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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Meena:
Thanks for putting ghee and shakar in my mouth. I hope you become an author some day soon. I must say this was another wonderful part thanks for posting this great part even though you are busy congratulations on passing the driving test a big achievment but be careful. Have a great new year and looking forward to more fan fictions.
Thanks 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice update👏but that was a really small part

cont. soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi
First aand fore most have a wonderful year 2010. Also congratulations on passing the driving test.
Though short it was sweet. Now who is pregnant. Who is next inn line to get the full blow of his anger. Waitng to see if his wife can soothe him down a bit.
bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
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atleast she went to tell him the truth
hopefully jai will stay calm
cont soon
SA
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
hey meena
wohoo bani told the truth to jai
gr88
but now whose is pregnant
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Excellent update but was short. Waiting for a long update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Just read all parts in one go,
i must say u r really gud,
hope u update soon coz i simply can't wait to read more....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank god Bani had the brains to be honest with her husband, unlike the one in KS. Loving this Meena, please continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi all thanks for you comments, here is the next part hope its long enough. do tell me how it is. enjoy reading.
Part 5

Bani took a deep breath and looked straight into his eyes....mr walia Anu is pregnant.

If jai was shocked then he didn't know how to react, Jai felt a smack on his face, his mind and body was dead , he couldn't not believe what he has just heard.

He looked at bani, he kept staring at her, he didn't know whether to believe her or not.

I know how your feeling right now, believe me i felt the same when i found out...she looked for some reaction...still holding his hands.

How do you know all this...

Bani tells him about the hospital scene (remember that scene from KS)

After listening to what she said, jai stood up and walked towards the window, looking down at busy Mumbai street, still not believing what she has told him.

How is this possible, Anu, my anu, that little anu...oh my god, she is too young, damn it she is only 18, still a child...punching the wall and raising his voice

Bani rushed to him

Please mr walia yeh waqat gusa karne ka nahi hai...it's the time we need to take a decision...agar app esa gusa karengi tu anu ka kiya huga, app jante hai ki jigyasa aunty anu ko maaf nahi karegi....

I don't care, i really don't care...turning around holding bani from her arms with anger in his tone, he said...how can she do this? How could she do it? ...Leaving her now...walking the other side...

Usne ek baar be nahi sucha ki uska anjaam kiya huga, humari bari main be usne itna nahi sucha...i am feeling all bloody disgusted....

Mr walia please, agar chahti tu main be gusa huti anu par, par kiya fyada, jo nahi huna chaye ta woh hugaya hai, abh use pheli der hujaye hume kuch karna chaye...she is all ready three months pregnant, we cannot hide this anymore, we need to find who is that guy...cutting her off..

Let me find out who that bas***d is once, then i will watch that piece of shi*..i will show him what i am capable off...

Bachu jese baathi mat kije, kiya karengi app...mar pit, kiya huga use, this is the time we need to think about anu about her future and the child that she is currying and most of all agar kise ko yeh baat pata chalagaya tu app janthi hai ki bahut bora hu saktahai...

Feeling calmer than before with what bani said, he still was shocked how could her niece stoop so low, how can she? Bani was right something need to be done and that too very soon.

Come with me...

Kaha?

Faisala karne...we need to find a solution for this mess

Ok...lekin app anu ko kuch nahi kahengi, she is all ready very stressed.

He gave her a whatever look...both walked to his assistant cubical...

Meera mere appointments cancel kardo and don't book any appointments for tomorrow unless i tell you too...or haa tell aditya and ranveer to come home early i need to speak to them.

Ok sir

***********

Sahil tum yaha?...questioned rano, setting in her room and studying...

Haa woh rano,umm...can you help with these maths question, i don't know how to solve them.,,saying so he came closer to rano's bed, where she was reading her book

Yeah sure

Sahil sat on her bed...rano started explaining to him...sahil found the situation very sweet and somehow lost concentration, he couldn't help staring at rano who was busy explaining to him.

Suddenly jigyasa stopped by rano's room, anger rose inside her, and she thought of a plan and of course this was the great opportunity to put her plan into action...

Sahil tum yaha...or tum, tum mere bte ki paas kiya kar rahe hu...

Sahil felt embarrassed towards her mum's behaviour but poor rano lost colour, was too shocked and scared of jigs

Mum i need it some hel...

Shut up...

Tumari use didi ne tu mere bichare jai bhia ko fasaya hai or abh tum ne be yeh danda shuru kiya, how dare you, how could you do this...

Sahil tried to stop his mum but she wasn't listening

Poor rano was crying now...he didi wasn't there either to protect her from this devil woman

Jigs hold her wrist and pulled her out of the room, screaming and shouting on top of her lungs

Massi and dadi...jigs what is all this, stopping what are you doing.

Bas massi ajj app muji mat roke, app nahi janti es behno ko, chand rupe ki liye yeh najani kiya kiya karthi hai, main achi tar janthi hu inko, bani ne tu jai bhai ko fasaya apne jaal main or abh yeh mere bache ko, main yeh nahi huni dungi...kabhi..nahi.

Yeh middle class wale ladkya sub ese huti hai...badhi behen ni najani kiss ki gandi khoon ko apne ped main raka hai or ilzam jai bhia pe lagaya...

SLAP...the second one came on the other side of jigs face...holding her face tight...jai bhia appne muji, appne behen ko tapadh mara...or woh be es middle class wali lardkyo ki laye

Haaa, or es baar agar ek or shabd kaha na tu du or marongi sumji...

Rano spotting her sister, she run to her, both sisters hugged and cried. Bani was shocked at the last statement of jigs, but glad that her husband took her side, to her this gesture was enough, she smiled through her tears, she felt proud of him.

You know what jigs, your disgusting, your selfish, you are the meanest person i have ever seen, why are you doing all this kiya milta hai tumhe yeh sab karthi hui...

Jai bhia app muji apne bhen ko esa keh...

Haa haa apne bhen ko, what is wrong with you jigs, you have changed so much i don't believe this at all...all you do is keep tab on others business, and interfere whenever you can. Do you have any idea where and how your own kids are...

Jai bhia yeh app...

No you don't you don't know what they do, where the go, who they chose to be friends, all you do is party and interfering in others business....jai walked to his room leaving everyone behind.

Everyone started comforting rano and bani...jigs crying went in to her room but promising herself to get back at these sisters.

****** ***

It was an horrible day for the walia's...jai had literally lost it on her...rano cried the entire day still to shaken from the incident, having no choice bani asked pia and pushkar if they could keep rano in their home for few days. They agreed pushkar came to pick her up. The guys came early and the dinner was as quiet only a few people sat around the table, jigs was in her room. Aditya found out, he felt disgusting at the thought of his wife doing all that and apologised to bani for it, and of course the apology was accepted. After dinner jai went to his room where he stayed the entire day, he asked ranveer and aditya to bring jigs and come to his room where he needs to tell them something important.

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After some time bani finished her kitchen work and went towards her room, she entered and closed the door jai was laying on the sofa watching tv.

How's rano?

She is fine, i spoke to her

Where is she?

She was crying and i sent her to pia's house

Do you think we should ask anu to come as well

No i think we should tell the others first and then anu

Knock knock...

Came in...aditya, ranveer and jigs entered jai's room. Jai signalled them to come and set...

They took their sets but jigs trying to ignore both jai and bani...jai signalled bani to come and set next to her, which she accepted gladly.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
hey meena
gr88 part
so anu is pregnant
and ghosh this jigs na
i really hate her
jai di the good thing by slapping her
how can she accuse rano like this
and shail also cant speak anything or what
now how is jai gonna explain anus situation to the family
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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