FF:DOBARA ,PART 22,PAGE 33,22/09/09

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
amazing part

thanks for reading..😉

Quote

ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: amiee
wonderful parts pls cont soon....

yaar..give me some time..I will update ..😃

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#63

PART 6

FLASH BACK 1.1

ON THE WAY

Jai Car chala raha hai..

Bani baahar ka nazara dekh rahi hai...

Jai--3 ghante ka raasta hai..Bani...aap aise hi choop rahengi?

Bani--aap aur main kyaa baat kar sakte hain..zara bataaiye...

Jai--OK..is saal ..ek film aai hai..DIL TO PAGAL HAI..aapne dekhi hai yeh film?

Bani--hmm..

Jai--kaisi lagi?

Bani--theek hi hai..

Jai--mujhe toh bahut achhi lagi..

Bani--maine itne dhyaan se nahi dekha..

Jai--kyon?bahut achhi film hai..

Bani--May be..but who cares..?At least I don't...

ek teenager se..aisa reaction..Jai ne nahi socha tha...infact Jai ne bhi yeh film ek baar hi dekhi hai..par Bani se baat karne ka..koi topic bhi toh nahi mil raha tha..

kuchh der choop..

Jai ne fir baat karna shuru kia..

Jai--Bani..

Bani--yaaa..

Jai--Do you have crush on anyone?

Bani--Why should I have that?

Jai--aise hi..I mean..you are a young girl..

Bani--please..yeh sab..just waste of time and energy..apne Class ki ladkion ko dekhti hoon.. sara din ..Boys ,Boys and only Boys..jaise duniya me aur koi topic nahi bacha ..discuss karne ko..aur main bore ho jaati hoon..

Jai--aisi koi chees hai..jisse aap bore nahi hoti?

Bani--yaa..hai na...

Jai--jaise?

Bani--jaise..jaise..aaa..let me think..main soch kar batati hoon..

Jai hansa...

Bani--nahi..bahut si cheese hain..abhi yaad nahi aa raha hai..but..

Jai--main samajh gaya..

Bani--Good..

Jai--achha..kal jab Mom..aapki shaadi ki baat kar rahi thi...tab aap itni chidh kyon gayi ?

Bani--See..I don't want any outsider to enter in my personal zone..and..frankly speaking..

Jai--yes..continue...

Bani--I don't like them at all..

Jai--kin logo ko?

Bani--your Parents.. I just can't stand them..

Jai--aur iski koi wajah bhi hogi aapke paas..tell me..

Bani--I mean...Rajwado k din khatam ho gaye..this is Democracy..aur Mr. Ranjeet Sisodia..aaj bhi logo ko aise treat karte hain..jaise unhiki hukumat chalti ho..this is really disgusting..I mean..yaa..he is rich and successful businessman..show off kare..thik hai..but,treating people like a slave..unka attitude hi kuchh aisa hai..and maine notice kia hai..jo woh theek samjhe.. uske upar kuchh nahi ho sakta..Law & Order jaaye bhaad me..unko apni marzi chalani hai.. you know what I mean..

Jai--hmm..

Bani--I know..you are feeling bad because of my words..but..fact is fact..mujhe Jaisalmer me isi lia nahi rehna..Dad Manager hain..theek hai..but..mujhe yeh bilkul bhi manzoor nahi ..k unke Boss meri zindagi k bare me zyada soche yaa samjhe.

Jai--hmm..

Bani--And your beloved Mother..uff..har waqt.."Bani,aap aise kyon khaati hain?Bani aap aise kapde kyon pahenti hain?Bani,you should act according to your status..your name is attached to our family..Bani..you should maintain the dignity..Bani ..yeh..Bani..woh..aise nahi..waise.."..har waqt..main pak chooki hoon..isi lia main Sisodia House nahi jaati..jitna avoid kar paati hoon..utna karti hoon..I am scared of THE GREAT SISODIA FAMILY ..

Jai--So..you seem to be vey angry with us..

Bani--I am angry..and..My darling Dady..unki baat hi mat kijiye..arre..Manager hai...apna kaam kijiye..main toh naukar nahi unki..woh jo advice dete hain..mere baare me..Dad ..aakar mujhko sunate hain..I mean..this is nothing but a big bull-shit.

Jai--Dad..ne ek baat sahi kaha..you are a rebel..

Bani--May be..I am...and now..I am going with you..there is no reason of this journey..but..I am going..mera pura din barbad..

Jai--Come on...agar aap..ghar me rehti..toh ..koi important kaam toh karti nahi..

Bani--yaa..but still..main Novels padhti..

Jai--oohh..Novels..which one?

Bani--some love stories..by Erique Sigal..

Jai--ok..LOVE STORY..and you don't like the film..DIL TO PAGAL HAI?

Bani--what?

Jai--kuchh nahi..

abhi ek ghanta baki hai..Anath Ashram pahuchne ko..

Bani--Wait a minute..hum kab pahuchenge?aur ghar kab lautenge?

Jai--woh actually,aaj raat ko,waha par ek Guest House hai,wahi par intezaam hua hai, actually ,aj waha par ek function hai,humen wahi attend karna hai..kal subha waha se nikal padenge..

Bani--kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa?abhi Car mere ghar ki taraf lijiye..right now..I mean..this is..

Jai--Relax...arre..waha par..aur bhi log honge...you will like it..

Bani--No chance..what is this..is tarha ..puri baat bataye bina..I thought we will be back at night..maximum 10 pm..yeh kyaa chakkar hai?

Jai--koi chakkar nahi hai..aur hum 6 baje tak pahuchenge..aur 1 ghanta lagega kum se kum.. ..fir 7 baje waha se nikalna..raaste me Car agar kharab ho gai...toh?sardi bhi bahut hai..

Bani--I don't care..mujhe aaj hi ghar jana hai..

Jai--OK..hum aaj hi lautenge...

6 baje Anath Ashram pahuche dono..

waha k Manager mile..."WELCOME KUNWARJEE.."

Jai(man hi man)--uff..not again..

Jai--Mr.Vij..mujhe aaj hi lautna hai..kal zaroori kaam se jana hai..so..aap yeh cheque rakhiye ..aur main chalta hoon..

"But Sir..aap Chai ..yaa Coffee ..kuchh toh lijiye..itni door se aaye hain.."

Jai--Nahi ..theek hai..main chala...

"But..Sir..yeh Function...?"

Jai--meri taraf se maafi maang lena...

Jai daur k Car ki taraf aya...

shaam ho chuki thi..thand badh rahi thi...

Bani Car k andar hi thi...

Jai--sab thik hai..kaam ho gaya..ab chal sakte hain..

Bani--OK...

****************************************************************

waapas Palace ki taraf aane lage dono....

1 ghante baad..raste par hi Car kharab..

Bani--kyaa hua?

Jai--dekhna padega...

Jai Car se utra...

Jai--15 minute..aap baithiye...

Bani Car se utri..

baithe baithe bore ho gai thi...

Jai--Bani..baahar kyon aai..??

Bani--aise hi...

Jai ka kaam pura ho gaya tha...usne paani ka bottle lekar haath dhoya..aur rumaal se haath pochha..

Jai--Bani..aaiye..Car me baithiye...Bani..Ba..

Jai was stunned....Bani paanch kadam ki doorie par khadi hokar..Cigarette pee rahi thi..

Jai--Excuse me..Bani..

Bani ne Jai ki taraf dekha..

Bani--what?

Jai--you smoke?

Bani--it was too cold..that is why..

Jai--I told you to sit in the Car...

Bani muskurai..

Bani--actually..I wanted to smoke..so..

Jai--OK...aaiye..baithiye..

Car chal rahi hai...

Jai--Bani..

Bani--yes..

Jai--aap mere lia ek cigarette jala dengi..please..?

Bani--sure...

Bani ne apne hontho par ek cigarette lia..usko jalaya..aur us cigarette ko Jai k hontho par dia..

Jai ne apne left hand se cigarette ko pakad kar..ek kush lia..aur dhooaan chhoda..

Jai--thanks Bani..

Bani--any time...

Jai--you know..tum sahi sochti ho..kabhi kabhi mera bhi mann karta hai..k main yeha se bhaag jaaoon..

Bani ne Jai ki taraf dekha...

Jai--sorry..tum kar k bula lia..

Bani--nahi..yehi theek hai..aap umar me ..10 saal bade toh honge hi..yehi theek hai..

Jai--thanks..

Bani--Welcome...

Jai--tum smoke karti ho..yeh tumhare Dad ko pata hai?

Bani--kyaa lagta hai aapko?pata hona chahie?

Jai--nahi..

Bani--haa..toh nahi pata unko....

Jai--School me kisiko ..malum nahi?

Bani--Teachers ko pata nahi..Metron ko pata nahi,hum kuchh dost hain..is Gang k members.. kuchh bigde hue hi hain..

Jai--aur is Gang ki Leader..tum?

Bani--Who else?main hi hoon..Shimla me humare Gang ka achha khasa naam hai..aisi koi badmaashi nahi..jo hum karte nahi..

Jai--jaise?

Bani--jaise..kisi raah chalte k peechhe poster chipkana..kisike peechhe patakha laga dena.. Sunday ko Town me bawaal karna..everything...

Jai--well..that is interesting..

Bani--aise bol rahe hain aap..jaise aap bahut shareef the apne High School aur College days me..!!

Jai--Well..main logo ko pareshaan nahi karta tha..dosto k saath rehta tha..Pub jata tha..Movie dekhta tha...Weekends par Night Club..kabhi kabhar..Dosto k saath ghoomne jata tha..Dad k saath kabhi kahi nahi gaya..dosto k saath hi..Goa,Cochin,Vizag..mujhe samandar bahut pasand hai..

Bani--aap kaunse Class me the..jab aapki koi Girl friend bani?

Jai--haa..ladkian dost thi meri..

Bani--na na..woh..Girl Friend..matlab..Special..someone..very special..beloved..

Jai--aisi koi kabhi nahi thi....

Bani--yeh aap bandal maar rahe hain..

Jai--kyon?

Bani--Come on..aap itne Handsome,Dashing..aur itne ,you know,you belong to a Royal family ..rich ..affluent..toh..aap ki Girl friend koi nahi bani?yeh kuchh zyada nahi hua?

Jai--actually..jin sab baaton se tum chidhti ho..main bhi in sab baaton se chidh jata tha..haa.. College me ladkian thi..2-3 pasand bhi thi mujhe..but..

Bani--woh aapko pasand nahi karti thi..right?

Jai--nahi..Girls used to like me..but..with all my prefixes and suffeixes..like ...Jaijeet Sisodia.. from the Famous Sisodia Family of Jaisalmer..Rich ..har ladki ko,mere so-called Royal family me interest tha..I mean..main koi Playboy type nahi tha..koi buri aadat bhi nahi..par main agar us type ka bhi hota..toh bhi ladkian mere peechhe ghoomti rehti...mujhe isi baat se problem thi..I mean..main nahi..mera background..main pak chuka tha..

Bani--kyaa baat hai..hum dono pak chuke hai..I mean..yaar..kisiko kyaa lena dena..insaan ka background kaisa bhi ho..whatever ..past..aur something else..yeh dekhna chahie k..insaan kaisa hai..par nahi..

Jai--waise ek baat hai..jo jiske paas hota hai..uski kadar nahi karta..socho agar hum ordinary family se hote..tab hum log hi sochte..k ..wow..Royal Family..what a life style...!!

Bani--haa..door se har chees bahut achhi hi lagti hai Mr. Sisodia..

Jai--hey..please..ab itne bade naam se mat bulao mujhe..

Bani--toh..?

Jai--mere naam se pukaro..

Bani--aap bade hain mujhse..

Jai--aur yeh "aap,aap" bandh karo..yaar..main pak chuka hoon..I mean ..mere Dad bhi.. mujhse isi tarha baat karte hain..tumhare Dad bhi..My God...

Bani--Jaijeet..naam se bulaoon?

Jai--yeh bhi bahut bada hai...

Bani--Jaijeet..matlab toh ek hi banta hai...jo Victory ko haasil karta hai..ok..main aapko.. Victor naam se bulaoon?

Jai--Victor..hmm..nice name..

Bani--toh aaj se aap ko main Victor bulaungi..

Jai--"aap ko"?

Bani--OK..aaj se tum Victor..

Jai--better...

Bani--Victor..abhi jaldi chalo..ghar chalo..mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai..

Jai--abhi 7:30 hi baje hai..abhi neend aa gai tumko?

Bani--pura din...car me..I am too tired...

Jai--hmm..OK..par 9 baje se pahle ghar nahi pahuch sakte...

Bani--Ohhh..shit..

********************************************

Car chal rahi hai....

achanak Jai ne Car rok di,,

Bani--kyaa hua?

Jai--kuchh khaa lete hain..bahut bhookh lagi hai..

ek dhaba tha paas me..

Bani--hmm..OK..mujhe bhi zor ki bhookh lagi hai ...

Jai--toh bataya kyon nahi?

Bani--nahi..socha ghar jaa kar hi...

Jai--achha abhi chalo...

dono jaakar dhabe par baith gaye...

fir khana khaya...

Bani bahut zyada paani pee rahi hai..

Jai--kyaa hua?

Bani--bahut mirchi hai ...

Jai--arre toh pahle bolna tha na...

Bani--nahi theek hai..

Jai--Juice pee lo...

Bani--hmm...

khaane k baad..

Jai--tum Car me jaakar baitho..main paise de kar aata hoon..

Bani--theek hai..

Jai Cash counter par gaya...

"jee..aapka aur aapki bahen ka..total bill hai..250 rupai.."

Jai--ohh..kyaa bola?Bahen?kaun?

"woh aap k saath..aapki bahen hi toh hai.."

Jai--maine bola k woh meri bahen hai?zyada baat nahi...paise lo..aur ainda is tarha kisiko Bhai Bahen mat banana..woh meri Bahen nahi..

"toh kiski Bahen hai?"

Jai--tumhari Bahen ho sakti hai...meri Bahen nahi..samjhe?

"jee saab.."

paise de kar Jai Car ki taraf badh raha tha..usko kuchh ajeeb laga...thik hi toh kaha us dhabewale ne...Bani uski chhoti bahen hi lagti hai..khamokha hi itna bhadak gaya tha woh...

Bani Car se chilla rahi thi.."Victor..raat bhar yeha nahi rehna..chaloooooooooooo.."

Jai--yaa..coming...

Car chalna shuru fir se...

Jai--mujhe ek cigarette aur jala dogi?

Bani--kyaa?

Jai--aur nahi hai tumhare paas?

Bani--haa hai..

Jai--toh ek aur jala k do mujhe...

Bani--sure..

Bani ne fir se cigarette jala kar Jai k hontho par dia...

Jai bahut choop chaap Car chala raha tha...

Bani--Victor..kyaa hua?

Jai--kuchh bhi toh nahi..

Bani--nahi..aise hi..kuchh bol nahi rahe ho tab se..

Jai--aisi koi baat nahi..achha..tum Shimla kab laut rahi ho?

Bani--Mid of January..I guess..15th..

Jai--ohh...achha..ab toh main tumhara dost ban gaya..ab vacations par aaogi na?

Bani--kyaa?

Jai--kyaa hua?hum dost nahi bane..abhi abhi?

Bani--haa..

Jai--toh..tum next vacation me aaogi na..?

Bani--dekho...saamne Board ka exam hai..toh..main wada nahi kar sakti...

Jai--nahi..main jaanna chaahta tha..k ..ab toh Jaisalmer itna boring nahi hoga tumhare lia?

Bani--aaj k drive k baad..nahi..itna boring nahi...actually..haa..mera yeha koi dost nahi tha.. isi lia..

Jai--thanks..aur ..ek aur bar..thanks..

Bani--kis lia?

Jai--nahi..tumne mujhe handsome aur dashing kaha..

Bani--woh toh ho hi..isme jhoot kyaa hai?

Jai--yes..woh toh main hoon..

Bani--achha..ek baat batao..tum itne rich..toh padhai k lia..Delhi hi kyon gaye?I mean..why not USA or UK?

Jai--ohh..woh toh..actually..ek lauta hoon na..isi lia..India k baahar nahi bheja mujhe..aur Dad k dil me darr tha..k kahi kisi Mem ko saath le aaya main..toh..unke Sisodia Khandan k tradition ka kyaa hoga..isi lia..Delhi..

Bani--kyaa bakwas mindset hai..arre..koi bigadna chaahega..toh India me baith kar hi bigdega na..iske lia..USA ya Uk jaane ki kyaa zaroorat?I mean this is really..

Jai--Shit..hmm..I know..

Bani--but..itne saalon me tumko koi ..ek ladki pasand nahi aai??!!

Jai--bolana..unki ajeeb si adaayen thi..actually..I was a bit scared of them..

Bani hansne lagi...

Jai--kyaa hua?

Bani--nahi..tum darrte the?ladkion se?

Jai--haa..kyon?

Bani--no..Jaijeet Sisodia..the JAIJEET SISODIA..was scared of girls??!!!this is too much..I can't take it anymore...

Jai--arre..isme hansne ki kyaa baat hui?Bani...stop..stop laughing..

Bani--OK..but...

Bani ne fir se hansna shuru kia..

Jai--this is it..hansna bandh karo..

Bani ka hansna bandh nahi hua...

Jai--stop..else..I will slap you..Bani.....

Bani--yeh achha hai..Slap you..hee hee..hee..hee..

Jai ne Car rok dia..

Bani--kyaa hua..?

Jai--hansna bandh nahi karogi..toh main bhi drive nahi karoonga..

Bani--hee hee..you are so funny..

Jai ko ab gussa aya..

Jai--what is so funny..?

Bani--nothing..

Jai--soch lo..hansna bandh karo..varna puri raat..yehi sardi me baahar rehna hoga dono ko.. choice is yours..entirely yours..

Bani--OK..OK..I am sorry...abhi chalo..

Jai ne fir drive karna shuru kia....

Bani ne fir se hansna shuru kia..

Jai gave a disgusted look..

Jai(man hi man)--iska kuchh nahi ho sakta..crack hai..puri tarha se crack...

*******************************************

raat k 10 baj chuke the...

palace me phone aya tha..k Kunwarjee waha par nahi rooke...Cheque de kar hi waha se nikal gaye..Jaisalmer k lia..

sab pareshaan ho gaye..abhi tak nahi lauta Jai..Bani..ko lekar...

jin dono k lia sab pareshaan..woh dono befikar ...Jai aur Bani...

Jai--Bani....Bani..oo..helloooo..

Bani--hmmm..

Bani ki ankho me neend...

Bani--kyaa hai Victor?

Jai--so gai kya?

Bani--hmm..

Jai--is tarha mujhe bhi neend aa jaayegi..jaago..kuchh baat karo...

Bani--aur kitni der lagegi?

Jai--bas..30 minute...

Bani--hmm...mujhe jaga dena...

raat 10:15 baje the....

Jai ne Bani ko uske ghar chhoda..ghar me naukrani thi..

Jai--inko samhaal ko le jaaiye inke kamre tak..so gai hain yeh..

"Jee Kunwarjee.."

Jai Palace waapas aya..

Ranjeet,Jyoti aur Bhagatjee the..

Jyoti--Bani kaha hai?

Jai--main toh usko uske ghar chhod aya..

Bhagat--aap mere ghar gaye the?

Jai--haa..Bani toh so gai thi..aapki naukrani thi ghar par..unke zimme kar k aya hoon..

Ranjeet--par..raat ko waha par rookne ka intezaam toh kar dia tha..

Jai--usne chillana shuru kia..usko raat ko nahi rehna..main gaya..kaam niptake waapas aa gaya...

Bhagat--ab main bhi aggya chaahoonga..Good Night...

Bhagatjee chale gaye...

Jyoti--khana khaa lete hain hum..

Jai--main khaa k aaya hoon...

Ranjeet--kaha?

Jai--road side dhabe par..bahut bhookh lag gai thi..maine aur Bani ne khaa lia..

Jyoti--raaste me ..usne koi badtameezi toh nahi ki?

Jai--nahi..bilkul nahi..bahut achhi ladki hai...haa..Palace k kaide kanoon se zara chidh jaati hain..baki sab thik hai..achhi hai..infact..achha hi hua..raat ko waha par rookne ka koi matlab nahi banta tha...main khud waha se bhaagna chaahta tha..

Ranjeet--achhi baat hai..aap so jaaiye..subha baat karte hain..

Jai--Good Night Dad,Good Night Mom...

*************************************

Jai apne bedroom me chala gaya..

kapde badal raha tha...uske Jacket k pocket se ek packet geera..Cigarette ka packet...Bani ka hai...

Bani neend me thi..Jai ne usko pakad k..baahar nikala..usi waqt..Bani k pocket se yeh packet geera..

Jai ne apne paas rakh lia..

night suit pahen kar apne bed par let gaya...

woh Cigarette ka packet uske pillow k paas hi pada raha...

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago

Quote

MrsKhan-Sobti

@MrsKhan-Sobti

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#64

nice part....

bani is quiet bold..

so jai is victor??😆

waiting for nex part...

plzs continue soon...

Quote

jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#65

gr88 part yaar

yes man this bani is really bold

bachpan se hi she used to smoke

must say had loads of guts to do such an act

wow and jais name is victor

cool

plzzzzzzz cont soon

Quote

swati

@swatinarang

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#66

great part, but bad thing is bani is smoker, stupid bani must say and stupid jw too

loved the part, getting interested , why JW got married to bani and how is big question, so do continue soon

Quote

lovelyyrose

@lovelyyrose

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#67

hi i had read the start of the ff on the first day itself par got little taken a back i must say with abni and ciggarette and then jai thinking aaj kal ka generation

to be true i ddint like it

par aaj ka update i liked it the way u portrayed the character of bani and jai

intresting

cont soon

will be waiting

one more thing

u have a lot of patience i must say

ask y?

u use so many colours . i mean change every time the font. i could nt do that while typing

😉

Quote

tam2

@tam2

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#68

hi ... gr8 part ... was surprise reading Bani smoking ... she is very bold indeed... speaks out the truth .... she's one of the kind ... looking forward to next part ... do cont soon....