SS:The Vine of Desire...Last (E), PG-8

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visma

@kuttu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

That was beautiful. You almost gave me a heart attack while reading the last chapter. To think that Bani left the love of her life because of some misplaced guilt feeling.

seems like inspite of getting what she wanted all her life Pia is lonely. Today she has no one to share her success with. And finally she does admit that she never wanted to be the wife of Jai Walia. But Pushkar seems like some where in teh corner of heart she still feels for the man. But it is too late. And looks like finally Pushkar is learning to trust and love once again.

The last part of Jai and Bani was very touching. So finally they united. Bani finally gives into her love.

bye

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kitkat_2002

@kitkat_2002

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

awesumly done...

perfect... i was so happy wit d endin :)

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sur

@smashy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

beautiful ending to a lovely story!!!

gr8 work...keep going!!!

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Shamu (my brother calls me that)

@sweet_gurl61

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Just read the last two parts. They were so in love. Felt really sorry for Bani, but the way how Jai is behaving, I don't doubt that they will have a cricket team. Pia is living a meaningless life. She got all she wanted, but she is not satisfied. Yay for Pushkar! Starting his life over. That was a beautiful story.

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Rockyy_

@Rockyy_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Wow Dhani, could not ask for a more touching JB ending, simply awesome.

As for Pia, she is reaping what she sow, greed and a lonely life.

Over all, love the story, well done.

P.S. Did you finish reading BIG FAT GATE, that was glaring at you.

If so and you have sometime to spare in your busy schedule, could we

please have updates on, EK BOOND ASMANN

and A HEAT of BROKEN IMAGES

Thank you and take care.

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Shreshta

@ducky_euro

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

wow what an end

i love this story, very different

will u write an epi?:P

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diana

@hooman

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

hey dhani,

this is definitely one of my favourite stories from you. It's so touching.

I felt really sad when Bani started feeling guilty and then things just got worse for her as she lost her child and went into depression..

I think Rano played a very important part in the story by calling Jai over to London. Thank God for that!!

I also feel a little sorry for Pia because even though she is successful and all that, she doesn't have anyone to share it with..

On the other hand, I'm so happy for Pushkar that he managed to overcome and move on in life.

Like many other readers, I too would like to request for you to write an epilogue..Give us an insight on how Jai and Bani's life improved and how many kids they have.. Also I would love if you write about Pia's reaction about her sister marrying her ex-husband..

So thank you for coming up with this awesome story!! Love you for that (and of course all the other stories as well)!!

nadia