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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
ohh rthats a gr88 story
wat is biancas past
plz cont soon
and hope bianca gets well soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing part
the scenes between the kids were really good i liked the way Ami called shaun hitler.
cant wait 2 no biancas past and her relationship with jai.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i think bianca is bani...
well that was a gr8 part...
waiting to know more abt the story...
do continue soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Kuttu,

Good story, do continue soon. Wondering if JB are married? But what does his uncle has to do with Bani? Whats the secret behind the name Bianca?

Edited by mujer - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
gr8 story
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great story..cant wait to read more
nadia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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isn't jai gonna come to see Bianca... these kids... are they jai's also.. i think so...

nice going kuttu...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow. That is a really good start. I have a feelling that Bianca and Bani are the same person and Jai doesnt know he has kids. Waiting eagerly for the next part byebye Ranjana
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great story line and even better chapter........

alright then, waiting for you to weave your magic as usual........

cheers!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chapter 3

Mean while in India Jai had to transfer his Massi to the Breach Candy hospital. She was in the ICU. Once Adi had come then Jai relaxed and he just said that he had to look into few things.

Adi: She was doing all fine how come she had a relapse.

Jai: How do I know the answer to that? You are the ones who regularly visit her so you should know better than me. Jai just left with out another word to his family members. His brother Nattu, Jigyasa his sister, nephew and niece all were there he hardly even acknowledged them. Just had a meeting with the doctor. It was from the doctor they came to know that he would be out of town and that he had made Adi in charge of all the necessary arrangements and only in case of any emergency situation to leave a message with his sectary as he would be regularly in touch h=with her.

All the family members were now quite used to this kind of behavior. But Adi was really sad in these twelve years he had lost his friend somewhere. Though he was never much of a family person, but at least he would smile and acknowledge them. Now they only knew if Jai was in town through the press meets or office conferences or if his sectary had left some specific work for them. They never met on a personal ground. Even when Massi wasn't well Jai hardly visited her though he very well knew about his massi's condition he got a regular updates form the doctor and the nurse. It was something Adi felt he did it as a dutiful son. There were no emotions involved in it. Today also they came to know about this incident after Jai's sectary had called him up and informed that he was wanted in the hospital. Finally Adi got in touch with the home nurse of Massi's and got the details. And the nurse said Jai had visited massi with someone. Just before falling sick. Some how Adi felt there was going to be a storm in his friend's life. Just hope it is for the better. Things couldn't get worse anymore.

Jai was now on a mission. While driving down all his thoughts were on how he had to find out why his massi reacted in such a manner on hearing that name. Was it some how related to his wife. The only person who could say something is between life and death. And the other person is miles away. He has booked a ticket to get to Toronto in to nights flight. But by then it would be time for the surgery as per what the lawyer had said. This is getting complicated the more he thinks about.

Suddenly his car stops in front of a beautiful cottage kind of house. This house holds some very happy memories for Jai. As he steps into the house he can feel the sound of his wife humming and singing. As he takes each step towards the house he could also hear still the laughter of his wife. She was like a shining light in his dark life.

He had liked her first instant he laid eyes on her. How could he forget the girl who had one leg on the tree trunk and the other on the ground while she was trying to bring the branch down to pluck the flower? And the night before it had rained so all the droplets of water falling onto her face. That pictures of his captivated him for so many days and still does. It was also the first photo he had taken of his wife and it adorned the living room wall in this cottage and he was staring at it right now. His wife was like the fresh dew drops in the morning and when the light fell on to them it radiated the seven colours of the rainbow. She was the bridge between him and his family

He had not come here in a long time. As he wanted to forget this part of his life... But every night it haunted him. The memories of his wife. And now he needs a closure to all this misery of his. So he moves quickly up to the store room were he is looking around for a particular box.

Jai: It was here somewhere. That trunk box with a latch on to it. Suddenly he notices it behind a big trunk so he moves it aside and tries to open the box. But then he notices o lock on it. He goes around the house looking for something to break open the lock. Just then he remembers the garden tools are kept in the garage and goes to get that. And he opens the lock.

Jai keeps throwing things out of the box when finally he comes across a diary. And he keeps turning the pages of the diary looking for something. Yes he has found it. It was the birth certificate issued in Canada.

Jai has brought it down to the Kitchen. Over the years the writing has faded out. He can make out the names of the mother and the father. Mothers name Catalina R. M. Dixit. Fathers name Nishikant Dixit. But the child's name cannot be read clearly. This has Jai really frustrated. What does this R. M. stand for another question? Could it be Ray Martin. His wife never had any brothers or sisters. As far as he knew she didn't keep in touch much with her mothers side of relatives. He knew about an uncle who was with the navy and he kept traveling and he had no family of his own. If today he was her tomorrow he would be somewhere else. So they were not much in touch with each other. A regular Christmas birthday card also couldn't be sent.

So now to find all his answers he has to wait. But this time he really hoped it would be a dead end like all the other times he tried to find out about his wife. He didn't have the energy once again to feel dejected how he could let go of something so sweet and important to him. He poured him a drink and went out to sit on the bench were he sat with his wife and watched the stars. He felt his eyes close away.

Jai: What do you find so fascinating about the stars Pari.

Pari: You know it's a belief that after you die you become stars and they watch out for their loved ones from above. Jeet do you think my parents too are watching me over.

Jai: Well I don't know about that. But definitely Jeet is going to watch out for his Pari and that's a promise.

Pari: No Jeet no you shouldn't promise things which you have no control off. .

Jai: Hey now don't get hyper.

Pari: Me and hyper and starts to hit Jai.

Jai: Stop it you are hurting me. But all he could hear was his wife free laughter. She was like a child.

But his thoughts were suddenly interrupted by the ringing of his phone reminding him that he had a flight to catch

His wife always called him by that name and he in return called her Pari or sweet angel.

I have done one more update. But sorry to say that I cannot do an update till next week as the Eid holidays have started over here and we have friends coming over for get together and picnic. So I am kind of busy till Sunday. If I do get time I shall do an update. Thank you all of you for the wonderful comments. It is really encouraging. And slowly all the mystery will unravel. So please be patient. Enjoy reading And EID Mubarak to all readers.

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