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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 17 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: teenzs
nice part....
bani is quiet bold..

so jai is victor??😆

waiting for nex part...

plzs continue soon...

thanks for reading..

Jai was named 'Victor' by Bani..

Bani..she is not bold..she is genuine.

😊

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 17 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: jeenal20
gr88 part yaar
yes man this bani is really bold

bachpan se hi she used to smoke

must say had loads of guts to do such an act

wow and jais name is victor

cool

plzzzzzzz cont soon

Bani has guts for sure..

and she became friend of Jai..as she found him very similar with herself.

Victor..Bani's Victor..Jai..😊

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 17 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: swatinarang
great part, but bad thing is bani is smoker, stupid bani must say and stupid jw too

loved the part, getting interested , why JW got married to bani and how is big question, so do continue soon

They faced a forced marriage..for sure..but..there were some 'buts'..

Bani ..smoking is bad..but..this is the demand of the story.😉

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 17 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: lovelyreddyrose
hi i had read the start of the ff on the first day itself par got little taken a back i must say with abni and ciggarette and then jai thinking aaj kal ka generation
to be true i ddint like it

par aaj ka update i liked it the way u portrayed the character of bani and jai

intresting

cont soon

will be waiting

one more thing

u have a lot of patience i must say

ask y?

u use so many colours . i mean change every time the font. i could nt do that while typing

😉

yes I have patience...actually.. I don't like anything without colours..I love variety..I try to differentiate between people by colours..

thanks for reading..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 17 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: tam2
hi ... gr8 part ... was surprise reading Bani smoking ... she is very bold indeed... speaks out the truth .... she's one of the kind ... looking forward to next part ... do cont soon....

I will update it soon..you just keep reading...

Bani..she is a girl with various colours in her mind..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 17 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
amazing part
i really liked the way u showed banis charachter she is very different and speaks her mind

jai and banis conversation was really intresting i liked when they both talked about their lives

Jai and Bani..two suffering creature from the so-called honour and pride..😭

Same situation..and they became friend though they had a long age difference..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 17 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: phool527
lmao.. omg.. r u serious.. lol.. JB smoking.. hahaa.. banis sooo jakhas yaar.. lol.. anywayz great part.. continue sooon..

yaa..they are superb..Jai and Bani..

and Bani..so much irritated with Jai's Parents..😡

and Jai..so much suppressed by his Parents😭

keep reading..👏

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 17 years ago

#78

PART 7

FLASHBACK 1.2

THE FRIENDSHIP

do insaan jab ek jaise haalaat se guzar rahe ho..tab dosti bahut jaldi ho jaati hai..

Bani,apne Dad ki 'Jee Huzuri' se pareshaan..aur pareshaan Mr. & Mrs. Sisodia se..unki dakhalandaazi se.

Jai pareshaan..

apne Dad k jhooti shaan se,unke purane niyamon se,har pal ki yeh bandeesh Jai ko din ba din paagal bana rahi hai..Jaisalmer laute usko 1 hafta bhi nahi hua hai..woh uub chuka hai.. Delhi jana chaahta hai.

Par jaise hi Delhi jaane ki baat ki usne..Jyotijee rone lagi..Jai musibat me pad gaya.. Ranjeet ki daant bhi khaani padi.

Jai ko bhi bura laga..itne din baad aya hai..uski Maa bhi usko apne paas rakhna chaahti hain ..par Jai ka dum ghootne lagta hai..jab bhi woh Palace ki oonchi oonchi diwaron aut chhaton ko dekhta hai ..sochta hai jaha bahut se log jhopdhi me rahte hain,waha par sirf teen logon k lia,itna bada ghar,koi wajah nahi aise fizul kharach ki,par Dad ko kaun samjhaaye?

Bani ko achha nahi lagta..k kyon uske Dad is tarha Ranjeet Sisodia k haan me haan milate rahte hain..kyon..humesha sunate rahte hain,k Jyotijee ne Bani k lia kyaa socha,kyaa kaha ..Bani ka dil Shimla Town k aas paas ghoomta rehta hai.kab yeh vacation khatam hoga.. aur kab Bani lautegi Shimla..yehi sawaal uske dil aur dimaag par haavi hota jaa raha hai.

kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai..k kaash..Bani ek panchhee hoti..aasmaan me udti...koi usko rok nahi pata..

Amartya..Bani ki Maa ka naam tha..Bani apni Maa ko dhoondhti hai..kaash woh aaj zinda hoti..toh kisime itni himmat nahi hoti..k Bani ko sikhaaye..k usko kyaa karna hai..kyaa nahi karna hai..

Bani kabhi kabhi khwabon me apni Maa se milti hai....5 saal pahle Bani ki Maa ki death ho gai..

aur fir Lucknow se woh Jaisalmer aai..apne Dad k saath..

par is jagah se Bani apna mann nahi jod paai,Shimla me admission mil gaya usko,aur fir, ek nayi zindagi,jo usko bahut achhi lagne lagi..dheere dheere uska dukh kum hota gaya ..Maa ki yaad aati hai..par utni nahi,Maa ko yaad karti hai,par is tarha,k woh muskuraaye..

Dad..kab itne door ho gaye Bani se..Bani ko pata nahi chala...uske kai dost aise hain..jinki Sauteli Maa hai..woh log kahte hain..k jab se Nayi Maa aai hai..Dad se ek doorie ban gayi hai..

Bani mann hi mann hansti hai..kisise door hone k lia..humesha kisi teesre ki zaroorat nahi hoti..jisko door hona hota hai..woh khud ba khud door ho hi jata hai..teesra insaan sirf ek excuse k ilava aur kuchh bhi nahi..

Jai..uske paas toh sab kuchh hai..par woh bhi khush nahi..aisa ek pal nahi hai..jab Jai afsos nahi karta..k kyon woh Delhi se Jaisalmer waapas lauta..

dono k dil me jab yeh baat hai..tab dono ne ek doosre ko hi yaad kia..ek doosre ka hi sahara lia..

do insaan..aur ek jaisa hi dard...ek doosre me apne lia sahara dhoondhna chaahe..toh koi kyaa kare?

dosti ka yeh pehla kadam..Bani ne hi uthaya..

jis Bani ko kai baar bulana padta tha..Sisodia House aane k lia..woh ek din achanak hi aa gayi..

18th December,1997..

Palace k naukar bhi hairan hue..Bhagatjee ki Beti..subha 9 baje..yeha?

jab Jyotijee ki khabar mili..k Bhagatjee ki Beti,Bani aai hai..tab woh bhi zara hairan hui..

Jyoti--usko le aao..

Bani aai...

Jyoti--aao..baitho..

Bani--Jee..

Bani baith toh gayi..par Jyotijee se milne toh nahi aai woh...usko Victor se milna tha..

Jyoti--parso..achha laga?

Bani--parso?kyon?

Jyoti--arre..tum gayi thi na..Jai k saath..?

Bani--ohh..haa..achha laga..waise..Mr. Sisodia hain kaha?

Jyoti--woh toh tumhare Dad k saath gaye hain..

Bani--unhone bhi business join kar lia?

Jyoti--unhone bhi..??!!ohh...main toh bhool hi gayi thi..is ghar me ab do Mr. Sisodia hain.. Jai ki baat kar rahi ho..haa..nahi..woh ghar pe hi hai..usse milna hai?

Bani--nahi..bas aise hi..main poochh rahi thi..

Jyoti--woh apne kamre me hi hain..Kailaaaaaaaaaaaaaash......

Kailash naam ka naukar aya..

"jee Maalkin?"

Jyoti--Bani ko Kunwarjee k kamre ka rasta dikhaao..

"jee..aaiye Beti.."

Jyoti--jaao..inke saath jaao...

Bani--jee..

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Jai apne kamre me baith kar newspaper padh raha tha..

"Kunwarjee?"

Jai ne paper se nazar nahi uthaya..

Jai--kyaa baat hai?

"jee ,Bhagatjee ki Beti aapse milne aai hain.."

Jai ko apne kaano par yakeen nahi hua..

Jai--kaun?

"Jee..Bhagatjee ki Beti..Bani.."

Jai ne nazar uthaya..

Kailash akela hi khada tha..

Jai--kaha hain?

"jee baahar khadi hain.."

Jai--ohh..tum jaao..main dekhta hoon..

Jai baahar aya..Bani khadi nahi thi..woh diwaron me saji tasveeron ko dekh rahi thi..

Jai ko apni ankhon par bhi yakeen nahi ho raha hai..Bani usse milne aai hai..!!

Bani pichhe mudhi..

Jai dekh raha hai...Bani ko..usko abhi tak yakeen nahi aa raha hai..

Bani--Hii..

Jai chup kar k khada hai..

Bani--HIIII..

Jai chup kar k khada hai..

Bani uske kareeb gayi..aur zor se Jai ko pinch kia..

Jai--aauuuuoohhhh...tum?

Bani--kisi aur ka intezar tha?

Jai--nahi..mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha hai..k tum mujhse milne ..Palace aaogi..

Bani--main toh aa gai..mujhe laga..tum aaoge..mujhse milne..kal pura din main tumhara hi intezar kar rahi thi..yeh soch kar..k tumhi aaoge..but..tum nahi aaye..main hi aa gayi..

Jai--kyaa?

Bani--aana nahi chahie tha?OK..main chalti hoon..

Bani jaane lagi..

Jai--arre..suno toh..arre..mera yeh matlab nahi tha....Bani..suno toh..

Bani peechhe mudhi..poochha,"rukoon ya jaoon?"

Jai--kuchh mat karo..andar aao..

Bani--kamre k andar?

Jai--haan..aao..

Bani andar aai..

Bani--andar aa gayi..ab?

Jai--baitho..

Bani baith gayi..

Bani--ab?

Jai--plan bana kar aai ho..?

Bani--kaisa plan?

Jai--mujhe irritate karne ka..tab se .."ab,ab" kar rahi ho..

Bani--nahi..aise hi..

Jai--aise hi mujhe chhed rahi ho?

Bani--haan..

Jai--tum aai..mujhe bahut achha laga..

Bani--sach?

Jai--main jhoot nahi bolta..

Bani--ohhh..

Jai--really..jhoot bolna meri aadat nahi..

Bani--main samajh gayi..aage bolo...

Jai--nashta kia?

Bani--haa..kyon?

Jai--kuchh logi?Juice?

Bani--Juice peelana tumhari aadat hai kya?

Jai--haa..jaise cigarette peelana tumhari aadat hai..

Bani--tumne hi toh manga..maine koi zabardasti toh nahi ki..

Jai--tumhara packet mere paas reh gaya tha..

Bani--haa..main bhi soch rahi thi..kaha hai,..

Jai--tumhare pocket se geera tha...Car me..

Bani--waapas do..

Jai--nahi..abhi nahi..abhi mujhe taiyyar hona hai..

Bani--ek packet dene k lia taiyyar hona hai??!!

Jai--uff..nahi..ghoomne jana hai..

Bani--ohh..

Jai taiyyar hokar nikla..bathroom se..

Dressing table k saamne khada hokar baal theek karne laga..Perfume spray karne laga..

Bani impatient ho rahi hai..

Bani--Victor..jaldi karona..

Jai--haa..ho gaya..

Bani--do..packet waapas do..

Jai--abhi nahi..ghoom kar aaoon..fir deta hoon..

Bani--tum jaao ghoomne..mera packet do..main chalti hoon..tum toh ghoomne jaa rahe ho..

Jai--main akela nahi jaa raha hoon..kisike saath jaa raha hoon..

Bani--arre toh jaaona..mujhe packet do..

Jai--aur main tumhare saath hi jaa raha hoon..

Bani--kyaa?

Jai--toh tum yeha kyon aai?sirf mujhse yuh hi milne?Mom se toh milne aai nahi..chalo ab ..ghoom kar aate hain..

Bani--nahi..

Jai--eii..zyada bhaao mat khaa..chal,bulaaoon Mom ko?

Bani--kyaaa?

Jai--maine kaha..abhi chalo..

Bani--kaha?

Jai--pahle ghar se toh nikle..chalo..

Bani--eeehhhhhhhhh..but..Mrs. Sisodia?

Jai--main poochh loonga..chalna ab..

Bani--achha..chalo..

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dono aaye..Jyoti k paas..

Jyoti--hmm..Bani se baat hui?

Jai--main isko lekar ghoom kar aaoon?

Jyoti--kyaa?

Jai--mera bhi waqt nahi kat raha hai..Bani bhi bore ho rahi hai,saath ghoom aaye hum dono?

Jyoti--dopaher ka waqt hai..

Jai--10 hi baje hain..

Jyoti--kab tak lautoge?

Jai--shaam ko..aa jaaoonga..

Jyoti--Bani..tumko koi problem toh nahi hai?

Bani--nahi..

Jyoti--theek hai..jaao..shaam tak aa jana..

Jai--OK..thanks Mom..

dono ko jaate hue dekh kar..Jyotijee bahut khush hui..

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Car me Jai hai..Bani hai...

Bani--hum kaha jaa rahe hain?

Jai--pata nahi..

Bani--mazak mat karo..

Jai--Kakni nadi ki taraf..

Bani--ooooo..nadi..doobna hai?

Jai--koshish toh kar hi sakta hoon..

Bani--achha hai..doob jaao..

Jai--tum usdin is tarha bhadak gayi..waha par rookne k naam par..My God..you and your anger..uff..

Bani--achha..ek baat batao..tumko ugta sooraj zyada achha latga hai..yaa fir doobta?

Jai--dono..dono k alag matlab hain..

Bani--jaise?

Jai--ugta sooraj..naye din ki shuruat..doobta sooraj..yeh ummeed..k kal fir se naya din.. nayi subha..

Bani--mere sar k upar se jaa rahi hain..bas karo...ghalati hui..jo sawaal puchha..ek simple sawal ka itna bada jawab??!!

Jai--tum..baaton ko bahut lightly lei ho na?

Bani--seriously lene ka kyaa faida?

Jai--haa..yeh bhi hai..ek taraf se..tum theek hi karti ho..

Bani--I know...hum waapas kab chalenge?

Jai--tum humesha waapas jaane ki baat kyon karti ho?

Bani--kyon?

Jai--jab kisi raaste par chal pado..toh pichhe mudh kar dekhna..safar ka maza kharaab hota hai...

Bani--ghalat...humesha lautne k lia ek raasta hona chahie..agar saamne kuchh aisa ho..jo aage badhne k lia rok rahi hai..toh waapas ana zaroori hota hai..

Jai--hmm..samjha..aur agar waapas ana bhi namumkin ho..toh?tab toh aage badhna hi hoga na?

Bani--nahi..tab rook jana chahie..

Jai--kab tak?

Bani--that depends..kuchh pal..kuchh ghante..kuchh din..yaa fir..kabhi kabhi toh kai saalon tak rookna padta hai..

END OF FLASHBACK

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26/05/2007..shaam ho chuki hai...

"kuchh pal..kuchh ghante..kuchh din..yaa fir..kabhi kahi toh kai saalon tak rookna padta hai.."

Jai k dimaag me Bani ki kahi hui yehi baat ..baar baar ghoom fir kar aati hai..

peechhle dus saalon me..yehi ek baat..Jai yaad karta raha..

kabhi kabhi kai saalon tak rookna padta hai............

Jai bhi rook gaya..

aur jaane anjaane me shaayad Bani bhi kahi na kahi rook gayi thi..

Bani ko nurse injection dene aai..

Jai--Bani..utho..injection dene aaye hain tumko...

Bani--kyaa Victor..sone do na..mujhe sona hai..

Jai chauk gaya..

Victor?Bani usko Victor naam se bula rahi hai..

Jai--Bani..oo..Bani..utho..

Bani ki neend tooti..

saamne Jai tha..Bani ka apna Victor..

pal bhar k lia laga..k waqt shaayad sach me rook hi gaya tha..wahi 15 saal ki Bani..aur wahi 24 saal ka Victor..

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago