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you a doing great job and the songs just perfect

Ya...there was no need to say thanx to us!! But pls do continue!!!

tht was awesome.....plzz keep it up 😉

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Lisa

omg. no need to thank us..!! its so beautifully written that ur only deserving of the praises.. look forward to the next update!! 👏

i just read all of it...very beautiful....

ONLY THANKS NO CONTINUATION OF THE FF
CONTINUE SOONNNN NAAAAAA

First of all there is no excuse to the lateness of this fanfic except school I have been a jerk to keep you guys all waiting, but hopefully you'll be able to look beyond my idiocracy and enjoy so... cheers alll and here is your update finally


The next morning at the walia house we see jai and bani coming down the stairs and Mausi getting ready to go somewhere and telling Tony and everyone else to get ready. Mausi is running around frantically while Jai and Bani looking at each other in confusion on what is going on . Jai wanting to know whats going on walks up behind Mausi and says …

Jai: Mausi.. Yeh sabh kya hoa raha hai?
Mausi: (startled turns around) Arrey Jai beta… tum aur Bani utt gaye?
Jai: Ji Mausi lekin aap batayeh yeh sabh kiski teyaari chal rahi hai?
Mausi: (smiles at Jai and then at Bani behind him) Mainey socha ke Sameer sirf kuch dinoh ke liye aaya hai, kyon nah hum sabh beach par jayein aaj? Akir tora sa maza kar lein… aur Bani ka bhi tora bahar ghumna hoa jayega aapnay dost aur bhenon ke saat.
Jai: Lekin Mausi main aaj nahi jaa saktha, bahut kaam hai office main aur..
Mausi: Munnaa… kaam zada important hai tumari biwi se?
Jai: Lekin bahut kaam hai
(All of sudden we see Sameer walk up behind and he says…)
Sameer: Subh kuch teyaar mausi?
Mausi: Haan beta lekin…
Sameer: lekin kya Mausi? (we see Bani come close to Mausi now to see what is going on)
Mausi: Dekho nah, Jai nahi jah raha.. Ke raha hai bahut kaam hai… Mainey issey kaha ke biwi se koi kaam bhi important hoa saktha hai
Sameer: Oh ho mausi! Aap bhi samajhaye kijeye … Mr. Walia bahut hi important insaan hai… unkah kaam toh important hoa gah hi. (looking at Bani and then at Jai) Chalo Mr. Walia , kyon nah aisey kartey hain ke main Bani ko humarey saat le jaata hoon… aaj aap apna kaam nipta loh aap

(Jai gives Sameer a look to kill and grabs on to Bani's hand tightly, while a surprised Bani looks at Jai. Jai then says…)

Jai: Nahi, main aaj off le saktha hoon, koi baat nahi main apni secretary ko phone karkey batah doonga
(Sameer seeing Jai's reaction smiles)
Sameer: Okay
(Jai then turns to Bani… leaving her hand in the process and says…)
Jai: Bani tum jaakey teyaar hoa jao

We then see Everyone in the family room a little while later. We see Jai, Bani, Sameer, Pia, Rano, Sahil, Jigyasa, Ranveer, Aditya, Anu, Rohit, Mausi and Dadi.

Mausi: Sabh teyaar hain?
(Everyone nods and smiles)
Mausi: toh chalo, rukhey kyon hoa?
(Everyone walks out and are seen getting into cars…tony tags along tooo)

At the beach (We see the guys pulling out coolers and necessities from the cars and the girlz are just standing around. Sameer tells them…

Sameer: Arrey laadkhiyon … jaakey change karo… paani main kudho. Have fun! Hum sabh bhi change kar leengey. We'll meet actually at the volleyball.. Kyon nah ek game hoa jaye? Boys vs. Girlz?

(Girlz look at each other and look at Sameer and smile and says "Teek hai!" and they all turn around w/ their bags over their shoulders and head for the public restrooms to change)

Sameer: (the other guys are surprised at the girlz reactions ) Hum toh gaye aaj (smiling)! (The other guys come next to him and hit him on the back and start laughing, and they all also head to the public restroom to change except they are also carrying supplies along with them)

The guys are now standing near the volleyball net and waiting for the girlz to come out and they all look good in their offwhite cabbana pants and different colored t-shirts. Aditya is pacing around and says

Aditya: Arrey yeh laadkhiyan toilet main toh nahi ghir gayi?
(All of Sudden Jiggy poo comes out and she is wearing a thick strapped tank and yoga pants, we then see Dadi and she is wearing open flairs and a big t-shirt and a sunhat, we see mausi in a white suit, Pia in a full pieces swimsuit with a tie over skirt, Rano with long cut off black shorts and a black tank top.)
Everyone gathers together, but Jai notices that Bani isn't' there he says…

Jai: Arrey, Bani kahan hai?
(All the girlz look at each other and Pia runs towards the bathroom.

Pia: Di bahar nikaliyeh! Come on! Its not that bad
(We see bani come out and she's wearing cutoffs like Rano that are long and a big t-shirt. Everyone looks at her and smiles)
Sameer: Bani Ah Jao yaar… hum sabh intezaar kar rahey hain!
(Bani and Pia walk over and then we watch them all play… we see tony keeping score and it goes from guys: 1 girls: 0 to guys: 9 girls: 9)

Tony: Yeh game point hai abh!
(The boys look at the girls and laugh and huddle together. We see them all say ke ladhikyan nahi jeet sakthi, hum jeetengey. Then we see the girlz in a huddle and Pia tells Rano to disturb Sahil, while she'll take care of Jai by smiling at him. While everyone else just pick a guy to disturb. We see it is the guys serve and Jai is serving)

Aditya, Sahil, Sameer, and Ranveer: Come Jai! Come on Jai Uncle!

(We see Jai all serious and ready for his serve when he looks up and sees Bani for support. He sees her and makes eye contact with her and she smiles while he is about to serve and when he is she winks at him and the ball is hit by him crookedly and hit's the net)

Jai looks up in surprise and sees his serve is bad

All the guys: Jai! Jai uncle!

He shakes his head and says

Jai: Damn it! (looks up to see Bani smile at him and walk to the back)

(We then see Pia serve for the girlz she gets ready to serve and looks at Jai and smiles and he just rolls his eyes. She serves and it goes to Sahil. Meanwhile all the guys in the back are saying "ball ko hit karo sahil hit karo! But he is all dumbfounded when he sees Rano wink at him and the ball hits him in the head and he finally realizes he let the girlz win!)

All the girlz: YEY!!
All the boyz: OH NO! LAADKIYAN KAISEY JEET SAKTHI HAIN! SAHIL!
Sahil: Lekin Rano ne! Meri fault nahi thi!
All the boyz: Rano ne kya?
Sahil: (Looks over at Rano who sticks her tongue out and runs toward the crowd of girlz shouting about their victory) Kuch Nahi … (sly smile)

All the boyz: that was not fair! Tum logon ne Jai aur Sahil ko kuch kiya tha! We want a rematch!
The girlz: (giggle) Everything is fair in love and war! (giggle)
Sameer: Ye laadkiyan bhi drama hai! (All the guys: Yeh!)

We then hear this music and this song…. http://www.musicindiaonline.com/l/17/s/movie_name.7789/ (second song for your listening pleasure)

Music: girlz clicking their hands and laughing and jumping around Dadi is waving her hat around we then see all the girlz dancing arm in arm. Then they have all the guyz in the center who are all confused at what is going on and the girls push their cheeks here and there. We also see Mausi and Dadi dancing! (Then Dadi, Mausi and Ranveer stand back and (first time we see our sexy sanyasi smile a nice smile) watch while clapping)

hum ladkiyan nahin hungama hain (all pointing to themselves)
lagti hain sidhi sadhi hum mein drama hain (all have their faces chupa in a chuni, but pull it off their head and throw it in the guyz faces and dance around them)- 2

lakhon ke peetche, peetche peetche jaye (pushing all the guyz from the back and they fall to their feet) Unko deewana deewana banayein
jadoo chalaye hum hain balaye (looking down at the guys and moving their fingers as if their doing magic on them) - 2
ek chutki main kar doongi main tumko apna raja (pull all of them up by their shirt collars and push them out with their tumka)
bachke rehna re baba ( running after the guys who are running away from them while tripping over each other) - 8
Its our time guys get out of the way (singing in the guys and making them walk back while they dance towards them ) -2
ladkon ka fashion hua hain poorana aaya hain ab ladkiyon ka zamana (we see all the guys fall over again and in the first repeat of this song we see Pia pick Sameer up by his ear and sing this verse and push him away. While in the second repeat we see jiggy poo pick up Aditya by the arm and sing this to him while smiling and then she pushes him away too!)- 2
payal humari jab jab bajegi tumko lagega thumka lagana (We see Sahil look at Rano's leg and then go up and she maro's him thumka out)
jadoo chalaye hum hain balaye (Anu does the magic fingers thing with Rohit this and she ) - 2
ek chutki main kar doongi main tumko apna raja (all maroing a chutki and pulling all of their guys to them behind them, and the guys smile… but they turn around and have sticks in their hands and the guys run)
bachke rehna re baba (girls running after the guys and the guys still running)- 8
aankhon main kajal agar hum lagaye phir kya hain hum raat usko banaye (Our sweet bani goes up to Jai who is standing with the other guys and then winks at him and he smiles and then elbows in the repeat) - 2
pal bhar main badal ko aawara karde chunri agar hum hawa main udaye (we see Pia urao a chuni while running towards the guys and then lets it go)
jadoo chalaye hum hain balaye (All the girls do the magic fingers thing in the guys face again and then push them all together in the center) - 2
ek chutki main kar doongi main tumko apna raja (click all their hands and then point at the guys and then at themselves)
bachke rehna re baba (running around the guys) - 8
hum ladkiya nahin hungama hain (all the girlz are dancing with Mausi and Dadi )
lagti hain sidhi sadhi hum mein drama hain(all dancing together we see all of them laughing) - 2
ladko ke peetche peetche peetche jaye (all still dancing together)
jadoo chalaye hum hain balaye (do the magic fingers thing at the camera)
ek chutki main kar doongi main tumko apna raja (pointing at all the guys, but they all get irritated and look at each other and smile)
bachke rehna re baba (They run towards the girls and pick them up except for Dadi and Mausi who are laughing the girls are hitting the guys we see them go away) - 8

We then see everyone getting ready to go in the water

Pia: Main subsey pehley chali jaongi (takes off her sarong and is wearing a one piece suit. She thinks Jai will look at her but he is looking out into the ocean thinking) (Pia runs in the shallow end where Rohit and Anu are swimming. We then see Rano standing at the side of the water she dips her toes in and the quickly brings them back out Sahil seeing this smiles and asks her…)

Sahil: Kya hua Rano? Tumey paani tandha lagh raha hai? (smiling at her)
Rano: (giving irritated look) Nahi. Voh… (looks all worried looking out a the water) Mujhey um…
Sahil: Kya hua Rano?
Rano: Voh… (gets mad at her self for showing emotions) Kuch nahi! (about to walk away but Sahil grabs her hand)
Sahil: Kya hua Rano?
Rano: (She turns around and looks at him and her look softens) Mujhey Teherna nahi aatha (Saying quietly)
Sahil: (smiling at her) Main tumey sikatha hoon chalo mere saath!
Rano : Lekin sahil! (looking back at everyone while he's dragging her farther away)
Sahil: Lekin Vekin kuch nahi chalo! (We see them both going off)

We then see Bani standing by the water with Mausi and Dadi and watching everyone swim and have fun (even Jai is in the water!)

We then see Jai and Sameer discussing something and they walk out of the water (guys they don't have their shirts on but they do have shorts so it is okay)

Sameer: Bani idhar aayo Jai ko kuch chaiyeh!
Bani: (looks at them and hurries over worried) Ji!
(Bani walks over and turns to Jai and says )
Bani: Ji kya chaiyeh… (both guys look at each other and smile and pick bani up by her legs and she starts yelling) Yeh Kya kar rahey hoa tum dono!
Sameer: Bani you are so boring! Tum tehrana nahi aatha lekin Jai tumey sikha dega. Humey malum tha ke tum kudh toh aayogi nahi. Sharma jaogi. Toh Jai aur mainey yeh plan banaya! (says all of this while running to the water)
Bani: Kaisa plan! (screams)
Both Jai and Sameer: Yeh! ( they both drop bani in the water on the not too shallow not too deep side of the water and Bani screams)

Bani then submerges while Sameer swims off to see what the others are doing and she grabs on to Jai for her dear life. )

Bani: Mujhey chorna maat Mr. Walia! Main mar jaongi!
Jai: (Looking at Bani and laughing)
Bani: Aap haas rehein hain! Main yahan pe mar jaongi mujhey chorna maat.
(Jai grabs ahold of Bani's waist while she has her arms around his neck and they both are staring at each other so intensely that Bani forgets to yell and Jai forgets to laugh. They just look at each other. We then see Mausi and Dadi look at both of them and smile and then look at each other)

Dadi: Arrey Billo.. Thu dekh rahi hai joh main dekh rahi hoon?
Mausi: Haan Biji…
(Both laugh)

We then see Sahil and Rano far away from everyone else. Sahil grabs Rano hand and says

Sahil: Chalo Rano
Rano: (hesitating) nahi main dhoob jaongi
Sahil: tum nahi dhoobogi, main hoon nah
Rano: (worried look)
Sahil: trust me
Rano: (smiles) okay
(They both walk into the water and as the water gets deeper Rano holds on tighter to Sahil's arm. Sahil lets Rano hold on and then takes her farther out. When they get right where he wants he to learn he takes her by the waist and turns forward)
Sahil: okay chalo pehley take apnay arms ko aisey bahar nikalo (His arms out with hers and he's showing her when all of a sudden Sahil whispers in her ear)
Sahil: Rano… sach batao … kya tumey kuch nahi feel hota mere liye?
Rano: (looks mad. She turns around and says…) Sahil! Main swimming seekna chahthi hoon, aur tumey sirf apni romance ki pari hai! (pushes sahil back into the water and kinda walks out of the water while sahil is soaking wet
Sahil: Rano! Rano! Sunoh toh sahi! (Rano is wading with her back to him and is half on land and half in water now. We then see Sahil swim towards her and as she walks onto land he comes from behind her and catches her hand and throws Rano over his shoulder. Rano is hitting his back and so he drops her on the sand and this music starts…. http://www.musicindiaonline.com/l/17/s/movie_name.6971/

Music- Rano gets up and cleans off the sand on her clothes and Sahil taps her on her shoulder and she turns around and steps on his foot and walks away angry, but Sahil grabs her arm and turns her around
Agar Main Kahoon Mujhe Tumse Mohabbat Hai
Meri Bas Yehi Chaahat Hai Toh Kya Kahogi (Sahil starts dancing with her in his arms and she pushes him away) -2

Main Tumse Kahoongi, Is Baat Ko Agar Tum (Smiles at Sahil)
Zara Aur Saja Ke Kehte, Zara Ghooma-Phira Ke Kehte (takes his chin in her hand and shakes it)
Toh Achcha Hota (taps his cheek lightly, rolls her eyes and walks away while Sahil follows her behind)

Agar Main Kahoon
Tumko Jab Dekhoon Lagti Ho Jaise Nayi (He comes in front of Rano)
Honthh Hain Pankhadi Phool Ki (Taps her lips)
Aankhein Jaise Jugnu Chamke Huwe (holds her shoulders and looks into her eyes)
Soche Mera Ye Dil Dhadakte Huwe (puts Rano's head to his chest so she can hear his heart))


Agar Main Kahoon (Rano pushes him away)
Agar Main Kahoon Ye Jo Chehra Hai (Sahil using his index finger outlines Rano's face)
Jaise Koyi Chaand Hai Toh Kya Kahogi (Sahil points ot the sky)

Main Tumse Kahoongi (points at Sahil and uses her index finger to tap Sahil's nose)
Mujhko Bhoole Se Bhi Chaand Tum Na Kaho (Points to herself pulls Sahil so they are shoulder to shoulder and points to the sky and shakes her head no)
Chaand Mein Toh Kayin Daag Hai (pushes Sahil away)
Mujhe Phool Na Kehna Woh Murjhaate Hain (Rano picks up a flower and then crushes it and throws the petals in Sahils face)
Jugnu Bhi Na Kehna Woh Kho Jaate Hain (Rano uses her arms to imitate a butterfly and shakes her head no at Sahil)
Ye Baatein Puraani Hai, Jo Mujhko Sunaani Hai (Rano puts her elbow on Sahils shoulder)
Kissi Aur Adaa Se Kehte, Zara Ghooma-Phira Ke Kehte (Rano slaps his cheek so it goes his face goes the other way)
Toh Achcha Hota (Rano pretends she's cleaning off her hands and walks away)

Agar Main Kahoon Mujhe Tumse Mohabbat Hai (Sahil puts his arm out before she can goanywhere)
Meri Bas Yehi Chaahat Hai Toh Kya Kahogi (Sahil Pulls Rano by her elbow and stares at Rano w/ so much love)

Music: (Rano is trying to pull her arm away and rolling her eyes at him. Sahil is laughing at her and She is getting more and more mad. She still tries to pull but he won't let her budge)

Agar Main Kahoon (Sahil let's go of Rano's elbow)
Baatein Sunke Tumhaari Main Hairaan Hoon (Sahil puts his hand to his ear and gives a surprise look)
Jo Bhi Kehna Hai Kaise Kahoon (Gives a questioning look to Rano)

Lagta Tumhein Kuchh Bhi Achcha Nahin (Sahil Shakes Rano by the shoulders)
Sach Ko Bhi Kehti Ho Sachcha Nahin (Sahil smacks his forehead and walks away)

Agar Main kahoon… (Sahil stops walking and turns around)
Agar Main Kahoon Tumhein Pata Nahin Hai Kyun (Rano smiles at him and shakes her head)
Hai Pyaar Mujhe Bhi Tumse Toh Kya Kahoge (Walks up to Sahil and sings this verser to him)

Main Tumse Kahoonga, Mere Dil Ka Hai Ye Kehna
Ham Ko Hai Saath Mein Rehna (Takes Rano in his arms)
Ye Dono Ke Dil Mein Hai Na Toh Phir Kyun Kehna (Rano lifts her head from his chest and smiles up at him)


Agar Main Kahoon
Toh Main Tumse Kahoongi (We then see them both walking hand in hand)

Sahil and Rano are both walking along the beach hand in hand when they hear something

Sahil: Tumey koi awaaz ah rahi hai Rano?
(Rano stops to listen)
Rano: Haan Sahil, lagtha hai yehin kahin paas se ah rahi hai
(We see both Sahil and Rano running towards where everyone was before on the beach. We see Jai swimming and Pia following him while Sameer is talking to Aditya and Ranveer and the music is on where Dadi and Mausi are sitting in beach chairs. Rano and Sahil look out into the water and they see everyone except Bani.)

Rano: Bani Didi kahan hai?!
Sahil: Patha nahi?
(Then both Sahil and Rano spot something farther out in the water…)
Sahil: OMG! Bani Mami!
Rano: Sahil! Didi! (looks at Sahil and Sahil looks at her)

TO BE CONT'D

omggggggg where she go?!?!?!?! cont soon.. that was gr8 👏

holy cow...!! i hope jai saves her and soon!!

Great part 👏 👏 pls do cont soon