FF: Khushi : NOTE-pg5: 2/11

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Hey,
I am back again but with a different story. I don't know why the other one yadein is stuck, i have written bits and pieces of that but not getting enough time to join the missing pieces. I hope and pray to God, please give me time and motivation to finish this one.

Khushi

It was the first snowfall of the season and Simla was flooded by tourists. Bani picked up her shawl and made her way down to have a look of the first snow. She had spent all her life in this place. Indeed it seems every road, every corner knew her. She had seen more than thirty very beautiful snowfalls in this city, some she remembers with nostalgia, some she did not want to remember and some she could not. She opened the small wooden gate of her house and took the narrow road that leads towards the main city. Something strike out of blue and she changed her path towards the very big villa that covered hectares of area in the neighbourhood.

Due to a landslide life came to a standstill. There were families waiting to see their loved ones. There was chaos all over. People were desperately trying all means to reach their near and dear ones. But as there was no connectivity via the road, similarly the phone lines were also not working. Bani was also tensed as today Khushi was coming from Delhi. She had gone there with her friends for the open day of Delhi University. She wanted to join there, and even Bani thought that she has no right to bind the girl to this small town. She should be as free as a bird to reach the sky of her dreams and who knows to come back home as night falls. The anxiety that she felt within was coming in turbulent waves. She could feel something was going to happen. She prayed to God for Khushi's safety.

Bani had earned a name for herself, it was nothing that she ever wanted. She wanted a simple life with a loving husband and children, her own children. But destiny has something else in store for her. She was born to raise other people's children, not raise exactly but to entertain precisely. She had started writing children's book only to keep herself occupied but what started as something to pass time ended into a full-fledged carrier that not only earned her money but a name also.

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Jai was coming back to Simla after a very long time, may be after ten years or more, he could not and care not remember. His grandfather was not keeping well and the old man wanted to see him before his death. Jai could not recall what went wrong between his parents and his grandfather. It has been years that the old man has stopped contacting them. Neither did he ever visited them in last ten years nor does his parents ever made an effort to come to the old man. Jai himself was so busy in expanding his business and sorting out his personal life that he completely forgot about his bauji, the man with whom he thought he had bonded more than his own parents. But the thing was that, if the old man was angry with something with his son and daughter in law, why did he sever ties with Jai. But Jai was not here to analyse anybody's mistake, he knew that it was his mistake that he could never take out some time for the old man.

But as destiny would have it, before he could reach Simla, he got stuck in a landslide. He was an influential man, and though there was scarcity of rooms but he got a private suit in the hotel. There were families, people old and young, males and females waiting for the authorities to make a way so that they could reach their destination. It was late evening and Jai had come down for his dinner when he heard commotion in the hotel lobby. He found two young girls fighting with the receptionist for a room. The receptionist was trying very hard to convince them that there was no room available.

"If I would have been a minister or a film star, you would have been lying on the floor to give a room, but no, just because I am a common person all the rooms of your hotel are booked." Jai found it quite amusing that a chit of a girl hardly in her teens was giving a good lecture not only to the receptionist but to the manager.

Jai found that there were many people who could not get accommodation for the night and there was no proper arrangement from the government either. He walk past and found that though there were lot of people who could not found accommodation but either they had their own car or were in groups big enough to take shelter in some cheap lodges. It was only a few people like an old couple, a young female with an infant and these two teenagers who could neither go back to the bus they were travelling, nor to the lodge and were not even getting accommodation in a decent enough hotel.

Somehow Jai made some arrangements for the girls and the old couple to stay in his suite, he could not find the young lady with the child. He felt a bit guilty for taking that long to decide but he would have not been that guilty if the girl named Khushi would not have taunted him like hundred times within half an hour when he had dinner with the couple and the girls. Jai had hardly changed into his night suite when he heard a knock on his bedroom door. He was surprised to see the two girls standing in front of him. They asked him to come along with them to look around for the young lady with the child. He was listening to the banter between the two girls, while Sonia was getting angry on Khushi for making her face the harsh weather, the girl called Khushi was looking worried.

"Stop it Sonia, it could have been you in place of that lady."

"Oh! Your conscious is pricked to see a lonely lady with a child, mother Teresa she is mature enough to find a warm place for herself and her child, I don't think you need to worry so much about her and bother not only me but this gentleman also."

"Please few more minutes, please sir." urged Khushi with her eyes glistening with tears. Jai nodded his head in affirmation and felt like he was in his scouting camp.

"I know she is mature enough but if something happens to her or her child, I will never be able to forgive myself. Ma has always taught me to help the needy and I don't want to fail her."

"But Khushi, Bani aunty will be more than angry if she would come to know that you are out in snow at this time of the night to help somebody. I mean she would appreciate your helping someone but u know how protective she is about you and Rano mausi. I tell u, you are not going to get as much appreciation as scolding, be prepared to face the music."

"No, she would not get a reason to scold me, as you know we have this gentleman with.........

Look there is Shashi aunty, hey....." she ran towards the lady in concern.

When Jai came back to his room with all the three damsels in distress it was already midnight. They had found the lady in miserable condition, there was not enough warmth in the shabby hotel lobby where she was sitting with few people. She had thanked more with her eyes than her words for helping her son and her out in such a bad weather. Jai found it quite amusing that everybody was thanking him where as it was this girl who made him take this decision to take both the teenagers and the old couple in his suite and then it was her again who took him in search of the lady with the child. Jai found himself smiling at the thought of her nonstop banter. His niece Anu was of the same age but he could never think that she would even think of doing anything like that, indeed she could not think beyond fashion and parties. He could not stop envying her parents for having such a wonderful daughter and a tinge of sadness filled him.

When he got up next day, the roads were already clear. He found that all the people who stayed in his suite have left without even bidding goodbye to him. He felt a little bad not because he wanted them to thank him but because he thought for some unknown reason he wanted to know that they slept well and were safe. Anyways, he was not here to make friends, he packed his bag, order for breakfast. There was a note along with the breakfast tray saying,

Thank You,

My Knight in shining armour.

Take care,

Khushi.

Jai could not help himself from smiling.

***********

She sat on the wooden bench remembering the last time when she felt so lonely. She was never alone, always surrounded by people, rather children but somewhere she was all alone.

Suddenly a voice broke her reverie. "Arre madam, have you lost your way?"

"What are you doing out in snow?"

Bani recognised the man, the moment she looked at him. How could she not remember the man who was responsible for everything that happened in her life. He was the first man whom she had fallen in love, or as her heart told her. He married somebody else because he was in love with her. He was the one whose grandfather had selected her for him when his wife died. He was the one who refused to marry her because he and his parents thought she was not up to his standard. She found it strange to see him in person after about 17 years. He has aged gracefully, but still he was handsome enough to catch the attention of all the young girls around.

"I had come to see Mr. Walia, I am his neighbour" she told him. To say that he was amused was an altogether different thing. He was intrigued with this strange lady who was sitting in the snow oblivious to her environment and telling him that she wanted to see him. People don't leave him alone even when he was miles apart from his house, his company. He had come to see his grandfather who was not keeping well for the last few years. He was already eighty nine. Then it clicked to him that she had come to see his grandfather and not him.

"We have always shared the first snowfall but today I am not sure....." she got up to go while saying that.

"Why not?" curiosity getting better of him.

"Today he has better things to do than watching the snow." were the departing words. He was left looking at her departing figure. Jai cursed himself, what was happening to him, in a short time of two days he had found himself attracted to the opposite sex, he consoled himself that the reasons in both cases were different.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi
Nice to know that you have started a new one. But just curios about Jaiu's and Bani's age in this. 17 years is a long time to remain heart broken. And is his grand father dying. And Jai is he married beofre. You know I am bit conufsed guess I have to read it again. But just wanted to comment as you started a new one. Hope you will complete yadeen i really liked the Bani in that . She was a true brat.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey clare
nice to see u start a new FF
its a good start
but a bit confusing
is khushi banis daughter or some1 else
plzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Hey Shweta,

Wonderful start dear...!!!

Please continue soon..
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nice ff. so how old are JB? and who is khushi?
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I love this "FF" , please continue soon, at which point all the characters will be known.


P.S. your "FF" Yadein, is a sweet and funny story. Maybe go back to some of your other "FF", to gain

some insight to help with it.

Thank you, an appreciative reader.
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I guess, Khushi is not really Jai's child. Bani is Jai'd grandfather's neighbor. Little confused right now. Waiting for the next part. Plz. cont.soon.

I hope you will update your 'Yaadein' FF as well. I liked that Bani

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Part-2

Jai found that the old man though very sick but was very happy to find him at his side. Both of them spent their day talking while having lunch. He noticed that his grandfather though on his death bed, had his spirits high. They talked about everything under the sun, even Jai's failed marriage to Roshni. He discussed about his business with him and was shocked to know that the old man knew everything about his business and nothing about his personal life. But what came next was more shocking. The old man wanted him to get married and this time to a girl of his choice.

"Bauji how come can u think of that? I am done with getting married. Some things are not in your destiny, how hard you may try but you could never get them."

"Jai beta I want to see you happy then only I can die peacefully."

"I am happy bauji. One does not need to be married to be happy."

"But I am not happy; I want to see you happily married. I think if not for yourself than for my sake you will. Tell me, for whom are you working day and night?"

"Bauji Ranveer, Sahil and Anu will inherit what I have earned."

"But they are Jigyasa's children."

"Bauji it is you who is telling me this, you divided your property equally among your son and adopted daughter. You were the one to advocate that Jigyasa di should get equal share when Papa did not wanted to give."

"Jaiii, you don't understand beta. I am asking you to marry because it is not important who inherit your property, what is important is that one needs a partner. You may not find a need for a partner when you are young, it is more important to have someone when you are old. I am telling you from my own experience."

Jai thought what could he say to make the old man understand that he was no more interested in marrying. He had his fill of having faith on woman.

"Jai you need to have somebody to share your sorrows and joys even when you are young. You might ignore the need to have someone beside you by being busy but what will you do when you turn old. At old age you certainly miss that someone special who would take care of you and listen to you when you want to say something or talk to you something when you feel lonely. It has been years your grandmother left me but I tell you, the best phase of my life was with her and that too after our retirement. She was a real companion and I want someone like her to be at your side when you grow old, to love you, to take care of you."

Jai could not answer back the logics of his grandfather, not only because he was his grandfather or he was dying but because somewhere he also wanted to believe the old man. He had his share of young love with Sonali. They were both very young when they fell in love and got married. He was truly happy with her except for her irrational behaviour when it came to speed. She wanted everything very fast in her life and what she got in return was her untimely death along with the death of their unborn baby. That had made Jai think that life is not only fun, he needed to get serious about it. But he could never forget those good old times that he spend with her. He wondered how his life would have been if Sonali was still alive. He wondered how she would have loved to come to this place at this time of the year. She loved nature at it's best, whether be it snow or rain. He indulged himself in her thoughts, what she would have done if she would have found him sitting idle with his grandfather. She would have probably taken both men out for sightseeing, no not sightseeing but certainly made them sweat out in the snow and neither would have the guts to go against her wishes, the thought himself made him chuckle.

"What made you smile my boy?"

"I was thinking if Sonali would have been alive, she would not have let us sit here laze around, rather she would have taken us to play some snow sport. She was so lively, so vibrant with life; it is difficult to accept that she is no more with me."

"I know how it feels to be alone when your best friend leaves you. I promise you a lifetime of happiness my son if you agree to marry Bani. I promise you that if not better than Sonali then by no means she is less than her. She will fill the void in your life and would be the best companion you could have asked for." Jai looked at his grandfather as if he has gone mad.

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It was during evening tea, Jai was trying to convince his grandfather that he could not marry. But by the time he realised that he could not go against the old man, he thought of agreeing to him at the moment and once he would leave for Mumbai and get busy in his life he could postpone this issue of marriage. He went for a walk to clear his head about all the happenings around him.

Khushi came over to see how her bauji was doing. Living in a small town and having neighbours like Dixits was one of the benefits that Randheer Walia enjoyed. He has seen the ups and downs of the Dixit family for three generations. He shared a friendship with Ramakant Dixit who was a Sanskrit scholar and settled in his neighbourhood nearly at the same time when he did. While his son Uday went to Mumbai and increased the ancestral wealth, Ramakant's son Nishikant started a small business with his father's lifelong savings. But the problems started with his marriage, not because his wife Kiran was demanding but because she was from a rich family and had got married against her parents wish. Nishikant developed an inferiority complex as he could never provide her with things that she was used to and would have got if she would have got married to somebody else. He became into someone who dream big but did nothing to achieve it. He took onto drinking which was very painful for both Ramakant and Kiran. Kiran took up a teaching job in a private school so that atleast she could send her daughters to school. Ramakant started working in the local library to help kiran as whatever Nishikant earned he lost it in drinking. That was the starting of their downfall. If they had thought that it was the worst phase of their life, worst was yet to come. Suddenly one day Bani came crying to him and told him in her childish manner that her father had gone missing.

Both Ramakant and Randheer Walia looked for Nishikant but when could not trace him for two days, they lodged an FIR. Taking police help was of no use as they could not find him either. Thinking the worst about Nishikant but still hoping that he would come back one day, they carried on with their lives. Ramakant would work in the shop during the day and work in library in the evenings. Kiran started going to the shop in the evening though neither she nor her father in law liked it. The only silver lining was that her three daughters were studying well. They were turning out to be beautiful as their mother and intelligent as their grandfather. Least did they knew that Pia, the eldest daughter was replica of her father.

"Bauji, did your guest came in?" asked khushi while bringing a glass of juice for him. That was enough to break his reverie.

"Sure, why not? He is here, after all he is my grandson, he has to be with me when I die."

"Baujiiii! Why do you always talk like that? You are not going anywhere until you find me a handsome boyfriend." He chuckled at her blabbering.

"Why are you laughing at me like that? You know I was stuck in the landslide and had to spend an entire night waiting for the roads to clear. That reminds me one thing, I met a very nice gentleman, it is all because of him that I am safe."

"So someone has found her tall dark handsome prince."

"Ufff! Bauji, you and your one track mind. Though he was not very young as to be unmarried till now but I wish if he was unmarried he would make a great pair with Rano massi."

"Before you think of Rano, you should convince Bani to get married. It is high time she should settle down."

"Common Bauji, you must be joking, the day you will find someone worthy of ma she will settle down and since that is highly unlikely so there is no question of her getting married."

"Khushi my Jai is certainly worthy of Bani and it is my last wish to see them together."

"Bauji you cannot be serious, you know both me and Rano massi need ma, it is time to get Rano massi married, not for ma to get married herself."

"Khushi beta now you are being selfish. You are finishing your school and will go away to study further, might be find your prince charming there. Rano will get married in a year or two. Bani will be left alone, you should think seriously about her. I have asked Rano to come over and convince Bani. Jai will take care of her and they will certainly make a good pair."

"I will not let any Jai-Shai barge in our lives and take my ma away from me." She shouted back at him and ran with tears flowing down her face.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great update! Wonder what will happen next. 😃 Please continue soon.
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hey shweta
gr88 part
ohh so jai and bani ki shaadi ki planning ho rahi hai
and khushi not liking this thought
ab kya hoga
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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