Shayad Yahi To Pyar Hai-Final Chptr pg151 - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
nice yaar
very nice

jaha par pyar ho waha takraar hoti hai
jaha par iqraar ho whao par naraazgi hoti hai
jaha dard ho waha aasu toh bheti hai
aur jaha par dildar woh shikayad hoti hai

do continue soon 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
😭 😭 😭 Gr8!Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43

Ok guys here goes, part 4, as always keep me posted, i really appreciate your feedback!! 😊

PART 4

She chokes back her sobs and walks from the room as Jai turns, tears falling down his face, his hand outstretched to stop her….. "Bani…" he whispers, as the door closes between them and the song plays in the back ground from Kalyug "Judaa ho ke bhi, tu mujhme kahi baaki hai…. Palko me banke aasu, tu chali aati hai……"

Jai, his heart heavy as stone, clutching the mangalsutra, collapses on the sofa, tears falling but failing to quench the fire in his heart. He had lost her, she was gone…….

The sun shone through his bedroom window. He had fallen asleep clutching her aakhri nishaani.

Then suddenly he hears her voice!!! "Mr Walia!! Mr Walia!! Uthiye na, aapko der hojayegi. He sees her smiling in front of him, dressed in a simple sari, towelling her wet hair dry.

B: "Mr Walia 8 baj chuke hai!!! Maine nahaaliya hai aap bhi ready ho ke neeche naashta ke liye aajaye!!"

He blinks and she is getting ready for Anu's sangeet, the black sari hugging her shapely figure perfectly, her black silky hair tied high on her head, with soft wisps kissing her neck… he moves forward to tie the dori of her blouse….

Suddenly it is night… he sees her standing by the window dressed as she was at Anu's engagement, the night they……

But this time there are no tears falling down her face. This time she turns and smiles, strokes his cheek with her soft fingers and says "Kahan the Mr Walia? Mein kabse aapka intezaar kar rahi hu…"

His heart leaps as he feels her silky skin beneath his shaking touch. He bends forward to kiss her, his hands run up her back and his lips meet hers. He unties the dori of her blouse and whispers into her ear… "Bani…. Mujhe kabhi chhod ke mat jaana, me jee nahin paoonga……"

She looks into his intense eyes and whispers, "Meri duniya aap hi se shuru, aap hi pe khatam. Aap ko chod ke mein kaunsa zinda rahoongi?......"

Their song plays in the background as their lips meet again. They kiss, full of desire… needing each other…..unable to think of anything but their own small world in which there was no pain, no sadness, no separation, just the warmth of their love for each other….

The window banged shut and they jumped apart. "Mr Walia…..?? Mr Walia…..!!" she called out. He could see her backing away from him, tears falling down her face, he called her name, trying to stop her but she kept moving further away…..

"BANI!!!!"he shouted, sitting up all of a sudden, his hand outstretched as he tried to stop her, before realising it was just a dream. It was a few seconds before he figured out why his heart felt so heavy, and why that dream had shaken him up so much. She had gone…. She had left him…. And he didn't have it in him to go and find her and bring her back.

He looked around the room, it felt so empty now. He thought back to when her simple smile lit up everything around her. How when she walked into a room time seemed to stand still, the sun shone brighter and his heart felt light and carefree. He admitted to himself what he hadn't understood before – or maybe what he had been too afraid to accept. He was completely and utterly in love with her. Bani – his reason for being.

And now….. she was gone.

He was staring at the beautiful picture of her on his side drawer when he heard a loud knock at the door.

Adi: Jai, Jai darvaaza kholo Jai. Abhi issi waqt darvaaza kholo!!! JAI!!!!

Jai had no intention of speaking to anyone and tried to drown Adi out but to no avail. Eventually he stood up and went to open the door. Adi stood at the door looking terrified and all of a sudden Jai felt his heart drop even lower guessing there was something wrong…….

J: Kya hua Adi, tum itne ghabraye hue se kyu lagrahe ho?? Sab theek to hai na?

A: Jai…. Jai neeche…. Vo neeche Police……

J: WHAT?!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
yaar aisi jhaga pause karna jaruri tha kya???? newayzz plzz cont... bring back Bani & Jai 2gether.........

btw its really nice 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
sigh.. POLICE?!?!?! oh man.. cont soon.. can't wait fo the next part.. that was gr8 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
👏
poor jai 😭
i hope nothing happened to bani, i hope she wasn't in an accident but i have a feeling she was in an accident 😭
plz bring back jai n bani together 😭
keep it up 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
plz continuee soon
very nicely written ff
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
plz continuee soon
very nicely written ff
jeenal20 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
plz continuee soon
very nicely written ff
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
why did u stop..... please continue sooooooon
POLICE 😕

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