FF : Pehla Pyar Part -VII Page-9

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi guys......

i was planning to write a FF since very long, but didnt hv the time to do so...now that i am a bit free to indulge in my literary fantasies, i gift this FF to all JB fans on the forum.....i would not take the credit for the story or concept , coz its the same JB with an age difference ( here it is of 12 years)....but instead of having a subdued Bani , my Bani is spunky and full of life.............hope u guys like it............

Part -I


Bani was rushing to the airport......her flight was supposed to take off in 15mins and she hadn't even checked in..........she had been asked to visit her parents in London.............and the reason was not unknown to her....it was to see her would be husband....the one her parents had choosen for her....but how could they????? She was grumbling all along!!!!

" Mummy & Papa have to consider, I am just 18 years old, and I cant marry this early!!!", she screamed inside her head.......

"This is going to be tough, but I have to save myself", she thought!!!


Jai was distraught, his girlfriend Pia had broken up with him a few minutes ago.....

Pia: " We cant keep this on Jai, you have to get into terms with this"
Jai: " But Pia, I am trying my best, why dont you give me another chance???"

Pia: " Sorry Jai, but do you know it has been 8 years since you are trying to get a Masters Degree , and your thesis is simply not being accepted??"

Jai: " I swear Pia this time I will pass"

Pia: " Look Jai, you have been so busy with your crappy work that you dont even know that I have had 5 affairs with other men even when we are together!!"


Jai: " What ??????? 5 Men???"

Pia: " And 3 women!!"

Jai: " God!!!!! help me"

Pia: " Its better we part ways now Jai, All the best....goodbye"

Jai: " goodbye Pia"....saying this Jai slumped on the floor......good lord, the woman was a L******!!!!!!! Holy Shit!!!




Tell me if you like this FF.....should i continue????
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lovelyyrose thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow
good start
pia affair with 5 men and 3 woman😲
🤣
starting only pia gone nice naa
😆
hmm , liked the start
con t soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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haha
nice start
but 12 years age diff😲
pls cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start kunmun
pia with 5 +3 affairs, i think one must be with meera and one with roshni and third one i am not able to guess so do tell🤣 u won't leave pia for sure
do continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh!!!!!!1

i am so glad Di, that u started ur FF at last..i hope evry one likes it too......if nyone doesnt dont worry...i am always there for u!!!! update soon.....Pia.....ha hahahahahah...i knew u had to take all ur anger out on her!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey nice start with that Pia, hahaha very Good!!

continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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🤣 this is hilarious ... how did Jai put up with Pia for so many years ... he's not even aware of her 8 affairs.... which include 3 women.... 🤣 ... Swati has guessed 2 of them ... I'll try guessing the third ... Is it Karuna the silly one (2nd one) ...🤣 ... Jai failed so many times....🤣.... loved reading it ... do cont soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part -II

Bani was going mad, of course she had to...anyone would go mad if they found their parents grinning like fools. She was asked by Kiran Dixit to dress up in a saree and behave like a coy bride, which obviously was not Bani's choice of behaviour.


Bani: "But Mama why should I dress up like a village girl?? Saree??????????? Even before marriage you want to tie me down like this???"


Kiran: " Bani beta, its been so long that you have been in America, I don't want Krishna and Uday bhaiya to think that you have forgotten Indian traditions, so dress up as I say".


Bani: " Mama!!! please listen to me!!!!!!!"

Kiran: " That's enough Bani, now do as I say and come down quickly, they have been waiting since long and neither I nor your Papa will be happy if you try to do anything untoward".

Saying that Kiran left Bani to ponder upon her fate.
In her mind Bani decided that she hads to meet that duffer who agreed to such a ridiculous proposal and make him reject her. She knew it was a stupid plan...and she had watched a lot of hindi movies from where she got the idea....But then she had to be careful.

Sighing deeply Bani decided to go down.


In the large hall of their home were seated 6 people, Uday Walia, Krishna Walia,Uday Walia's mother Billo Walia, Nishikant Dixit, Kiran Dixit and Bani Dixit. There was pin drop silence, no one was uttering a word.Kiran was thinking of dieing in shame, and Nishikant was in a daze. Uday & Krishna were feeling uncomfortable but Billo Walia was cool as a cucumber.The only person who was having a blast was Bani, she had come down in her jogging shorts & Sphagetti strap top and wished the Walias a Good Evening, effectively shutting everyone's mouth. Not exactly shutting it, rather making them sit with open mouths.

Checking her urge to laugh aloud Bani spoke,

Bani: " Papa ,I think you should hurry up with what you wanted to tell me, coz I am getting late for shopping. Rano & Rashi are waiting to meet me and we have to do lots of shopping" .

Nishikant and Kiran exchanged unhappy glances and looked at Uday & Krishna with pleading eyes.

Kiran & Krishna had been childhood friends. They had always wanted to marry each other as kids , but soon realised they could not as"" both were girls!!!!!!!!!!!""""


Hence they decided that as soon as they had kids, they would surely fulfill their dreams by arranging an alliance between their kids.

Krishna & Kiran got married within a year of each other,and then Kiran & Nishikant shifted to London. Krishna stayed back in India with Uday but kept in touch with Kiran .

Soon Krishna was blessed with a baby boy who was named Jai, a bonny and happy child, but a recluse. He was very good at studies and wanted to go to London for higher studies, which his parents happily agreed to. Although he was an only child his parents gave him all the freedom to do whatever he wanted, instead of putting the pressure of handling the family business.

But Kiran could not have a baby till very long. She and Nishikant had given up on trying after 12 years.Then Bani had arrived as a huge surprise for them and their happiness knew no bounds.As soon as Krishna heard about Kiran having a baby girl, both friends started renewing their plans & dreams.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice story!!
luv this cool bani...
she has guts to wear jogging shorts n Sphagetti strap tops n come to wish her to-be -in-laws...
continue soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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kunmun dear loved the part and bani's idea of getting refused in this way, but i am sure that uw and kw will still said yes
and pia and JW have already broken, so let's see JW reaction when he will come to know about his parents plan
i agree with tam that third lady with whom pia was having affair was none other than karuna
please do continue soon

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