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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey meena,
great part..
can't wait for bani to clear the misunderstanding..
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great........bani back where she belong.....that is. IN SOMEELSE's mess
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi
That was a good story line. The first part being so mushy mushy and truly romantic and suddenly out of the blue JW is enraged with Bani caused by a misunderstanding. He is totally in a rage and in a raging bull mode but is unable to control his feelings of pure passion for Bani. Wow....
Hopefully our Sati savitri Bani clears the confusion with him in the coming update and the sizzling chemistry continues between them. Good one, Meena.
Plz continue.....Merry Christmas.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by Meena
Hanji i'm only 18😳...Thank you soo much for such a sweet complement😳...They mean so much to me. I always liked writing, its fun writing, infact painting and writing is a great hobby that i have since very young age.
I have to say its always you guys who boosts our energy to write😃😊😳. without your comments we wouldnt be able to write. I glad you liked my stories so far.
Hi Meena:
I loved the other stories they were great and great to know you like painting and writing those are great hobbies. Hope one day soon we will be reading books of Meena Khan. I must say everyone who writes on the forum are really good writers they take a lot of time and effort to write up all those wonderful stories on the forum and it is great we can go back and find it and enjoy reading them. Thanks once again and a very happy new year. Please update soon. I am sure you must be busy with christmas and all the fun around. Thanks 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey all
I'm sorry I havent been able to update lately as i have been very busy revising for an important exam. To be honest i dont have any written parts.
Once exam is over i will start writing, Thanks for all you comments...
lastly HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL...OMG its all ready 2010...and its 00:22 am in London...
May you all have a greate year ahead, with lots of Happyness, peace and well health.
Meena
p.s. PADLIMA , me and an author, dont think soo yaar...my english is really bad even though i have lived my life in UK... but tere mou main gee and shakar...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
its k worry abt ur exams first. study is more important but do cont the fanfic after ur exams:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey meena
Wishing YOu a ver Happy New Year
and dont worry
u concentrate on ur studeis first
then think about writing thasi FF
all the best with ur exams
take care
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi all, I am really sorry for the late update and short one too...please maaf kardo its short part...my sis isnt allowing me to write she wants me to apply mehndi on her hands so thats is why i stopped here. But promise i will write soon and post it. Thanks for your wishes i had my driving test and i passed... this is a short treat from me, but paka promise i will write longer1 Inshaallah and then post it.
please ignore any spellings, i hvnt profe read it...please do comment good or bad.
Thank you
Meena
Part 4

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Good morning Meera...said bani entering the reception of The Walia Industries

Good morning madam...smiled meera

Is Mr walia in his office?

Yes ma'am his in his office, you may see him

Thanks...bani started walking towards the elevator to go to his room. Today she will not hide anything from him, today she will tell him everything, she will be honest with him, today it the time to clarify all the misunderstanding with him.

Bani had enough of all this nonsense now, it was fact that even if she wanted she couldn't hide it, either today or tomorrow it will come out and why is that she is putting her relationship in danger for other, why is that every time when things get better with she and him than something really silly, stupid happens that changes everything, but today she will not hesitate, she will tell him. The past two week have been a hell for her, for both of them actually, he has completely ignored her, every time he get rude, she has really had enough of all that.

With a heavy heart stepped into the floor where her husband's office was, she walked heavily towards his room. Holding the door knob she took a deep breath, she entered without even knocking.

Jai looked up from his laptop thinking that it was Aditya coming, because the only person who comes without knocking into his room, but rather getting a shock of his life, he stood up angrily:

Tum yaha...what the hell are you doing here? How dare you coming here?...saying so he went around to where she was standing now facing her.

Bani was all ready nervous and his shouting didn't help either. She looked really scared at him...she wanted to say so many things but she forgot everything, her mind was dead now.

Woh mai yaha....

Tum kiya, tum yaha kiya huh.... bolo what is it that you want to say...and why are you here?

He was frustrated, why was she here he didn't know. His outburst didn't help at all, bani was scared of it, she could feel that his arrogance was back, he was the same man who tortured the hell out of her.

I am...iam not pre...pregnant...bani blurted out

What????????

What did you say....come again, jai couldn't believe what he was hearing, for a second he thought what bolt shi* was she saying now....

Mai such keh rahi hu...app ne ju suna or ju samaj rahi hai woh such nahi... Mr walia i am not pregnant, i know i have hurt you a lot by keeping this truth away from you, but i had no choice someone gave me oath not to tell you this, i was helpless, i wanted tell you my self but before i get the chance everything happened the other way. I know your upset and you should be, but i had no choice i had to do this. Maine apko bahut takleef dehai...muji please maaf kardi jie...

Jai was really shocked he didn't know what to say ...he kept staring at her then he went and sat on the sofa nearby, he hold his face on his hand....

Bani sirf ek sawal who is pregnant?

Bani went and sat close to him, she took his big hand in her small hand, she held them tight and looke into his eyes.

Jo such mani appko batani wala hu woh bahut karwa hai, i don't how you will react to it, but please, you not alone in this, i'm here always with you...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

Good Bani told JW the truth, that she is not pregnant, but wonder who is.

Meena, awesome short chapter, looking forwards to the longgggggggggggg update

you promise. Really enjoying the story so far.

Take care and all the best in 2010.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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So proud of this Bani. Went to meet Jai & tell him the truth.


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