again she groaned…but helpless by his very touch…and her reaction, she could do nothing at all…as even if he hadn't shackled her hands…he had her heart…

His voice tingled all over her, "bani….bani…. say it once….just once…I am aching to hear it just once...and then I will leave you…just once he moaned…"
Her lips parted yet they parted in anxious wait…just for his on top of hers…oh how she loved it when his lips caressed hers….sending her to somewhere god knows where and back….just by that one kiss….

He sensed her want yet driven by passion and a want too, he refused to acknowledge her need…her want….. "Just once he coaxed" gently brushing his near hers…yet never letting them touch…

Such cruel bliss… "Jai….jai" she whispered…
Deeply contented by her response he..with a satisfied grunt caressed her lips with his...kissing her long and hard…giving her, her reward…yet letting her go seconds too soon, making her yearn for him…....for more;)



Hahaha…I am so mean…...u'll find out more about sanjana later….and if you guys are curiouse to knoe wat happened in the lift...between BJ then if u want I'll tell u…;) in the next part…part 5 contains a lot of dialogues…hehehe…pls leave comments and if u want to knoe wat happened in the lift;)then pls do tell me...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53

Sorry jaan......i have to get off now....but i've saved it and will read later on!😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
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We def want to know what happened in the lift!!! And sweetu that was just such a sweet part!!! Please continue soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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fabulous part sweetu

haila sweetu do let me alteast know what happened in the lift 😆
aha yeh sanjana madam kaun hai 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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id luv to know what happend in the lift! 😉 can jai get any naughtier! ur ff is gettin hotter day by day! pleez cont asap!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great part.... ofcourse we want to know what happened in the lift.... and who is this sajana yaar, i hope she doesnt create any problems in jai n bani' life..... pls do cont soon.....



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Posted: 19 years ago
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didi see everyone wants to see the lift one 😳
didi it is very intense that is true but it is good didi don't worry about it didi you have great writting skills didi
keep it up didi
love ya lots didi,
aap ki gudia didi 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳 😳 😳 omg guys....thank u all for ur very sweet comments...but omg..i feel very bad know...cuz i think i wrote it way too intense...wow...i didnt realise hoe intense i had written it!!
but i hope u enjoyed it tho 😳 ...pls if you have any complaints do tell me!
hahha u guys all want the lift scene...what if i warn u and tell u all....that its intense...i dunno if u guys would like it...i dont even know how intense it will b!
I'll tell u guys later how i'll give it those who want it....either by pm..or post it here just depends on how i write it!!

but if you guys would like me to write anything in the lift scene do pm me and will try and fit it in!
wow....i still feel guilty about how intense i wrote it...i hope none of u were offended!!

luv ya all sweetu

all u guys r such sweethearts yaar!
p.s. thank you all for your very sweet comments
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg!!yaaaaaar sweetu such torture!!why are u torturing us.....man ur ff is something else 😳 man by reading ur ff.....i just can't stop my self.....i mean my crazy harmones 😆 😆 but it was beautifully written...very intense indeed!!!
nice job....if my mum ever finds out that i am reading diz then , mughay god hi bachai... 😆 but for ur ff....i can bare every thing...every torture 😆
love
Aragon

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