Chup Chup Ke 2!! Page 36, last part - 37 - Page 18

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: lonely14

Wait are Ranveer-Rashi married in this fanfic? I am confused. I just can't wait till the next part. please don't make jai jealous and if you do have to make bani equally jealous too. Great fanfic though.

Nope hun.......Ranveer and Raashi aren't married, but in love!

As for Jai being Jealous......i guess quite a lot of people don't want to see that so i'll drop the idea😛......

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Posted: 19 years ago
WOW THIS FAN FIC IS SOOOOO COOL !!!!!!!!!!! 👏

BUT Y DIDN'T IT HAVE ANY BANI AND JAI MOMENTS IN IT
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Posted: 19 years ago
2 good nibbles i would'nt mind bani making jai jealous for some time coz he always keeps ........her 😳 she could trouble him a bit by making him jealous, n then again pataoing rutha hua husband 😛 (saiyan ji baiyan chhuda ke nahi jaana).
hamesha jai hi flirt karta hai bani ke saath it would b nice to c bani going wild 2 😉 😳
hope nibbles u r not gonna me.
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Posted: 19 years ago

Great idea coolkidpoo (I love your username!😆)......I'll see how i can bring it in to the storyline!😉

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Posted: 19 years ago

Jai walked towards Bani and Ayush who were deep in conversation…he stood to the side for a few minutes and surveyed Bani who seemed to be totally oblivious to his presence…the man didn't matter much to him, but it was the fact that his wife was completely ignoring him which made Jai scowl…well he'd get payback for that!

In a few quick strides he covered the distance between him and Bani and silently placed his arm around her waist…she turned around alarmed, but breathed a sigh of relief as she realised who it was…

B: Oh….Jai!…meet Ayush…we studied together in Mt. Abu and our families know each other for quite a while…Ayush this is…

A: Jai Walia…everybody knows you sir…

Jai gave a small smile and shook hands with an enthusiastic Ayush who seemed very pleased to meet him…

J: Uhh Bani…Mausi was looking for you!

B: Mausi…where?!

J: She's waiting for you in the spare guest room downstairs…

Bani hesitated…she had met Ayush after such a long time and would rather talk to him than go rushing round the house trying to complete the last minute chores…but then again it was her sisters wedding…

Excusing herself from the two men, she hurried off towards the spare guest room on the other side of the hall…

*****

Bani knocked and opened the door but was surprised to see that no-one was inside…but Jai had said she was here!…confused she turned round and spotted Tony who was making his way towards the staircase, a large basket of sweets in his hand…

B: Tony!

He promptly turned around…

T: Yes Madam…

B: Do you know where Mausi is?!

T: She's upstairs getting ready…anything else Madam?!

Bani shook her head leaving him to hurry off to wherever the sweets where meant to go…Mausi was getting ready….so why had Jai told her that…

But before she could come to a conclusion as to why he had lied to her, Bani felt herself being pushed in to the guest room…when she turned round she saw that Jai was standing in front of her…

B: Jai…what…?!

She stopped when she saw him grinning down at her…his arms on either side of her body trapped her against the wall…besides, the door was to far off for her to get out…

B: What are you doing Jai?!

J: I should be asking you the same question!…what are you doing leaving your husband to go flirt with your friend?!

B: What?!

She punched him lightly on his chest while he laughed and pulled her closer by her waist…as his hands sought her waist he rested his forehead against hers…

B: Ayush's just a friend…

J: I know…

She leaned back and looked back at him, a mischievous glint in her eyes…

B: How can you be so sure I'm telling the truth?!

J: I just know Bani…

Bani shivered as he whispered huskily in her ear before planting a kiss on her neck…as he nuzzled her shoulder, Bani marvelled at how he could change the mood in a second, and send her heart racing with just one kiss…

Her breathing became more ragged as his kisses became more desperate, her heart beating leaving her struggling for breath…she clung to his arm as he traced the neck of her blouse with his lips, each touch of his leaving a fath of fire across her shivering body…she took a sharp intake of breath as his hands travelled up her bare back…

B: Jai…

He straightened himself and planted kisses along her neck before whispering hoarsely in her ear…

J: Don't try to stop me Bani…

B: I wasn't going to…

And she ran her fingers through his dark hair before bringing his face down on hers, blood pounding in her ears as she felt the familiar touch of his lips on hers…the buzz of the wedding died away as she felt the top of her blouse slide down her shoulders…

Next part will hopefully be updated in two hours!😛

Edited by nibbles - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 👏 brilliant brilliant brilliant
😳 awww you made me blush
please continue soon
thanx
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww...nibbles!!! i agree with srkfever, you've made me blush 😳 😳 😳 awesome update 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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MY JAANUU ...WOW AMAZING PART!
...hahha i was so hoping u'd write an intense part yaar! 😳 😳 dekho na...thumari jaan kithni badmash hai 😆 😆 😆 !
naah..i just love the way you describe it...seriouslly yaar like i always tell you, you describe the intense scenes so well!!
yaar i so need to take writing tips from you...do pm them to me 😆 😆 😉 !
Can't wait till ur update!!

luv ya
mwah
sweetu 😛
Edited by sweetu144 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
it was tooo hot
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Posted: 19 years ago
2 good nibbles u really may b bush sweetheart, i go crazy reading u r fanfics, after all those unhappy n sad episodes ok kasamh se u r fanfics bring cheer n joy on my face. 😳
i think u could start a romantic kasamh se serial with bani n jai 😆 sure ektaz Gonna get a heart attack.
U SIMPLY ROCK, NIBBLES-THE UNBEATABLE 😳
luv ya lots 😊
a huge round of applause to rocking nibbles 👏

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