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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Great part, Meena.
Finally Bani revealed the truth to Jai and she has his undoubted support now. He will fight Jigyasa for Bani and her sister and hopefully they clear the Anu ordeal smoothly. I just hope that Roshni Chopra is not the aunt of Anu's would-be husband like in the story.
Plz continue. Was a great update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Hi
Jai as usual is super mad. But at least Bani made him think before he took out his wrath. And Bani is so happy to see that her husband being supportive. Poor Rano And is there going to be a Sahil Rano angle too in the story.
So now waitng to see Jigs reaction on knowing it is her daughter and not Bani pregnant.
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
Hi Meena
Thanks for the great update. Loved it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Good Bani told Jai who is pregnant, and clear the problems

between them.

But what an awful way for Jigyasa to treat poor Rano, hopes she eats all

those words she said to Rano, when she finds out Anu is pregnant and not Bani.

Fabulous update Meena, do continue soon, with an even longer chapter.

All the best and take care.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
hey meena,
great update..
Bani did a wise thing to let jai know the truth..
I'm glad that jai is supporting bani in front of the whole family...
now time to let jigyasa and aditya know about their daugther, can't wait for jigyasa's outburst!!
continue soon
nadia
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
wow i think some bombs will blast in the next update, one of them called jigyasa
cont soon
SA
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi, Thank You for all the encouragments...i ma glad you guys are liking the story so far...this is a very long part so far and please dont come after me with belans, chaplas and jothas after reading this part...
My sister was watching Saajan Ghar Jana Hai...and i saw bits and pieces then i got inspired by and this story was cooking in my mind so i thought i will write it in my way...wese i really hate what is happening in that serial currently and i am hating how Ambar has kept quiet coz of dhani.
Anyways here is the next part, read and comment...
Part 6

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It has been a week that everyone found out about the truth behind anu's pregnancy. It was sad news for massi because she was really expecting bani to be pregnant and she thought finally her muna's life has become a complete circle. Finally after so much everyone seemed fine and accepted the truth at the end. Bani looked at the food preparation today anu's to be in law would be here to fix the wedding the date. Bani went into deep thoughts remembering that night how jai controlled everyone so calmly. At first everyone was shocked , could not believe what their little anu did, jigs didn't believe what jai said she screamed at bani:

This is not true jai bhia, main sab jaanti hu ye sab es ladki ki koi chaal, yeh khud pregnant hai or yeh..yeh ilzaam laga rahi hai mere bachi par, mere anu, nahi mere anu....jigs screamed shouted, cried felling into aditya's arms...hai bagwan yeh kiya hua...mere anu...nahi...nahi...

Ranveer on the other hand was boiling in anger, he couldn't believe what his own baby sister has done, he felt ashamed, disgusted thinking that his sis was pregnant... he swear that when he finds who that bastered is, he will kill him...he wanted to run into anu's room in and torture her to death, how could she?...before he could go, jai stopped him.

What do you think you are doing ranveer, are you mad...pagal hugi hut um?

Haa main pagal hu mamaji...what do you think i should do, my own sister, i hate her, i hate, i don't want to see her face, ever , she is dead for me.

Aditya did not know what to do himself, his princess, he couldn't believe what his beloved daughter has done. He couldn't control himself broke down, holding his wife in his arms.

The situation was such that even bani couldn't help but cry at what has happened, she wished she could have done to wipe their tears but couldn't, she felt what everyone was going through. This was not easy for massi and dadi also, they could not believe their innocent, immature anu could do something like this.

After calming down a very historical jigs, jai spoke to them and then jai and bani spoke to anu. They find who that guy was and jai immediately contacted his parents. The guy was non-other than rohit chopra, roshani chopra's nephew jai's ex-flame. As much as jai hated the site of the chopra's he had no option but to speak to them and get anu and rohit married a.s.a.p. one thing more that jai hated was that roshani was back, and he defiantly didn't wanted to face that woman.

Arre bani beta sab tayar hai na...

Huh...bani comein out of her thoughts...ji massi sab tayar hi acha beta, tu jaa tayar huja abhi woh log athi hungi...

Ji massi

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Namsati maasi...said ranvijai chopra bending down taking her blessings, followed by rohit, rashi roiht's sister...

Jiti raho beta, awo beta, bito...

Namsti massi...walked in roshani, then bend down to take massi's blessing...

Awo awo roshani beto...

Everyone sat down and soon tony served them with refreshments. Then anu came down and sat there with rohit, everyone got busy talking to each other, catching up on some stuff that they missed.

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Oh i am really happy roshani, mere beti ne kuch tu samajdari kam ke hai. Thank god she is in love with rohit, muji u dart hi ki kahe koi midlle class wala nah u ya per mere kese dushman ka beta nahu...said smiling jigyasa.

Haa jigs even i am happy...kitna acha huraha hai na...ajj ki baat main or jai samdi banewale hai, ek naya rishta jodne lagi gi...

Haa...smiled jigs

Wese tumhari bhabi kaha hai?

Woh rahi....aahrahi hai...said jigs in not interested voice and rolling her eyes.

Bani walked down the stairs, looking beautiful...in light blue saree with no jewellery except her MS and a simple earring and her wedding band on her finger. She looked absolutely breath taking beautiful. The guest wondered who this beautiful woman was...there were oohs and aahs, roshani rolled her eyes as jigs too. Jai could not take his eyes off his beautiful wife, he felt jealous how ranvijai was checking his woman out.

Arre bahu awo...called massi...bani smiled moved towards the guest and simply smiled at all of them and did her namasti.

Arre woh massi yeh khubsurat pari kaun hai....ranvijai said.... eye jai though

Beta yeh bani hai mere bahu, jai ki patni....

Hearing the last word jai felt happy, yes his, his wife....

Arre jai, tu muji esa kiyu dikraha hai....arre main tere biwi par line nahi marr raha hu yaar...joked ranvijai....everyone looked at jai, laughing...jai looked quiet series...he blushed so does bani she bowed her head down....

Arre bhabi...inse miliye...yeh hai roshani jai bhia ki fianc, i mean ex fianc....

Bani shuddered hearing jigs word, "ex fianc"...she looked at roshani, she so something her eyes very different yet very dangerous, her sixth sense warned her "be careful bani"

Hi bani...extended roshani her hand

Bani shaked hands...but felt very alert, she felt this woman is up to something.

Up to now everyone was quiet, observing bani and roshani, jai felt very uncomfortable with the situation. To ease the situation massi said the pandit was here, he should check anu and rohit's kundli and find a date for their marriage...but before the pandit decide a date for the wedding roshani chirped in...

Muji es shadi se itiraaz hai...

This shocked everyone including jigyasa....

Roshani yeh tum kiya keh rahi hu...tum jaanti hu na sub kuch per bhi....

Haa jigyasa, muji es shadi se itiraaz hai....

Yeh tum kese karsak thi hu.... said jig on verge of crying....anu on the other hand started crying, rohit didn't know what was happening....jai stood up and went to roshani...

Cut the crap out, what is problem with this marriage?...questioned jai

Problem tum hu jai?

What the hell main....why me ...much irritated jai said...losing his patient now...

Yeh shadi husak thi hai jai agar tume mere shart manzoor hut u....

Out with it, what the hell is your shart????

Mujse shaadi karo jai????

Dandadan....

Shocked walias didn't know how to react...jai couldn't belive what he heard....bani lost colours, she had a feeling this woman was up to some thing, but something like this she couldn't believe it, she felt her breathing tightened, her heart beat raise...what she do, she didn't know, her mind and body stopped functioning...oh god please help me....

Massi and the others were absolutely disgusted...whereas jigs felt shocked at first but then hear the condition she smiled, she felt happy yet she felt scared, what if jai bhia doesn't agree???

Pagal hugaye hu tum...tum jesa such thi hu kabi nahi huga...ek bar zindagi mai maine bahut galthi kit hi...or abh use Galati ko main perse durana nahi chata hu...

Suchlo jai tumahri bhanji ki zindagi ki bare mai such lo...you don't have other choice i am giving you a option jai if you don't accept it then you know what will happen....

For god sake roshani, i am married...

You and i are both aware of your marriage jai...bhia, rohit chalo yaha se....

Angry, frustraited jai went to his study, the others were there like statue, they didn't know what just happened....everything was fine than suddenly what sort of bombshell was this that roshani dropped on them...bani was as white as sheet...she didn't know how to reach....

Anu felt sick, she couldn't believe what roshani said and rohit how come he just left without saying anything...she stood up, her head spin around, holding her head tight she fell on the ground.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Lock up Roshni in solitary confinement along with Jigyasa, so

JB can be left alone to work on their marriage.

The story is coming along great Meena, do continue soon.

Terrific chapter by the way.

Take care.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
tat was a terrific turn
awesum
do continue soon
hooman thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
hey meena,
wow what a twist!!
Roshni and her weird demands..God, I could just kill that woman!!
Since you said that this twist is inspired by sajan ghar jaana hai, I hope Bani doesnt tell jai to marry roshni for anu's sake..Like how dhani told ambar..
continue soon
nadia

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