FF kaise kahoon last chp on pg 11 updated 17thsep

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi guys
i am posting an old ff which i have written for RPR in here. i wrote that for June anniversary . this is for guys who havent read the story there....... i would love to know feed backs on this too. Happy reading.. my other story will take its own time till then happy reading the chapter's will be posted one by one. here goes the one
ch1-2 pg 1, ch3 pg 2, ch4 pg 3, ch5 pg 4, ch 6&7 pg 6, chptr 8 pg 7
, ch9 pg 9, ch10 pg10 , ch11 on pg 11

Kaise kahoon

For past two days it was raining heavily. She felt the nature cried along with her . She cried continuously and there were no tears left. Her face dried up with tears. She held her father's picture in her hand. She only had him and he was gone because of that man. Her jaws tightened at the thought. If it was not for him her father would be alive and with her. How could any proud man bear the insult that was showered upon him? He had been working for him for years. He had proved his loyalty in the past years. Her vision blurred. She would not forgive him never. She would kill him and she would show her father ' she broke down into a heart wrenching cry.

'Bas karo beta.. do din hogaye aur thum abhi bhi..' said her mausi patting her shoulders.

'Mausi.. mein akeli pad gayi mausi.. Bauji muje chod kar'' Bani cried.

'Shhh beta.. hum log heina thumhare liyein aur thumhara chacha bhi hien'' the lady knew chacha was just for the name sake Bani could take care of her better than him. he was good for nothing brother of Nishikant and his wife was less said the better.

'Bani puttar mein zara ghar ho kar aathi hoon.' Said her neighbor who she calls Mausi.

Bani nodded her head.

She hardly ate anything, her mausi felt bad for the girl. The anger that was building inside for Jai Walia was reaching to its peak.

He hardly visited his factory in 'Badegaon' the place where they lived. She would wait till he comes and then attack him she had no idea how she was going to do it but she would kill the man who took her father away from her the only living relative. Day and night she thought about the mighty Walia how she would attack him. She would destroy him. she would. She could still see the face of her father when he came home heartbroken. He had told her all his life he had worked sincerely for the man and it took him only an hour to accuse him off'''. Bani's face reddened with anger as she thought about it. Her father wanted to speak to administration for a job for his daughter when everything went wrong. His manager accused him of stealing from the factory fearing he would be caught any moment by Nishikant and his file would go to the Walias who was ruthless in dealing with people who were deceitful.

How dare they mistrust her father who worked day and night for the factory? They knew him and how can they dismiss him.. The insult was too much for the man he suffered an attack and passed away. Bani would never forgive them'. never.

Bani was sitting holding a paper in her room Mausi walked in with a plate filled with roti and curry she put the plate before her and said, "Bani please take food you have become too skinny ' and you know beta I hear Jai Walia has come to the guest house' Raju ne kahan ki factory mein aya tha..'

Bani looked up with a jolt. She will not waste time thinking about her sorry state she will go and meet him and kill him'.

'Bani thum sun rahein hein na.. Eat okay.' Saying that the woman left giving her one more look. Bani pulled the plate towards her made sure she ate something. Everything tasted bitter in her mouth. She had only one thing in her mind destroy Jai Walia. she finished eating cleaned the plate. Went to the kitchen and got a knife hid it in her duppatta took an umbrella and walked out of the house shutting the door. Her umbrella almost flew in the wind. The rain was heavy almost drenching her. She held the knife tightly and walked towards the guest house in determination. As she reached the mud path her feet slipped she fell on the mud path the umbrella slipped from her hand another wind blew the thing away. She got up clutching the knife and walked towards the guest house the weather was worsening and it was getting darker.

The guest house was lit with candles. The power was cut off. He looked out of the window and groaned. 'God! How am I going to get out of this weather?' he looked at his assistant and said, 'Mahesh, I can't stay back I need to be in Mumbai and you take care of the problem and call me if anything important.'

Mahesh his assistant nodded his head and groaned inward, what tight spot but there was no escaping this night from here. He had to do what was asked for. 'Sir how do you think you will go? The weather has worsened and it is difficult to see the road properly and ..'

'I need to go Mahesh I'll take care and please see the dispute is settled okay.' He took the keys from the table and left the room. He got into his four wheel drive and took off.. like Mahesh had warned the vision was difficult. The vehicle jumped most of the time and he was cautious. His cell phone buzzed and he attended the call.

Bani walked in the darkness with only one aim. She had to keep up her strength to take the mud path further. Most of the time she slipped and it was that moment she saw a vehicle approach the road. She did not have a place to move wooden fences and wild plants were on the sides she tried to get past one of the plant she slipped. Bani did not remember what happened she was hit with a heavy object before she could realize what was happening her vision clouded and darkness filled.

Jai put his feet on the break he felt something was hit. He disconnected the call and opened the door. The rain drenched his dress he switched on the headlights took the torch from the car and walked to the front. Jai almost had an attack at the sight, with trembling feet he bend down near the bonnet and touched bundle of clothing. With trembling fingers he turned the cloth and gasped. He had hit a girl.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Me first Me first.........!
I hope Bani gets amnesia know lol😆😆
What is JW gone do know hhmmm I wonder🥱🥱
byebye
Love Perveen.xx😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bani was set out in killing JW, but here he almost has killed her instead. 😆 Interesting story, Kamy. JW's life is in danger, that too, from Bani Rani. 😆 Wonder what's going to happen next. Is she going to have amnesia?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey kamy
now what has jai got himself into
plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
and hope bani is fine
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow, fabulous FF Kamy hope Bani is not too hurt and Jai heart is still beating from the shock.

Post next part soon please, thank you.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank u guys for the feed backs here comes the next chapter

Chapter 2

Jai couldn't speed the car like he had intended the path was not smooth and on top of it rain did not seem to stop. He had no idea from where the girl came and how she got on the road alone at this weather. He did stop to look for someone was with her. he carried the small bundle and put her on the back seat and drove aiming the hospital. No hospital was on the way. He had to reach the town to find one. He stopped his car and took her in his arms and carried her inside. There were hardly any people at the reception he had to run with her calling out to people. A sleepy doctor came out and looked at him he yelled for an attendant the stretcher was bought and Jai placed her delicately on the stretcher. She was wet all over and unconscious. The doctor looked at her and asked one of the nurses to change her dress. The nurse looked at him. 'Doctor we don't have any dress..'

'Get her a hospital gown.' He yelled jai looked at them not believing what he was hearing. The hospital did look worn out and he knew hardly he could expect a good treatment from here. The nurse did not move. 'Nurse get her something to wear for god sake.' Said Jai.

'Sir we don't have any good gown what we have is all worn out moth eaten…' she couldn't continue she looked angrily at the old doctor who turned and left to his consulting room.

'Get her then moth eaten I'll see what I can do.' Jai tried his best not to snap. He followed the doctor to the consulting room.

He looked up as Jai walked in. 'Doctor how is she?'

'She is not yet conscious.. it will take time. I have bandaged the injury on the forehead and we don't have any modern equipment to check her thoroughly.

'She is alive right?' Jai couldn't stop him from asking the doctor.

'yes young man very much.'

'Ok doctor I'll take her away. Since I don't see you can do anything better.'

The doctor did not reply. He put some bills on the table and strode out quickly cursing his luck. He walked to the room the nurse just finished changing her. She put her wet cloths in a bag and looked at him. Jai saw the gown. It looked almost light shade of grey once up on a time it would have been a good shade of blue thought Jai. The nurse was right . the gown was moth eaten here and there were small holes. He looked at the girl. Her eyes were shut like she was deep in sleep. She had a cute round face. She looked overly pale. Her hair hung over her shoulders. He walked to her and picked her up in his arms. The nurse looked at him in surprise. 'I am taking her.' She ran with him to his car to put the girl's wet cloths. Jai gave her some money.

He walked to his car put her in the back seat and drove home. He did not want to admit her in this condition and make news. He would take her to his house give her proper treatment and send her home. The drive was again for 2 hours. The heavy rain has stopped and it was drizzling slightly. Every few minutes he looked at her if she was alright. It was around 10 pm he reached his home. He honked his car. The guard opened the gate. He drove into the porch. He came out of the car and opened the back door and took her in his arms. The guard looked at him mouth opened. Jai did not bother to give him an explanation. He opened the door balancing her on his shoulder. He was glad he was staying alone in this house. His sister and Mausi stayed in other house. He switched on the lights put her in the guest room covered her with the quilt and took his cell out. He called his family doctor Sharma and told him about the accident. The doctor arrived in another 30 minutes. He looked at the girl who was dressed in a shabby gown and looked at him.

'I'll explain…… first you check her and tell me doc how she is doing?' he said exasperated. The doctor did not ask him why he did not take her to the hospital. He new Jai better than to ask such questions. He checked her thoroughly gave her an injection checked her wound and returned to the living room. Jai was helping him with a drink. He turned as he heard the footsteps.

'How is she?'

I can't tell Jai. She has to wake up. Unless we do not do a thorough check up we can't say anything about her.'

Jai nodded.

'When will she get up?'

'In another hour or so, I'll wait. I'll speak to Rama and tell her I'll be staying the night here.'

Jai looked at him with gratitude.

The doctor went to call his wife on the cell.

The hours went by. The doctor and Jai sat in his living room waiting for the girl to wake up. They heard something falling in the room both of them sprang up and ran to the guest room.

He saw her sitting on the bed clutching the quilt cover her face filled with fear and uncertainty.

She looked at them from one to the other. 'who are you? Where am I?'

'Hi there, young lady you are up. How are you feeling?' asked the doctor with warmth. She looked at them and closed her eyes.

'Who are you? And what's wrong with me?' she asked again in fear.

'Don't be scared dear, calm down.. you have met with an accident and my friend here has taken you ………..'

'Why here? Why not in the hospital? Is this a hospital? She asked looking at her torn gown. Nothing was making sense. The room she was in was beautifully decorated and the dress she was wearing was a rag? Her head pounded. She held her head in her hand.

'Calm down dear? You are having head ache?' asked Dr. Sharma sitting beside her .she moved away from him.

'What is your name?' he asked looking at her frightened face.

The girl looked at the doctor and her eyes fell on the man standing beside him. he was tall broad shouldered had intense face. His eyes bore into her. she looked away.

'What's your name?'

She looked at the doctor not understanding the question.

'I am doctor Sharma and he is Jai ..' he said pointing at the tall man. 'what's your name?'

'My name?' she looked at the doctor horrified. 'My name? what's my name?' she asked horrified. A tremor ran through Jai.

'I don't know my name… I don't know …' tears ran down her cheeks. She clutched the quilt in her hand and looked in utter confusion at the doctor and then she cried making Jai guilty as hell. 'I don't know my name doctor.. who am i?'

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hahaha u guys guessed it right amnesia hehehe, comments are most welcome...
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kmay
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey kamy
gr88 part
so bani has got amnesia
now what will jai doo
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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See Im right ha ha ha ha

Im doing a jiggy wiggy dance know on my bed Kamy
byebye
Love Perveen.xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yadash kogaye, JW, take full advantage of it. 😉😆 Have her fall madly in love with you so she doesn't have an lingering thoughts of murdering you silly. You will be saving your life from the clutches of that mad woman. 😆 Awesome so far, Kamy! 👍🏼 Now JW's guilty conscience will make her stay with him till she feels better and even possibly till she regains her memory. Can't wait for the next part. 😃

Love,
Dil
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Loved this FF on RPR.... !!! Thanks for Posting it again here...

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