~*What a Fab Performance by Ram-Part II*~ - Page 139

Originally posted by: aditee

AND YOU APOLOGISED FOR THIS???😡 No wonder AD tumhe hamesha daanti hai! 😛 You give us our daily fix Adi....uske liye toh sau joote maaf! 😉

J: Baneee!

The JW vocal caress! 😳

J sits on the bed, props a pillow up to lean back, kicks his shoes and puts his feet up crossed at the ankles, arms behind his head quietly watches her unpack, she is aware of his gaze following her all around the room..

I can so see him like this too! 😳 Who wouldn't be conscious of that hungry gaze! 😳

B obvioulsy embarrassed by her response to him again..... flushes.

There's nothing you can do B to escape that response! 😉 He's gonna evoke it each time....it is THE JW we're talking about! 😉

B(cant take his kind tone, feels a lump forming in her throat) Its OK Mr Walia, I am your employee, so I have to go where u ask me to go...... (polite and impersonal)

Finally! kuch toh akal baaki hai is ladki mein! 😛

JW: Dont !!!! Dont start again Baneee............... Tum apne zindagi mein itna kisi se nahi ladi hogi itna mujh se ladti ho (referring to her impersonal remark). I am trying to be patient here.

TRYING being the key word 😉 I love how she gets to him and ONLY she can get to him! 😳 He won't let anyone else toy with his patience but Bani can get away with anything.....of course only coz he knows how to make her pay! 😉

JW(runs his fingers thru his hair, closes his eyes and exhales audibly) You just drive me INSANE!!!

No JW YOU DRIVE ME INSANE! 😳 Adi THANKS THANKS THANKS....maine dekha....and I'm taking EVERY ONE of those fingers through his hair as a dedication to myself! 😃😳
But wow! He's very communicative these days....says EVERYTHING that's on his mind! 😉

B's face pales when he says that, she is fearing he will yell if she says she doesnt want to fly......... but he sees that............

How observant of him! 😳

JW: Baneee I knwo you are scared of flying. I know............. he pauses)

That concern was just tooooooo YUMMY! 😳 Adi I LOVE this side of him! 😉

(swears under his breath)
JW: Oh! I am sorry!

AD...for you? 😉

B is just looking at him, his passionate enthusiastic outpouring, its like he is a 10 year old and has discovered a new game and wants to play right now, his eyes sparkle, he speaks rushed.............. she is just mesmerized........

I would be too! 😳 Waise great work on the details Adi! 👏 Like Soap says it's those details that make you so different from the other FF writers! LOVED the comparison of JW to a kid with a new game....how apt! 👏

JW: leans back on the bed, looks at the bedside table, finds her bangles from last nite or nite before, takes em in hsi hands and rotates them oblivious of what is happening to her at the sight of him doing that.

It's funny how it's all the little things that drives her insane....even though she has THE MAN himself in front of her. The romance in their relationship can be sensed at every step! 😉

B:Kya main train mein ja sakti hoon (quietly)

What a cutie! 😊 This is why you need JW by your side at all times Bani...to protect you from the big bad world! 😛

JW(looks at here eyes, hers are on her bangles in his index finger, he looks back at it and the at her) Banee I am sorry I know u hate flying, I wish I cud have gone, main nahi ja sakat kal, hum Bhuvaneshwar mein ek property assess kar rahe hain I am trying to get those people here tomm...
B is amazed as to how many balls he can juggle at the same time...........

The man is a walking wonder Bani...one of a kind.....the sooner you realise this the better for you! 😉

She has a what are u made of anyway kind of look on her face........
He understands that from her eyes, these two dont need words anyway

How true Adi....they really don't need words....communication in its purest form! 😊😊

JW: (sheepishly, embarrassed, running his fingers thru hsi hair again) 😳

I know I need to slow down, Banee but i promise in the next few months when all thsi si over, main slow down karoonga I promise you, then we wont be so goddamn busy like this. We can actually spend time together.......... (says all in one breath again)

It's all WE WE WE for him! Bani seekh apne pati se! 😳 Aadmi hokar itna concerned hai....tu kis mitti se bani hai! 😛 Adi...you've made him open his heart out entirely today! I like this JW too! You did it hun! You've achieved that fine balance between sensitivity and masculinity! 👏👏

She blushes beetroot red when she hears that, ist like he is assuming they will be together for ever and he is being a typical husband........

Bani, You need to listen this attentively more often (it's called ACTIVE listening! 😛) He says a lot of things that would surprise you! 😛

B thinks why is he using the word "we" all the time and then tells herself "Oh I am his employee, its his company so its that WE"!

Ok so now that we got a lesson in active listening the next step is correct interpretation of what you have just heard! 😛 We'll save that for another day....I'm sure you brain's turned into mush already! 😛

B(upset that he wont even miss her, her eyes show it) No! Thanks! 😭

And you say that you are willing to give him up! 😛

JW realizes it again........... runs his fingers thru his hair again for the 4th time in that many minutes:-) 😳 (Adi you've made me sooo happy today! 😃) Damn!! Baneeee, I meant tum shopping kar lo if u like, mujhe laga tum mujhse door jaane ke liye desparate hogi (winks) 😉

Quick thinking JW! 😉 Waise don't worry aaj you're on a roll with this sensitivity vibe so don't worry nothing will be taken wrong! 😉

Puts her bangles back on the bed side tabel in a tinkling clutter, gets up, touches her shoulders, turns her around She protests and fights to get out of hsi grip, he wont have any of that, holds her with his arms around her waist, his bare arms cause the most exquisite friction on her midriff at the back, 😳 she finds herself breathing thru her mouth her hands forming a protective shield between her and him on his chest..................
Just rocks on the same spot holding her like that..........
JW(husky, kissing her with his eyes........) I will miss you. Will you miss me? (blunt direct, straight, upfront)

To the point, blunt....as AD says signature JW style! 😉

Starts to nuzzle her face neck and and ears and hair...... she just stands there like a life size water balloon quivering and moaning trying to fight her responses....
JW: Have I told you, your hair is the softest and smells the best? (teasing)

And what exactly do you use Bani...I'm switching to that! 😳

B: Haan aapko to pata hoga (accusing)
JW(chuckles) A little......
B:(takes her fingers to his hair, laces it in, caresses his scalp, making him groan) Yours is OK......... 😉

That lucky woman! The hair was exclusively my turf till now! 😭 😛

JW looks at her like "U didnt mean that!" her eyes respond with "ofcourse I did!"
He brings her closer now that her hands are around his neck...........
JW: Baneee lets skip dinner (in her ear, capturing her pearl studbetween his lips) 😳
B: NO!
JW: OK how about "Jai"?
B buries her face in his open V and contemplates..........
JW:(thickly, almost violently) U are going away for God knows how long............. Baneee, give a man some oxygen will ya?
B:Hmmm Ummmm....... Jai (mouth dry, breathless) Jai Jai (all into his V of the tee) 😳 😳 😳
J(laces his fingers thru her hair drawing her face up) God! I love the way you say my name, no wonder u dont say it in public, it wud be obscene!!! (brings his lips down on hers with a possessiveness that stunned her each time) 😳 😳 😳

I LOVED this punch Adi!!! What a thing to say JW! 😳 We thought he was the only one who could caress with his voice but I guess you find out new things everyday! 😉 Never will that name be the same for me again! 😳

I swear Adi if you tell me one more time that you are not capable of this I will send my chelas from Mumbai to your home! 😛 Don't you dare doubt our fix-provider's writing skills! 😛

Originally posted by: armaandeewani

This is like a modified version of Bani's imagination...and I think like I already said far too many times...the husbandly-wifey aspect of this was very nice...very real. As for 'Jai'...trust me Aditee I am still hearing 'Mr. Walia' 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: aditee

PART 20

Adi I wrote a word by word review and just when I hit post reply I lost connecting to the internet

J sits on the bed, props a pillow up to lean back, kicks his shoes and puts his feet up crossed at the ankles, arms behind his head quietly watches her unpack, Oh gosh I can just imagine him sitting with arms behind his head muscles popping out..haila kya imagine hai..Adi thanks for the details..I have never seen JW sit like that in your FF..it so casual

she is aware of his gaze following her all around the room..

Yes Bani we know he has eyes only for you
JShe gets the stool by the dresser and pulls it closer to the ebd, he is watching her do that, doesnt protest or demand she sit on the bed..

aagayi na pati ke charno mein😆 baith beti yahin pe tera swarg hai

J Baneee, if this was not urgent, phir main kabhi nahi kehta tumhe, I know how much you love your sisters........

he is soo sweet to show concern and be so understanding even though her sister is a selfish, greedy pig
Walia, I am your employee, so I have to go where u ask me to go...... (polite and impersonal)

what kind employee is she..she gets to sleep with the boss😆 she is an employee with benefits😆
JW: Dont !!!! Dont start again Baneee............... Tum apne zindagi mein itna kisi se nahi ladi hogi itna mujh se ladti ho (referring to her impersonal remark). I am trying to be patient here.

I can't imagine JW as patient..I like the impatient husky JW

JW(runs his fingers thru his hair, closes his eyes and exhales audibly) first time You just drive me INSANE!!!

and you drive me insane JW
JW:(calmly) Kal subah ke tkts ke liye bola hai Ms Singh will call me, shud not be later than a 11.30 flight. Jet does not fly there, Air Deccan ya Spice mil jaayega

wow Adi you have the names of the airlines and everything..so realistic love it

JW: Baneee I knwo you are scared of flying. I know............. he pauses)

how caring he is awww

but we have to get the papaers ready to submit with the WB govt.... surrender deed transfer deed,
power of attorney, agreement for sale etc Mr A ne tayyar kar liya hai, kuch tax forms process karwaane hain. I dont know if it can be done... Mr A already aaj wahan hain.
WB govt assembly by elections hain next week NO GOVT machinery will function. Yeh kaam sirf Calcutta mein ho sakta hai, after u come back I will take it all to Delhi and
get the bureaucratic approvals

Details Details Adi this really proves that you do your HW with a lot of research sabash meri bachi👏

B is just looking at him, his passionate enthusiastic outpouring, its like he is a 10 year old and has discovered a new game and wants to play right now, his eyes sparkle,

how cute mera nunna munna chotta motta bacha😛

JW: leans back on the bed, looks at the bedside table, finds her bangles from last nite or nite before, takes em in hsi hands and rotates them oblivious of what is happening

Adi I loved the Bangle idea soo sweet

B:Kya main train mein ja sakti hoon (quietly)

JW ki biwi aur train se? Middle class mentality kabhi nahi sudhar sakti😆
JW(looks at here eyes, hers are on her bangles in his index finger, he looks back at it and the at her) Banee I am sorry I know u hate flying, I wish I cud have gone, main
nahi ja sakat kal, hum Bhuvaneshwar mein ek property assess kar rahe hain I am trying to get those people here tomm...

Aadmi hai ya machine😕 but I love this man.. so in contol, so sweet loving, passionate, smart, sharp and intellectual all at the same time..now that is what I call rare
B is amazed as to how many balls he can juggle at the same time...........

Bani dea you have to be the hardest ball he's had to juggle with..but must say that brings out the best in him...

She has a what are u made of anyway kind of look on her face........
He understands that from her eyes, these two dont need words anyway

ofcorse already a proven fact..but you know this reminds me of the show and when JW talks to Bani on the phone and says to sahil "uski khamoshi blah blah" Adi tu Mai se ideas kabse chori karne lagi re..hum sab mar gaye hain re..waise koi baat nahi I know mai can cook up something good in that head of hers sometime😆
JW: (sheepishly, embarrassed, running his fingers thru hsi hair again)2nd time I know I need to slow down, Banee but i promise in the next few months when all thsi si over, main slow down karoonga I promise you, then we wont be so goddamn busy like this. We can actually spend time together.......... (says all in one breath again)

Haila how romantic...awwww he so wants a normal life and wants to be a normal hubby, just like the show wala JW he too wants a normal life with normal wife but what does he get nothing but Dokha not just from wife but also from Saali , sis, nephew and now FRIEND..bechara I know getting off topic here sorry letting my emotions run to far..wapas aajao re..I really feel bad for both of them..FF wala JW because uski zindagi mein main nahi hoon na, bechara has no idea what he is missing😆
She blushes beetroot red when she hears that, ist like he is assuming they will be together for ever and he is being a typical husband........

Beetroot lol I thought you were gonna say scarlett..and ofcorse you're gonna be together bani 😉
The room is quiet, except for the harsh sound of JW's breathing and her thrundering heart................

dhak dhak karne laga. ho mara jiyara darne laga😆
B thinks why is he using the word "we" all the time and then tells herself "Oh I am his employee, its his company so its that WE"!

yeh kya employee employee laga rakha hai isne..Adi I want her job title and job details..I want to swtich jobs with her na😉
JW: If u want tum Calcutta ruk jao aur shopping kar lo after u get the approvals, take time off a week twow eeks I dont care........

yea yea Mr. walia we know how much you don't care
B(upset that he wont even miss her, her eyes show it) No! Thanks! 😭

ab aayi na line pe yeh kya emplyee employee ka jaap laga rakha tha..now yeh kaisa employee hai jo apne boss ko miss karta hai
JW realizes it again........... runs his fingers thru his hair again for the 4th time in that many minutes:-) Hmm I counted three..I must have missed one😕

Damn!! Baneeee, I meant tum shopping kar lo if u like, mujhe laga tum mujhse door jaane ke liye desparate hogi (winks) 😉

kitna chalak hai..wah mere bache wah
B almost in tears, doesnt wnat to be amused, gets up and turns away toward the dresser, wipes an errant tear drop, he sees it in the reflection.........

yeh lo ab ro rahi hai..now where is your employee mantra mrs. Bani Walia😉
Puts her bangles back on the bed side tabel in a tinkling clutter, gets up, touches her shoulders, turns her around
She protests and fights to get out of hsi grip, he wont have any of that, holds her with his arms around her waist, his bare arms cause the most exquisite friction on her midriff at the back, she finds herself breathing thru her mouth her hands forming a protective shield between her and him on his chest..................

kya baat hai..loved the chemistry and details as usual
JW(husky, kissing her with his eyes........)

pehlo toh aakhien sirf baatein karti thi ab kisses bhi karne lagi..what a man..oh I how I pray that my JW has eyes like his😳

I will miss you. Will you miss me? (blunt direct, straight, upfront)

JW Style love it he's so manly enough to say it unlike her who chants employee all day
Starts to nuzzle her face neck and and ears and hair...... she just stands there like a life size water balloon quivering and moaning trying to fight her responses....

water baloon what an analogy adi..😆 too funny now everytime I look at one I'll have to laugh..kuch aur nahi soch sakti thi yaar
JW: Have I told you, your hair is the softest and smells the best? (teasing) yeh hai Dabar Aamla Tel ka kamal
B:(takes her fingers to his hair, laces it in, caresses his scalp, making him groan) Yours is OK......... 😉

is ok 😆 haye bechara such a tease

JW: Baneee lets skip dinner (in her ear, capturing her pearl studbetween his lips) 😳

who says they'll be skipping dinner they have each other na😉
B: NO!

such a spoilsport
JW: OK how about "Jai"?

haila JAIIIIIIIII
B buries her face in his open V and contemplates..........
JW:(thickly, almost violently) U are going away for God knows how long............. Baneee, give a man some oxygen will ya?

I know bani stop tormenting the poor guy
B:Hmmm Ummmm....... Jai (mouth dry, breathless) Jai Jai (all into his V of the tee) 😳 😳 😳 awwwww soo cute
J(laces his fingers thru her hair drawing her face up) God! I love the way you say my name, no wonder u dont say it in public, it wud be bloody obscene!!! Agreed! I read that you edited it and added bloody😆

(brings his lips down on hers with a possessiveness that stunned her each time) 😳 😳 😳

he stuns me too...Adi I love this part this is one of my faves(though I love all) but this is one is soo different..it's a typical hubby and wife part, they are not at each others throats or extremely passionate like the other parts..It's so light and refereshing..they act like a hubby and wife haivng a normal farewell talk..it's soo sweet..awsome yaar can't wait for the next one..it would be nice if he surprises her and joins the trip.😳

Originally posted by: Piscean

I have ot agree with AD on this Adi....I loved the husbandly aura in this part! It was so beautiful....and very apt as well. They've been living together for a week or so now.....under all the raw passion lies some level of comfort with each other that although not always openly said it does creep out in the little actions. And this part just proved how comfortable they are with each other even with all the tension between them. LOVED IT! 😃

😆 oh gosh just posted my review and read this after posting..nice to see you all felt the same way..it was soo light and had a typical hubby and wife type feeling

Originally posted by: armaandeewani

PI no accusing me---I already did...

Originally posted by: armaandeewani

Maine tera review paada...I know u were talking to Aditee but I thought I'd redeem myself while I could...