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Abhilasha Sharma

@abhilashasharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

exactly, i am throwing belan at you... the other two hanging in the mid-air... now starting a new one... renu.. in between ur thesis, i guess your brain in working at high voltage high frequency...

by the way, who is this dizygotic twin of urs...

uday... he made a terrible mistake... krishna is good enough to forgive him, but jai isnt... its quite understandable... but he leaving behind his mother behind... this is too much...

seems when he comes back.. he will see a transformed bani... in appearance...

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divan

@divan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

ok now make Jai come back...in the meantime Bani has graduated, got an MBA and has started her own successful business all with Krishna's support. make her this sizzling, hot chick that all the guys are dying for...even give her a boyfriend...teach that sicko Jai a lesson.

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Yoga4life

@Yoga4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Ranjana ji,

Wonderful storyline! Mogambo khush hua!

Mohtarma aap apni baki kahaniyo per bhi thodi roshni dalenge to hum gareebo par badi krapa hogi. Aur agar aapne ye kahani jaldi update nahi ki to soch lijiyega, achcha nahi hoga.

Now I don't know why, but I have a feeling that your dizygotic twin is Dhani in terms of writing (my weird guess).

Hats off to you for taking out time to write such wonderful stories while writing your thesis, projects and classes. Good luck for your thesis.

cheers

Shweta

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btkr

@btkr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: divan
ok now make Jai come back...in the meantime Bani has graduated, got an MBA and has started her own successful business all with Krishna's support. make her this sizzling, hot chick that all the guys are dying for...even give her a boyfriend...teach that sicko Jai a lesson.

RR, yeh lo, story plan already laid out for you 😆 I like the sizzling hot chick with a boyfriend idea too...

Jo bhi likhogi, mast hoga. Great start, now thesis finish karke update karo!

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johnangad

@johnangad

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

wowwwwwwww! itna kuch in one update! uday was such a fool. believing dat woman! i can't blame jai for his anger, who wants to be married by force to a seemingly ugly illiterate minor?? now bani will turn into a beautiful swan in his absence- will jai respect his "empty vows" abroad or will he hv affairs?????

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suwas

@suwas

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

I find Krishna at fault for Bani's condition. She knew Jai hates his dad & will not like being married to bani for that.

JAi left India? Does it mean a leap coming up?

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pooks

@pooks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Power packed start...what with Jai Walia oozing arrogance and attitude and Bani being married off to him due to Krishna and Uday Walia's insistence. But I dislike Jai for assuming things about Bani. Why couldn't he clear out the matter with his mother instead of assuming that Uday and Bani have planned to trap him. Feel really bad for her.

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diana

@hooman

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

ranjana,

glad you started another ff...the prologue was awesome, simply mindblowing.. jai was something! his arrogance!!!!!! but whatever he said to bani was very bad, very rude and hurtful.. words can hurt more than actions..then he just leaves his family, he proved that he is uday's son, he did the same thing as his father..cant wait for the next update...when bani becomes all grown up and beautiful and jai will realise what a fool he was for leaving his beautiful wife...continue soon

nadia

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

oh god
i am dead scared.
can life be more cruel i can understand jai's anger but this much bitterness and hatred.
i can't fathom to understand that what will he do next.
not taking bani as his wife oh good .
that fool will realize his mistake for sure he will.

do continue dear
bye sumi

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zainab kassim

@sahra1977

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#20

please update soon thabks for the lovely ff

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