Kuch To Hua Hai...part 45 added pg 79

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PART !:

hi guys after reading so many fanfics - thought i'd try my own. lemme know wot u think - and feel free to make suggestions!

The scene starts after the 26th ep....

Having witnessed Sahil and Rano's embrace, Bani was stunned...she didn't know how to react and what to do...she would need to think carefully before she does anything, otherwise things may become complicated...saying this to herself she quietly made her way to her bedroom...

Jai was standing in his study with a glass of whiskey in his hand looking out of the window..."what are these feelings i have for bani...why was i feeling as if my life would end when i thought something had happened to her...what if something really did happen to her??" he thought to himself. He looked at his watch and realised that it was quite late..."I better go to bed...but that room seems so empty and lonely ever since Bani has been staying with Pia in the guest room for the last few days...maybe its better...everytime i go near that bed, all i can remember is that night and how it felt to have Bani...its so wrong, so why does it feel so right???"

He slowly made his way to room and was surprised to see bani standing by the window in a long white satin nightgown, engulfed in the light emanating from the moon's soft glow. She hadn't heard him enter and he took a moment to study her and get his feelings into control.

Bani turned around at the sound of the door clicking close..."Mr Walia...Woh, Pia has gone home...and masi...i thought it better for me to...if you think it better...i'll go...Rano..." she mumbled softly, feeling unerved with the way Jai was just staring at her.

She suddenly felt self-conscience in her nightclothes and resisted the urge to fold her arms in a defensive notion.

"Its ok Bani...this is your room too"

Bani looked at him surprised and didn't know how to respond....

Jai walked towards her slowly......

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Posted: 19 years ago
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continue soon. that was really good 👏
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awww.. cont soonn....... i luved it.. gr8 job 👏
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PART 2:

Jai walked towards her keep eye contact with bani...he could see her blushing profusely...with a soft smile he stopped just a few paces away from her, then suddenly bent towards the bed and picked up his infamous blue nightsuit!!!!! (had u all going then didn't i?? 😃 )

Both of them were lying in there respective places on the bed...each fully aware of the other's presence and both tensed and unable to relax...Each lost in their own thoughts, and keep seeing flashes of that "night"...(I mean who were they kidding...to have slept together and think they could forget it!?!?)....

When the morning came, Jai awoke first and felt the smoothness of satin next to him...he looked over to realise that bani was sleeping with her head nestled against his chest and that he was actually holding her there...it felt oddly...right??

He sensed bani waking up, when a sudden tension gripped her...he couldn't resist, he pretended to sleep and leave his arm across her waist and see how she reacted....bani realised that she wasn't sleeping on her pillow but on her husband!!! and butterflies began to fly in her stomach..."What will mr walia think??" she thought suddenly and tried to get up, only to realise that ahe was held firm against him - and to by the waist!!!

She slowly tried to pull J's arm off her but he just pulled her closer and closer...and then....
Edited by tbabhra - 19 years ago
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& then????? kya yaar aisi aisi jhaga pause kar dete hai 😆
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👏 👏 👏 phir kya hua????????/ 😳
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Part 3:

And then...bani looked up and found her self staring straight into the eyes that have been haunting her dreams, she suddenly felt breathless...then it hit her! She lying half on top of Mr Walia...and he was holding her...

Jai could see the confusion in bani's eyes...he could also sense the tension and breathlessness that had overcome her...he relented his hold on her, not realising that his watch had caught the belt on her gown...they continued to stare into each other's eyes when suddenly there was a frantic knocking on their bedroom door, Jai hastly moved his arm and BAni jerked back...then realised that her gown had opened....

Blushing she quickly turned around and tried to cover herself...

Jai just went completely dazed aas to what he had just done...he realised that he hadn't wanted to let bani go...he wanted her...he needed her...

"Mr Walia...uh...woh aap...darwaza...woh meri belt aapke paas..." Bani said to him quietly, while turning red as a tomato, before running to bathroom....

Jai, with a murderous look on his face at having been disturbed from one of the best moments in his life...yanked the door open to see who dared to interrupt it....

He was surprised to be embraced by a small child - probably 5-6 squeling "Bani didi"...Then the child looked up and said "You're not bani didi...Who are you and why are you in my didi's room??"

Shocked Jai just looked this child...Where did she come from? Bani didi?? ?Just how many sisters did Bani have??...

Edited by tbabhra - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Interesting fanfic....do continue when u get the time! 👏
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Hi guys

am glad that u like it so far - promise to continue shortly - if u have any suggestions to make to improve it - lemme know k....

thanx for all ur comments tho...happy reading...
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PART 4:

"Woh tumhari bani didi...bathroom mein hai...tum koun??"

"I am Sonu...and who are you?" she asked while putting her hand out for a handshake.

Jai had never been spoken to like this before and found he liked the child...he also realised how much he wanted a child of his own...what if that night bani had conceived?? shocked at his thoughts he turned to stare at the bathroom door....

"Mr Walia...I'm sorry, she is my neice...i had to bring her with me as Bani ma'am had invited her..."

Jai turned to see Tony hastily pulling the girl out of the room with him.

"Thats ok, Bani will be down shortly..."

Just as the bedroom door closed, he heard the bathroom door open and turned to see bani coming out in a beautiful pink saree...she kept her eyes averted away from him, afraid that he could see her inner thoughts...
she didn't want him to know how his nearness...a simple touch...made her feel...

She continued towards the dressing table and proceeded to put on her jewellary...the only set that matched was the one she wore that "night" just picking it up sent shivers down her spine.

She hadn't realised that Jai had come and stood directly behind her until she felt his warm hands tying her dori...he then picked up her necklace and tied it round her neck...tracing her back with his fingers...

"is this the necklace you wore that night?" he whispered as his fingers were replaced by his lips against her skin...

breathlessly she said "yes...."

Then he picked up one earring and put it in her ear...then the other...followed each time by a kiss...then he moved his hands down her arms slowly, then he picked them up and kissed each wrist....he then slowly put on the kangan he had given her previously....he then pulled her closer to him and whispered in her ear..."Don't take these off again...now go you have a 3ft visitor downstairs...before i lose myself completely and not let you out of here at all..."

dazed and confused by all the feelings that Jai just arouse in her, bani slowly opened her eyes and looked at him questioningly..."3ft?"

"Sonu?"

"Oh...Tony's niece! Why didn't you say so before..."

Then she abruptly turned and walked out as fast as she could...before she lost all senses and succumbed to Mr Walia's threat...

Shocked at bani's swift departure from the room...Jai broodingly walked to the bathroom...I just did all that and at the mention of that child she ran??? did she not feel anything?? she didn't even take out my clothes for the day..now how am going to match the correct shirt to the correct tie? and where the hell does she keep my wallet etc? what has she done to me? i used to be so self-sufficient...now i am completely dependent on her?....

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