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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was beautiful!!

please do continue!! i loved it!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW!!! that was sooooo amazing !!! I love ur writing style..I wish I cud write half as good as u can!! Plz continue soon...waiting eagerly for the next part!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aawwwww sweetu didi it is great just superb didi
it is so fantastically written
just loved it didi
too good 👏
love ya lots didi keep it up,
aap ki gudia didi 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
👏 👏 awsome begining
please continue soon
thanx
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Posted: 19 years ago
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THANK YOU ALL SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much for reading my ff...i am really very greatful that yout took ur time to read my ff...and i am glad that u liked it!!
since alot of you wanted me to continue i have decided to do so...part 2 will be posted shortly...but a little warning...it is very INTENSE...i just hope i am not banned for it 😕 😳 😳 !!

luv ya all
mwah sweetu

p.s. thanks becky and mamta...for da advice...am using it.. 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WARNING...very intense...read at ur own risk..
lol...at least i think it is...i just hope i am not banned for this...srry any1 who is ofeened by anything i wrote!! an di hope that i am not banned.


Part 2

The sunlight softly hit her face making it glow brilliantly. Her eyes opened from deep sleep and she moaned in annoyance. Covered only by a single bed sheet she gasped as reality struck her and everything from the previous night came rushing back causing a furious colour to rise up. She tried shifting positions but realised that she was trapped….His arm snaked gently around her bare stomach… causing her body to tingle in realisation to his touch…his soft breath blew gently in her ear causing her extreme torture…she blushed and silently whispered
"jai"….in audible for him to hear but just for her own comfort, just wanting to needing to hear his name, recounting all that had occurred and how he had loved his name resounding of her lips. She gently trailed her fingers down his arm that surrounded her protectively…she felt a slight movement and tried to take advantage of it..wanitng to free herself off him but to no avail, he only loosened his grip just enough so that she could turn towards him. Surprised to realise that her darling husband had been awake all this time and had heard her whisper his name passionately softly, just as she had done last night, her cheeks flushed mercilessly.

He nuzzled her neck…he felt her shiver, he smiled….trailing his fingers down to her neck to her shoulder…he met her eyes and found her flushed he laughed softly…and murmured softly
" bani.." saying it only once, to give it silent affect….her reaction was priceless…obviously remembering last night…"bani….kya huwa….why are you shy all of a sudden…"
her shade deepened as she tried to shoo him off her…she attempted but failed…it led her no where in fact it led her dangerously closer to him...she could hear his heartbeat..if she left her emotions run wild….then….only she knew what would happen…and perhaps him…
"Mr.wal…mr.walia" she stuttered. amazed at how anxious he made her…" yeh…what are you doing…its morning we have to get ready….pls chodiye naa mujhe…leave me naa"
He smiled at her frail innocence…and instead of replying….he trailed his finger gently over her bare stomach….making her moan his name aimlessly…he laughed huskily in her ear
"Mrs. Walia…much better…never let my name leave your lips…otherwise I may have to remind you…how to say it" nipping her ear gently…and winking at her…

She blushes as she realises the implication if his words…she tries pushing him away and keeps murmuring " leave me….leave me naa…pls…its so early in the morning what will the hotel people think…if they don't see the famous walias down and early...eating.."….

Jai laughed out loud at her innocence and pathetic excuse, not ignoring the meaning of her words, and murmured torturing her still no doubt, making her want to moan bytrailing his fingers over her ear gently….
"Acha…I see how it is mrs. Walia…your more worried about the hotel staff then me….I see how it is…but anyway mrs.walia….I don't think that they would say anything to us…unless you tell them about the happenings of last night…which I would not mind sharing with the world"
she groaned in annoyance and at her stupidity for using such a pathetic and lame excuse…he always had a way of getting to her…she drank in his face and hers softened, her eyes stopped at his lips she gently touched them…causing him to shiver…she smiled…realising she had caught him off guard and decided to take advantage of the situation…she tried getting up….but he was faster…he caught hold of her tight as she was halfway up …causing her to fall on top of him…he turned her around and caged her…falling gently on top of her…yet breaking his fall with his strong arms… he shackled her arms above her and did what he wanted to since he had awoken hours ago…kissed her long and hard….she was left numb with feeling…she drowned in him…letting him do as he please…just giving in…

The sunlight shone on them outlining their bodies….their hair shone and they smiled in contented deep sleep.

Hours later as the sun shone blaringly at them….did she awaken…surprised at the time, she sat up covering her petite body with the sheet and looking around …..she caught sight of what she wanted…careful not to wake him, realising what would happen if she did….she blushed, slipped his shirt on…loving the feel of it against her skin and got up gently stroked his face and kissing his lips softly…and murmuring "Jai".

She walked over to the huge window which showed the brilliant exhilarating view of the city which stretched for miles leaving her breathless. The way the sun shone down upon it made her sigh at its beauty.

She gasped as two strong arms wrapped around her waist and a soft raspy voice whispered in her ear sending an electric thrill through her body
"Good morning mrs.walia…and how are you today"…he not even waiting for the answer kissed her bare neck biting it as if to chide her once again for leaving him….
She smiled and murmured "what will you have for lunch today….since we missed breakfast…"
A devilish glint came alive in his eyes and he whispered so softly that he himself wasn't sure if he had even uttered anything…. "You"

She gasped and groaned as his lips met hers with a profound furry knocking all senses out of her and leaving her numb of all feeling except one emotion, love.
He clasped her hands in his and shackled them above her once again…giving her no time to breathe… only allowing her to melt deeper into him as their kiss became stronger and more requiring…

The constant hunger that clawed inside of them since having awoken soothed as their kiss became alive...and needier…

The sun blew gentle waves of heat towards them…entrapping them in its blanket and showering them with light…light of love…

WOW…omg…i think i wrote too much..ok a little warning guys…this is very intense…wow…oopps I hope I am not banned for this…

Pls do tell what u think of it!!
And thanks becky and mamta…for the advice of dialogues…I don't think I did a very good job…but hey pls do leave comments!
Edited by sweetu144 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
woh dat was great sweetu for some time it felt like i am readin a romantic novel 👏 👏 👏 its jst great i hope u write more.....weldone very gud work done 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
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Posted: 19 years ago
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haila jaanu that was so romantic looks, meri romantic novelist 😉
please do continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19

Haila!....that was just way too good!!👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
wow sweetu that part was really hot 😳 ur really good at writin passionate scenes 👏 !! im dyin to read the next part!! i hope u will cont soon! luv ya!!
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sahar

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