~*What a Fab Performance by Ram-Part II*~ - Page 140

Originally posted by: Piscean

Accha Adi main dekh rahi hoon aaj kal tum mere review padne se pehle ya padkar bhaag jaati ho....abhi review ka review chhod acknowledgement bhi nahi milta 😛 Agar aise hi chalta raha toh main review karna chhod hi doongi....dekh lena tu! 😛
AD, Soap, MM, Pinky....kahan gaye sab ke sab? 😛

Actually PI mujhe lagta hai ke Adi ke fans jo itne bhad gaye hain..so she must be getting slammed with PM wala reviews so why would be care about our do kodi ka review😛

Originally posted by: Piscean

😆Mujhe pata hai AD....tum mera review hamesha padti ho! 🤗

Same here PI always read your review it makes me laugh like anything and I am always astonshed how the thought match

Aditee you are very fast girl. Kuch ghanto ke liye bd se gayab hoke ek first class part post bhi kar diya.

If I say anything I will just be repeating myself. Read all the reviews and I feel the same way - this part was light and refreshing - no apparent hostility between the two - so wondering what's going to happen next. Thanks for bringing us out of the morbidity of the reel KS and the JB situation there.

umm guysssssssss we are on page 150 does this mean we have to start a new thread???????

Yeah Simi and Pinky....almost all of us thought the same thing about this part of Adi's FF! It's nice to have some light moments esp with the roller coaster ride that Kekta is putting us through! 😛

Hi all!

Looks like you guys have been super duper busy in the last few hours! How goes?

WOAH.. Aditee.. another awesome part!?

LOVED THE LAST LINE!!! The best freaking line of the whole part! And AD.. your add-in to the phrase, made it so JW! He owned the phrase by the end of the re-write. It wreaked of JW!

Like Pi said.. your little descriptions of JW and Bani are what make the FF so exciting. And whats nice is that you don't weave those descriptions in only as the third person author. Rather, when you do it through JW and Bani's eyes.. you show how much they observe about one another. Adds a real touch of...well, realism to the characters. It highlights the sense of "knowing," one another that they share (Also mentioned by Pi). Its great! There's an intimacy, as you described-- wifey/hubby stuff.. that goes beyond just the physical. The way a love story should be. And for all intents and purposes.. this is a love story! A hot one for sure.. but a love story nonetheless!

I loved it...as if I couldn't. And as Pi & AD said... if you think or say you can't write...she'll send her chela's and I'll take the belan and smack you upside the head!

It was beautiful!!!....

Thanks for weaving yet another great one....

Soap

Originally posted by: simran1285

umm guysssssssss we are on page 150 does this mean we have to start a new thread???????

I think soon, yes.

alryt chicas me off to JW land catch you all tomorrow live from work don't party too hard..I guess if this thread is closed will see you in the next one

JAI RAM ji ki

love

Bye Simi....you'll know if we do shift!

OK I am back, yaar shaadi shuda logon ki life bahut boring hoti hai. I had gone to get gas, return library books and go to walmart 😭 🤢 😭