New man in Bani's Life (END on pg 22) - Page 13

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Posted: 19 years ago
awww... i just read the whole story today ๐Ÿ˜› .. its sooo cure.. i loved ๐Ÿ˜ณ it.. keep it up ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
aaawwwwwwwww.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...very cute....
amazing story..... ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thank you all soooooooooooooooooo sooooooooooooooooooooo much. Even though I had planned to make the previous part my last part. However, I have decided to do one last part...it sort of like an epilogue( sorry but kinda long)...it takes place 1 year and 6 months later

Everyone, who lives in the Walia mansion is sitting in the living room. There is 2 month old baby in Pia's lap.

Mausi(taking the baby from Pia): Bani, this is not correct, I am not happy with you.

Bani(a little worried): Kyun Mausiji maine kya kiya?

Mausi: That is the thing Bani you have done nothing. When are you going to give me the good news and promote me from Mausi to par-Mausi? Look at Pia, how good she is. She listened to me and quickly gave me a beautiful grand daughter. (Now mausi walks to Sahil and twisting his ear says) and this naughty Sahil hasn't even been working 2 months and comes to me and says "Mausiji ab to main working man ho, jaldi ab mein family man bhi banuga"

Everyone starts laughing

Rano(looks at Sahil, pretending to be mad): Sahil!!! If I am going to take off from work to have the baby, then after the baby is born you will have to take off from work and look after the baby.

Mausi: Just look at these two...haven't been married for a month and quarraling like an old couple.

Everyone laughs again. Sahil and Rano star blushing.

Jai(looks and Bani and whispers): Bani you always want to see everyone happy, don't you think you should make Mausi wish come true too?

Bani(smiles and gets up): I have to go get something from the kitchen.

Mausi(Just as Bani is about to leave): Bani, ab to tumhari shaadi ko 2 saal hone ko aaye ab to sharmana chor do!

Just then there is a knock on the door. Bani goes and opens the door. She finds three young people standing there. One boy, and two girls. All three seem approximately Bani's age. Bani invites them in.

Boy: Hello. I am Suraj and these are my sisters Kajal and Naina. (Both girls fold their hands and say namaste) Actually we wanted to meet Mr. Jai Walia.

Jai: Yes?
Suraj hands Jai a letter. Jai reads the letter.
Jai: Ok you can stay here for a few days till you figure out what to do.

...
Later that day in the evening. Ranveer bumps in Dadi.

Dadi: Ranveer aaj hum sabne raat ki picture ka show dekni ki sochi hai. Tu bhi humare saath chal raha hai issliye tu abhi jake hi apni sham ki puja kar le.

Ranveer: Ji Dadi.
Ranveer goes to the Puja room where he is surprised to see Kajal doing puja as well. Ranveer goes and stands next to her. He looks at her, Ranveer has never seen any one more beautiful.
Ranveer(stops looking at Kajal and looks in front): Sorry God! if I won't appreciate your creation then I will insult you only! (Ranveer turns back and continues to look at Kajal, who is still engrossed in praying)

...
Mausi: Suraj beta, your sisters can stay in the guest room but you will have to live in the out-house ok?
Suraj: ok. Suraj goes to the out-house.
Anu who is in the out-house looking for a book she left there, is on a ladder looking on top of a shelf. When suddenly she her foot slips and she falls, however not to the ground but into Suraj's arms.

Anu(looking into suraj's eyes, feeling as though she will faint): Thank you for saving me. Now would you like to hold me in your arms .... for the rest of your life?
Suraj: What??!!??

...
Everyone has gathered in the living room to leave for the movie.

Aditiya(hesitatingly): Acutally you know...I won't be able to come ... because... ummm...you know.... I have to work on this file...I mean project....so ...ok?

Jigyasa(also hesistatingly): Ya...I don't think I can come either....you know....my head is really hurting....I can't take a movie....better I stay home.

Everyone suppressing their laughs, say "ok" and go outside. As everyone is getting into their cars. Naina notices that there is someone sitting garden, alone. She decides to go to him. It is Sid.

Naina: Hello. My name is Naina, I think I met you this morning.
Sid: Hi.
Naina: Aren't you coming to the movie?
Sid(in a sad tone): No, I don't feel like.
Naina(in cheery tone): Come on...it's suppose to be a really good movie. (Sid looks at Naina but does not say anything, she senses his sadness) You look like you need some cheering up. Want to hear a joke?

...

As everyone is getting into their cars there is a lot of talking and laughing Bani looks at everyone, and then turns and looks towards the garden, she sees the image of a young boy and girl laughing. Everything is just the way is should be. Bani is smiling.

THE END!

Hope you all enjoyed my fan-fic. Once again THANK YOU all SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH for the encouraging comments you left.
Edited by Saregama_fan - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ really did enjoy it! and u paired everyone too. how cute! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 19 years ago
boohoo.. pls continue nah..plzzz..tho i lyked wot u'vr written A LOT...i wan u 2 wirte sum more..plsssssss...
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey gr8 one,...... ending is gr8
i think we will never see the walia mansion so happy...

as ranveer,.... jigs... roshni wont' let that happen
Edited by munnihyderabad - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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amazing fan fic i just loved it!!!

pls contniue writing fan fics!!
luv sweetu ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 19 years ago
KUDOS 2 U!!!!!! just wunderful.... keep writin... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
lovely

good work yaar...it was too good ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
Aww...loved your whole FF honey!! ๐Ÿ˜›

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