~*What a Fab Performance by Ram-Part II*~ - Page 138

Created

Last reply

Replies

2.6k

Views

81.3k

Users

43

Likes

1

Frequent Posters

nsb416 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
i dont have the capability to write reviews like Pi soap sim etc but i try. 😊
nsb416 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
just read part 19, after 20. i missed 19 first. sorry...19 was short but appropriate . Bani should have yelled at JW more....make him angrier.
nsb416 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
which part of India are you from Aditee?
armaandeewani thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

PART 20

J: Baneee!

The extra-emphasis on the 'ee'...essential.

J sits on the bed, props a pillow up to lean back, kicks his shoes and puts his feet up crossed at the ankles, arms behind his head quietly watches her unpack

Signature JW

she is

B(cant take his kind tone, feels a lump forming in her throat) Its OK Mr Walia, I am your employee, so I have to go where u ask me to go...... (polite and impersonal)

And wat went down in the car was wat??? Overtime??? Or his evaluation to determine ur yearly bonus???

JW(runs his fingers thru his hair, closes his eyes and exhales audibly) You just drive me INSANE!!!

Again signature JW...


(swears under his breath)
JW: Oh! I am sorry!
B is used to his swearing so she lets it pass with just an opening and closing of her eyes....... like she always does............

Love it Aditee...love it.

he has promised to get it all done in one trip of yours.. I wnat you to do this on behalf of me Banee (coaxing)

So little said and yet says SO much...

She has a what are u made of anyway kind of look on her face........

Trust me it's a one-of-a-kind sample...even khuda had to step back for a moment and take a deep breath after making this one...and I also like the bit that he said 'hum' in terms of their business...it's so much more then a 'mein'....

JW: (sheepishly, embarrassed, running his fingers thru hsi hair again) I know I need to slow down, Banee but i promise in the next few months when all thsi si over, main slow down karoonga I promise you, then we wont be so goddamn busy like this. We can actually spend time together.......... (says all in one breath again)

I like this side of JW that is coming out for the first time...it is very husbandly...it says so much...it is a civil moment between the two and very normal...and so nice to see...

JW: If u want tum Calcutta ruk jao aur shopping kar lo after u get the approvals, take time off a week twow eeks I dont care........

Buy a green sari!!! JW wat if Tarun flew up there to spend time w/her???

JW(husky, kissing her with his eyes........) I will miss you. Will you miss me? (blunt direct, straight, upfront)

So husbandly...and so nice for a change...again a side of JW one would've never imagined...

JW: Have I told you, your hair is the softest and smells the best? (teasing)

Herbal Essences? OMG the mango one is SO good.

JW looks at her like "U didnt mean that!" her eyes respond with "ofcourse I did!"
JW: Baneee lets skip dinner (in her ear, capturing her pearl studbetween his lips) 😳
B: NO!
JW: OK how about "Jai"?
B buries her face in his open V and contemplates..........
JW:(thickly, almost violently) U are going away for God knows how long............. Baneee, give a man some oxygen will ya?
B:Hmmm Ummmm....... Jai (mouth dry, breathless) Jai Jai (all into his V of the tee) 😳 😳 😳
J(laces his fingers thru her hair drawing her face up) God! I love the way you say my name, no wonder u dont say it in public, it wud be obscene!!! (brings his lips down on hers with a possessiveness that stunned her each time) 😳 😳 😳

This is like a modified version of Bani's imagination...and I think like I already said far too many times...the husbandly-wifey aspect of this was very nice...very real. As for 'Jai'...trust me Aditee I am still hearing 'Mr. Walia' 😉😉😉

armaandeewani thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
Btw the Herbal Essences bottles have some comment abt how back in the days the fruit combos were forbidden to be used by young girls because they served as aphrodisiacs.

JW...I can imagine him using American Crew...very his style.
Edited by armaandeewani - 19 years ago
nsb416 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: armaandeewani

Btw the Herbal Essences bottles have some comment abt how back in the days the fruit combos were forbidden to be used by young girls because they served as aphrodisiacs.

JW...I can imagine him using American Crew...very his style.

really? i never knew tht one. 😊 no wonder they make those scandalous ads.

aditee thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks AD U are funny, great review
armaandeewani thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
aditee thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 19 years ago
OMG!! OK done AD i JUST CHANGED IT
armaandeewani thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

OMG!! OK done AD i JUST CHANGED IT



Gracias 😛

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".