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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr88 start dear
plz do cont soon
loved the bani shocked every1
coming in shorts and spaghetti top
that was hilarious
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I'm sure this going to be a very entertaining FF.....you did justice to Pia's character 😆 poor jai.......still struggling in studies, Pia left him and spoilt bani may be entering his life soon, you can't torture Jai like this 😆 please continue......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi ... nice part ... Bani is too much ... 😆 ... I liked her a lot ... watching Hindi film did pay off ... 😆 ... don't think Uday and Krishna will mind...😆... but do cont soon...
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14

I'm loving this ff, please more scenes like this and Baniwill be rocking lol...Very tipical idea but it was very funny...and where is Jai???

continue soon pleassssseeeee
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Posted: 17 years ago
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My thanks to all of you.Your comments have encouraged me to post all the 3 parts in quick succession, coz I want to test waters...ha ha...am not used to writing FFs...only giving comments...so now I know what is it like to be on the other side of the fence!!!!But am loving it!!!!

lovelyreddyrose,Twinkle_23,swatinarang,amu142,siumi,tam2,teenzs,jeenal20 and niruba....enjoy the next part!!

This idea is very old and has been repeated many times, but I want to give it a new look and add some masala and a freshness........see Double role movies have been made time and again.....but still then Kaho na pyar hai & OSO were huge hits, isnt it?? It goes with the treatment of the story and the new look....am also influence by a lot of Hindi movies like my Bani and hence have taken the plot from there and dished out a new flavor...any way my FF is an adaptation of a story, so guys may guess which one it is..............hope you guys like it.


321 views and only 11 replies!!! I am shocked!!! Guys please comment....it is a morale booster.....many of my friends have already posted their valuable opinions, I will be glad if others also give a minute to pen down their views.


Part -III

Jai Walia was trying hard to pass in order to get a Masters Degree in Psychology. His topic was "WOMEN" and their mentality. Each year he was subjected to an interview in which the panel was all women. They used to grill him and make his life impossible. He was buried in a barrage of questions which he could scarcely answer.

Examiner 1: " So Mr Walia , you think that women are slow creatures and are fit only for the kitchen"

JW: " No ma'm my intention was to say that....."

Examiner 2: " and you even think that its God's blessing that women have kids so that they stay at home, else they would make the lives of men hell even in office?? "

JW:" Actually I feel that...."

Examiner 3: " But then what about your mother??Do you have similar views about her too??"

JW: " It depends on the circumstances..."

Examiners( All 3 together) : " Sorry Mr Walia , you are failed on account of having such low opinion about the female sex in general.Please try to find a better topic and avoid hurting the sentiments of 50% of the population around you".


JW meets his Supervisor Dr. Deb on the way out .

Dr. Deb: " Whats the news Jai?? I hope you passed this time, its high time you know, 8 years!!!! "

JW(dejectedly): " No Sir, I failed again".

Dr. Deb: " I knew it, I knew it,I knew it...........Since when am I urging you to change your topic of study and get a good neutral thesis? But you arent going to listen to me"

JW: " But Sir, this topic is very challenging"

Dr. Deb: "My boy, you are trying to understand women...the species which God himself made , but could not understand their nature. And you are running after a mirage..you could possibly never pass."

JW:" Yes Sir, may be you are right!! huh!!

Dr. Deb:" What are you going to tell your parents??"

JW:" Oh shit!! I have to rush home Sir, my parents have decided to get me married, and the girl is coming to visit us!!!"

Dr. Deb:" Thats great!!! Get married and try to understand at least one woman.....I hope you will pass after that!!! If not, then have fun with her.....and enjoy your life"

JW( in his mind):" What a sicko!!!! how could i take him as my supervisor?? He is the reason I am failing, how could I take his ideas and guidance!!! Sick man"

JW:" Ok I must rush now".....Saying that JW left the campus.


Edited by kun2004mun - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovelyreddyrose

wow

good start
pia affair with 5 men and 3 woman😲
🤣
starting only pia gone nice naa
😆
hmm , liked the start
con t soon



Yes Rose,

Personally I hated Pia and god knows how many hate Pia posts i might have made last year!!! So my best way to punish her was to make her a L****** and throw her out of the FF asap!! Keep reading.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Twinkle_23

haha

nice start
but 12 years age diff😲
pls cont soon



Thanks Twinkle....at least my JB were born 12 years apart...but in KS , they have a 17 yrs age gap!! Have posted next 2 parts
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: amu142

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh!!!!!!1

i am so glad Di, that u started ur FF at last..i hope evry one likes it too......if nyone doesnt dont worry...i am always there for u!!!! update soon.....Pia.....ha hahahahahah...i knew u had to take all ur anger out on her!!!!



My darling little sis......

thanks for ur support in every walk of my life....I know you will be there for me always....you have seen how disturbed I was when P** was having a raj on WM whicle Bani was away from her kids !!! So this is my way of justice....ha ha...evil me!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: swatinarang

kunmun dear loved the part and bani's idea of getting refused in this way, but i am sure that uw and kw will still said yes

and pia and JW have already broken, so let's see JW reaction when he will come to know about his parents plan
i agree with tam that third lady with whom pia was having affair was none other than karuna
please do continue soon




Hi Swati,
Long time , no see...glad you like my FF. Oh wait till u know what UW & KW will say. Oh the ladies with whom Pia was having an affair were Roshni, Meera & Jigyasa!! All 3 Witches!!! Since Pia is also a witch!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: teenzs

hey nice story!!

luv this cool bani...
she has guts to wear jogging shorts n Sphagetti strap tops n come to wish her to-be -in-laws...
continue soon...



Thanks teenzs....

aage aage dekho Bani kya kya karti hai!!! Aur in-laws ko to bhagane ke liye woh kuch bhi kar sakti hai....

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