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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

great cliffhanger.loved it.plz cont soon. 😊




😊 thanks.. i'm glad you liked it.... i'll continue tomorrow!

luv vaidahi
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Posted: 19 years ago
It's reali goin well and i don't want roshni to maery jai at any cost.
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Posted: 19 years ago
woww....well....read all of urss in onee go!!!!
it was brillian i must say..
but i am tryinto read soo many fanfics at a tyme that irealli cant keep up with it...!!1
loollz...but must say that ur storyy is grr888 by far !!
and all the cliff hangers mankee it moreee exciting to read !!
thnksxx
mwahhh 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

woww....well....read all of urss in onee go!!!!
it was brillian i must say..
but i am tryinto read soo many fanfics at a tyme that irealli cant keep up with it...!!1
loollz...but must say that ur storyy is grr888 by far !!
and all the cliff hangers mankee it moreee exciting to read !!
thnksxx
mwahhh 👏




😆😆😆 how sweet... thanks for taking the time out to read it.. i'm glad you enjoy it... oh and i'm also glad you like the cliff hangers.... many don't😆😆

luv vaidahi
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey.. sorry for posting after such a long time...but i've tried to make this part longer and more interesting... a lot of stuff is happening in this part so bare with me... i'm no perfect writer so forgive me 😳 just trying to get the main story line out. i've missed a lot of details.. sorry 😳

oh caution: please picture Roshini as a psycho.. thats how i want her to come across 😉

Part 21.

Roshini: Tum!

Ranvijay was standing there in shock… he had heard all of Roshini's conversation with the lawyer

Roshini (laughingly): When did you come?

Ranvijay: BUS ROSHINI! How could you do this… to your own brother.

Roshini: What are you talking about

Ranvijay: Loser was what you called me right? Well I see nothing but a loser infront of me! You betrayed me.. this was your plan? I heard everything you said to the lawyer. Through these years I have been supporting you in doing what ever you wanted to try to get Jai, and this is what you do to me

Roshini: Nothing comes between me and Jai. NO ONE matters…

Ranvijay couldn't believe what he was hearing. The one person he raised and considered his sister thought nothing of him… He stared at her and left the room before he did something he would have regretted!

Ranvijay to himself: All these years I was influenced by Roshini. She showed me a dream of success by helping her getting married to Jai and then taking over his companies. But it was all false.. I have ruined Jai's family all because of Roshini! There is no way I'm allowing Roshini to win in this battle. She will pay for what she did!

The scene shifts to the Walia house.. There is a knock on the door. And Bani approaches the door to open it. She opens the door and her heart almost stops.. she couldn't believe who she saw infront of her. She was about to close the door on the person…

Ranvijay: Please Bani.. listen… I've come to tell you the truth

Bani stared at him but somehow felt that he was telling the truth so left the door and allowed him to enter

Ranvijay: Bani…look I've been wrong.. I've caused your family a lot of pain.. but no more.. I've changed… I don't want to ruin you but what to help you to get Dhruv back

Bani was now in tears: How can I trust you! Your sister after all has put us in this situation. How do I know that this isn't another plan of yours

Ranvijay: I can understand.. but please bani all I want to do is tell you and Jai the truth… Roshini and me are not the only ones involved in this plan

At that point…. Ranveer was walking upstairs heading to his room when he saw Ranvijay and Bani talking

Bani: what do you mean?

Ranvijay: Roshini may have been the mastermind behind the plan to kidnap Dhruv but my own son-inlaw,…. your nephew and his….his mom were involved too,

Bani: Kya! Ranveer and Jigyasa auntie

Ranvijay: yes

Ranveer standing upstairs almost fell with shock when he heard Ranvijay tell Bani the truth.

Ranvijay: Bani the plan was to kidnap Dhruv and have Jai divorce you and hand over his wealth to 4 of us. Roshini wanted Jai, and the rest of us wanted Jai's money. But Roshini ….my own sister… was planning to ruin me. She was planning to get everything from Jai and throw me, Jigyasa and Ranveer out! I've realized that what I did to you and Jai was wrong. I was influenced by Roshini.. I didn't even realize that I was ruining the family where my daughter lives… Please Bani..forgive me. I know it won't be easy but I plan to help you and Jai get Dhruv back in every way!

Bani couldn't believe what she was hearing. Neither could Ranveer.

Ranveer to himself: how can Roshini betray me and ma. No way will she get away with this.

Bani: It's not my place to forgive. What you have done.. only God can take that role. All I want is my Dhruv. Thank you for telling me the truth and please do help us in getting our Dhruv back.. wait here while I get Jai

Bani now saw hope in getting Dhruv back without having to lose Jai! She ran upstairs and was going to her room when something stopped her. It was in front of Ranveer's room. Ranveer was having a conversation with someone

Ranveer: How could you do this! You will pay if you carry out with your play

Bani knew right away that Ranveer was having a conversation with Roshini

Roshini: Ranveer calm down… don't tell anyone your talking with me and meet me at the construction building… we can discuss there

Ranveer: Roshini.. you better come up with a plan where me and ma are involved and get Mamaji's money or else… I'll meet you at the construction building in 1 hour.. start thinking Roshini!

With anger he shut the phone! Roshini on the other side gave an evil face.

Bani quickly moved to the side, out of Ranveer's sight as he got ready to leave. Bani didn't know what Roshini said but knew that Ranveer would meet Roshini at the construction building. The only thing that ran in Bani's mind was to follow Ranveer in hope of getting Dhruv from Roshini

Bani ran back to Ranvijay and told him the conversation she heard between Ranveer and roshini.

Ranvijay: Roshini is not the type to change her plan..

Bani: We have to follow Ranveer

Ranvijay: what about Jai

Bani: Jai has finally gotten the strength to go to work after hearing about Dhruv's kidnapping. I don't want to disturb him.. I'll call him from the car.. we have to leave now in order to keep up with Ranveer and get Dhruv back

Ranvijay: ofcourse lets go

A stranger from behind called out!

" WAIT!"

Bani and Ranvijay turned around to find that Raashi was standing there

Bani: Raashi tum

Raashi: Mami I heard everything… I can't believe that my own husband has done this to you.. (raashi wiped her tears) I'm coming with you

Ranvijay: Beta you stay here

Raashi: Please papa. I need to come

Ranvijay and Bani looked at each other and decided to let Raashi come

Bani's car followed Ranveers car all the way to the construction building. The building was isolated from the city and not another human could be seen close by

Ranveer parked his car and headed inside and to the top floor of the building.
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Bani's car pulled in a tad later and all three of them followed Ranveer upstairs making sure they weren't seen

Ranveer reaches upstairs to find Roshini standing by herself holding papers

Ranveer: So I see that you have brought a proposal that I will be happy with

Roshini (laughing): Of course Ranveer. Now I don't know what you heard from Ranvijay but I would never stoop so low. Believe me you guys are all in on Jai's wealth after I marry him

At that point, Bani, Ranvijay and Raashi had reached the top floor and watched in on Ranveer and Roshini's conversation

Ranveer: I will believe that after I see the papers

Roshini: tsk.. tsk.. what is the rush Ranveer !

Roshini gave an evil look and pulled a gun out from behind the files and pointed it towards Ranveer

Roshini: Arre Bhanjhe to be… how could you do such thing to your mama. You know how much I love Jai and his enemy is my enemy.

Ranveer looked shocked and started praying to his god( k had to add this part as a joke 😆)

Bani, Ranvijay and Raashi looked on with shock…

All of sudden Raashi started crying.. Seeing Ranveer in that position hurt her.. After all he was her husband…

Raashi whispering: Nahi Roshini can't do this

Raashi got up and ran towards Ranveer and stood infront him

Bani whispering : Nahin Raashi!

Raashi: Roshini! !! how can you be so cruel.. You raised me as your daughter and now your willing to see me in white! You can't kill Ranveer.. you will have to go through me first

Ranveer couldn't believe what he was hearing.. He treated Raashi so horrible but now here she was defending him. How could he misunderstand her so much

Roshini: Arre Raashi tum bhi! Now I will have to kill both. Raashi you know how much I love Jai and anything… I repeat anything that comes in the way will have to be removed .. even if its you…

Roshini held the gun up and was ready to shoot

Bani couldn't see Ranveer and Raashi dying…

Roshini holds the gun: K.. Raashi you're my niece so I'll give you a count of 3 before I pull the trigger.. I can give you that much… Now you have till 3 to move or stay.. which ever you prefer.. 1….2…..



Alright… I know many will be mad for leaving another cliff hanger but I promise it's worth it!


hope you like this part 😉 &
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Posted: 19 years ago
😭 😭 very good. can't wait to read more!

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Posted: 19 years ago
That was amazing!!!

I think Bani will save them both. and get herself shot.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Amazing plz carry on soon. Can't wait. I always like ur fanfics and I read every single part. So plz carry on.
Edited by dinisha_11 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
WOW!! i am amazed!! plz do continue didi!

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Posted: 19 years ago
1 2 3...n thats it....
no i'm not angry...i'm sure its worth the wait...but yaar itna wait mat karana.....

great part.... 👏

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