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minu1234

@minu1234

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#101

I LOVE this story
Cant wait for update.
😊 😛
😊

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Rockyy_

@Rockyy_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Kamy awesome update.

What selfish individuals Sahil and Pia are.

Would love to see Pia get the chicken pox when she comes home,

mainly on her face.

P.S. Kamy I sent you a PM please take a look thanks.

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Neelofar

@lil angel 4 u

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#103

haha great part!!! you should make anu force jai into playing the balloon game as well and then let bani and jai be together so they can talk.

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Hima

@j&b84

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

wow kamy u r one gift writer dear, u have carve this story so well with all the emotions. i can't wait to see wht or h will jigs reacted when she cm to know about bani, as for adi he is the best pls update soon 😊

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nema123

@nema123

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#105

Hey Kamy dear..

It was lovely update....!!

Adi is such a nice guy....! I don't know why but many times guy's like adi get's wives like Jig...in real life too.... :(

Can't wait for next part...! Hope JW is quarter fallen... :) in love off-course...

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pooks

@pooks

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#106

I can wait for Jai and Bani to meet and some relationship to forge between them. For now, I am extremely content to see Bani sooo happy, playing with balloons and whistles. The girl is reliving her childhood with Anu 😊

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scorpion3110

@scorpion3110

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#107

Such chweet updates. Me was almost crying when Adi asked Bani to call him Papa ,atleast in private. *sniffles* and he got her balloons and whistles *awwwww* and Anu and Bani were having a ball. Curiosity got the better of Jai (Translated to Jigyasa got the better of Jai??? Lol I know very poor joke, im feeling kinda cookie today, nothing a new update cant fix u know) Well anyways I agree JB starting talking and falling in love out of nowhere is sort of weird, Its ur story, love to hear it just the way u want to tell it. Will wait (If I have to) for them to actually interact (more than, thank u for the tea or adi is calling u) and see how their love story unfolds now that Adi told people that Bani is his daughter. and well Jai is his real nephew and incest is not in, hopefully that wont be an obstacle ( I know im getting ahead of myself here, so will shut up).

lots of wubb

Eva

update soon dear

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Ramya

@iloveserials

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#108

Hi Kamy

So sorry for not commenting earlier. Just got to read all the parts only today as I was on a vacation and couldnt follow the story. Just caught up with the entire story in one breath and must say it was mind blowing.

A totally different FF. So Bani is Jigyasa's first born and Aditya's reactions and emotions are penned beautifully after knowing that Bani was the result of his wife's betrayal.

Hate that Pia. Pia is an arrogant, snobbish and an utter fool who can love only herself. Hated Sahil's character but looks like he's coming around after Anu's chicken pox.

Loved the progression of relationship between Adi & Bani and it was so touching when he asked her to call Papa. Just reading the whole thing made my eyes water. The last scene of the last update was awesome - Anu, Bani & Adi playing like a happy family with balloons. I know JB relationship / friendship has not at all come into picture but I love it just like how the story is moving. It's really awesome.

Just keep the flow going and JB relationship will automatically come into phase. The story is gripping and you are doing an amazing job.

Keep updating regularly.

ILS

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scorpion3110

@scorpion3110

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#109

Well sweetie the extra time u bought by writing Farmville is up, Me wants an update to this one and me wants it NOW, well atlest soon if not now. 😛

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Rockyy_

@Rockyy_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#110

Kamy, time for you to hire some help to tend to your farm

and update Before The Storm, your neighbours on this farm is

waiting on you to tend to this crop now.

P.S. once again really really enjoyed the SS.
Take care.

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