SS: The Hidden Truth. TOPIC CLOSED

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dhani

the start is good
do cont soon
so now what will MR Iyer has to say about the WHOLE ISSUE IN HIS REPORT
DO CONT SOON
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'm not much into murder mysteries, but am going to read this story for your sake since you are a wonderful writer. sounds interesting though so far. india's security is at threat. wonder how JW comes into this? Plz continue soon.

Love,
Dil
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I like James Bond movies...I know not much story but like the action and very well written dhani...Very nice start...the touch of intrigue needed is there along with couple of possible interesting characters too...glad you took up the challenge...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wonderful start ...quite a thriller it seems to be ...wonder what part our hero is doing ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey!!!!!!!!
interesting start...
so bani is already introduced, i wonder what jai's role will be??
will he be the bad guy or the james bond!!!
continue soon
nadia
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I hope you are not going to be like the AMERICANS and make muslims terrorists again. Not all of us are that bad you know>>>
nice story
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Posted: 16 years ago
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A very IMPORTANT note… …

Hey guys…

I was about to post the next part, but I am discontinuing this SS. Well, lenmed's post acted as an eye-opener for me…please don't blame lenmed, it was a very honest opinion which I respect which had stopped me from doing something grievous, though unintentionally… …

Like AMERICANS think all Muslims are not bad, was the comment. I completely agree with you dear.

Now why I am discontinuing this SS…

I have very strong opinions about international terrorism. To an extent that I feel the damn Kasab should be publically hanged. I realized I was unintentionally writing something on those lines of international terrorism… … which I feel is a burning issue.

Lenmed, I agree, all Muslims are not bad, in fact 'Muslim' word is a very pure word, which unfortunately has been abused so much. My own good friend is a Muslim and I respect her and her religion highly. Islam's teachings are of great value and I have had the good fortune of knowing few. But one also need to accept the fact that Taliban has distorted the holy Islamic rules and has become narcissist in the name of God to an extent that whenever a person talks about a terrorist automatically the finger is pointed towards a Muslim, which is a sad state of affair. The recent issue with Abdul Kalam Sir and Shah Ruk Khan. But it is wrong to even have biased opinions about Americans, I know they are no better but still.

I didn't have any particular plot in mind; I just introduced a character as one of the prime suspects. But I realized where it was going…if I did make the Muslim guy the culprit or not was a different thing, but I had included that fellow was enough.

I am sorry…I apologize for my unintentional writing, and if it has caused any pain and hurt I am sorry…in the presence of my Almighty I am saying this…

The world is suffering from enormous problems, by continuing this story I don't want to give out wrong signals and hurt someone purposefully, my conscience and upbringing doesn't allow me to do that.

I just want to spread happiness and cheer through my stories, at times evoke a social message which might awaken our souls but I surely don't want to write such sensitive topic and cause unnecessary strain as we are already facing its horrible consequences.

So, sorry guys, I won't be writing this story any further…probably it wasn't meant to happen. I am glad because thrillers and mysteries are not my cup of tea. I am terrible at them…

I hope you all understand… …thanks a lot!!!

God bless
Dhani…

P.S.: lenmed, don't feel guilty; it's not because of you. In fact you have stopped me from doing a mistake. Thanks for that.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey please do not say you are not continuing. I just made an observation, I cannot stop anyone from writing/feeling what they do.
It just seems that whenever the word terror/ terrorist/ etc is mentioned majority of the world immediately think of "muslims". Because we see/read so much of it and perhaps sometimes it is justifiable for people to react that way, i simply felt that it would be nice to just for once not expect the villians to be muslims.
You are a brilliant writer and I am sure that if you decided to portray a negative character that was Muslim then it is your perogative.
I would feel really bad if you were to deprive other readers of this wonderful story. I beg you to continue.
God Bless.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dhani
we also agree with u
i dont know why people have this kind of thinking
if a person is muslim, it dosent give any1 to point a finger on him that he or she can be a terrorist
thats really so argghhhh
but dhani
do start a new story atleast
if not this 1 then
plzz dear
its a wish form ur readers
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey lenmed,
Don't feel guilty yaar!!! it has nothing to do with. In fact i realised that i was unintentionally encouraging soemthing...which even i don't believe in!!!!
Sorry guys...but i pormise i will write another story...whcih will be completely different!!!! and much more enjoyable!!!
God bless
Dhani
P.S.: Thanks a lot for understanding!!!1

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