Shayad Yahi To Pyar Hai-Final Chptr pg151 - Page 102

hey cordelia,honey u r a superb writer 👏 .You have covered all the emotions delicately and very efficiently. I started reading your FF today and could not stop before i finished till the end....i cant believe i read 151 pages in one go.All credit goes to u 👏

Good job welld one. enjoyed it immensely.kudos to you. 👏

Originally posted by: bismazaman2000

i have only one thing to say WOW!.....amzing...the ending was sooo perfect...its cudn't have been better...... 👏

thanks hun, i'm glad you weren't disappointed! 😃

Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr8 end
cool
haan

thanks sweetie, you're a girl of few words 😉 but i have noticed your posts after every single part, thanks for taking the time to read it! 😃

OMG Cordy.....FABULOUS PART...ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

This was one of my favorite parts....you ended the FF really well! A beautiful ending to an amazing start!👏 Though I'm sad it ended...yet looking forward to the next FF of yours!

Originally posted by: Cordelia

After so long… so long… everything in his life was perfect. His friends, his family, everyone was together. Parivaar badhe, rishton ke beech dooriya mitti… aur is sab ki vajah – Mrs Bani Jai Walia.

Through the good times, the bad, the highs and the lows, they had stayed together, each problem strengthening their relationship. He couldn't remember what his life had been like before he met her… and he didn't want to! He would never have imagined in his wildest dreams that the the girl who had come to ask him for a place to stay with her sisters so many years ago would become the centre of his universe.

All those times he had scorned the idea of love… but then, this relationship was much more than love – trust, apnaapan, dependence, his conscience, his soul, his biggest supporter and his harshest critic – Bani was all of these. She wasn't just his wife… she was his humsafar in every way – in the truest sense of the word.

Ek majboori se bana rishta ban gaya jeevan ka sabse mazboot sahaara – shayad yahi toh pyaar hai!

Your last few concluding paragraphs were unbelievable....I'm at loss of words to say how much I loved it! Especially the sentence Ek majboori se bana rishta ban gaya jeevan ka sabse mazboot sahaara – shayad yahi toh pyaar hai! It was a MAGNIFICENT attempt to add your FF title to one of the concluding sentences!👏 My eyes were watering realizing the fact that everything as to have an end someday....including such a beautiful piece of writing!😭

Your 1000th post was really worth it!👏

Looking forward to your next FF!

Love,

Anjali

PS: Sorry for not posting a reply to your Excellent Analysis, DIFFERENT & REAL-JUST LIKE EKTA SAID! Will do so as soon as I can get a constant internet connection....let's see even if this reply gets posted!😕

Originally posted by: Vedo

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww 😭 😭 😭
that was just sooo fantabulous Cordelia!!
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I cant imagine a better ending to this ff! 😃 it was perfect! 😉

You're a gr8 writer and I'm eagerly waiting for ur next ff 😉

thanks for the compliments hun, i hope to start a new one soon! for now i'm quite happy commenting on everyone else's excellent ff's! 😃

Originally posted by: nibbles

Cord hun...........the last part was beautifully written........you tied up all loose ends!

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Now waiting for another one!😉

i will certainly miss your bright blue centered writing! thanks for all your comments and praise hun, very sweet of you! 😉

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Cordelia, very beuatifully ended i must say.
i amy not have commented on each and every part, but i read all of them with the same anticipation.
Very well done dear. 👏 👏 👏
Hoping to see you in the FF competition. 😉

😳😳😳 thanks so much sweetie, i will definitely try, i'm sure it will be fun! 😃

Originally posted by: Auditi

Ek majboori se bana rishta ban gaya jeevan ka sabse mazboot sahaara – shayad yahi toh pyaar hai! what an awesome line..... 👏

infact what an awesome ff..... 👏

it was awesome, too good, wonderful..... really looking forward for ur nxt ff..... 😃

without sounding arrogant, i too am very proud of that last line - my sister likes it so much she thinks i stole it from somewhere! 😲 😆

i didn't by the way! 😆

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

that was so good.loved it.superb ending.I read three times.Plz do write more FF.looking forward to reading it. 😊

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

Awesome Ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!!👏

thanks guys! and thanks so much for your regular comments, very sweet! 🤗